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雅思优秀议论文中的“三明治”结构

雅思优秀议论文中的“三明治”结构
雅思优秀议论文中的“三明治”结构

雅思优秀议论文中的“三明治”结构

写雅思大作文就如同在建筑一座大楼一般。首先是进行大楼结构设计,然后再进行实际的建筑工程,最后经过装修而成为耐用而漂亮的大楼。良好的结构对于大楼的实用以及美观有着非常重要的作用。同样道理,良好的作文结构也将提高文章的质量和成绩。从一定意义上来说,优秀的作文结构可以使内容条理清晰易懂,还可以弥补语言表达上的不足。

议论文的整体结构

一篇好的议论文一般由三个部分构成,分别是导语段(Introduction),主体段落(Body)与总结段(Conclusion)。这个结构很像三明治,其中导语段与总结段就像最上层和最下层的面包,而主体段落为论证段,相对较为重要,就像三明治中间的肉和菜。其结构如下图所示:

Introduction

Body

Conclusion

通常情况下按照实际的需要,中间的主体部分(Body)又可以分成二到四个段落,其结构图分别如下:

Introduction

Body Paragraph 1

Body Paragraph 2

Body Paragraph 3*

Body Paragraph 4*

Conclusion

(注:*段落视需要而增加)

由于导语段中最重要部分是中心句(Thesis statement),它是全文的立足点,决定文章的发展方向,覆盖全文;段落主题句(Topic sentence)是每一段的重点,覆盖各自所在的段落。因此,我们可以通过思考后得出议论文的中心句(Thesis statement)以及各主体段落主题句(Topic sentence)。此外,为求达到全文的统一性(Unity)和连贯性(Coherence), 考生们应当合理地安排中心句和各段的主题句的关系,使得中心句覆盖全文,使得各段的主题句很好地支持着中心句。如果中心句没有覆盖主题句,说明正文偏题了。如果中心句超过主题句,

刚说明内容有遗漏,或者说内容不够全面。中心句各段的主题句的关系情况可由下面三张图表示:

Thesis

Statement

Topic Sentence 1

Topic Sentence 2

Topic Sentence 3*

Conclusion

Thesis Statement

Topic Sentence 1

Topic Sentence 2

Topic Sentence 3*

Conclusion

Thesis Statement

Topic Sentence 1

Topic Sentence 2

Topic Sentence 3*

Conclusion

其中,第一张图显示了正文内容超过了中心句内容;第二张图则相反;第三张图中正文内容与中心句题才是相吻合的。(*号表示在双边型结构的文章中没有主体段的第三段。)

接下来我们通过实例来了解中心句, 主题句与总结段的布置。比如:

Topic1: Is it not necessary to learn the skill of cooking due to the success of convenience food and read-made meals?

Thesis statement: But in my opinion, cooking is a very important ability we should not lose.

Topic sentence 1: First of all, the fact is that ready-made meals are not usually that good for us.

Topic sentence 2: Moreover, it is extremely important for children to learn how to cook, so that they will be fully independent when they grow up.

Topic sentence 3: Speaking personally, I have always enjoyed experimenting in the kitchen, by cooking slightly unconventional meals.

Conclusion: In conclusion, although some use of convenience food is natural, no one should rely on it exclusively at the expense of home-cooked food. Not only is this unhealthy but it is also threatening important skills with extinction.

Topic 2: Who should be responsible for our old people?

Thesis statement: In my essay I would like to note four different models. Topic sentence 1: Firstly, the company can be responsible for their retired employees.

Topic sentence 2: A second solution is that the government has to have the responsibility for the old people’s care.

Topic sentence 3: Another way of solving this problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual.

Topic sentence 4: A last solution is to go back to the old model of the big family who cares for all their members.

Conclusion: To sum up I have to admit that I can’t find a really good solution for this problem. All models have advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we will have to go on thinking.

Topic3: Should students in high school study music as a compulsory school subject?

