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1、趋势类词汇
上升动词类：increase, go up, rise up, grow up, jump up, surge, shoot up, keep an upward tendency.
下降动词类：decrease, go down, decline, fall down, drop, sink, dip, keep a downward tendency
波动动词类：fluctuate
持平动词类：remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant
修饰动词的副词：slightly 轻微地，slowly 缓慢地，gradually 逐渐地，steadily 稳定地，rapidly 迅速地，moderately 温和地，轻微地，significantly 明显地，sharply 明显地，dramatically急剧地，drastically 急剧地
上升名词类：increase, rise, growth, jump, surge
下降名词类：decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop
波动名词类：fluctuation
修饰名词的形容词：slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic, drastic
2、极值类词汇和表达
最高点：reach the peak/top/highest point
Increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点：reach the bottom/lowest point
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占的最多：occupy/make up/take up/account for the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占的最少：occupy/make up/take up/account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage
of …
3、倍数的表达方式
Double 是两倍/大一倍
Increase/decrease three times 增长/减少了三倍
4、大约的表达方式
About/around + 数字
数字+ or so
Approximately + 数字
5、常用的小作文的趋势句式表达
句式一：变化主体/图画中主体+趋势动词+副词+时间区间
Eg: The number of aged people over 65 increased significantly from 1940-2000.
The number of aged people over 65 dropped slightly from 1960-1980.
The number of aged people over 65 fluctuated between 1 million and 1.2 million from 1940-1950.
The number of aged people over 65 remained stable from 1930-1940.
句式二：There be + 形容词+ 表示趋势的名词+ in+ 变化的主体+ 时间区间
Eg: There was an significant increase in the number of aged people over 65 from 1940-2000.
There was a slight decline in the number of aged people over 65 from 1960-1980.
There was a fluctuation between 1 million and 1.2 million from 1940-1950.
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常见曲线图变化趋势动词表达用名词作同义替换表达↑rose (to) a rise (in) increased (to) an increase (in) went up (to) a growth (in) climbed (to) an upward trend (in) boomed a boom in (a dramatic rise in) ↓fell (to) a decrease (in) decreased (to) a decline (in) dipped (to) dropped (to) a drop (in) went down (to) slumped (to) a slump in (dramatic fall in) reduced (to) a reduction (in) →levelled out (at) a levelling out (of) did not change remained stable (at) remained steady (at) stayed constant (at) maintained the same level no change (in) ↑↓fluctuated (around) peaked (at) plateaued (at) stood at (we use this phrase to focus on a particular point before we mention the movement, for example: in the first year, unemployment stood at...) a fluctuation (in) reached a peak (of) reached a plateau (at) 在曲线图中表示变化程度可以用到的词汇（degree of change）形容词副词dramatic dramatically sharp sharply huge hugely enormous enormously steep steeply substantial substantially considerable considerably significant significantly marked markedly moderate moderately slight slightly
雅思写作小作文必备语料库
雅思写作小作文必备语料库 动态图形词汇 上升 -rise, increase, grow, climb, jump，go up, an upward trend shoot up (informal)，ascend -rocket, soar, swell, surge, skyrocket, mushroom, escalate, on the rise，on the increase 相关单词用法 下降 -drop, decrease, go down, decline, fall, descend, sink, dip, an downward trend., -plummet, Plunge, slump, dive, nosedive 相关单词用法 不变、平稳等 -keep/remain/stay stable/steady/unchanged/constant（不变） -maintain the same level -experience a stable trend, -level off at（上升或下降之后）/ level out at（上升之后）/ -hover at/ stabilize at/ reached a plateau at 波动 fluctuate/rise and fall, vary, undulating; be volatile/ variable; 高点、低点： ?reach the highest point，reach(arrive at/hit) a peak(summit) at+数字(用hit 时动作较剧烈)，peak at+数字 ?reach/fall to/arrive at/hit the bottom/the lowest point at数字，bottom out at数字，(用hit时动作较剧烈) 其他点 ?起始点： n. starting point v. start/begin/end at ?交叉点： It is worth/deserves mentioning that 1）.A和B在...处拥有相同数值 A and B share the same amount/number in 2）.A在...处超过B A outstrip/overtake/outnumber/go beyond B in... ?表示达到了多少数量的及物动词或词组 Reach/arrive at/ amount to / hit/ register/ stand at
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雅思小作文描述变化程度： sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的 rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的 dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的 3. 其它在描述中常用到的词 in the case of adv. 在...的情况下 in terms of/in respect of/regarding 在...方面 in contrast 相反，大不相同 in conclusion adv. 最后，总之 in comparison 相比之下 inversely adv. 相反地，倒转地 in general 通常，大体上，一般而言 range from 从…到… excessive adj. 过多的，过分的，额外 lower v. 降低，跌落 小作文的常用词就为大家介绍到这，更多雅思小作文写作方法。我们一起努力，备考雅思！
雅思小作文范文--流程图写作详解!
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up to 6 weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about 3 weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. 详细分析： 一、首先准备流程图的写作时，先考虑一下文章结构的完整。好的文章一般都是“总-分-总”结构，所以看看此文章的开头：The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm。这样的开头很符合文章“总起”的结构，所以宾语从句在小作文的开头一般不可少，the first diagram是主语，shows是谓语，that是连接词，而后面的内容都是shows的宾语，因此宾语从句是大家可以利用的开头句型，既简洁又有力。 另外，一定要尽量使用到三大从句来给你的作文增添光彩，刚刚已经讲完宾语从句，另二种复杂句则分别出现在：”…a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves”句子由that引导的定语从句和由until引导的”This stage lasts for up to 6 weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself”时间状语从句这两个部分。定语从句能够使得你想表述的对象“silkworm larva”更加具体形象，而状语从句则是可以展现出流程图中时间结构的法宝。 二、There are four main stages…典型的there be 结构，可以说是雅思小作文写作中的一个法宝。只要带有了there be句型，文章就显得非常客观。比如下面这个句型就是