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剑7 test 1

writing task 2

topic: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician

Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

text:

When the topic is some people have genius when they are born, sport ,music and so on. But some people believe, though acquired struggle to reach as same as the people who born with genius. Actually the people who born with talents are prior to the general people in respective field. But the problem is, can the general people though acquired struggle to catch up the people who have talents? In my opinion if absence talent, however postnatal is working hard would not be a genius in sport and music.

Ludwig van Beethoven born in Germany was pianist, conductor and one of the Vienna classical pie. When he was four years old he was studying music. Beethoven performed on stage in eight years old. Two years later he begin composed music by himself. In twelve years old, as a court chief violinist. In 1819 he became deaf, but he never gave up creation music. If Beethoven did not born with talent and insisting in his music road he

should not achievement for today. Genius is 1% talent and 99% perspiration. In this example, although striving in postnatal is important, innate factor also obbligato.

Michael Phelps a American athlete, typical of swimmers, he is famous at swimming. When he was 15 years old he had fifth in swimming in 2000 Sydney Olympic Games. Respectively get 6 gold medal and 2 bronze medal in 2004 Athens Olympic Games and 8 gold medal in 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. So many performance in World Championship, Pan Pacific game and Grand prix.

All in all not everybody can become a good sports and musician without talent.