基础写作——人物介绍
人物介绍
人物简介: 注意掌握并背诵一些有用的表达和句型,并能够灵活运用.
A. 【介绍出生:】
1.出生于某地某时间: be born in swh in/on sometime
2.钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家.
Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Hangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911.
3. 钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家, 他是我国航天事业的先驱.
Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911 and he was the pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry. (并列句)
Quan Xuesen , the pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry,
was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911. (同位语)
Quan Xuesen, who was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry.
(定语从句)
Quan Xuesen , born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry. (非谓语作定语)
B. 【介绍年龄身高:】
1. 17岁的女孩: a 17-year-old girl, a girl of seventeen,
2. 在17岁时: at the age of 17, aged 17
3. 白云, 年龄27岁, 在24岁时毕业于哈佛大学.
BaiYun, who is at the age of 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of
24. (定语从句)
BaiYun, aged 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24. (非谓语作定语)
BaiYun, a woman of 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24. (同位语)
4.1.80 metres tall / in height, …with a weight / height of …
他1米8的个头，体重70公斤。他很受同伴的欢迎，因为他很乐观、外向、自信，乐于助人。
He is very popular with his fellow students, as he is optimistic, out-going, confident and always ready to help others, with a height of 1.80 meters and a weight of 70 kilos.
C. 【介绍人物性格爱好】
ambitious 有雄心壮志的competent 能胜任的confident 有信心的considerate 体贴的cooperative 有合作精神的devoted 有献身精神的efficient 有效率的energetic 精力充沛的enthusiastic 充满热情的hard-working/diligent 勤劳的intelligent 理解力强的modest 谦虚的qualified 合格的independent 有主见的/独立的selfless 无私的strong-willed/ determined 意志坚强的well-educated 受过良好教育的patient 耐心的with endurance有耐力的, with perseverance有毅力对….有兴趣: be interested in …./ show interest in …..
在…方面有天赋: have a gif t/ talent for…..
1.他有很强的合作精神. 他很圆满地组织了这次活动.
He is so cooperative that he organized the activity perfectly.
So cooperative is he that he organized the activity perfectly. (So放句首的倒装句) Such a cooperative man is he that he organized the activity perfectly. (Such放句首的倒装句)
2.他受过良好的教育,而且理解力强. 他很快地就完成了这项任务.
He is so well-educated and intelligent that he accomplished the task quickly.
(so…that …句型)
Well-educated and intelligent, he accomplished the task quickly. (adj表伴随动作). 3.他不但对科学极有兴趣,而且在音乐方面有天赋.
He not only shows interest in science, but also he has a gift for music
Not only does he show interest in science, but also he has a gift for music. (Not only 放句首的倒装句)
D. 【介绍教育】
1.考上…大学… be admitted into …University
2.毕业于哈佛大学graduated from Harvard University.
3.毕业于…学校的…系graduated from….department of …university
4.主修…. major in geology
5.去….深造…./去…继续接受教育go to swh for further education
6.获得学士/硕士/博士学位: get/gain a bachelor’s master’s / doctor’s degree.
7. Linder, 主修政治学, 毕业于华南师范大学.
Linda, whose major is politics, graduated from South China Normal University.
(定语从句)
Linda, majoring in politics, graduated from South China Normal University.
(非谓语作定语)
8. 李平从…大学毕业之后, 就投身于科研事业当中了.
After graduating from…University, LinPin devoted himself to the scientific research. (介词+Ving)
Having graduated from…University, LinPin devoted himself to the scientific research. (非谓语作状语表时间,有先后顺序)
9. 毕业后,他去了美国深造,并在那里获得了博士学位.
Having graduated from…University, he went to America for further education and gained a doctor’s degree.
Having graduated from…University, he went to study in America, where he gained a doctor’s degree. (定语从句)
E. 【介绍生事迹】
be interested in… /be fond of…
在…感兴趣/喜爱
2）work hard at…
在…工作努力
3）serve as…
作为…
4）devote his lifetime/oneself to…
将一生投入到…
5）concentrate oneself on…
集中某人注意力做…
6）do research about/ into…
做关于…的研究
7）make up one’s mind to do sth.
下定决定做某事
8）do sth with great determination and perseverance
凭着巨大的决心和毅力去做
9）be strict in sth.
在…严格要求
10）have a …way of doing sth
在做某事方面有着…的方式
11）try on e’s best to do sth.
尽全力去做某事
12）encourage sb to do
鼓励某人做某事
13）fight for/ give up one’s life for sb/sth
为…而奋斗/为某人/某事放弃自己的生命
14）win a prize/the first prize in …competition
在比赛中获得奖励/获得第一名
15)receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for…
因…而获得了诺贝尔奖
16)be good at… .do well in…
在…做得好
17)be crazy about… / enjoy …
对…着迷/享受…
18)make rapid progress in …
在…做出进步
19)set a new world record of …
创造一项新的世界纪录
20)equal/break the world record
平/打破世界纪录
21)win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal
获得金牌/银牌/铜牌
22）win the xxth place
获得第几名
23)be selected to/ become a member of…
被选为… /成为…的一员
24)study hard / train hard
学习努力/训练努力
25)go through hardship
经历困难/挫折
26)have a gift/ talent for …(language)
对… (语言)有天份
27)realize one’s dream
实现梦想
28)overcome many difficulties
克服很多困难
F. 【介绍评估】
1)one of the best/ most important …
是最重要的/最佳之一
2)set a good example for…
为…作了好榜样
3)a model teacher/worker
一个模范教师/员工
4)be respected by everyone
被所有人尊敬
5)speak/ think highly of…
高度评价
6)be honored as (an excellent athlete)
被誉为（优秀运动员）
7)his hard work brought him great success
他的努力工作为他带来了巨大的成功
8)he is the pride of China.
