慎小嶷 《十天突破雅思写作》总结

General Knowledge

注意：

1. 作文要有实质内容。

2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。

3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。（准确、严密、多样、清晰）

4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。

5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。

6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。

7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。

8.

如果Task 2准备得较为充分，有信心在40min写出一篇自己满意的议论文，那么就先完成Task 2。反之，就先写Task 1。

9. 齐头式：每段开头顶格写，每两段之间空一行

缩入式：每段开头后退3~4个字母的距离，每个段落之间不空行

10. 可使用I/we、被动语态，但不宜滥用；可将But/So放在句首

11. 7分或以上的作文对于用词的要求是准确，而不是冗长

?Topics

?学术类写作的特殊要求

1. 不接受缩写形式

2. 不使用非正式口语表达

3. 英美拼写不能混淆

4. 用词要有特色

5. 句式不能过于短促

6. 句式不能过于干瘪

7. 感情色彩不能过于强烈

8. 不要将宗教信仰或英语谚语作为逻辑证据

想素材的方法

写作的主要目的：考察考生用正确的、具有说服力的英文表达出reasonable ideas 的能力

?分类法（P22-P23）

当题目的讨论对象过于广泛或抽象时，将讨论对象具体化，对其加以分类。

?替代法（P23-P25）

当题目中出现-est/only/ban/stop这类词汇时，可举出反例。

?裸奔法（P26-P31）

TM STREEC $

Technology & Efficiency

Mind & Soul

Society & Crime

Time & Space

Rights & Responsibility

Environment & Health

Employment & Competition

Culture & Population

Money & Fun

雅思写作的词（P36-P72）

易错词汇（P68-P72）

43个通用高分短语和短句式（P139-P153）?前进类（用来论证advantage）P139-P144

?倒退类（用来论证disadvantage）P144-P147

?中间类P147-P150

?解决类（用来论证solution）P150-P153

雅思写作的语法

满分范文的标准：少量简单句（添加定语、状语、补语、同位语等成分）、较多含有1~2个从句与少量短语的复杂句（句长大概在18~28个单词内）与and/or/but 连接的并列句（添加定语、状语、补语、同位语等成分）、含有3~4个从句的长难句不常见

?句子成分

主语、谓语、宾语、定语、状语、补语、同位语

?句子

简单句、并列句、复杂句

?句式多样化

句首状语提前：把一个由副词、介词、现在分词、动词不定式形成的小短语放在句首。

句中植入短语

用短语结束句子

现在分词&过去分词

倒装

强调：It is/was ... that/who ...

虚拟

长短句交替

主被动结合：不宜过度使用被动语态

单词词性多样化：动词/形容词与抽象名词之间的相互转换

of+抽象名词：importance/help/value/interest/significance/necessity/quality/impact... 通过比较制造变化：too...to.../the+比较级, the+比较级/than

括号

以-ly结尾的副词

平行结构：在表示并列关系的连接词前后两侧用名词对名词、形容词对形容词、动词不定式对动词不定式、分词短语对分词短语、从句对从句

复杂句&连接词

雅思作文的主流：含有1~2个从句与少量短语的复杂句实用+准确

连接词

?重要的词组

in terms of 就...而言，接名词短语、动名词短语、what/how等引导的从句regardless of 接名词、动名词、从句

for the sake of = for the purpose of helping/improving

on the one hand,... on the other hand, ... 对比关系

?重要的技巧

拉丁文词汇：e.g./i.e./etc./vice versa/status quo

双重否定：it is not unusual/unrealistic/uncommon ...

in other words/by that I mean/that is to say（只能作为无话可说时的救命稻草，不宜过度使用）

结构

《剑4》~《剑9》里所有的考官满分范文全部都采用了折中式。

注意：

1. 考前应熟练掌握折中式和一边倒，并从中确定一种更适合自己英语水平和论证能力的逻辑结构。

2. 明确在熟悉的结构中每句话应起到的逻辑作用。

3. 议论文的结构应是清晰、有说服力的。

?议论文类型

4段折中式

?

