考研英语作文赏析

考研英语作文：啃老族

写作原文

As is vividly depicted in the picture, a father has received a letter from his son, on which without anything except（改为but）a word: money. It reveals a serious issue of （改为in）our society: more and more people live off their parents, even if they are old enough. We call the people who is（建议删掉，直接用简单句表达即可）“boomerang kids”。A careful analysis of cartoon may reveals some reasons under the problem, which involves three causes. For one thing,Chinese parents indulge their children so that it takesfew（改为little，few修饰可数名词，little修饰不可数名词） time to develop their children（改为children's，孩子们的） independence. In addition（建议改为For another，与前面For one thing 对应起来）， the boomerang kids may never realize the hard working and enterprising spirit is（改为are，宾语从句的主语用and连接，谓语动词用复数）a magic weapon to make their life pleasant, efficient ,（加and）successful. Last but not least, the education in our school ,especailly （拼写错误，改为especially）university, attach（改为attaches） more importance to academic marks, which ignores the significance of students' independence ablilty（拼写错误，改为ability）。In order to solve these issues, both family and school should join hands to create an free atmosphere to spirit the young people take care of themselves, while at the same time, the boomerang kids（改为kids‘） efforts are indispensible, （加and，两个句子之间用连词连接）they should change the lazy behaviors.

To conclude my essay, I would like to quote an old saying “a young idler, an old beggar”。

总体点评

整体来说，文章写得不错；但还存在个别简单的语法错误。作者在写作完之后若可以花费几分钟时间来回读文章，便会减少不必要的错误。考研英语作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，为自己的文章增彩；再者，写完之后一定要认真检查，减少失分点。

考研英语作文：山寨文化

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The picture describes a prevailing phenomenon that the copycating （改为copycatting products） is（改为are） become more and more populat （拼写错误，改为popular）。In picture the man painting（句子缺谓语，改为is painting） the vase which（此处用定语从句不合适，建议改为and）his mind is fulled（改为full，be full of为固定短语） of money, （逗号改为句号，然后加There are）large of fake products behind with（去掉with，behind本身为介词，后面不用再加其他介词）him .That may created（改为creat，may为情态动词，情态动词后面跟动词原形） a cultural（改为the

culture,cultural为形容词，此处应该为名词，再者，culture为不可数名词，不能用a修饰）so called（改为which is so called）“copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting） culture”（注意句末加句号）Slow growing（改为Slow-growing） fish are outlive than fast growing one（改为fast-growing ones）。Make money we should choice（choice为名词，此处需要动词，改为choose） a batter（去掉a，将batter改为better） ways （汉语式英语，整

句话可改为If we want to make money, we should choose a better way）。In our social（改为名词形式society） we live（去掉） ,people always saw （改为see,always常与现在时态连用） the money as their primary reason for being .No mater（改为Whether you are a） businessman or producter（改为a producer） they make money be anxious to achieve quick success and get instant benefits（汉语式英语，改为you will be anxious when you achieve quick success or get instant benefits），（注意断句）they make money by a wrong means like copy the well goods what sell well（汉语式英语，无逻辑，改为They want to make money by wrong means, for example, they copy the goods which sell well），what more ,producters（拼写错误，改为producers）producting（注意词性的正确选择，改为produce） goodsin low capture（改为with a low cost） or added（改为add） poisonous（加things，poisonous 为形容词，用来修饰名词） in food,how terrible it is ,（注意断句）that way to product food harmful with people（表达有误，改为and it is harmful for people） .Obviously the events of sanlu（汉语拼音首字母要大写，用斜体，改为Sanlu） milk poweder（改为which contains vc poweder） it（去掉） can be said babys' disaste（改为disaster），many knock-off（意思用于此处

