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3种常见雅思图表作文

3种常见雅思图表作文
3种常见雅思图表作文

1.柱状图:

柱状图本质上就是前三种图的柱状形式,下面我们通过一个图来进行掩饰。这张图看起来像三张饼图,等于四根曲线图,可以使用总分句,还等于一个3×4的表格题。我们在写的时候可以使用一些表格题的写作方法,比如:This was the similarcase with the trend of foot.其实我们讲,考试中虽然有4种图,但题型本质上就分动态图和静态图,动态图最好使用曲线图的整体写作模式,就是All trends加天龙八部的微观和宏观结合,静态图则是静态表格的写作模式,通常用纯比较的写作模式。所以我们在写作中要记住,语言不用新学了,完全借鉴前三种中的句型。

柱状图特殊的要求

一,对类比和反比非常重视,因为它主要是向前三种图借鉴,也就是它不再强调每一种题型的要求,它不必强调趋势或者数字,它对每个图的当中共性和差异的开发是比较重视,所以柱状图中的文字性的部分可以多一些。

二,柱状图对语法的要去很高,很多柱状图属于静态图,这样写作的时候要求主语和句型的多样性。三,它要求我们掌握一个概念,即隐藏特征的概念,它是柱状图特有的,后来引入到其他图,所谓隐藏特征即隐藏在数据背后的客观性事实,首先它是不明显的,要看你个人的分析能力,第二它是客观性事实,千万不要夹杂个人观点,如果在雅思中发表个人观点,一定5分以下。另外隐藏特征要在结尾段写,它有自己的默认格式:What is worth mentioning is that since…, it indicates the fact that…,这个应该算高分的最后一击。

雅思Task1的高分关键在于:

一,变化多端的wording,句式和体系,这就说明了你词汇的词汇的使用能力,包括句型的变化,这个用的好的话,5分是一定的;

二,清晰宏观的分类,all trends的总分句;

三,7.5分以上需要有力得体的隐藏特征,这是一个加分,找不到不扣分,找到有0.5分的加分。

找隐藏特征方法

1,通过百分比去找,大于100%,说明有多选:Some people choose several reasons for…,小于100%,有没有列出的原因或因素:There exist some other factors/reasons unlisted/unmentioned.

2,抓住反义词,出现一组或几组反义词,通过对比可以找出abnormal statistics;

3,debut statistics,凡是有空着的数据就可以用这个写:not make its debut until(year),只要出现在柱状图和表格题中,饼图和曲线图基本没有;

4,既定趋势及特征,雅思中有一些图很明显地对未来是大势所趋的,比如我们讲能源构成饼图中(见下图),核能一直在不断的增长,核能是清洁的新型能源的代表,越来越受到重视,二传统能源已经趋势饱和,这个趋势我们可以这样表达:

所以说隐藏特征是很高端的动作,大家可以的话多找一些图来联系,积累些经验,对以后的考试会有好处的。

2.饼状图

三句万能句型

第一步要看文字信息,如果不看文字会不清楚内容。饼图的要点在于三句万能句型的开发。

第一句,首先用a quarter of导入数据,之后和表中黑字体一样,这部分我们称为抄题,在小作文中没有必要去改很多同义词,它主要考察描述的准确度,不用改写,直接抄题不会对分数有影响。这句话通过数据,抄题,导入宾语进行了这样一种写法。

第二句,首先使用主语,后面使用了4个表示占据的单词和短语,这个要求大家全部掌握。这个符合饼图先特征后数据的理念,先不提数据,先讲一下特征,这句话比第一句明显有进步,有短语的使用和写作的理念。

第三句,我们可以看到一个剩余数字的使用,比如remainder,我们还看到两个短语,比如in the charge of,人用in the charge of,物用due to。

这三句话如果你要拿7分就必须融合在一起,这三句我们就成为万能句型。

饼图的审题

先看文字信息,然后是标题审题,首先把2号句定下来,一般极端数字用2号句,比如最大最小值,或与之相近的数字,2号句定下来后我们再把1号句和3号句使用一下,3号句使用1句,接下来使用1到2句的1号句。

审题的过程

下面我们通过一道题来讲一下审题的过程,一共有6个数据,首先先看文字,看过文字之后第一步,挑

出极端数字,第1个和第5个是最大和最小,在旁边标注2,和它们比较接近的数字也可以标上2,所以

1,4,5,6都可以入

选2号句,当然真正写的时候没有必要写4句话,我们写2句就可以了,1和6一起写,4和5一起写,

这样就形成了大和小的对比。

写的过程中要注意时态。没有时间是现在时,过去是过去时,将来是将来时,要注意在雅思小作文的描述中有两种时态是不用的,第一个是现在完成时,使用现在完成时描述动作持续到现在是没有意义的,在最后文字总结的时候可能会用,第二个是现在进行时。

回到刚才的写作中,4和5在一起,要注意两点,第一是连词的使用,第二是不要重复使用之前的单词或短语。2号句写完后是1号句和3号句。通过这个练习,我们应该可以掌握三种句型的使用方法。

