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(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达专题训练答案含解析

（英语）九年级上册英语书面表达专题训练答案含解析

一、英语书面表达

1．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如

下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶

喜欢上了广场舞。（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些邻居有意

见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……

要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

_______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to ta

lk about my grandma.

A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been

in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lo friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.

They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.

In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they

should think about the feelings of ot hers and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意

随着文章推进时态的变化，一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最

后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关

系，构思文章框架，列举出可能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词

汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的连词，使文章更加顺

畅，自然。

2．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一

定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！

要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。 2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100

词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.

As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.

Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.

Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well

I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定

句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到较高的分数。

3．书面表达

“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；

2.遵守交通规则；

3.公共场合不大声喧哗；

4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）

参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For

example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk

or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短

语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all,

we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语

的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容

经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要

点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构

以便得到较高的分数。

4．人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍

人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法

1. 广交朋友

2. 可自由表达思想

3. 有利于外语学习1. 浪费时间

2. 影响学习

3. 可能上当受骗（be cheated）

1. ...

2. ...

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。

2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people

think___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________

【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people

think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

【解析】

【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的

观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】

本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。

注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注

意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡

性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼

写和语法错误。

5．“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的

改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写

一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

要求：

1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；

3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved

a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen

everywhere.

As junior high students,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________

Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.

【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has

improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be

seen everywhere.

As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite

to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help

clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off

grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.

ons can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.

Let’s take action now. Our acti

【解析】

【详解】

琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的

改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。题

目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可

知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，

写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现

在时态，第一人称we来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不

能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句

型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文

章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双

创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内

容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清

晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符

合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较

复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and

try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up

our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw

等等。

rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.

6．书面表达

请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

一直以来，同学们对作业持有不同的观点。在你班的主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的讨论，请你根据提示和要求，并结合自己的实际经验，发表你的

观点。

Yes No

Help us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；

Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

要求：

1．80词以上。

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

【答案】Dear students，

I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.

Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”

．

In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.

That's all. Thanks.

【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日的作业到底

是不是必要的。首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点，其次结合自己的实际经验，发表自己的

观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑准确，注意正确使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己

的观点。

写作亮点：首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题，表达出自己的观点（认为作业是很必要

这样的句型。其次，开始具体陈述观点，陈述的

的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…

时候要适当使用实例，相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困

难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little

一点一点地。恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”

熟能生巧

这个谚语。最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills

提高我们的技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了

作者的深度思考，总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。

7．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里

发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下

提示给他回信：

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

_______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

Yours,

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now

I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a

famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making

clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’

be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》

（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来

信。

8．俗话说，国有国法，家有家规。家规是中华民族传统文化的重要组成部分。我们的国家

主席习近平多次强调良好家风家规的重要性。假如你是李华，请你根据以下表格内的要点

提示，并结合你的家庭实际情况，给你的英国笔友Sam写一封信，向他介绍一下你的家

规，并向他展示一个温情智慧的中国家庭。

要点提示：

三条家规尊老爱幼，礼貌待人诚实守信，不断学习按时作息，杜绝熬夜

你对你家家规的看法......

简单阐述你是如何受益的......

写作要求:

1.文章须包括所给内容要求，可适当发挥，使行文流畅、通顺；

2.省略号部分请各用2-3句话作适当发挥；

3.词数90左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sam,

Haven’t written to you fo r a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our

Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.

There are many rules that we have to follow.

_______________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________

What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sam,

Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of y ou

Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.

There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young.

abit to be honest and keep your

You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good h

words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t up too late.

In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.

The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feeling Chinese traditional culture.

you soon!

What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，向山姆介绍你的家规并向他展示一个温情的中国家庭。根据要表达的

内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习

惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep

ad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a

your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop b

difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主语。增强逻辑关系，增加上下

文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：

1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；

2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；

3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电

讨论结果25人表示同意35人不同意

理由1.这样很方便； 2.能节约上学

途中的时间。

1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；

2.早上交通拥

挤，骑电动车也快不起来。

【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride

electric bicycles to go to

school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and

it could take

them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe for

the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said

in the morning

the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一

篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点

可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一

个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并

注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。

写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结

构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。

Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school.

They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycle quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。

考点：提纲类作文。

10．书面表达

“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”

----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》

“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”

----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》

“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”

----President Xi Jingping

以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，

便只顾风雨兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以

Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：

1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；

2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；

3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；

4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：

1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；

2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；

3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser

As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may

feel upset.__________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes

we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal.

But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves

stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can

learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many

difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these

challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学

习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何

）。承接文章开头，句意完实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…

整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。

高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。

(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达专题训练答案含解析

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