雅思写作7.5分高分心得分享(邓徽老师学生自己辛苦整理的写作资料)

雅思写作7.5分高分心得分享（里面有自己辛苦整理的写作资料）

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1. 雅思写作（内含大量雅思写作快速提分学员心得以及题目为“整理这些短语我掉了一把头发”雅思写作提分短语-每一个短语均出自剑桥雅思官方指南1-8里面阅读单项当中所有可以用到写作当中的短语）。目前雅思界第一个整理八本雅思指定辅导书的牛人。

2. 高级写作提升（内含每天更新经济学人优秀词汇以及短语—记住是每天更新！不是每月也不是每年也不是一辈子！）

3. 雅思托福词汇

大作文的写作最重要，但是小作文也很重要，不能一直放的小作文不看，因为小作文如果写的不流畅，老是思考，不能在20分钟内写完，就会严重影响大作文的质量。写作文一定要知道换说法，一个意思同样的说法最好不要出现第二遍，这当然需要积累不同的句型和短语，比如文章后面给的写好处的句子要记得换着用哦~~~邓老师说大作文要得高分，倒装句、插入语、强调句、复合句和同位语至少各用一次！！一开始，我每篇作文都五种句型刻意出现一遍，到后来就用的比较熟。

1把《雅思写作机经题源大全》看了三遍，主要是记了上面的论据。上面的文章按类型分类，可以总结一下某一方面常用的搭配和句型。

2 我的写作邓老师让我把新概念3的文章背背，但我背了两篇就放弃了。不过我把新3上的文章都看了一遍，把觉得好的句子总结在了一个本上，然后背，尤其是快考试那几天每天背一遍，弄得很熟，所以用起来也很熟。大家一定要看啊！！！

3 关于模板：我觉得模板还是很有用的，但不是已有书上的模板，大家都知道的那些模板和句型最好少用。因为雅思作文一共五大类，我一般练得都是两边倒的作文，自己有准备一个模板，除了问原因解决类的作文外都可以用同一个模板，所以要练得比较熟，一般写作文都要用自己的模板。不过我考试时候还是碰上了问原因类的作文，所以最好是总结两个模板就万无一失啦~~。

4 当时邓老师让我基本上一天看一篇《经济学人》的文章，总结不会的单词、短语和句型，因为上面的文章都是老外写的，所以文章非常地道，好句子很多~~~

5 上强化课前看过一遍十天突破雅思写作，觉得还是很不错的，对雅思写作有了比较全面的了解。但是上面的句型和模板最好不要用了~~

6 关于写作文：我一共写了十篇左右的大作文，小作文要每种至少练一篇吧，快考试前一个星期我用专门的雅思考试写作纸卡时间，大小作文一起一起写，写了4套。我觉得大作文不在于要练的很多，但是要刻意的改进。写完一篇文章后要自己改一遍，把看的出来的语法和单词错误改了，还要看论据合不合理，再把看过的好的句型刻意套进去，然后如果有条件找给邓老师给改改。第一篇作文我写了一个半小时才写完，当时真是把所有能用的上的好句子和词组都尽量往里套。邓老师说第一篇要是半小时之内写完就是混的没好好写。尽快把能用的上的写作资料背熟，这样写作时间自然会减少，小作文必须20分钟搞定，如果你的模

板和句子用的熟，大作文也会很流畅。我的雅思考试作文写了满满的2页考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍（真的检查出一个错~哈）。

7 除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个（不用太多），而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。在这里与大家做一下分享。

好句总结：

1 多用such替换the ,a . 例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.（模板的第3段开头）

2 开头句型：（放在文章中间也很好的句子）

1 As a result of constant media attention , A(A指题目话题) , once largely ignored,has come to be seen as especially valuable/significant.

2 (The right of the media to do this )is rarely disputed, but (the way in which it does this )often comes under withering critism. (括号里可以换)

3 As our lives are saturated with the flood of (advertisements) ,no one can avoid being influenced by ads.(ads 错的，不能用简写哦~)

4 (Bad traffic and increasing pollution) are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe.（in the globe全世界）

5 The issue of A is a com plex and sensitive one . What lies behind …..? (问原因类)

6 After years in the wilderness , the term “ A ” seems posied to make a comeback.(和第一句意思比较像)

3好处句型！！

1 Nothing can be compared with sb/sth ~~(新3的哦，推荐)

2 A exert a positive impact on ….

3 A can an effective way to (help)……(简单但好用)

4 Few things can be more （impressive）than ….that… (新3的哦，推荐)

5 play a pivotal role in …

6 benefit from ../ profit from…一般

7 promot the development of ..

8 A is the cornerstone of …

9 remove the barrier for ..

