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(英语)中考英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案及解析

（英语）中考英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达

在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数：80-100；

（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.

Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.

A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.

I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave

school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 词数80左右。

One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________

【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.

To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when ma king fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.

I felt proud of cooking on my own.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇话题作文。

【详解】

根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）近年来，随着智能手机的普及，越来越多的学生开始使用手机来完成家庭作业。这引发了学生们是否喜欢用app学习的讨论，为此，英文报Teens 将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题，你采访了一些同学，写了一篇题为“Would you like to study on apps?”的报道。内容如下：

1.短文需包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2.省略号后展开合理想象；

3.词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

4.短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。

Would you like to study on apps?

Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study.

【答案】Would you like to study on apps?

Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.

But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in

their study.

I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much

money. But we should use them in a proper way.

【解析】

【详解】

阅读题干，这是属于看法类的作文，那么在写这类作文时，首先要分别写出支持和反对两

方面的看法及原因，最后要说明自己的观点看法来进行总结。

亮点词汇短语：practice doing sth.练习做某事；learn by oneself自学；lead to导致；it is adj.

for us to do sth对某人来说，做某事是怎样的；in a proper way以适当的方式。

亮点句型：

There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.应用程序上有

很多练习，这使我们更容易自己学习。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.

Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自从他们使用手机以来，他们的

视力变得更差了。

they can’t help playing with other apps while studying.他们在学习时忍不住玩其他的应用程

序。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。

4．（·江苏中考模拟）加入你是英国交流学生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 两个

月的学习生活即将结束。请你根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle

School 校长写一封感谢信。

? what you've learned about Chinese culture

? how the teachers and students help you

? what your homestay family do for you

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数 80 左右，感谢信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself

very much.

I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P.E. teacher.It is really

amazing! I also know something about Chinese paper-cutting in Art lessons.Though I can’t speak

Chinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to

help me.

I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make

dumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful for

what you have done for us.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

5．（·河北育华中学中考模拟）你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my

study.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________

【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.

I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.

How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

6．（·江苏中考模拟）为提升南京城市形象，我市已启动老小区出新改造工程。假设你是 Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友 Jack 做简单的介绍。

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________

【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old communities can do what they can do to renovate our communities.

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达是描述老社区改造工程，话题较新。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文，所给的内容要点给的比较零碎，不完整，所以考生需要结合实际情况补充完整，是文章内容充实。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

7．（·济阳县第二实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。

内容包括：

1.完整叙述图片内容；

2.简要陈述个人观点。

要求：1.可进行适当发挥；

2.不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________

【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are coming back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also comes up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇看图作文。

【详解】

根据题目要求“1.完整叙述图片内容； 2.简要陈述个人观点。”可知，文章用一般现在时。

人称是第三人称和第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——描述图片内容。

按顺序分别描述四幅图的内容：男孩和女孩放学回家的路上，看到垃圾到处都是，女孩捡起垃圾放到了垃圾桶，男孩画了一个标志贴到垃圾桶上。

注意这一部分用用一般现在时。人称是第三人称。

第二部分：文章主体——呼吁大家保护环境。——城市是我家，保护靠大家。

第三部分：总结全文——做合格的市民。

8．（·福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。字数80字左右。注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。

提示词语：forgive原谅

提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?

Why did you decide to forgive him/her?

How did you feel after forgiving him/her?

I still remember what happened between ...

【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.

I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。字数80字左右。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提

纲。短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。字数应在80词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。我准时到达那里。我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。我打电话问他发生了什么事。他把音乐会的一切都忘了。那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。

我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。迈克也意识到了他的错误。他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。最后我原谅了他。原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。

【点睛】

书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

9．（·浙江中考模拟）为响应我市全面创建国家文明城市的号召，丽水市中小学开展“文明城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

Ways of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…

Your opinion……（至少2条）

注意：

（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。

The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________

【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life.

We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In thi s way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave

the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。话题是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并给了一些提示和注意事项：（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，要用上提示词，并适当发挥，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，最后写出你的观点。注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意单词拼写，不要犯单词拼写错误，字数要符合要求。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；要点全面，结构连贯；语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，没有单词拼写错误，字数符合题目要求。

10．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1．文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；

2．条理淸晰，字迹工整。词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Nowadays, reading is becoming more and more popular among us. ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying” To open a book is always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our

young students．

As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．

Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．

【解析】

【详解】

越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。用一般现在时来写。根据汉语提示，灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【点睛】

文章从读书好；好读书；读好书，分别介绍了读书的重要性，文中要到了一些好的句型：People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．；They introduce us different kinds of knowledge；They lead us down the road to success给文中增色不少。

11．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。

注意：

1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；

2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Learn to Smile

Smile is an attitude （态度） to life．

Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we

may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。同时Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship.等多种特殊句式和非谓语动词结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，条理清晰，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们翻译拓展成一个个英文句子。还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。

12．（·海林市朝鲜族中学中考模拟）（A）今天是周日，你（David）邀请你的朋友（John）晚六点去看电影，但他不知道电影院在哪儿，你发了一条微信和路线图，请他按照路线图来电影院。格式和开头已给出。

Dear John,

The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home

and____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________

David 【答案】Dear John,

The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home and turn left. Go along Buxing Street and turn right at the first crossing. Go straight till you see a post office on your right. The movie theater is just across from the post office. Let us meet there at 6:00 p.m.

