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新东方托福写作总结

新东方托福写作总结
新东方托福写作总结

托福作文得分点:

1、清晰的文章脉络

三部分:1、开头(introduction)2 、主体(main body)3、结尾(conclusion)

主题脉络:论点要有论据,论据要有例子,例子要有细节。

2、自然的段落衔接

重要连词:1、首先:first and for-most, to begi n/start with, in the first place, for one thing.

2、其次:furthermore, moreover, i n additi on, what ' more.

3、最后:in the end, at last, ultimately.

3、注意语言、词汇的选用

6 大恶心词:big, importa nt, but, and, think, make.

Big : might, enormous, tremendous, massive.

Important : vital, essential, critical, significant.

But: though, although, despite, whereas, conversely, nevertheless, in spite of, in contrast, on the contrary, regardless of.

And: as well as, together with, along with.

Think : As I see it, From my point of view, Where it comes to me, As far as I am concerned.

Make:使得.

4、字数

综合写作:200-300.

独立写作:350-550.

5、避免语法错误

6、符合托福的行文规范:杜绝口语化的表达(禁止缩写)

审题

2类:1、单观点:题干一般为疑问句

2、双观点:题干中会有比较 _ (prefer, better,_or,_more_important) _______ 的词汇

Sample:

Do you agree or disagree with the follow ing stateme nt?

The on ly thi ng that gover nment can do for en ergy con servati on is to in crease the price of gasoli ne and electricity?

Sample:

Do you agree or disagree with the follow ing stateme nt?

It is better to use our pers onal kno wledge and experie nee to solve problems,rather tha n ask ing other people

for advice.

Sample:

Somepeople prefer to spend money on something that lasts for a long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry. Others prefer to spe nd the money on someth ing that provides a short-term pleasure such as a vacati on. Which way would you prefer?

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