他是中国的骄傲
9)His heroic story spread all over the city
他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市
10)make great contributions to…
为…作出巨大贡献
11)Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success.
坚持是成功的秘诀
12)be famous/known as be regarded as
因…著名/被称为…
13)become a world champion at …Championships
…成为世界冠军
14)remember sb forever
…永垂不朽
15)a new chapter of history has been turned
将翻开历史新的一页
16)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
雷锋以他的共产主义精神被赞扬
语法，句法高分tips
A. 概况:尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一
1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.
2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
B.外貌,性格:巧用with做定语
译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
C. 教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
1）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.
D．生平：尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章
1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team. E．评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
练习：
1.高锟，1933年11月4日出生于上海一个富裕家庭，从小
对做不同的试验产生浓厚兴趣。
定语从句：
Gaokun, who was born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933,
show great interest (was interested) in doing different
experiment during his childhood.
非谓语（定语）
Gaokun, born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, show
great interest (was interested) in doing different
experiment during his childhood.
非谓语（状语）
Born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, Gaokun show great
interest (was interested) in doing different experiment
during his childhood.
2.他于1957年在伦敦念大学，并于1963年获得博士学位。
并列句：
He studied in a university in London in 1957, and received a doctor’s degree in 1963. After he studied in a a university in London in 1957, received a doctor’s degree in 1963主从句：
In 1957, He studied in a university in London, where he
gained a doctor’s degree in 1963.
非谓语：
Having studied in a university in London in 1957, he gained a doctor’s degree in 1963.
3.中山大学英语系毕业后，她出国深造。
并列句：连词
After graduating from the English Department of
Zhongshan University, she went abroad for further studies.
非谓语：
Having graduated from the English Department of
Zhongshan University, she went abroad for further studies.
4．1983年他毕业于哥伦比亚大学，1988年考入哈佛法学
院，1991年获得博士学位。
并列句：连词
In 1983, he graduated from Columbia University and
in 1988, he was admitted to Harvard Law School, where
he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991.定语从句
After graduating from Columbia University In 1983,he
was admitted to Harvard Law School, where he gained
his doctor’s degree in 1991.
5.米高菲尔普斯是美国一个非凡的游泳运动员，1985年6月出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。
Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer who was
born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985.
Michael Phelps, born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985, is a great American swimmer.
Born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985, Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer.
6. 他7岁开始游泳，经历了很多艰苦的训练。
When he was 7 years old, he started swimming and
experienced much tough professional training. ( go through much hard training.)
7. 15岁的时候，他参加了2000年奥运会，并在200米蝶泳
比赛中获得第五。
At the age of 15, he attended the 2000 Olympic Games
and won the fifth place in the 200-meter butterfly.
8. 在北京奥运会上，他实现了他的8枚金牌梦，打破了7个
世界纪录，创造了历史。
At the Beijing Olympic Games, Phelps realized his dream
of wining 8 gold medal and broke 7 world records,
which created the history.
实战训练:
2011.Ⅲ. 第一节：基础写作
以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道
*耶鲁：Yale **哈佛：Harvard
[写作内容]
根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：
1.图书的基本信息
2.图书的相关报道
基础写作提示：
1 一本名为Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 书在2010年出版。它的中文版于2011年初开始在中国销售
A book named Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010，whose Chinese version began to sell in China early 2011.
2 它主要是关于作者（Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授）如何用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事。
It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.
3 它引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论。
Its publication has started a debate about which way of edcation is better, the traditional Chinese one or the American one.
4 意外的是多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法。
Surprisingly, most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of education.
最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛**和耶鲁录取。
A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.
答案
Version 1
A book named Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010，whose Chinese version began to sell in China early 2011. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.Its publication has started a debate about which way of edcation is better, the traditional Chinese one or the American one.Surprisingly, most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of education.A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.
Version 2
A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.
Version 3
A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of parenting. A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.
【写作2】
请写一篇介绍“南非国父”纳尔逊曼德拉（Nelson Mandela）
写作要求
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
参考词汇：
1、全心全意heart and soul 事业career 显著的remarkable
2、奖项award
答案
Born on July 18th, 1918, Nelson Mandela, the Father of South Africa,passed away on December 6 th, 2003 at the age of 95. As a lawyer, he worked for black people heart and soul and later he set up ANC Youth League to fight against the government. Only when the unfair laws couldn’t be improved in a peaceful way did he determine to answer violence with violence. Although he was sentenced to prison for life, he devoted himself to the peaceful career all the time, bringing his people equal rights. He received more
than one hundred awards in forty years, the most remarkable of which was the Nebel Peace Prize.
课堂练习2
你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。
［写作内容］
人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）
出生日期：1974年12月1日
时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息：
·借助当地媒体寻找
·迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家
·职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
·计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人
·打算根据此经历写一本书
［写作要求］
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
［评分标准］
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
答案
Version 2
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