考研英语二-小作文写作要点及技巧
小作文
2010年：复合题型（感谢+邀约）2011年：复合题型（祝贺+建议）2012年：投诉信
2013年：邀请信
2014年：询问信
2015年：通知
2016年：建议信
2017年：复合题型
2018年：复合题型
2019年：建议信
2010年小作文：复合题型（感谢+邀约）You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program. Write a letter to your American colleague to
1）Express your thanks for his/her warm reception；
2）Welcome him/her to visit China in due course.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.
Do not write your address. （10 points）
Para1：表达感谢
第一段首句：直入主题
①I am writing this letter to express my deeply gratitude for your hospitality when I took part in an exchange program in USA.
②I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your grateful kindness to receive me when I participated in an exchange program in USA.
Para2：阐述邀请的内容：
第二段首句：承上启下
①During the time for my entire visit, my delegation and I were overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by your representatives about cooperation with China.
②Your generous help made it possible that I had a very pleasant stay and a chance to know American cultures better.
第二段第二句：阐述题干第2点要求（1）
①Besides, I sincerely hope we could have more exchanges to continue our interesting discussion on possible way, especially for my countries' culture.
②In addition, I do want an another opportunity to continue our entertaining discussion and give me a chance to introduce China's culture to you.
第二段尾句：阐述题干第2点要求（2）
①I do hope that you will visit China one day, so that I could have the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship.
②We can expand our bilateral cultural relationships and make cultural integration, meanwhile, I will be able to pay back some of the hospitality I received during my memorable stay in your country.
para3：客套话
①I feel obliged to thank you again.
②please accept my gratitude, now and always.
Sincerely/Faithfully yours
Zhang Wei
2011年小作文：复合题型（祝贺+建议）Direction: Suppose your cousin, Liming, has just been admitted to a university, write him/her a letter to
1) congratulate him/her, and
2) give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.
Your should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei”instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
Para1. 表达祝贺
第一段首句：直入主题表达感谢
①Can yon imagine what a delight I take in your being admitted to the university?
②Congratulations on your being admitted to the university! I am sure that you are going to embark on an amazing and beautiful journey.
第一段第二句：如第一句写得短，可以增加，顺带承上启下①Your hard work and perseverance certainly paid off. I wish
to express my most ardent and earnest congratulations through this letter. And I would like to make some suggestions on your college life as follow.
Para2. 给予建议
第二段首句：承上启下（此句可在第一段尾句，也可在第二段首句）
②As your cousin and a college graduate, I cannot wait to share with you some of the tips of how to get prepared fo r college life.
第二段第二句：
①To begin with, it is advisable for you to do a preliminary research on the courses you are going to learn before entering the college.
②First of all, I suggest that you do a preliminary research on the courses. In this way, you can build a general framework of how your university academic life looks like.
第二段尾句：
①Besides, significance should be attached to interpersonal
relationship as well as scholarship , which will help you when you are in trouble.
②In addition, considering socializing on campus is one of the most crucial and critical things that cannot be ignored, I would like to recommend that you should cultivate your interpersonal relationship.
Para3：客套话
①I genuinely hope that you will take my suggestion into account. Wish you greater success in the future.
②I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours truly
Zhang Wei
①模板：117字数
②模板：121字数
2015年小作文：通知
Part A
Directions:
Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice to
1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and
2) call for volunteers.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your name or the name of your university.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
Notice
Para 1.介绍活动（活动目的、主办方、活动内容、地点和时间）
第一段首句：介绍上述5项要素
①In order to improve high school students’ abilities and to enrich their after-class activities, our university is going to hold a summer camp in our campus during this summer vacation.
②A summer camp for high school students will be held during this summer vacation in our campus, for the purpose of
improve high school students’ abilities and to enrich their
after-class activities.
para2. 简述活动大致过程
第二段首句：承上启下句
①There are a wealth of activities high school students will be involved in.
②Here are some details with regard to the camp activities.
第二段第二句：介绍活动（1）
①First of all, a variety of activities organized by us could show their outstanding abilities and to help them develop a range of practical skills.
②To begin with, we are scheduled to take high school students to visit museums and galleries in our city so that they are able to have a better knowledge of art, history and culture.
第二段尾句：介绍活动（2）
①What's more, their active participation helps in strengthening the sense of responsibility and developing
interpersonal relationship.
②Besides, this summer camp is supposed to last 8 days from July 1st to 8th.
第三段：招募志愿者
①It is expected that we will have a great magnitude of activities. Those who are interested in being volunteers may sign up with the monitor of their class.
②Given that the camp activities is so significant, at the appointed time, the school master and most of the teachers of our school will also join us, 30 volunteers are required.
The Students’ Union
①模板字数：114
②模板字数：125
2012年考研英语(二)真题小作文→投诉信Directions
Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day, Write an email to the customer service center to
1) Make a complaint and
2) Demand a prompt solution
You should write about 100words on ANSERE SHEET 2
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, Use "Zhang Wei "instead.