不正确，改为producers） didn't（文章时态整体保持一致，改为don't） conform with official safety standards .Recently,the event about copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting） iphone charger result in user die rise people care about copycating again（汉语式英语，改为which result in the death of users makes people care about copycatting products again.）above（首字母大写） all of accident caused by fake product i （改为I） think that many reason（改为reasons，many修饰可数名词复数） result it but the most important have three（注意正确使用积累的经典句型，改为can explain the phenomenon, and I would explorethree of the most ones here）。 The（序数词作为“首先，其次，……”解释时，前面不加定冠词） first ,was（句子无主语，改为it is） the low moral consciousness of business and producter （汉语式英语，改为that businessmen and producers have low moral consciousness），（加连词and,两个句子之间应该用连词连接）they want noting except（改为but，nothing but为固定用法） money that careless（可改为needless to say） consumers .the（去掉the） second ,from consumers（改为consumers‘） options,they choice（改为动词形式choose） the low price something（改为things） compare with high price（可改为they would like choose the low price things rather than choose high price things） ,and the most of copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting, 后加products） attract consumers by low price .the （去掉the） last as supervision department （加逗号，然后加主语they） didn't enhance supervise.In my opinion there

are some ways that defending （改为to defend）the phenomenon of copycating （拼写错误，改为copycatting），primary （改为Primarily,） is（去掉） as consumers we are dong （改为should not）buy the copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting），the （去掉the）second ,surpervision（拼写错误，改为supervision） department take serious methods attack（改为to against）copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting,再加products） producters（删掉）good people do noting that like help bed tings so we all should join in the campaign that defend copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting）（整句话改为：and we should make joint efforts to boycott copycatting products）

总体点评

文章整体是以汉语式英语完成的，建议作者从最简单的做起，先积累一些词汇，句子；并学习简单的语法知识，要写好文章，首先要能写出好句子，而好句子则是建立在正确的句子基础之上。一定要搞清楚句子的成分，简单句一般是由主语+谓语+宾语或主语+系动词+表语构成；在弄清楚简单句的基础之上，再学习复杂的从句，一步一个脚印，踏踏实实提高自己的写作成绩。你可以在积累、学习一段时间之后，写一些句子，然后再练习写文章。加油吧，祝你考研成功！

考研英语作文：道德滑坡

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①Looking at this thought-provoking picture（加“which was”，其中which引导定语从句，修饰picture;was和后面的depicted构成被动语态）symbolically depicted by the drawer, I do realize the urgency to improve

the moral standards nowadays. ②A pregnant woman, an old man and his little granddaughter stands（“stands”改为“stand”，该句主语为复数，主谓应保持一致）on the crowded bus, looking at a young man who sits in the seat comfortably with a piece of black cloth covering his eyes, puzzled and indignant（“puzzled and indignant”是用来修饰the yong man, 或是

作者“感到困惑和愤怒”，应表达清晰；若要表达作者的情感，可改为：…covering his eyes. I feel puzzled and indignant）。①The temporary blind in the picture indicates a serious phenomenon in the modern society that some young people are suffering from moral decline. ②The reasons contributing to moral decline are worth pondering. ③First, respecting the old and caring the young is abandoned by some modern people, because they only care about their own benefits. ④Only if you could provide them with a great outcome（“a great outcome”改为“great outcomes”，和them保持一致）， will they lend you a hand（“a hand”改为“hands”，和they

保持一致） in exchange. ⑤In addition, the educational system is also to blame（“be to blame for”意为“对……应负责任；应该为某事负责任”，如果要表述“教育体制也应对此负责”，可表达为： the educational system is also to blame for the phenomenon;如若要表述“教育体制也应受到责备”，可表达为the educational system should also to be blamed）。⑥It emphasizes more on high marks at the expense of having few time to teach traditional moral values in school which leads to people's defect （“defect”为可数名词，此处应改为“defects”和people保持一致）on this issue.①It is high time that we fostered our moral values. ②For one thing, schools and governments should play an active role （“an active role”应改为“active roles”，前后主谓保持一致，主语为schools and governments）

in advocating moral values and traditional virtues to teach the young.

③For another, individuals should learn more about virtues and help people around with a warm heart（“a warm heart”改为“ warm hearts”，前后单复数保持一致）。④Only through our joint effort（“effort”应改为“efforts”，前后单复数保持一致）， could we recollect the virtues.

