考研图片作文写作秘籍

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Our generation is over-consuming the energy resources and leave our descendents nothing to use for development.

1) Our government needs to attach great importance to saving energy for our

descendents and achieve sustainable development.

2) Each individual should claim the responsibility of saving natural resources.

Only through raising the awareness of the public and government, saving energy for our

descendants will be possible.

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A man is littering the used news paper and he didn’t feel ashamed of his conduct but blamed his littering over on the wind. It indicates that some people do not claim the responsibility of their immoral conducts.

1) Some people blame their own immoral conducts on others because “everybody

else is doing so”. This kind of thinking is definitely wrong. They can’t excuse themselves by other s’ fault.

2) Moral education should be reinforced since honesty and responsibility have long

been neglected by people.

We should start to live harmoniously with the society through being an adequate citizen and do our parts to make the world a better place to live in.

3. A boy is holding his son up to reach for an apple but the son still can’t get the apple because he

refuses to pick up the apple with his own hands. What he wants is just to open his mouth and eat it.

This boy is the representative of the pampered offspring. This tragic phenomenon could be attributed to the following reasons.

1) Spoiling children has caused serious problems for individual families.

2) Spoiled children are inadequate for taking the responsibility of social and economic

development.

Therefore, spoiling children should be stopped immediately. For the sake of your own family and the future of our country, the parents should stop treating their children like pets and prescribe and arrange their life for them and leave them no opportunity to experience the ups and downs of life.

4. A couple are checking if what they get from each other is authentic against sunlight. The

well-dressed man is checking the authenticity of the woman’s heart while the woman is checking the money the man gives her.

The irony of this cartoon can be translated into two points : F irst, the people’s values have materialized. The world is totally materialized and everything is like a business, including the scared marriage. Marriage used to thought pure and holy but now it has declined into a trade where the couple exchange for what they want. The deterioration of moral values is very worrying because it may lead to very serious consequence.

Second, honesty in each other is gone and nobody is considered trustworthy in this world.

When there was trust, people could enjoy much more happiness and love, no matter in family or business. With trust, the family could sustain and friendship can last. Therefore, it is going to be disastrous if people lose honesty on each other and no one is considered trustworthy.

What the picture wants to achieve is to wake up people whose values have been corrupted by money and who are never trustworthy and do not trust anyone else.

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The teachers find it hard to educate the pampered offspring. The teacher kneeled down to the students, begging, “if you can be sensible, I won’t regret getting down on my knees.”

1) Teachers’ authority has been challenged.

2) Students need to be better discplined.

The children are the future of our country. If they are properly disciplined and guided, the future of our

country is jeopadized.

A little boy is bending his back because of the big burden it --- school work, extracurricualar work, for example, playing violin, calligraphy. The parent is putting another bag on the child’s back, which says Happiness Index but there is no place for happiness. It is harmful to the development of children as well as the country.

1) The heavy burden imposed on children will prevent them from unleashing their potential.

2) The children can not obtain the innovativeness and creativity, which is the drive of the developmnt of the world, due to the structured work.

To achieve the development of the country and to nurture children’t creativity, the children deserve more freedom of doing what they want to do and cultivate their interests that may result in innovativenss and novelty.

A young man from mainland is sulpturing his name on a rock in a sceneray spot. From the banners a man is holding, it can be seen that they are touring in Taiwan.

It has been a hot issue throughout the whole country. It is a sign of the deterioration of moral values of mainland tourists.

1) Some tourists have no common sense of protecting and appreciating the

historical treasure, for instance, very old trees, architecture or famous

sculptures.

Their blind vanity and ignorance overwhelmed the public and humiliated the

dignity of their town fellows.

2) It indicates a mismatch between materialistic wealthiness and spiritual poverty.

Thanks to the reform and opening-up to the outside world, some people become

prosperous. So they want to see the world. But actually, they are not civilized

tourists yet.

