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高考优秀英语作文范文【三篇】.doc

高考优秀英语作文范文【三篇】

【篇一】

May l0th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon my school held an English-speaking contest named"Challenging the Future" in the multi-function classroom. The students who are excellent at English took part in the contest. I just went there as an audience.

I got a lot from their speech. In their speech, I found all of them had made full use of the present time and conditions to prepare for the future and used the known factors to challenge the unknown ones. From this I realized that we shouldn't waste our time of today and shouldn't put today's work off to tomorrow. Today is the base of tomorrow. I will no longer waste my present time. I am going to study hard and do good preparation for my future.

5月10日星期一多云

今天下午我们学校在多功能教室举办了题为“挑战未来”的

英语演讲比赛。那些擅长英语的学生参加了比赛。我作为观众去了多功能厅。

从他们的演讲中我学到了很多。在他们的演讲中,我发现他们都充分利用了现在的时间和条件来为未来做准备,用已知的因素来挑

战未知的因素。由此我意识到我不应该浪费今天的时间,不应该把今天的事推到明天。今天是明天的基础,我不再浪费现在的时间。我打算好好学习为我的未来做好准备。

【篇二】

May l0th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon my school held an English-speaking contest in the multi-function classroom. The contest was named "Challenging the Future"I was present at the contest as an audience.

I learned a lot from their speech. They had different plans for the future. But as they challenged the future, they had something in common,that is, they all made full use of the present. The present is the base of the future.

After the contest, I knew I needed a plan for my future as well. I must grasp my present time to realize my plan. I won't idle away the valuable time any more. I'm determined to study hard and improve myself. I will prepare to challenge my future.

5月10日星期一多云

今天下午我们学校在多功能教室举办了英语演讲比赛,它的题目为“挑战未采”。我作为观众到了比赛现场。

从他们的演讲中我学到了很多。他们对未来有不同的打算。但当他们挑战未来时,他们有某种共同点,也就是,他们都充分利用现

在。今天是明天的基础。

比赛后,我知道了我也需要计划一下未来。我必须抓住现在的时间来实现我的计划。我将不再消磨珍贵的时间,我下定决心好好学习,提高我自己。我准备着挑战我的未来。

【篇三】

高考英语满分作文 Studying Abroad 出国留学

面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题,

根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

Advantages Disadvantages

1.良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2.拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3.传播各民族间的不同文化。 1.年纪小,缺乏生活经验,自理能力差。

1. 情感孤独,思乡。

2. 生活学习费用高。

注意:1)第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数。 2)词数100 左右。

3)参考词汇:媒介,中间人 mediator

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been

popular.________________________

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study. Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are many advantages in attending schools abroad. First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.

However, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick. Of course the costs are much.

出国留学

近几年来,出国留学一直很受欢迎。数以万计的中国学生去外国学习。许多人都在尽力申请出国。

国外的学校有很多优势。首先,留学生可以作为不同文化背景的人。其次,我们可以从国外学习到更先进的科技知识。第三,我们可以更快速地学习外语。

然而,也有一些缺点。大部分的学生都太小,没有任何生活经验的生活。此外,远离家乡,他们可能会感到孤独和想家。当然,成本是多少。

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