10 raise one’s awareness of …常用

11 enable sb to do …

12 sb is the ultimate beneficiary （sb是。。的最终受益者，社会问题类说人们应该自己也承担责任用）

13 consolidates its status as the ..

14 get a clear perspective of ..

15 give a boost to ..

16 A is an indispensable part of B

17 A is irreplaceable tp B

18 The signigicant of A to B can never be ingored

19 A is the key ingredient to B~~

20 A made it possibe for sb to…

21 A exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people . (新3的哦，推荐)

find it impossible to resist the temptation to do ….

22 N eedless to say / Indeed ,……（可以放在任一句开头，很好用哦~）

23 develop an unshakable faith in …

24 have a reputation of ..

25 Nothing can catch them for …

26 make a contribution to (也可作写坏处的句子the city make its own contribution to noise)

27 build bridges between

28 特别的

Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健康

optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平

eradicate poverty 消除贫困

It’s not A that are important ,but B

Satisfy basic (human) needs 满足要求

Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of 消除冲突和紧张

Be fully aware of the consequences

The impact of （sporting activities）goes far beyond the bounds of (leisure and recreation.) 3坏处的句型

1 drive up the crime rate ..

2 widen the gap between A

3 pose a (direct) threat to …

4 stifle creativity

5 diminish individual’s leisure time…

6 spin out of control

7 cause(creat) tension and conflicts between…

8 exert(have) detrimental/negative/adverse influence（impact）upon/on

9 is markly incompatible with…与。。不协调

10 be afflic ted with …

11 deprive one of sth

12 sth is the root cause of …

13 be saturated with sth

14 at the expense of ….

15 be confronted with sth

16 run contrary to …

17 erode the national identity

18 pose a dilemma for

19 is an vicious circle

20 hamper (scientific) progress

21 there is a yawning gap between

22 pose a devastating problem

23 the reputation is ruined

24 A is a complete failure

25 Things can go wrong on a big scale

26 sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem

27 It is impossible to

28 have (little) difficulties in doing

29pay the price for (fame)

30 (pollution) is the price we pay for( overpopulated ,over industrialized planet )

31 people seem to fail to take into account the fact that ….好句！！

32 lead to some unfavorable results

33 sacrifice ….for …

34 There is a major concern over t he world about ….

35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions

36This is compounded by the fact that …

37 the problem of ( information overloaded ) exacerbated by (the growth …)

38 The problem , however , i s complicated by the existence of dozens of ..and by the fact that….. 4解决问题类

小模板：

1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on ….,saying clearly (that..).

2Other policies (such as。) can be taken to back up the policy .

3 One helpful st ep is to … ,Another possibility is to improve …. , so that ….

4 It should be an addtion to the policy work ,not a substitute.

5 The more effort put in and wider (the whole school) involvement ,the substantial the results are likely to be .

1 give priority to sth

2 shoulder the responsibility to

3 comply with

4 impose restrictions on..

5 take …into account /consideration

6 should be increasingly focus on…rather than …

7 what will make the most difference is …..The new study makes this point even more starkly

8 There are ways of dealing with the topic through …, …. and …..

Three factors are involved in this change.

新概念3+剑桥好句：

1 Apparently,there is a good deal of truth in this idea./There is an element of truth in both agreements

2More importantly/signif icantly,there is still good evidence that …

3This is compounded by the fact that …由于。。的事实，使。。变得更糟

4Women,it is obvious, are freer than in the past. 插入语

5 has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.

6 It’s not A that are important ,but B

7 Providing more parking area, in the long run ,has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world.插入语

8 Not only had the poor man been arrested ,but he had been sent to prison ,as well

9 It has been estimated that …据估计

10 Considering the amount she paid ,he was dear in more ways than one .非谓语

Fearing that she would never see Ratus again

11 use fewer materia resources and ,therefore,be much compatible with protecting the environment

12 avoid squandering money on 避免浪费钱在。。上

13 shoulder important responsibilities on major global issues

14These regions are fragile not just in terms of their ecology,but also in terms of the culture of their inhabitants.

25 Climate change ,whatever its causes,is a direct threat to their way of life.插入语

26 Cinema might, for example , have become pimarily a documentay form. for example放中间，好！

27 But what happened was that it became ,overwhelmingly, a medium for tekking stories. 插入语

28Unfortunately, they are the ones the organisation can least afford to lose.

29 There is an abundance of evidence to support the motivational benefits that result from carefully matching people to jobs. an abundance of 大量的，好！

30 Managers, must be sure ,therefore, that employees feel confident that their efforts can lead to performance goals. 插入语

31To varying degree, we all have secrets which……

32 Instead of becoming a doctor , however ,he became a successful writer of detective stories.

33 It seemed certain that

34 广告Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste,we are no longer free to choose the things we want ,for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us .