Based what is discussed above, quality of the tourists needs to be improved when the quantitiy of the tourists are increasing drastically. Only through this, an ecological and healty tourism will be achieved.

A big glass is lying horizontally, into which a car is heading. The title of this cartoon is dead-end lane. It sounds the alarm of the dangers of drunk driving. Disastrous car accidents have been reported frequently. How to eliminate this kind of phenomenon?

1) the publishment for this phenomenon should be more severe than before. Drunk-driving is called licensed murderring.

2) More effective education should be conducted among those who drive.

High school courses should have incorporated the dangers of drinking and driving into their curriculum. The students are advised of the dangers as well as the legal ramification of drunk driving.

Drunk driving fatalities are more devastating because they are one hundred percent avoidable. A Drunk does not have the ability to make coherent and rational decisions. To stop the increasing of the number of fatalities from drunk driving, the government and the individuals should work together to kill the hazard in the cradle.

A big hand is holding a large number of gold champion medals, which are indicated to be the harvest of “the national sports activity”, while a big question mark is put behind “national sports” because playground is used for building highrisings and there is no place for sports. We need to solve this problem.

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All the fish want to get into the big pond. Why?

1) “Soft and hard “I nfrastructure in the small cities are not as developed as in the

big cities.

2) Another reason could be blamed to the unprofessional management in the

institutions.

Accordingly, to attract the talents to small cities, cultural infrastructure need to be developed and the management level should be improved.

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Unlawfull copying of famous brands In the piture, several people are copying the world-famous sculpture Venus, which is owned the museum in Paris. They porudced diferent versions of Venus, fatter one or thinner one.

This picture is an irony of a social phenomenon--- unlawfull copying of famous brand products.

3) It is an infringement of intellectual property right of the famous brands products.

4) It is not healthy for fostering Chinese people’s innovativeness.

Co-efforts of Chinese government and individuals need to be made to crack down the production and sales of pirated products.

考研英语写作的原则、方法和评分标准

(写作：2小题，A节10分，B节20分，共30分。)

（一）评分原则和方法

1．虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同（如下文所述），但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的，所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点，评分时会有不同的侧重点。

A节:应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。

B节：评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内的1至3分间调节分数。

3．A节的字数要求是100词左右。B节的字数要求是160～200词。文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。

4．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

5．如书写较差，影响交际，分数将降低一个档次。

（二）一般评分标准

第五档A节(9-10分) B节(17-20分)

很好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有的内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；格式与语域恰当贴切。对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。

第四档A节(7-8分) B节(13-16分)

较好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉一两个次重点；使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密；格式与语域较恰当。对目标读者产生了预期的效果。

第三档A节(5-6分) B节(9-12分)

基本完成了试题规定的任务。包含多数内容要点；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求；有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；格式和语域基本合理。对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。

第二档A节(3-4分) B节(5-8分)

未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性；格式和语域不恰当。未能清楚地传达信息给读者。

第一档A节(1-2分) B节(1-4分)

未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容；语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复；语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差；未使用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段；无格式与语域概念。未能传达信息给读者。

零档(0分)