原作点评

第一段描述图画的内容。第①句，picture应该是被drawer描绘的，所以

应该用被动语态“be+动词的过去的、分词”来表示；第②句最后，表达不够清晰，应注意。第二段揭示图画的寓意，阐述产生此现象的几个原因。应注意单复数问题。第三段结合前两段的阐述，提出建议。

总体点评

文章亮点：文章结构完整，每个段落的功能基本得以体现。文章错误：①语法错误：文章出现了一些语法错误，比如被动语态、名词单复数形式等。②句法错误：有的句子表达不够清楚。比如第一段第②句，第二段第⑤句。修改意见：文章整体结构不错，但是要注意一些细节，避免不必要的错误。本文中，单复数一致问题较多，希望作者在完成习作时应多检查，尽量减少此类错误。

考研英语作文：论时间

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①As is vividly betrayed in the cartoon, a juvenile, with great efforts, is pushing a clock hand fordward（拼写错误，改为forward）， becase （拼写错误，改为because） he is curious about his futre, （拼写错误，改为future;逗号改为句号） an（改为An） old man, however, is doing his utmost to push the clock hand backward, because he wants to retrospect his old days. ②Apparantly（拼写错误，改为Apparently）， what they do is ultimately futile.①Simple as the picture is, its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed（前面加which，构成定语从句，修饰symbolic

meaning;conveyed时态使用错误。因此，可改为which subtly conveys） is profound and thought-provoking. ②There is little dispute that time is a sovereign gift for all peple（拼写错误，改为people） and no one is expected to manipulate or speed up it （speed up为动副结构，修饰代词时，代词放中间；可改为speed it up）。③So, attempting a life （加is,构成be filled with）filled with no regrets, one should employ his time well, otherwise, a humilating（拼写错误，改为humiliating） future will

be not far away from us. ④In addition, the old saying:“Time and tide wait for no man” also highlights the magnitude of cherishing time. ⑤Therefore, what we are supposed to do everyday is to make use of every chance to do useful things.①As far as I'm concerned, time invariably treats everyone equally. ②One can become informed and wise by treasuring time. ③Mo Yan, for example, who cherishes every minutes（every+名词单数，将minutes改为minute） to think and contemplate （句子缺成分，加“， and he”）has achieved great success in his works. ④Hence let's keep the aphorism in mind forever, that is:“A young idler , （标点使用有误，英语中，每个标点符号后面应该空一个字符，然后再继续书写单词）an old beggar”。

原作点评：

第一段描述图画的内容，应注意拼写问题。第二段揭示图画的寓意，深入探讨珍惜时间的重要性；第①句注意时态的正确使用；第②句注意单词拼写及动副结构的使用。第三段通过举名人的例子及格言“少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”，点明文章主题。总体点评文章亮点：文章结构完整，每个段落的功能基本得以体现。文章错误：①语法错误：文章出现了少量的语法错误，比如时态一致性问题；every+名词单数等。②拼写问题：单词拼写错误情况较为严重，望细心改正。

修改意见：

文章整体构思、用词还不错，但是单词拼写加油，祝你考研成功！！错误较多。希望作者在以后的写作中，避免这一问题的发生。同时要注意在复习过程中，留意一些基本的语法点，减少作文中的错误。可以结合英语写作范文，积累更多的词汇和句子，为作文添彩。

