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2020中考英语作文热点素材范文12 梦想

2020中考英语作文热点素材范文12 梦想
2020中考英语作文热点素材范文12 梦想

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2020中考英语作文素材

热点12 梦想

中国梦无疑是今年的火爆热点之一,它为我们的思想带来了极大的影响。今天,选择的2020年中考英

语写作预测话题是:梦想。

【预测题目】

(一)

某杂志正在征集文章, 主题为《中国梦, 我的梦》。每个平凡中国人的梦想汇聚成中国梦,

中国梦的实现

在于我们努力实现各自的梦想。你的梦想是什么?你打算怎样实现?你的梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献, 能使祖国发生怎样的变化?

请你以《中国梦, 我的梦》为题, 写写自己的梦想、计划以及将来祖国的变化(如环境、教育、科技、生活等方面)。

要求:1. 词数80词左右, 至少使用两处比较级;

2. 不得出现真实的姓名或校名。

China's Dream, My Dream

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China's Dream, My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I will try my best to study hard .I want to let every student study happily. Now our rivers are cleaner than before. We have our own cars in almost every family and our lives are better than before. It is convenient for us to go out every day. Now we also learn in more ways, we can learn knowledge on the Internet, videos and so on. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better.

【解析】

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1.题干解读:该题目要求包含梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献,能使祖国发生怎样的变化?等,注意要有比较级的运用,对于比较级的相关用法要熟悉。

2.例文点评:例文通过对梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献,能使祖国发生怎样的变化等一一讲述。语句通顺,条理清晰,词组,短语,句型等运用灵活。

3.高分亮点:词组:try my best;want to let;study happily;go out;in our country等;

句型:I will try my best to study hard. /Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go out every day ./For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. /I think life in our country is getting better and better.

【点睛】

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如try my best;want to let;study happily;go out;in our country等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅,如however;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

(二)

假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Tim 给你发来电子邮件,询问你有何梦想。请你给他回复电子邮件,主要内容包括:

1. 你的梦想是什么;

2. 你为这个梦想做过什么;

3. 为实现梦想你还需要怎样努力。

要求:

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1. 内容要全面,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数不少于80 词。

Dear Tim,

How’s it going?

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Yours,

Li Hua 【参考范文】

Dear Tim,

How’s it going? As we all know, it’s important for us to have dreams. My dream is to be a doctor because a doctor can cure people and even save people’s life.

I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student. I often went to the local hospital to see what doctors were doing on weekends. Sometimes I even played games about being doctors and patients. Not only was it interesting but also was educative. However, I will try my best to be admitted by my ideal medical university. In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor. Only in this way can I realize my dream better.Look forward to hearing from you.

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【解析】

1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文,你的美国朋友Tim 给你发来电子邮件,询问你有何梦想。请你以李华身份给他回复电子邮件,首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。

2.例文点评:本文时态为一般过去和一般将来时,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点:

短语:save people’s life.;a middle school student;the local hospital;on weekends.;try one’s best to do sth.。

句型:In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor.;Only in this way can I realize my dream better. ;Look forward to hearing from you.

(一)

现在许多人在讨论“中国梦”(the Chinese dream),我们的祖国如何早日梦想成真,这需要我们每个中国人的努力,因为我们每个人的小梦想是中国梦的一部分。

请以My Dream为题,谈谈你的梦想。

提示:1、你的梦想是什么?

2、你为什么有这样的梦想?

3、你打算怎样实现你的梦想?

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My dream

Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.

Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.

I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑,不可遗漏要点,也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知,本文以一般现在时态为主,主语是第一人称。

写作亮点:这篇文章主要是以梦想为主题。文中使用了do their best、at the same time、thanks to 、from now on等较高级的短语和词汇,而且还使用了They spend most time on their students. it is not easy to make my dream come true等句型为文章增色不少。

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(二)

梦想有多大,舞台就有多大。人人都有自己的梦想,你的梦想是什么?请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。

1.要点:

1)你的梦想是什么;

2)你为什么有这样的梦想;

3)你打算如何实现自己的梦想。

2.要求:

1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

2)词数100左右。

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My dream

Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.

Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how we should learn

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something. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers.

I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream

will come true one day.