所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；内容与要求无关或无法辨认。

考研 (英语一)写作大作文范文及思路

一、图画作文 1.写作攻略 图画作文是较难的题型之一，近几年考研英语写作试题均为图画题型，因此考生应该特别认真地对待。这类题一般要求考生仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文。实际上，图画作文也可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写。第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二、三段应该是写作的重点。面对此类题型，考生应首先确定主题，然后再动笔。具体写作要点： (1) 仔细研究作文指令，弄清楚作文的要求，是否有标题？是否有提纲？然后从题目中找出中心词，分析修饰词，准确地抓住题目的中心思想。 (2)认真解读图画，因为图画是作文的信息基础。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，尤其要注意图画中人或物(人与物)的体貌表情特征和背景，确定人物之间，人物与背景之间的主要关系，以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。 (3)如果图画以系列形式(既两幅以上)出现，考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外，还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解，在整体上把握图画所传达的信息。 (4)面对图画作文，考生应该展开合理而丰富的联想，用生动恰当的言辞抒发自己对图画的所思、所想、所感。 (5)注意图画作文中的文字说明。文字说明非常重要，通常十分清楚地提供一些写作要点，考生在看说明时要看清主、谓、宾，正确理解说明的意义。 (6)草拟提纲，合理组织材料。根据图画内容的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。如图画式作文写作多要求进行描写图画。对于漫画式写作，漫画描写本身并不重要，但文章的寓意却要力求准确，不要拖泥带水。 (7)系统且突出地展开段落。展开段落要根据画面内容进行，最好能围绕每一段的主题句进行。 (8)检查与修改。考生应重点检查图画内容是否准确地被表达出来，题目所给提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。如果存在与画面不相符的内容，或未能完全涵盖题目所给提示，考生应对文章做出相应修订。 2.必背模版句型 As is described in the picture... 这幅图描述了…… The purpose of the picture is to show us that... 这幅图的目的是为了给我们展示…… We can deduce form this picture that... 从这幅图中我们可以推断…… The picture indicates / conveys the meaning that 这幅图指出/传达…… More and more people have come to realize... 越来越多的人已经意识到…… Now it is commonly held that... but I doubt whether... 现在大家都普遍认为……，但我怀疑…… As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relationship between... and ... 从图中我们可以清楚的看到……和……的关系。 No wonder most see the problem of... as that of ... rather than that of... 难怪大多数人把……看成……的问题，而不是……的问题。

破解考研英语短文写作-五种作文类型.

破解短文写作 (大作文 第一节主题句作文 1. 写作攻略 主题句作文也可以叫做段首句作文,要求考生将每段所给出主题句分别加以扩展, 完成段落, 然后由段落组成文章。主题句作文是目前较常用的一种出题方式, 它不像一般正规文章那样要求具有开头段和结尾段, 一般只给出三句主题句, 所以属于一种简单的三段式作文。在写作这种题目的作文时, 考生只要正确领悟每个主题句的意思, 然后对每段的主题句进行阐述, 内容应当展开, 可以是对主题句的解释, 可以是例证, 也可以提供理由或细节。在对主题句进行展开时,考生要学会如何取舍,有的观点见解独到或是非常精彩, 但是在表达时会有问题, 考生本身的英语水平可能无法把这个观点表达清楚, 这时应该果断地放弃这一观点。因为考试要考生展现的是语言水平而不是思维的深度, 考生在写作时应该尽量少暴露自己在语言上的不足。 2. 必背模版句型 As far as I am concerned, I believe that.... 至于我,我相信…… Now it is widely acknowledged that.... But I wonder whether.... 目前大家广泛认为…… 但我觉得…… A close inspection of this argument would reveal how flimsy (groundless it is. 仔细想想这个问题就会发现它其实毫无根据。 In all the discussion and debate over..., one important fact is generally overlooked / neglected.

英语四级看图英语作文万能模板

1.看图英语作文万能模板 第一段：描述图画 1、As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用tables) above, 图画的内容。The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用tables) tells ( 注意，如果是前面的图画是复数，则用 tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。 2、Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述 图片里的现象，And it is very common/usual to see that in recent years. 第二段：解释，说明和分析图片 1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意，同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1，Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3（如果有的话）。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people. 2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason，I think, is that原因3。 第三段：给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。 1、In my view/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。 2、It is true that these unique/social points can/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it.采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标！ 开始段：介绍现象的具体状况和普遍程度。 中间段：解释产生这种现象的原因或意义，并做出一定分析。 结尾段：提出建议或总结观点或表明态度。 As is vividly shown in the drawing above, 画图内容. The drawing does mirror a co mmon social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.

考研英语万能大作文模板

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