一、网恋 Directions: Write an essay entitled On-line Love Affair, your essay should meet the requirements below: (1)its side-effect (2)your viewpoints You should write 160~200words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 背诵范文： Although the popular belief is that internet increasingly plays an important role in our daily life, a current survey indicates that it has also brought some youngsters great disadvantages. They can do whatever they like, such matters as playing games, chatting. And some are even falling in love with chatters, which is called on-line love. Fresh notion as on-line love is, it sounds ridiculous when analyzed profoundly. What these young people fail to understand is that both sides have not well acquainted with mutually. Some net friends are reported to have been deceived by those people who are doing some criminal activities per year through the internet. Internet has indubitably provided various information for us, and on-line love is nothing but an artifact of fictitious world offered by internet. On the other hand, it is vital that we should make internet serve us better, and at the same time,as far as on-line love is concerned, being objective and levelheaded analysis is not far from being a sensible attitude. 范文精译： 尽管大家普遍认为网络在我们的日常生活中越来越重要，但当前的调查表明它同时也给一些年轻人带来了弊端。人们可以通过网络做他们喜欢做的一切，诸如打游戏、聊天。有些人甚至与聊天者谈起了恋爱，这就是所谓的网恋。 尽管网恋比较新颖，但仔细分析过后不免有些荒唐。这些年轻人没有意识到他们双方并不彼此了解。据报道，每年都有网友被那些专门通过网络做非法勾当的人欺骗。 毋庸置疑，网络给我们提供了各种各样的信息，而网恋只不过是网络这个虚幻世界的产物。一方面，我们应该使网络更好地为我们服务；同时就网恋而言，客观对待、冷静分析才是明智之举。 二、论美女经济 Directions: Write an essay with the title of On“Beauty Economy”，and your essay should be based on the following outline : (1)describe briefly the phenomenon of “beauty economy” (2)list positive effect (3)list negative effect You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 背诵范文： The “beauty economy” actually is “the eyeball economy”. The beauties are used to attract the public attention and make a profit. Meanwhile, the beauty contest activity which we are familiar with is regarded as the most gigantic manifestation of beauty economy. In the supporter’s eyes, the beauty economy gains high business profits through plans, organization, propaganda of the beauty contest. The participants can have the qualifications to participate in the competition as honour. The winners make their social status reach a high position. Thereupon, people become enthusiastic about beauty economy. The merchant has been laughing uproariously which hawked. The beautiful woman has the stage which declares a position. However, others don’t agree with it. Firstly, the beauties are treated as “unliving objects” just like the flower vase, and people pay too much attention to the pretty appearance of the beauties, but their internal world is ignored. Secondly, it leads to the distorted beauty culture. Many girls even women worship blindly the beauties and spend a lot of money in face-lifting to emulate them. Then our traditional aesthetic conceptions are totally overturned, and our conventional virtues completely disappear. Last but not the least, the beauty economy misleads the values. Relying on“being beautiful”, pursuing the wealth, they go after like ducks. And it also causes them to be the money worship.

历年英语?一作?文真题 2017年 ?小作?文 Directions: You are to write an email to James Cook, a newly-arrived Australia professor, recommending some tourist attraction in your city. Please give reason for you recommendation. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use instead. Do not write the address. (10 points). ?大作?文 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture in your essay, you should 1. describe the pictures briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

?小作?文 Suppose you are a librarian in your university. Write a notice of about 100 words, providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library. You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead Do not write the address .(10 points) ?大作?文 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture in your essay, you should 1. describe the pictures briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

考研英语作文范文 一、写作A节：预测：60%考摘要，40%考书信、备忘录、报告 （一）摘要： 1.最新大纲样题：经济类 Directions： Read the following Chinese text and write an abstract of it in 80-100 English words on ANSWER SHEET 2. （10 points） 经济全球化的主要原因 20世纪50年代初以来，经济全球化获得迅猛发展。简单归纳，其原因主要包括以下几个方面： 全球化的技术基础。科技进步为全球化快速发展提供了物质基础和技术手段。科技革命是经济全球化发展的最根本的物质基础和动力，历历次科技革命都促进了社会生产力的飞跃发展，同时也促进了整个世界的融合。20世纪50年代以电子技术和信息技术等为主要标志的新的科技革命的 兴起，使科技日益成为社会生产力发展的先导，成为影响生产力发展的至关重要的因素。科技知识在社会生产的各个领域中得到广泛传播和运用，劳动者的智能和技能得到进一步