两张饼图的写法

两张饼图一般有两种情况,有关系和无关系。一般考试中都是有关系的,无关系就各写3句话,下面我们讲一下有关系的饼图怎么写。理论上说两张图我们有三种写作顺序,以下面这张图为例,这两张图是讲能源的构成在不同年代的比例。三种顺序如下:

这三种顺序我们按初学者的角度来看建议大家选择第一种,我们来看如何写70s,第一步,根据2-1-3这三种句型来进行写作。coal和nuclear是最大最小,是2号句,oil和hydro差不多大,可以用1号句,最后remaining是natural gas。那么第二张图怎么写呢,第二张图只要进行涨跌平的比较就可以了,因为饼图的技术含量相对比较低一点,我们看出有两块涨,两块跌,还有一块是比较平的,结合我们之前的学习,句子如下:

两张图的写法

它基本是按着一个模式来进行的,就是3+5结构模式,首先用三句万能句型把第一张图写好,这样就有了一个基础,再加上第二张图中的5个数据,2涨,2跌,1平,不止2涨的话我们可以挑选1个涨得多的,1个涨得少的,使得动词多样化,2跌也是同样,如果没有平的话可以是3涨2跌或2涨3跌,基本上差别不大的话可以用almost修饰,所以3+5一共是8个句子左右就构成了写作的主体。

三张以上的图

如果是三张以上的图其实很好写,写作顺序只有一种,就是直接联动,直接把每一项的变化写出来,形成趋势,按照曲线图的写法来写。现在我们来总结一些,关于饼图,一个饼图怎么写,三句万能句型,顺序2-1-3,两张图就是有关系3+5,没关系就是3+3,最后是三张以上图的写作原则,直接联动,按照曲线图的写法来写。

串联词

串联词主要有两种,顺接和转折。以后不管写什么都需要适当的进行串联,这是比较静态的图,动态图的我们还可以使用分词或从句来串联。

2.曲线图

曲线图的写法

一,曲线图的总分概念

曲线图的第一步在于微观的描写词,这些词代表了曲线图的趋势的说法,第二部在总分概念的掌握,就是对图进行一定的宏观上的分类,有四种不同的方法,首先是总分句,功能是对整张图的趋势进行整合。一般来说有三个主语可以进行选择,all trends,statistics,charts,一般动态图以写trends为主,静态图用statistics,多图我们用charts。有时间可以用时间标记,没有时间可以用group标记,多图可以用types。with后面导入基本趋势或特征,general可以认为是以垃圾词汇为主,后面我们再细分描写再用到我们讲过的词汇。

二,曲线图的分类

形态划分法:

下面我们来讲一下到底什么叫分类,我们以下图为例,这张图可以把它分成四个阶段,这是比较标准的分法,第一阶段是1到6月份,fluctuate第二阶段是6到8月份,rise sharply,第三阶段是8到10月份,fall sharply,第四阶段是10到12月份,rise gently完全按照趋势的变化来进行分类,这种分类方法叫形态划分法,根据四大基本趋势的变化和变化的程度来划分,所以这张动态图我们得出句子All trends can be catego rized into 4 stages…这种是最简答的一种分类方法。

水平划分法:

那如果是较复杂的图,比如下面这张,如果还是按照形态划分的话会变得非常多,这是不可能,所以遇到复杂图我们首先可以使用点位划分法,使用数值差别比较小的点做起点重点来进行划分,相当于之前讲过evenly,但下图分一个阶段是没有意义的,分两个阶段6-16,在这当中起伏出现了两次,再说evenly效果就不好了,当中的变化无法说清,就需要用到第三种划分发,水平划分法,它进行的是空间的整合,我们看从6-10和16-20是比较相像的,这两段我们都可以用大起大落来形容,接下来我们再来看11-15,是在做一个evenly的活动,同样在20-22也出现了这一过程,所以在这张图上我们可以形成两个比较大的阶段的名称,第一是6-10,16-20,第二个是11-15,20-22,剩下的时间段可以略去不讲,细分的时候再介绍,这样就形成了这样的句子,All trends can be categorized into 2 staged with rising and falling sharply(6-10,16-20) and rising and falling evenly(11-15,20-22).所以我们可以看出这个水平划分法就是根据曲线的相似度来进行划分,具体来说就是三种情况,第一种叫大起大落,震荡剧烈,第二种叫小起小落,第三种是起落同幅。

三,曲线图的细分描写

首先我们来看一个版本: It fluctuated within a small range from Jan to June. Then it soared, reaching a peak at 3000 in Aug and slumped, bottoming out at about 1250 in Oct. Finally, there was a boom till the end of the year.基本上准备了两周左右就可以达到这个水平,6.5分左右,该有的一些元素基本都有了,最后也知道用there be 的句型进行改写,为什么没有到7分呢,因为还有一些小小的问题,第一,有很多it;第二,更严重的问题,连接,使用的多是副词,是连接的最低水平,我们再来看一个8分的版本:Harry`s annual sales of hamburgers were volatile slightlyduring the first half year, followed by leaping till its zenith at 3000

in Aug. We can witness a sudden slump to Oct, echoed by booming till Dec. 它好在哪里呢,用一些平时不

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四,曲线图比较划分法

四,曲线图比较划分法

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