1.经常运动会提高人的自信
正确句子:Regular exercise can increase one’s self-confidence.
我的句子:Excise动词原形不可以做主语要用名词性质的词exercising regularly can improve people's self-confidences ,,, confidence不可数
increase: 及物动词/不及物动词
及物动词:increase one’s confidence(宾语)
不及物动词:the figure increases 数据的增加增长多出现在小作文里exercise:做动词时v. exercising regularly 此句型本局中做主语
做名词时n. 既可以为可数/也可以为不可数(本句为不可数)
主语:regular exercise doing exercise regularly
增强自信心:boost
increase confidence
build
improve
Exercise在表示健康运动时不可数所以这里应该是doing exercise
副词usually修饰动词放在动词的后面表示通常表示频率通常表达为I usually do.. 改:Doing exercise regularly can improve people’s self-confidence.
人们的信心:people’s self-confidence
2.教学质量对学生成绩有很大影响
正确句子:The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’ academic performance. 我的句子:The quality of teaching has a serious修饰不当influence of在...方面的影响用on students’academic performance.
quality:品质, 可数N:例如leadership
限定教学质量:the quality of teaching; teaching quality; standard of education
注意:quantity 表示数量
influence
在...方面有影响:have an impact on
effect
或者huge
make a big difference to...
major
学术成绩:academic performance; achievements; levels of attainment
grade/ scores 指分数
只有一种搭配have an influence/impact/effect on应该是academic achievements
补充:对...有负面的/相反/好的的影响
negative
have a damaging effect on ...
opposite
have a beneficial effect on ...?
have a negative effect on
be beneficial to
3.家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间
正确句子:Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time.
我的句子:Patients and teachers should try to建议用词伙reduce the time of students’ watching TV中式表达不要直接翻译中文
努力做…:make an effort to do 其中effort既可以为可数也可以为不可数
也可以说make efforts
make every effort
make an effort to do sth
限制看电视的时间:reduce one’s screen time
limit one’s screen time
直译看电视的时间错误记住词或表达screen time
Try one’s best这种四六级的表达建议不要再写在雅思作文里
定从错误应该是which children spend in watching TV,不过这样表达就很啰嗦
4.经济的下滑导致失业率的上升
正确句子:(The)Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate. 我的句子:Economic slowdown lead to the increase of unemployment rate. slowdown 是可数名词前面建议加the
此句用完成时:has led to 完成时其中lead to的to是介词后面加名词
现在完成时形式:have/has + done(截止到现在回头往前看这件事完成的结果如何
用法:过去的之前,例句:When he got there, she had left. She was not there.
现在全部完成:He has left.
现成部分完成:We have studied English for ten years
climbing :形容词修饰名词词组unemployment rate 也可以用increasing;rising 上升:climbing ,increasing ,raising
raise:使…上升
举手:raise your hand
抚养长大:you raise me up
increase 做名词时: increase in表示在...方面的增长
increase of 表示所属关系... 的增长
unemployment 为不可数N
find/seek employment 找工作
Rate 可数名词不要裸奔——unemployment rate
Leads (lead-led-led)后面应该是unemployment rate
5.经济的发展需要更年轻的劳动者
正确句子:A country’s economic development relies on a supply of young workers. 我的句子:the development of economy need如果想用need 主谓也不一致new年轻的用new 我有点怕workers.
经济增长:economic development ——不可数
economic growth ——不可数
劳动力的表达方式
技术工人:skilled labour
labour force 劳动力年轻的劳动者labour 在表示劳动力时为不可数N work force :为特定的行业工作=staff
worker:可数名词
需要年青的劳动者:不要直译need rely on:依靠;信赖;需要
a large number of 大量的——后面加可数名词复数
a large amount of+不可数名词——of 表示所属关系前后都是名词
a supply of:一批——a supply of young workers.
主谓不一致经济增长有词伙economic development/growth
6. 工作很多的人没有时间去休息
正确句子:People with a heavy workload do not have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries.