注意：分论点不宜过多，但分论点后的展开支持句不怕多。

若已经对自己倾向的那一方的前2个分论点进行了深入的展开论证，长度不短，那么该方的第3个分论点及其展开支持句可选择自然省略。

展开支持句只要符合生活常理即可。

官方范文中分论点通常不会超过3个，每个分论点之后展开支持句通常不会超过4句。

5段折中式

Report

?混搭型

?一边倒

展开支持句的逻辑关系

突破模板写作文

注意：

1. 确定逻辑关系通顺且正确。

2. 实际论证的部分并不需要很多大词、难词。

3. 考前练笔时应把自己的习作与范文从思路、文章结构、论证中的逻辑衔接、词句和语法等方面进行比较，找出差距并不断完善，要有思考和反思过程。

4. 主体段里的展开部分可根据论证逻辑的具体需要进行合理调整。

5. 分论点素材：TM STREEC $，素材合理即可。

6. 行文时积极调动常用词汇、连接词和短语、句式，注意避免过度堆砌“亮点”的倾向，词句平实但要求准确度好。

高分作文的特点

1. 严格扣题，不需要模板，但必须要确保有清晰的结构。对每一方，除了提出总论点外，一般还会再深入提出2~3个分论点。

2. 准确使用连接词，各分论点&展开支持句需大量调动连接词、句式多样化等知识。

3. 在每一个分论点后会写1~2/3句的展开支持句，符合常理且有一些关联度即可。

4. 有一些使用准确的加分词汇（5~8个）& 与论证过程结合自然的加分短语与短句式（3~4条）& 流畅、有一定复杂度、但并不算长难的句子。

5. 结尾段通常会重申上文的倾向性（但表述方法和主体段应努力避免完全一致），考官范文的结尾段通常还提出建议。

6. 语法和拼写错误个数少。

7. 要“敢写”，有足够的自信和勇气。

图表题

注意：

1. Task 1是客观性写作，要求客观真实。

2. 客观性：不应该有任何图里并没有而靠自己主观想象加入的成分。结尾段针对图形做出的总结性结论也应该是根据图表的实际内容做出符合逻辑的总结归纳。

准确性：图表里面的数据介绍要力求精确，不能抄错数字。但当一个特征点没有落在一个准确的坐标值上时，允许进行合理的目测或估计一个大概数值。

详尽性：要有层次感，并不需要把所有的数字都堆到文章里。

3. 类型：

table 表格题P238-P243

line graph 线图P243-P245

bar chart 柱状图P245-P249

pie chart 饼状图P249-252

process diagram 流程图

4. 看图要注意单位、标题、图例。

5. 对于多数小作文题，题中给出了几个图就对应地写几个主体段。

题目里只给出了一个图，根据图中包含几类图形元素对应地写几个主体段。题目里只给出了一个图，但图中所含图形元素很多，则分类。

题目里出现多线、多柱、多饼，则用“对应提取法”，把每组里的对应元素提取出来组织主体段。

6. 时态与发生时间一一对应。

陈述永恒事实的句型，其主句的谓语动词必定使用一般现在时。

若题目里没有出现时间，则全文都使用一般现在时。

结构

?开头段改写

?介绍数据或描述变化趋势的常用词1. 动词

2. 形容词/副词

雅思IELTS写作136个必备词汇(十天突破雅思写作_第四版_慎小嶷)

1 家长给小孩的教育parenting n. 2 学校对学生的教育schooling n. 3 培养cultivate vt. 4 意识awareness = sense = recognition n. 5 有创造力的creative / original adj. 6 身体的physical adj. 7 心理的psychological adj. 8 同龄人peer n. 9 动力motivation n. （形容词motivated, 有动力的） 10 适应... adapt to 提供…. afford sth. v. 11 纪律discipline n. 12 记忆memorise(英式拼写) vt. 13 获得acquire vt. （后面经常加knowledge / skills） 14 有趣的stimulating adj. （在教育类作文中经常可以替代 interesting） Media 15 形容词“无处不在的”prevalent adj. 经常可以代替everywhere 16 客观的objective adj. 17 不客观的biased adj. 18 名人celebrity n. 19 记者journalists n. 20 新闻界the press 21 报道coverage n. （动词是cover） 22 有误导性的misleading adj. 23 可靠的dependable adj. 24 非常及时的up-to-the-minute adj. sway vt. 25 媒体影响公众经常用sway后 面加宾语的表达 26 信息量大的informative adj. 27 娱乐性强的entertaining adj. Technology 28 改变transform vt. 代替change 29 突破breakthrough n. 30 发展advance v. & n. 31 惊人的速度 a staggering rate 32 信息爆炸information overload 33 提高，增强enhance = boost vt. 34 创新，发明innovations n. 35 远程通讯telecommunications n. 36 高生产率的（它的名词 productive adj. productivity生产率在科技类 话题也很常用）

慎小嶷十天突破雅思口语总结1

慎小嶷十天突破雅思口语总结1

General Introduction 标准：It's not what you say. It's how you say it. 流利度、语法、发音、词汇量 （7分是快速思考后较为连贯地说出来的，但中间会有呼吸和短暂思考需要的自然停顿。和考官的交流比较充分而且已经有一定的层次关系，但允许出现不导致严重误解的语法、用词或发音错误） 注意事项： 1. 注意一些小短语： work out let sb. down pile up liven up polish up (=improve) crack sb. up (=make sb. laugh) hand down from wind down (=relax) 2. 不要使用过于口语化的表示 eg. wanna, ain't, gal, yucky 3. 如果没有听懂考官问的问题 Could you please rephrase the question? Well, my best guess would be...... Part 1: Chat；确保每道题平均能回答3句话左右 Topics: Studies, Work, Buildings, People Entertainment, Weather & Seasons, Hometown, Reading & Writing Food, Age, Arts, Colours Nature, Collection, Clothing, Traveling Sports & Outdoor activities, Pets, Festivals & Holidays & Parties, Shopping

慎小嶷 《十天突破雅思写作》总结2

General Knowledge 注意： 1. 作文要有实质内容。 2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。 3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。（准确、严密、多样、清晰） 4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。 5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。 6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。 7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。 8.