【解析】

1. 题干解读:文章是一篇命题作文。贴近学生生活,有较大的发挥空间,可以根据自己的不同的梦想做具体阐述,写作时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,写作时要包含题目中列出的几个要点,也可以做适当的发挥。

2. 例文点评:这篇短文主要分三段描述。第一段指出自己的梦想是什么,第二段说明为什么会有这样的梦想,第三段为自己的梦想要付出的一些努力。整个文章内容完整,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。

3. 高分亮点:

短语:want to do;hope to do;not only … but also;疑问词+to do;thanks to;grow up;spend … on;make a decision to。

句型:when引导的时间状语从句;I am sure+宾语从句;how引导的宾语从句。

(三)

中国梦是目前较热的话题,你们班级对梦想这个话题也进行了一次讨论。请你以“My dream”为题,写一篇短文。要点如下:

1、人人都有梦想,梦想可大可小。其实,大梦想就是由许多小的梦想构成的。

2、作为中学生,我们有各种各样的梦想。这些梦想就是我们的中国梦。

3、我们应该努力实现梦想,遇到困难时也不放弃梦想。

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4、我的梦想是……

注意:1)文章必须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。

2)第4要点需用2到3句话做适当发挥。

3)词数80左右。(给出的内容不计入总词数)

My dream

Everyone has his dreams. ___________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

My dream

Everyone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we won’t give up our dreams. (I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. )

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主

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要是第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: in fact实际上;be made up of 由……组成;all kinds of各种;try one’s best do sth尽力做某事;give up放弃等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

(四)

人类因梦想而伟大,梦想因奋斗而精彩。你的梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?将要去哪里工作?何时开始?为什么会有这个梦想?请以My Dream Job为题目,写一篇短文。

要求:1.字迹工整,条理清楚,无语法错误。

2.词数70左右。

My Dream Job

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My dream job

Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be scientists,some want to be artists, hut I want to be a doctor when I grow up.

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I think it9s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives. I will study hard to enter a good medical university, then I can study Chinese medicine and improve my skills. After that I will work in the places where they need me most. Maybe I’ll go to the west part of China. I don’t really care. In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.

From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以My Dream Job为题,介绍自己的梦想是什么,如何实现梦想,为什么会有这个梦想等。题目中给出了具体的写作提纲,但是并没有具体的写作内容,因此学生们需要自己发挥想象力来充实文章的内容,组织语言,串联成文。写作时,应注意合理安排文章内容,先点明自己梦想的工作是什么,然后解释为什么会有这个梦想、如何实现自己的梦想。通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用一般将来时态或者一般现在时态,根据自己的表达来确定,注意正确使用动词的形式。注意英语表达和汉语的不同,多使用简单句,使文章简洁、明了,辅以并列句和复合句,增强文章的连贯性。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,首先短文的内容充实、完整,包含了题目所需要的所有要点。表达有序、条理清晰,结构、层次清楚。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范、准确,多以简单句为主,也使用了较丰富的复合句、并列句和固定句型等。如Some want to be scientists,some want to be artists, but I want to be a doctor when I grow up.、I think it’s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives、After that I will work in the places where they need me most.、In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.、From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true等。

1.I think it’s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives.

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第 12 页 共 20 页 2. After that I will work in the places where they need me most.

3. In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.

4. From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true.

5. I know it is easier to said than done.

6. I am sure my dream will come true one day.

7. it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by.

8. I cannot help but think about its mechanism.

9. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.

10. I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work.

11. That way my dream can come true.

12. I think if I work hard, my dream will be sure to come true.

13. It is convenient for us to go out every day .

14. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be.

15. I think life in our country is getting better and better.

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of

(一)

中学生对未来生活充满了种种幻想,并渴望能够实现梦想。请以I Want to Be a/an ...为题,写一篇80个单词左右的短文。要求在文中讲述你的梦想,以及你为什么有那样的梦想和你会通过怎样的努力去实现这个梦想。

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【参考范文】

I want to be an engineer. I have been thinking about it for years. Each time I look up at the sky, I am thinking when I can go up there. I know that to touch the sky I will need to be an astronaut, but I know I will never be like YangLIWei or JaJaLi. I do not have mussels, but I have brain. I can make a spaceship if you let me. I want to be an engineer; it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by, I cannot help but think about its mechanism. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life. I want to be an engineer, but that troubles me a lot. Is this dream just a wish, or is it a hope? I need someone to guide me, maybe that can be you.

