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16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.doc

16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文

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Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:

1)Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then

2)Comment on whether students I earn more from c l asses than from other resources

You can support yourself wi th information from the excerpt?

Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality?Failure to foI Iow the above instructions may result in a loss of

marks?

Do students learn more from classes than from other resources?

With the advent of the Internet and other telecommunications

technologies, there is a vastly growing wealth of resources avai table from an immense range of media outlets. Students have the ability to absorb information in a quicker and more efficient way when researching on their own through reading publications or browsing webpages online? As a result, some people argue that students now learn more from other resources than from cl asses? Conducting research with online materials is an active process, which allows youngsters to focus in greater detail rather than passively I istening to a lecture in a large classroom?The Internet and TV are also easily accessible platforms for students in the remote places where teaching resources are not as abundant as those in more developed regions?However, teachers have the capability of explaining the know!edge in a deeper way and not on 1 y provide theoretical explanation but also practical experience about life. They have accumulated a large body of intelligence that is profoundly more precise than other sources? Teachers not only function as initiators who impart knowledge but also serve as supervisors or guardians?The conventional role of instructors, in this day and age, has evolved to become

evaluators and facilitators, guiding students in their

In the information age, the traditional student-teacher relationship has been affected deeply and peop 1 e begin to doubt whether students can learn more from classes than

from other resources?According to the conventional view, teachers are still the primary source from which students obtain professional knowledge, timely class interaction, and effective supervision from the contrary, nowadays, many people believe that students can learn more from other resources such as Internet and TV since they are more accessible and engage students more actively in research?

For me, I am in favor of the first view. Teachers play an irreplaceable role in education, whether it' s in the past or at present, since they not only impart knowledge, but also educate people? For one thing, what students learn from their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous amount of data needed to be sifted through to determine which information is another, teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a place as important as the teaching of knowledge, which is hard for students to obtain from other resource?In conclusion, the development of cutting-edge

technology exerts a big impact on modern education? However, it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom? (213 words)

例题2

PART VI WRITING

Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:

1) Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then 2) Comment on whether people should choose to become indoorsy You can support yourself wi th information from the excerpt?

Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality? Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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