如果Task 2准备得较为充分，有信心在40min写出一篇自己满意的议论文，那么就先完成Task 2。反之，就先写Task 1。 9. 齐头式：每段开头顶格写，每两段之间空一行 缩入式：每段开头后退3~4个字母的距离，每个段落之间不空行 10. 可使用I/we、被动语态，但不宜滥用；可将But/So放在句首 11. 7分或以上的作文对于用词的要求是准确，而不是冗长 ?Topics ?学术类写作的特殊要求 1. 不接受缩写形式 2. 不使用非正式口语表达 3. 英美拼写不能混淆 4. 用词要有特色 5. 句式不能过于短促 6. 句式不能过于干瘪 7. 感情色彩不能过于强烈

雅思作文7.5分

我用的雅思材料（供参考）: 1 听力：（8分） 1 剑4—7：我把真题的听力听写了两遍。第一遍是全部听写，一开始要听好几遍才能写下来一句话，而且词的单复数也好多不对，一套题就要听写好长时间。由于雅思听力很多填空，单词的准确性极为重要，尤其是单复数很难听准确，所以这样的听写有利于找到听力中的漏洞，找到一些自以为会但写不对的单词，而且单复数听也会比较准确，连读也会听的比较清楚。第一遍听下来我就写了好几本白纸了，很厚一沓~~第二遍主要听写了一下主要意思，写的也比较快。 听力每天都要听，精听和泛听配合，我们老师让我每星期5个BBC或VOA的听（2分多钟的），每篇都写下来，然后找他对原文，找那个地方错了。如果写的困难，可以用ＶＯＡ慢速。泛听挑零碎时间听，最好不要晚上睡觉在床上听，听的睡着的话以后一听见英文就犯困。囧~~ 2 王陆807 听力词汇（黄皮）全部都是要写会的单词噢~ 3 卢峭梅讲雅思听力机经 https://www.sodocs.net/doc/211295878.html,/search_pub.php?key=%D1%C5%CB%BC%CC%FD%C1%A6%BB %FA%BE%AD&SearchFromTop=1&catalog=01 2阅读 1剑4--7 有的同学只全部做了一遍，做多了多少会记住答案，但如果阅读不是很好，最好还是做三遍。第一遍：成套做一遍，注意做错的题，必须找到做错的原因（注意不要留下深的印记）同时尽量控制做题时间在50分钟。把真题里不会的单词总结并背会。第二遍：分8大题型做，如把leadings的题目都找出来，集中做一遍，把错题搞明白。8大题型其实都是在找关键词，集中练习有利于快速准确确定关键词并在文章中找到关键词。其中最难的应该是判断false 与not given的题目，需要多练习。8大题型有4个有顺序，4个没顺序。Leadings题型做题时一般取每个段落的前两句的大意，如果段落里有but however等转折词，就取最后一句的意思，而不取第一二句意思。第三遍：成套再做一遍。 2刘洪波的阅读真经（1—4 ） https://www.sodocs.net/doc/211295878.html,/search_pub.php?key=%D1%C5%CB%BC%D4%C4%B6%C1%D5% E6%BE%AD&SearchFromTop=1&catalog=01 这个书上的文章跟雅思文章相似度很高，题出的不好，可以用来联系卡时间，文章有时间要精读。

慎小嶷的五月雅思写作预测

PAT的五月写作预测 1 Good health is a basic human need. Some people think that healthcare services should be provided by the government rather than by private companies. Do you agree or disagree? 2 Some people believe that only the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can succeed in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 3 Animal experiments have been used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of many other products. Some people think that these experiments should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 4 Sending children to boarding schools is becoming increasingly popular. What are the causes of this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? 5 Today, many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions. 6 Some people believe that students should study a wide range of subjects. Others, however, argue that students should focus on the subjects they are best at or they find most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 7 Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that universities should make it easier for them to access higher education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 8 Some parents today choose to send their children to private schools. Do the advantages of private schools outweigh the disadvantages? 9 Mobile phones and the Internet are useful tools. However, not many elderly people use them. In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be useful to elderly people? How can elderly people be encouraged to use them? 10 Early technological developments helped ordinary people and changed their lives more than recent technological developments. Do you agree or disagree? 11 Cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world today. To what extent do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

慎小嶷_《十天突破雅思写作》总结2

General Knowledge ?注意： 1. 作文要有实质容。 2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。 3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。（准确、严密、多样、清晰） 4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。 5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。 6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。 7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。 8.

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