我的句子:People who have heavy workload可数名词裸奔have no time to rest.中式表达do not have time to rest/take a rest
to rest: 动词不定式后置定语翻译为没有休息的时间
work:不可数n工作
可数n :Works of literature 文学作品
workload:可数名词——不要裸奔要么加不定冠词要么变复数
have no time口语中可以使用——作文要用do not have time
a heavy workload 工作很多
rest:do not have time to rest
take a rest;have a rest 这里的rest是名词
Workload为可数N 不要裸奔然后have time to do sth
7. 在中国,很多学生晚上都要上自习
正确句子:A large number of students in china have to study at night.
我的句子:In china there are many students have are和have两个动词这个句子5.5分to study不能体现自习do self-study 词伙at night
a large number of
many+可数名词复数
晚上:at night /in the evening
自习:self-study;do self-study;self-education
there be句型里已经存在be动词了后面的句子中不能有动词
8.文化遗产因为城市的发展而受到威胁。
正确句子:(最佳)The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites. Because of the development of cities,the heritage sites are threatened。
我的句子:The development of cities has posed a threat of 固定的介词搭配是to heritage sites。
development是主语
城市发展:urban expansion;the development of cities
造成威胁:pose a threat to
heritage sites:遗产地;古迹;主题文物建筑
被动语态一般用于在找不到动作的发出者时
现在完成时是have done 这里应该是has posed a threat to
9. 我们不能够忽视面对面的交流。
正确句子:We should not ignore face-to-face communication。
我的句子:We can not大作文里只有一种写法:cannot ignore face-to-face communication
door-to-door /face-to-face 充当形容词,修饰名词
door to door /face to face 副词修饰动词
communication 为不可数N
交流技能:communication skills
Communication如果加s,communications——表示的是那些通讯科技,譬如说手机,电脑等——Modern communications
忽视:neglect
ignore(故意忽视)
大作文只用:cannot
face to face副词不能修饰名词
10.有些公共服务很难收支平衡。
正确句子:Some public services have problems in breaking even.
我的句子:It is difficult for some public services to keep a balance between cost and earning.纯中式表达
have difficulty/problems in doing sth 有…困难——difficulty这里是不可数名词public service 加s表示政府机构或者公司的服务时是可数名词
break even:收支
breakeven :不可数名词
量入为出:make both ends meet
cost:n.成本
v.花费:it costs me 5 yuan to buy this lollipop.
如果想用形式宾语的表达应该是sb find it difficult to do sth
Balance income and expenditure典型的直译income是收入expenditure是开支
11.我们要考虑社会和经济环境
正确句子:We have to consider about social and economic context.
我的句子We should consider about the environment of social and economic environment
environment:表示生活环境、周围环境不能表达社会环境经济环境
表示大自然的环境时一定要加the 同理有the sun
名词用法:可数名词不能单独使用
不可数名词不特指时不需要加定冠词
集合名词复数一般是原型、谓语动词用复数
context:背景——political context ; history context 政治背景
考虑:take sth into consideration
Consider vt.& vi.考虑; 把(某人,某事)看作…,认为(某人,某事)如何; 考虑,细想;
Considerable adj.相当大(或多)的; 该注意的,应考虑的;
Considerate adj.体贴的,体谅的; 深思熟虑; 到; 慎重;
Consideration n.考虑,考察; 照顾,关心; 报酬; 尊敬;
Condition表示条件或者状态不恰当
12.密度种植对生物多样性造成了威胁
正确句子:Intensive farming can pose a threat to bio-diversity.
我的句子Intensive farming poses a threat to the bio-diversity.
密度种植:intensive farming 竞争激烈intense competition
密度是density 一般说population density 人口密度
pose a threat:造成威胁
植物的种类:the variety of plants
生物多样性:bio-diversity; biodiversity
没有density irrigation的名词词组且irrigation表示灌溉
也没有life diversity的表达
13.平等的教育能帮助解决学生成绩不好
正确句子:
我的句子:students’poor academic performance
help tackle: help 英文动词唯一可以直接加do
平等的教育:equal access to(用这个表达更好写);equal education access:作为名词不可数;access:作为动词:查找信息(电脑)
have
get access to
gain
available :可获得的;可购得的;可找到的;有空的