的开发，创造出越来越多的物质和精神财富，极大地促进了世界生产力的发展，生产社会化程度日益提高，国际分工日益深化，各国经济以此为基础紧密相联，世界经济进入一个全新的繁荣时期。同时，新科技革命使得科技成果积累的速度大大加快，新材料、新产品不断涌现，大量高技术产业不断产生，在世界范围内促进了产业结构的调整和转移，新的产业布局开始形成，以信息技术和产业为主导，以高新技术为基础的新兴产业部门也蓬勃兴起并迅速发展，快速取代了传统产业而逐渐成为经济的主导部门推进的重要动力源。 全球化的经济基础。市场经济体制的强势地位不断增强，跨国公司的突飞发展，国际经济组织的不断完善为经济全球化奠定了坚实的经济基础。 首先，市场经济体制成为世界各国发展经济的首选。20世纪80 年代末至90年代初，世界形势发生了重大变化，东欧剧变，苏联解体， 40多年的冷战格局最终结束。冷战结束后，国际形势总体上走向缓和。各国纷纷把发展经济列为首要目标，普遍扩大了对外开放，和平与发展成为当今时代的两大主题。前苏联和东欧国家先后走上了向市场经济过渡的轨道，改行自由市场经济，并积极致力于融入西方经济体系。中国在长期的实践中，也逐渐认识到计划经济的不足和弊端，自1978年起开始实行以市场为导向的、全面的经济改革，大力推行对外开放，努力实现同世界经济的接轨，

考研英语作文范文和模板：图表作文 图表作文 1.写作攻略图表作文是考研英语写作中较为常见的题型之一，也是难度较大的一种写作题型。这类作文可综合提供题目、数据、图像、提纲，形式多样，但实际上只涉及5个方面：描述图表、指明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、给出建议，而每次考试只是从这5个方面的内容中选出3个结合在一起。从写作类型来看，基本上属于说明文。要求考生围绕题目将有关信息转化为文字形式，考生应该具有一定数据分析和材料归纳的能力，同时会运用一定的写作方法。考研试题一般以三段式写作方法来组织文章，第一段总结归纳信息反映的整体情况，点出主题思想，第二段回答第一段所得出的问题，对数字、数据等做出有条理的分析比较，第三段做出总结或给以简单的评论。表格和图表题型写作要点：(1)考生应仔细研究题目以及提示信息，认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向，抓住其主要特点，然后根据图表所显示的中心信息确定内容层次以及主题句。(2)考生应该仔细研究图表所给出的大量信息，从中选取最重要，最有代表性的信息，然后根据全文的主旨去组织运用所获取的关键信息。切忌简单

地罗列图表所给出的信息。(3)图表作文一般采用的时态为一般现在时，但如果图表中给出了具体时间参照，考生则应对时态进行相应的调整。(4)图表作文有一些固定句型和表达法，考生应对此融会贯通。(5)图表作文可以细分为表格，曲线图、柱形图和饼形图。除了上述共同要点，考生还应了解这四种图在写作方面的不同特点。——表格可以表示多种事物的相互关系，所以考生要对表格中所给出的大量数字进行比较分析，从中找出其变化规律。——曲线图常表示事物的变化趋势，考生应认真观察坐标系所显示的数据信息，并且密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位。——柱形图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系，要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势，因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。——饼形图表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系，旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体，部分与部分之间的相互关系，这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。(6)列出各段主题句。考生可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫。(7)围绕主题句完成段落的展开。尽量做到主题明确、条理清楚、文字简练。(8)检查与修改。对图

2000年——2012年研究生英语考试作文题目汇总 2012年 51. Directions: write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay you should 1) describe the drawing briefly 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.（20 points） 2011年 52. Directions: Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly, 2)explain it’s intended meaning, and 3)give your comments. Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 旅程之“余” 2010年 52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 2009年 52. Directions: In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 2008年 52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then

