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日本轰炸上海火车南站  作文

哭泣的孩子

1937年8月28日,天黑沉沉的,太阳被层层的乌云遮住了。上海火车南站还是热热闹闹的,准备乘火车出发的人们一点儿也没有感觉到,杀气正笼罩着火车站。

车站里匆忙赶路的人们还没有注意到,伴随着“嗡嗡”的响声,几架颜色不同、形状各异的日本战斗机正朝这里飞来,它们像几只凶恶的老鹰盘旋在火车站的上空,丢下了一些炸弹,然后远走高飞了。一小时前还热热闹闹的火车南站瞬间变成了一片废墟。

从火车南站的废墟中传来了一阵接一阵的稚嫩的哭声,只见一个小男孩儿正坐在溅满鲜血的地上无助地哭着。他衣衫褴褛,瘦弱的身体支撑着大大的头,显然又是一个营养不良的穷苦孩子。他是一个可怜的孩子,同时也是一个幸运的孩子。当敌机丢下炸弹时,年轻的父母把孩子压在了自己的身子底下,用自己的生命为他提供了一个避难的场所。而他的父母,则被炸弹炸死了。

孩子醒来时,他怎么也无法从周围面目全非的尸体中找到自己的父母了。这个弱小的孩子只能无助地哭泣。

后来,可怜的孩子被一位好心人收养了,长大后的孩子向全世界人民呼吁:“为了孩子不再失去父母,为了父母不再失去孩子,全世界的人民应该一致行动起来,为战争敲响丧钟,让世界成为充满阳光、鲜花和爱的人类家园!”

战争中的孩子

1937年8月28日,天黑沉沉的,日本侵略者突然轰炸上海火车南站。

车站上忙碌的旅客还来不及反应,只听“轰”的一声巨响,火车站的候车室瞬间倒塌了。转眼间,硝烟滚滚,血肉横飞。车站里成千上万的人们惊惶失措,逃的逃,叫的叫,哭的哭,乱成一片……

这时,从被炸的废墟中传来一个幼儿的哭声,闻声过去,一个三、四岁的男孩正坐在废墟里,他的周围都是血肉模糊的尸体,他身上也都溅满了血。那男孩显然已被周围发生的一切吓怕了,他一脸惊慌,眼睛瞪得大大的,满脸都是灰尘,还张着大嘴拼命地哇哇啼哭着,这个可怜的孩子在用他那拼命的哭声找寻自己的爸爸妈妈。

头顶上敌人的轰炸机还在盘旋着,一枚枚炸弹继续攻击着,地上的人们死的死,伤的伤,街上血流成河,惨不忍睹。就在这时,他听到他旁边的废墟里,传来一个微弱的声音,他知道,这是他妈妈的声音。于是,他拼命爬过去,手上、脚上都被碎片划破了一道道口子,鲜血在流,可他全然不顾,终于,小男孩爬到了妈妈身边,看到妈妈一脸的鲜血,妈妈从牙缝里挤出两面个字“孩子”就断了气。就这样,一个幸福的家庭被日本侵略者毁掉了!这个孩子成了孤儿。

后来,这个可怜的孩子被一位好心人收养了,他发奋读书,为振兴中华而不懈努力!

炮火中的孩子

看了这张照片后,我的心里久久不能平静。因为我恨日寇,恨他们没有人性地屠杀中国人。

这张照片是在1937年8月28日下午,日本侵略者在轰炸上海火车南站时,被摄影师拍摄下来的。照片上,一个身上布满血迹的小男孩正坐在废墟旁边撕心裂肺地哭着,寻找着父母,可是周围没有一个活着的人,死伤无数,即使活下来的人也都纷纷逃跑了,谁还有空来管这个小孩?站台上的桥梁断裂了,房屋倒塌了,火“噼里啪啦”地燃烧着,仿佛要把所有东西都吞下去似的,滚滚浓烟把天空都染黑了,盖住了太阳,整个火车站就像人间地狱般恐怖。

原来,这个小男孩是准备跟着爸爸妈妈坐火车去投奔外地亲友的。可是就在他们买票的时候,只听“轰”的一声,候车室的半边房子塌了下来。爸爸妈妈拼命抱着小孩奔出了车站,可这时又有一枚炸弹从他们的上方落了下来。小男孩的父母都被炸弹炸死了,可是他的衣服也被炸烂了,身上也沾满了鲜血,仅仅两岁的小男孩孤独地望着一片废墟,号啕大哭起来……

后来,小男孩被好心人收养了。小男孩长大了,可是永远忘不了日本侵略者轰炸上海火车南站的那一幕,忘不了他那亲爱的爸爸妈妈……

想想在战争中的孩子,再想想我们现在的生活,他们是多么的可怜,我们又是那么的幸福啊!我希望全世界的人们都行动起来,给孩子们一个充满阳光与和平的世界。

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