David 【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉约翰如何到达电影院。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，

上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如turn left, go along, turn right, at the first crossing, go straight, across from以及let sb do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

13．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容。

提示词：plate 盘子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩笔， color 给…上色，

【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, "Why not turn them into paintings?" Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图画叙述一个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题和一些常见句式的应用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的应用，使短文内容表达丰富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到较高的分数。切忌堆砌词语和句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子连贯流畅。

14．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

假如你的笔友 John 将作为交换生在中国家庭生活一周，他写了一封 e-mail

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数 80 左右，邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

向你求助。请根据邮件内容写封回信。

Dear Li Hua,

I will come to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?

Please write back soon.

Yours, John

Dear John,

I’m glad you will come to China.

▲

I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear John,

I'm glad you will come to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don't need to worry about it.

If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country.

It's not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.

In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means "Nice to meet you", "Thank you" and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What's more, read some books about Chinese customs before coming here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.

I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，回信给约翰，建议他在中国家庭生活应注意的事项。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It's not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉他不必担心，接下来回答他的问题以及建议他如何做，最后希望他在中国玩得高兴。此处need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

15．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，即将结束在美国的交换学习，回国前你想给住家妈妈Sarah写封感谢信，告诉她你什么时候回国，为什么感谢她，以及你的感受。

提示词语： help, care, communicate, drive to hospital, own family

提示要点：When are you going to leave?

Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?

How do you feel?

Dear Sarah,

I’m writing to deliver m y thanks to you.

Thanks again for taking care of me so well.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sarah,

I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well.

Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”

Thanks again for taking care of me so well.

【解析】

此文为提纲式作文，文章属于感谢信。文章可分为三段，第一段表明写信的目的；第二段分析感谢的具体原因；第三段写出你在住家妈妈Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人称来写，时态主要用一般过去时和一般将来时。

亮点分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.

Thanks again for taking care of me so well.

[高分句型一]

I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English. 我永远不会忘记，当我用英语和别人交流困难时，你主动提出帮助我。句子中有when引导的时间状语从句。

[高分句型二]

Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您们家里就像住在我自己的家里一样，这让我想起了一句话：“天下之大, 家最美好。” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引导的定语从句。

16．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆发，据报道114个美国孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季节我们应该如何保持健康呢？

要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥；

2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。

参考词汇：weaker immune systems （较弱的免疫系统）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.

____________________________________________________________________

【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.

The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu.

In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.

How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

17．（·山西中考模拟）书面表达

年5月18－19日，习近平总书记在全国生态环境保护大会中，指出要加快构建生态文明

体系，要全面推动绿色发展。

作为一名鄂州籍的中学生，你的家乡的环境怎么样？发生了什么样的变化？要推动鄂州的绿色发展，作为一名中学生，我们应该做些什么？

请根据以上三个内容，写一篇80—100词的作文，作文中不要出现自己的学校和个人姓名。

【答案】As we all know, China has been developing extremely fast in different aspects of our life. There are also many places becoming more and more morden in Ezhou. Our hometown is one of those places which have changed a lot. The followings are the changes that I can show all of you . First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before,which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people. What's

more ,more and more new buldings have been building to be used for trading with https://www.sodocs.net/doc/ee14309303.html,st but not the least,people in our hometown are more helpful .They are all willing to help with each other and try their best to make the world more comfortble to live in.

What I think the most great change is the attitude that we hold .As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and great.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如as we all know，in different aspects of our life，more and more morden，a lot，all of you，first of all，in our hometown，one of the most meaningful things，what's more，help with each other，live in，as long as等。而First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before, which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and great.等多种复杂从句语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

18．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达

每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

A（n） _________ I have

Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.

In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.

When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.

Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!

【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。

写作亮点：

这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用

了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

19．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达

假如你叫Tom。你们学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课。以下是外教Rhian的微信，请根据该内容回复一条90词左右的短信，可适当发挥。

Hey,Rhian.Thanks for your message.__________________________________

【答案】Hey,Rhian.Thanks for your message.`I am writing to tell you about your things in last Wechat.There are fifty students in our class.Most of us like English.I think a good teacher is organized. A good teacher cares and is always ready for his or her students. A good teacher is always fair and respects their students. A good teacher always works hard.

The weather is warm here.You may carry some sweaters with you.You needn’t carry heavy clothes.We have somewhere interesting.So in your spare time you can go boating on the lake.After school you can play football with us.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。假设你是Tom，学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课，要求你就外教Rhian的微信回复一条短信。动笔前一定要认真阅读外教Rhian的微信，所回的短信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应。根据内容可知本文时态主要是一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以

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