考研英语作文范文10篇 范文1 "Good Health" 1．身体健康的重要性。 2．保持健康的途径。 3．我自己的实践。 Good Health The desire for good health is universal. In our competitive society it is important to maintain good health. On the one hand, people with good health can do work with full confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness. On the other hand, a sick person is usually not interested in everything around him and therefore he loses many opportunities to become successful. There are many ways to keep it. First, those who are always on the go from morning till night should find time to relax because too much stress will affect their health. Second, enough time should be left for sleep because that will help one become rested and refreshed. Finally, regular physical exercises benefit one's health a lot. So one should always keep in mind that a certain amount of exercise is not a waste of time. As for me, I like playing tennis in the morning. I also attach much importance to enough sleep and relaxation. I believe this will ensure my good health for the rest of my life. <评析> 这篇文章语句通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样，用词面比较宽。就内容来说，则很切题，包括了提纲中的所有要点。第一段的第二句即主题句是从提纲发展而来的，第二段的首句，即主题句也是由提纲中的第二点发展而来。 范文2 Hope Project Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. However, because of historical factors, there are still a lot of people in China who are undereducated, especially among youngsters in rural areas. They cannot afford the expenses of schooling and need help. At the same time, China is not able to invest too much money in the matter at present time. It is in this particular situation that the authorities carry out the "Hope Project ". This project is necessary to our country. It is an urgent measure that the government has taken. In the first place, this project will provide conditions for the youngsters to go back to school, which will contribute to their future success. Thus it will lead to the enhancement of the intelligence level in our country. Secondly, education makes it possible for people to acquire knowledge, which is useful to their future work. Hence, this Project benefits the modernization of our country a lot. Finally, it can make more people educated. Therefore, it may indirectly

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考研英语十年真题大作文（2002-2011） 一、题目 2002 Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures---National and International” In the essay you should 1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and 2.give your comments on the phenomenon. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II. 2003 Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay about 200 words based on the following 1.describe the set of drawings and interpret its meaning 2.point out its implications in our life. 2004 Directions: Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should 1. describe the drawing. 2. interpret its meaning, and 3. support your view with examples. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

2020年考研英语作文范文 Part A 51. Directions： you are going to hold a club reading session.Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members。 You should state reasons for yourrecommendation。 You should write neatly on theANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ”instead. Do not write the address 。(10 points) Dear friends， I am writing to tell you about a fantasticbook I have just read, as we always share the same taste of books。 The book is called Journey to the West, which tells us a story thatfour monks conquered multiple handicaps to achieve their final destination.Besides the touching and thrilling plot, the book also features humorouslanguages, thanks to the talented author。 So I recommend it to all of you as one ofthe favorite books that I have ever read. I am sure you will love it as much asI do. I am looking forward to discussing more with you after you read it. Yours sincerely, LiMing

我用过的考研英语写作模板 一、几篇写作模板。 1、人生哲理问题。 Indicated above is a picture that vividly describes such a scence ,......描述图画内容.......Obviously,what the author wants to convey to us is not the picture itself,but to lead observers to find out what hides behind the iceberg. The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with 独立when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics.Due attention to this quality has been attached by individuals and even the whole society, Otherwise, we cannot witness such a prosperity . People with the spirit of 独立 can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. And it is not hard to notice that without 独立,hardly can individuals make progress , take profits , especially in this fiercely competitive modern world , I argue . That will be a sorry state of affairs . The picture , to some degree , makes us reflect the conventional success and enlightens us to wonder the meaning of lift and its permanent as the essential trait that will entitle us the way to make life meaningful . So the surest way to have a meaningful happy life is to set goals mattering to us and to the world and commit ourselves to striving for it with this quality. 2、无形社会问题反面展开。 Indicated above is a picture that vividly describes such a scence ,......描述图画内容.......Obviously,what the author wants to convey to us is not the picture itself,but to lead observers to find out what hides behind the iceberg. The picture does reveal a disturbing phenomenon that is the lack of 诚信,which is in large measure detrimental not only to thepersonal life, but to the further development of the whole society. More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice the damaging consequences of dis诚信when undergoing the dramatic social transformation. It is not hard to notice that without 诚信,hardly can individuals or organizations make