Thesis statement: While some think the study of music in high school is a waste of valuable school time, musical training and study is an important part of educational development.

Topic sentence 1: It is true that when it comes to the study and application of music, not everyone is suited.

Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, it is quite well-known that music can play an important part in the development of the human brain.

Conclusion: While not every student may be musically inclined, the study of music is a valuable inclusion in any student’s course of study. In addition to being excellent for mental growth and development, students of music learn discipline, persistence and patience. Music should be a compulsory part of a high school student’s education.

议论文的段落结构

与议论文的整体结构布置相类似,在段落的写作中我们也用“三明治”结构来进行写作,即把段落分为主题句(Topic Sentence),支持部分(Supporting Sentences)和结尾句部分(Concluding Sentences)。(注意:并不是每个段落都一定要有结尾句,重要地是要让这个段落自然地结束,不能给读者留下话还没有说完的感觉。)段落结构如下图如示:

PARAGRAPH

Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentences

Concluding Sentence

接下来我们通过实例来了解主题句,支持句与总结句的布置。比如:

1. Topic Sentence: First of all, the fact is that ready-made meals are not usually that good for us.

Supporting Sentences: They contain high levels of salt and sugar, not to mention harmful preservatives and artificial colorants.

Concluding Sentence: Therefore, a diet that is exclusively made up of such food is bound to be unhealthy.

2. Topic sentence: Teenagers find many ways to drive their parents crazy.

Supporting Sentence 1: First, they may dye their hair purple or they may shave their heads bald. They may also shred their new and expensive jeans and sit hours after hours in front of computers playing games or chatting with someone they never see.

Supporting Sentence 2: In addition, they spend hours windowing-shopping and on the phone. They have time to watch TV, but they do not have time to do their homework.

Supporting Sentence 3: Also, they are always too busy to clean their rooms, but they are never too busy to hang around in the streets.

Concluding Sentence: It is hard to be a teenager, but it is even harder to be parent of one.

3. Topic Sentence: In the second place, corporal punishment is by no means a desirable way of education a child.

Supporting Sentence 1: Numerous studies have shown that it does far more harm than good to children in their mental as well as physical development. Supporting Sentence 2: For example, corporal punishment can give a child a sense of being treated unfairly, making him rebellious.

Concluding Sentence: This will be detrimental to the molding of the child’s character, and therefore should be avoided.

通过以上例子,我们可以清楚地把握雅思议论文结构(三明治结构),并可以通过练习一些雅思作文题目加以模仿,使得所写的文章结构良好,内容清晰、易读。良好的结构,清晰易读的内容也是好作文的一些特点。另外,在详细地学会如何发展段落以及组织整篇文章之后,考生们可以把更多的时间放在对一系列常考写作话题“脑力震荡”上,即尽量地准备更多话题的相关地ideas来组织论据。