Dear Sir or Madam,
注解：
1.店家可以称为"shopkeeper/shop owner/shop manager".
Para1：开门见山吐槽
①I am writing to express my disappointment with regard to the electronic dictionary that I bought from your online store several days ago.
注解：
1.用"regarding"、"with respect to"、"concerning"替换"with regard to"也可。
②As one of the regular customers of your online store, I am writing this letter to express my complaint against the flaws in your product—an electronic dictionary I bought in your shop a few days ago.
③This letter is a complaint concerning the electronic dictionary I bought from your online store, and you can image the disappointment written over my face.
Para2：吐槽要点
首句：吐槽概括（承上启下）
①I have to complain about the poor quality of the dictionary as following two design flaws.
②The dictionary is supposed to be a favorable tool for my study, unfortunately, I found that there are several problems.
③Two weeks ago I mailed the money that ordered and soon received the electronic dictionary, but then some problems had raised come one after another.
注解：
1.可以用"surfaced"、"sprung(spring的过去式) up"、"mushroomed"替换"raised";
https://www.sodocs.net/doc/aa15359757.html,e one after another→接踵而至
3.可以用Couple days ago来替换Two weeks ago.
第二句：要点1
①For one thing, the dictionary often automatically turns off at the very moment I am eager to see the word explanations.
注解：
1. "at the very moment"→恰好在...时候，可以替换"when";
2.可以用"spontaneously（自发地）"替换"automatically"；
3.抱怨产品质量，可以用以下词叙述，如：”shut down”→“崩溃、宕机”，”failure”→尤指电子设备的失灵
4.”fail to do”→失败，未做成…
②To begin with, when I opened it, I detected that the appearance of it had been scratched.
③I followed the instructions attached with it, instead I cannot
get it started anyway.
尾句：要点2
①For another, it seems loose in the conjunction part, the screen part cannot be properly settled.
②Secondly,I did not find the battery promised in the advertisement posted on the homepage of your shop, which makes me feel that you have not kept your promise.
③After changed the battery inside several times in vain, as time has gone on, I totally gave it up.
Para3：索取补偿
①Since the problems are unaccepted to me, I would like to get a refund or a new dictionary that can work well.Your clipping response will be highly appreciated.
②I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation and an effective measures should be taken to improve your service and the quality of your products. Either a new one or a refund can be an acceptable choice for me.I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest
convenience.
③I wrote to your company expecting a prompt solution to this problem. I would hope that you could do something to give me a satisfactory feedback.And I will appreciate it very much if you put a strict test on these electronic dictionaries, thus stop the continuing complaints and suffers of other customers.
注解：
1.第一句的结构类似于2017年翻译真题第二句。
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
2013年考研英语(二)真题小作文→通知信+邀请信Directions:
Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to
1) inform them about the details and
2) encourage them to participate.
You should write about 100 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the e-mail. Use “Zhang Wei”instead.
Do not write the address.
Dear fellow classmates,
注解：
1.可以用"Dear my beloved classmates"替换" Dear fellow classmates ".
Para1:介绍活动（活动目的、主办方、活动内容、地点和时间）
①I'm writing this letter to inform you that our class is to hold a charity sale to raise money for those children who are in need of help on January 5, 2013, as the monitor of our class, I'm calling on all students to take part in it.
②I'm writing this letter to invite you to participate in a charity sale for children who are in need of help at the school auditorium, which is scheduled on the evening of January 4th, 2013.
③I'm Li Ming, one of your classmates, as the monitor of ou r class, and I am in charge of the charity sale for kids which is held by our class.
Para2:介绍活动
首句：概述
①There are a wealth of sale activities in growing numbers will
be involved in.
②Here are some details with regard to the charity sale.
③The purpose of the letter that I am writing is to invite you to ask you for some helps.
第二句：介绍活动（1）
①First of all, a variety of charity sales organized by us could
show their outstanding abilities and to help them develop a sense of love.
②To begin with, we are scheduled to take students to take participate in our charity sales so that they are able to have a better knowledge of love.
③The charity sale will be held in the theater of our college on April 1, 2013, the occasion needs the items to sale.
第二段尾句：介绍活动（2）
①What's more, their active participation helps in
strengthening the sense of being ready to help others.
②Besides, this charity sale is supposed to last 8 days from July 1st to 8th.
③If you want to donate your book, toy or something else, you can take the things to our principal before this Sunday.
Para3：邀请参加
①It is expected that we will have a great magnitude of activities.Those who are interested in being benefactors may sign up with the monitor of their class.
②Given that the charity sales are so significant, at the appointed time, the school master and most of the teachers of our school will also join us, some benefactors are required.
③We would be honored to have you there with us. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2016年考研英语(二)真题小作文→感谢信+建议信Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to
1)thank him;
2)give your advice.
You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)
Para1. 表达感谢
第一段首句：直入主题表达感谢
①Can you imagine what a delight I take in your
congratulation for my triumph for translation contest?
②Thanks for your congratulation for my triumph for
translation contest! I am sure that you are going to embark on an amazing and beautiful journey.
③I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.