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英语写作训练——润色提升

英语写作训练——润色提升
英语写作训练——润色提升

英语写作训练——润色提升

马广谋

要想把一篇文章写好,不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等,还要对文章进行润色,尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式,以增加文章的亮点,给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧设开头和结尾

1.开头

常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格,不能千篇一律,要因不同文章的需要而各异,但又有其共同遵循的原则:①开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要;

②开头常能展示文章的主题;③开头应能抓住读者的注意力,引导读者读下去。

用于文章开头的句型有:

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...;Those who object to...argue that...;They believe that...;But people who favor...,on the other hand,argue that...

(2)Faced with...,quite a few people argue that...;But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...;But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2.结尾

结尾的方法有很多,如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。

结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳,也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣,深化主题,给人回味,引人深思。用于文章结尾的句型有:

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in... (4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be

helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...,but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion,...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally,I prefer to...

(13) In short,...should learn to...;Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned,I agree with the opinion that...

二、准确地道的英美式表达

1.注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异

a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)

a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)

2.恰当使用限定词

用词准确,从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度,这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词,以避免观点的绝对化,从而提高说服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

→He is one of the top students in our class.

3.注意词语的习惯搭配

用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义,还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配,一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4.避免口语化

高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体,因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5.避免赘言啰嗦

赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想,本来只需要一两个词,却用了冗长的词组或者从句,如repeat again,return back,still remain,very perfect等。

三、提升表达结构

1.变简单句为并列句或复合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

→It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.

2.借用关键词汇(介词,不定式等)压缩句子长度,提升句子品味The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom,a bathroom,and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.

3.语态互换

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

→He was seen studying hard in his study.

4.语序调整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

→Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5.强调句式

You must write to me when you get there.

→Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6.感叹及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

→How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

→Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7.语气虚拟

You didn't take my advice,so you failed in the exam.

→If you had taken my advice,you wouldn't have failed in the exam. 8.非谓语动词的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

→Singing and laughing,they went back to school.

9.插入语

I think the book is well worth reading.

→The book,in my opinion,is well worth reading.

10.格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。

(3)No pains,no gains.不劳无获。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。

11.句式调换

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

→He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

→Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

按要求改写句子

1.People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.(there be句型)

2.He fell asleep.The lights were still on.(with的复合结构)

→. 3.Because I have lots of work to do,I have to work extra hours.(非谓语)

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4.Though I'm weak,I'll make the effort.(使用倒装句改写)

5.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型It was...)

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