雅思议论文写作技巧及范文

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雅思大作文范文三十篇

Topic 1: When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion? 媒体信息一致的缺点: ?国际媒体(global media)—般掌握在少数几个有实力的机构手中(in the hands of a few, large, powerful organizations);有了媒体的宣传(propaganda)后,西方文化成了主流(domineering force),大规模的、有吸引力的广告(mass seductive advertising )唤起了落后地区人们对物质新的向往(create fresh desires),经济联系增强(strong economic ties),西方产品取代了本地产品,使人们更加向往西方的文化; ?文化开始融合在一起(mingle),人们被新的价值观所围绕(bombarded with new values),对自己的文化失去信心和自豪感(confidence and pride),拒绝接受自己的文化传统(rejection of their cultural heritage)转而接受西方的文化习惯(adoption of Western cultural practices);西方媒体削弱了民族的特征(ethnic identity)和社会的凝聚力(social cohesion);因为担心失去观众(a loss of viewers),当地的电视台也开始播放西方的电视节目(television shows), ?国际媒体的普遍会降低世界文化的品质和多样性(degrade the quality and diversity of world culture);文化被商业化(commercialized), —些文化产品(cultural goods),如音乐、服装,都变成了商品(commodities in the marketplace)。因此,即便一些文化在世界其他地方传播,它原来的性质(authenticity)已经丧失。 媒体信息一致的优点: ?国家之间的频繁交往会促进文化之间的交流。因此,相互了解和相互认同的可能性(likelihood of mutual understanding and mutual acceptance )就会增加,这是顺应全球化的趋势; ?未必一定放弃传统观念(not necessarily lead to the abolition of traditional values),事实上媒体可以起到宣传和稳固传统文化的作用; ?主流媒体一般都会反应文化多元性(The dominant media reflect cultural diversity.); —些外国节目其实促进了文化多元性(Most foreign programming is promoting cultural diversity.),适应了当地的条件(adapt to local conditions),注意到了当地文化的敏感性(aware of cultural sensitivity).自我调节来适应市场(exercise self-censorship to suit the market :)。 As international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programs (such as TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations, such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of programs broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds. In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin. American culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian people now imitate American people, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV programs that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.

2008年雅思学术类议论文写作话题总结(上)

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雅思议论文写作

雅思议论文中的“三明治”结构 作者:黄志贤 | 来源:朗阁海外考试研究中心 | 时间:2009-10-05 | 335 次 | 字体 [ 大中小 ] [收藏] [划词已启用] 写雅思大作文就如同在建筑一座大楼一般。首先是进行大楼结构设计,然后再进行实际的建筑工程,最后经过装修而成为耐用而漂亮的大楼。良好的结构对于大楼的实用以及美观有着非常重要的作用。同样道理,良好的作文结构也将提高文章的质量和成绩。从一定意义上来说,优秀的作文结构可以使内容条理清晰易懂,还可以弥补语言表达上的不足。 议论文的整体结构 雅思专家认为,一篇好的议论文一般由三个部分构成,分别是导语段(Introduction),主体段落(Body)与总结段(Conclusion)。这个结构很像三明治,其中导语段与总结段就像最上层和最下层的面包,而主体段落为论证段,相对较为重要,就像三明治中间的肉和菜。其结构如下图所示: 通常情况下按照实际的需要,中间的主体部分(Body)又可以分成二到四个段落,其结构图分别如下: (注:*段落视需要而增加) 由于导语段中最重要部分是中心句(Thesis statement),它是全文的立足点,决定文章的发展方向,覆盖全文;段落主题句(Topic sentence)是每一段的重点,覆盖各自所在的段落。因此,我们可以通过思考后得出议论文的中心句(Thesis statement)以及各主体段落主题句(Topic sentence)。此外,为求达到全文的统一性(Unity)和连贯性(Coherence), 考生们应当合理地安排中心句和各段的主题句的关系,使得中心句覆盖全文,使得各段的主题句很好地支持着中心句。如果中心句没有覆盖主题句,说明正文偏题了。如果中心句超过主题句,刚说明内容有遗漏,或者说内容不够全面。中心句各段的主题句的关系情况可由下面三张图表示:

说明文作文之雅思作文说明文范文

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慎小嶷 《十天突破雅思写作》总结2

General Knowledge 注意: 1. 作文要有实质内容。 2. 6分:260~270个词左右;6.5分:280个词以上。 3. 没有必要一定写长难句,但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子,而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。(准确、严密、多样、清晰) 4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误,只要不引起歧义,是不会导致严重扣分的,但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。 5. 考场里没有时间打草稿,但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。 6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来,否则会被判为违纪行为。 7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战:下载标准格式的答题纸;用铅笔写作,每行10~12个单词;严格控制时间,Task 1不应超过25 min,Task 2不应超过45 min。备考初期,可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习,但在考前一周内,必须演练完整的写作考试全程,严格控制时间,写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。 8.

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