S e c t i o n I V W r i t i n g Part A 51. Directions: You are going to host a club reading session. Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members. You should state reasons for your recommendation. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points) 【参考范文】 要点归纳： 1.题目要求写一封信，书信格式要完整； 2.收信人为俱乐部成员，是自己的朋友，用语要友好、亲切； 3.写信内容必须包括：推荐一本书，陈述推荐理由，可以从书的名气、内容和意义等方面构思理由。 Dear friends， There will be a big even for book lovers next week --- a book reading session will be hosted. For its

efficiency and effect, I’d like to recommend a book. The book deserving praise and attention is The Road Less Traveled. It is about how to be spiritually healthy and has been a best seller of psychology category for nearly 30 years. The secret of life achievement the author listed stands the test of time and proves to be more meaningful in the modern time when there are an increasing number of people suffering emotionally. It is definitely a highly informative and readable book and hopefully you will love it.

Mba英语二写作历年真题及解析 2016年 Section IV Writing Part A 47。Directions： Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend，Jack，wrote an email to congratulate you and ask for advice on translation。Write him a reply to 1）thank him，and 2）give you advice You should write about 100 on the ANSWER SHEET。 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter。Use Li Ming instead。 Do not write the address。（10 points） Part B 48。Directions： Write an essay based on the chart below。In your writing，you should 1）interpret the chart，and 2）give your comments。 You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET。（15 points）

Section IV Writing 47、 [参考范文] Dear Jack， Your letter of congratulations was received。Thank you for your nice words on my winning the c ontest。In the letter， you asked me about the skills to do translation，so the following are my a dvice for you。 Firstly， you should analyze the sentence structure， thus catching the meaning of the sentence。 Secondly， find the proper words to translate the meaning of the source language into the target l anguage。 Thirdly，revise your translation at least three times to check if there are any mistransl ations or missed meanings。 I hope my advice helpful。 Wish to see you soon。 Yours sincerely， Li Ming 第一段：写作内容需涵盖两点：写信目的，表明感谢来自朋友的祝贺;可以采用这样的表达方式：I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest. 第二段：写作内容应以建议为主体。在这个过程中可以把日常我们如何提高的方式写进正文，比如多加练习、多与外国人交流，多多接触国际事务等。本篇老师主要从这些方面进行论述，表达如下As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals i n this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. What’s more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate a wealth of practical experience. 第三段：再次强调重申写信目的，如Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study. 落款：Yours sincerely,特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢;签名：Li Ming特别注意Ming 后面一定不能出现句点。 48、 [参考范文] Portrayed in the above pie chart is a survey of college students’ purposes of traveling。 The numb er of students who take traveling as a chance to see beautiful scenes accounts for 37%，while stu dents who would like to travel to relieve pressure from study take up 35 %。 There are several reasons behind the trend revealed in the above chart。To begin with， as the pr esent society is filled with fierce competition， most college students nowadays are under great pr essure to stand out among others or to lunch a decent job after graduation。Therefore， they tend to choose traveling as an outlet to relieve their stress。 Secondly，with the fast advancement of t he living standards of Chinese families， traveling is increasingly affordable to most college stude nts。 For this reason， students prefer to travel to see different views to enjoy themselves or to m ake some friends。 From my perspective， no matter what reason it is for， traveling is of great benefit for students 今年英语二作文的题目比较好写，因为标题和图示非常清晰明白。图表显示了某高校学生旅游目的调查, 考生分析原因的话也会很简单。下面分三段简要地说一下这三段应该怎么写。 第一段主要是描述图表。图表一目了然，数量词百分比也是大家熟悉的词汇，表述数据时，图中有四五组数据，由于字数的限制以及为了写作的便利可以突出较大比例的“欣赏风景”和“缓解压力”，注意引入百分比的表达方式。 第二段给出你的评论，主要写这种情况的原因。主要要结合图表描述的内容从两个方面写起。一方面为什么为了欣赏风景而旅行的目的占37%，另一方面为什么缓解压力会占到33%比例。 最后结尾段落可简要得出结论，这种现象并不奇怪，还将继续下去。