【解析】

本篇作文中小作者想要成为一名工程师,小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点:这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如A I want to be an engineer; it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by, I cannot help but think about its mechanism. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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词数80~100。

We all have our dreams, but how to realize our dreams.__________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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We all have our dreams, but how to realize our dreams. Frank wanted to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. Now he is sixty, and still lies in bed, dreaming to be a doctor. Frank is only living in the dream, but he doesn’t do anything to realize his dream. This is the reason why his dream doesn’t come true.

I have a dream, too. I want to be an engineer when I grow up. I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work. That way my dream can come true.

Our country has a dream. That is national unity, strong country and people live a happy life. We must try our best to realize our Chinese Dream.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以如何实现梦想为话题写一篇作文。作文应主要包括三个方面。首先是一个反例,说的是Frank,他虽然有梦想,但是他从来没有为梦想努力过,我们不能这样;第二方面是说一说自己的梦想,以及自己想要如何实现梦想;最后说一说我们的中国梦。我们需要按照题目的要求,用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。梦想这一话题是学生们比较熟悉的,平时的学习中所涉及的这方面的词汇和短语,积累得也比较多,因此学生在写作时不会感到没有话说。但是要想把这些内容表达得准确,并且还能使意思连贯、流畅,这就需要多下功夫了。我们需要注意长短句的结合,把握文章的节奏,另外,通过多使用好的句型,来使文章流畅。

【亮点说明】

这是一篇比较优秀的范文。作者按照题目的要求,将表格中所列举的内容用正确的英语表达了出来。没有语言错误,意思表达得也很清楚。首先作者把Frank 的例子告诉了我们,Frank is only living in the dream, but he doesn’t do anything to realize his dream.接下来作者讲述了自己的梦想,I have a dream, too. I want to be an engineer when I grow up.以及作者如何实现梦想,I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to

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deal with future work. That way my dream can come true;最后作者提到了我们的中国梦。中国梦的实现也需要我们每个人真正的付诸行动的。整篇短文意思连贯,语音准确,使用好的句型和短语较多。

考点:提纲类作文。

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My Dream

提示:罗伯·舒乐说:“梦想是生命的灵魂,是心灵的灯塔,是引导人走向成功的信仰。”有了崇高的梦想,只要矢志不渝地追求,梦想就会成为现实,奋斗就会变成壮举,生命就会创造奇迹。请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的梦想。

要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;

2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。

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My Dream

Everybody has his or her dream. My dream is to be a reporter.

I think being a reporter is wonderful because I would like to meet different people and I can make friends with more people. What's more, I can tell people the truth and something interesting. In order to realize my dream, I plan

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to read newspapers and some helpful books. And I will spend more time talking with different people to know them.

I know I may meet many difficulties on the road,but I will never give up.

I think if I work hard, my dream will be sure to come true.

【解析】

1、题干解读:该题目是命题作文。在写的过程中,务必要围绕“梦想”这个主题,可适当添加,但不能跑题。

2、例文点评:例文用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般将来时为主;描写流利顺畅,无语法错误。例文分为三段,第一段引出“我的梦想”——记者;第二段描写了作者想成为一名记者的原因以及愿意为此付出的努力;第三段总结全文,呼应主题。

3、高分亮点:

being a reporter is wonderful 动名词作主语,谓语动词用单数

because引导的原因状语从句

would like to do sth. 想要做某事

make friends with sb. 与某人交朋友

What's more 另外,此外

in order to do sth. 为了做某事

realize one’s dream 实现某人的梦想

plan to do sth. 计划做某事

spend…(in) doing sth. 花费……

give up 放弃

I think if I work hard, my dream will be sure to come true. 宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句

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假如你是刘红,最近你们学校展开了以“中国梦,我的梦”为主题的活动,作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想,你的梦想是什么呢?请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇英语短文。

要求:1. 描述自己的梦想。

2. 为什么有这样的梦想。

3. 如何实现这个梦想。

4. 80词左右,可适当发挥。

5. 文中不得出现真实姓名等信息。

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【解析】

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