35 In time ,it became an accepted fact that …

2015年雅思写作大作文真题解析

2015年6月6日雅思写作（一） 题目类别society 提问方式Discussion 考试题目 Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人认为给需要救助的人自己的帮助更加可取，有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。 Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help should be encouraged and respected. Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases. Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions children’s life. In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.(word count：274)

雅思ENVIRONMENT类写作素材

Growth in air travel harms environment(飞行增多危害环境) Climate change experts from the Tyndall Climate Research Centre in Britain have said urgent action（紧急行动）is needed to curb the rapid growth in air travel（抑制飞行的快速增长）if the government is to meet its commitments（实现承诺）on tackling global warming（处理温室效应）. This report from Stephen Evans: Falling ticket price and rising incomes are leading to rapid growth in global air travel.（导致国际航空业迅速发展的原因是机票价格的下降和收入水平的提升。）According to the British government, the number of British air passengers, for example, will more than double in the next quarter of a century（下一个25年）. Increases of such an order would mean much more aviation fuel（燃油）being burned and aviation fuel may be more harmful to the environment than other fuels because the resulting smoke is emitted at high altitudes（高海拔）. A group of scientists at the environmental research group, the Tyndall Centre, says that if Britain is to meet its overall target for cutting damaging emissions（减少有害气体排放）, other uses of fuel like for heating homes or driving cars would have to be cut dramatically. The British government wants the use of aviation fuel covered by international agreement on the environment. The difficulty for any individual government（任何政府）is that taxing fuel used at its own airports might push airlines to move their operations to competing airports in other countries. https://www.sodocs.net/doc/4b13789404.html,/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2005/09/050921_aviation.sh tml Calls to control low-cost flights（限制廉价航空） Cheap flights（廉价航空）on no frills airlines may not be a burden on our wallets but they will dearly cost the UK's environment（严重危害环境）, campaigners believe. Scientists predict that if carbon dioxide emissions continue to increase, global warming will bring higher annual temperatures and heavier rainfall（温室效应会带来更高的气温以及更大的降水）- with all the associated problems（相关的问题）. +将来时）it is . Agencies such as the Sustainable Development Commission (SDC) want our air tickets to reflect "the true cost of flying" to the environment. To green groups, this involves the aviation industry having to pay tax on the fuel（航空业应该为燃油使用赋税）it puts in planes.

雅思写作科技篇

科技 SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY 在这部分，你的任务是： 一，背诵话题词汇短语 二，为题目列出英文提纲 基础词汇短语 advanced science 尖端科学 scientific invention 科学发明 exert a far-reaching impact on…对…产生一种深远的影响 double-edged sword 双刃剑 earth-shaking changes 翻天覆地的改变 pay the way for the future development 为未来的发展铺平道路 lay a solid foundation for…为…打下良好的基础 energy crisis 能源危机 depletion of resources 能源消耗 milestone 里程碑 sophisticated equipment 尖端设备 technical innovation 科技创新 expediency 权宜之计 antithetical 与…背道而驰的 over-commercialized 过渡商业化的 a heated discussion 热烈的讨论 exhaust gas 废气 disastrous 灾难性的 overshadow 使…相形见绌 compared to/with…与…相比 usher in 引领 speedy and comfortable 既快捷又舒适 opposite forces 负面影响 a fatal breakdown 致命故障 potential hazards 潜在危险 pose a threat to…对…有一种威胁 promote relative industries 促进相关产业发展 accelerate 加速… means of transportation 交通方式 transportation tools 交通工具 social status 社会地位 environmentally-friendly resources 环保的能源 make people's life easier 使人们生活更方便 alternative fuel 可替代燃料

雅思写作基础

最高级和比较级 主语谓语最高级和比较级(宾语) than 英国在某方面花费的最多 Britain spent the most heavily on… 英国的花费高于其他国家 Britain spent more than other countries. 德国花的只比法国多 Germany only spent more than France. 主系表结构 意大利的花销只比法国多一点 Italy’s spending is only marginally greater than that of France. 英国的花费高于其他国家 British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries. 西班牙是最受欢迎的度假胜地。 Spain is the most popular holiday destination. 被动语态 女性失业率高于男性的。 More women are unemployed than men. 红色车的销量较高。 Far more red cars are sold. 英国在玩具上的花费高于其他国家 More money was spent on toys in Britain than in other countries. 女性的失业率最高 The highest percentage of women are unemployed. The unemployment rate for females is the highest. 位居中间maintain middle position 表示比较的连接词 By comparison = in contrast = by contrast: 对比来说, Compared with A = in contrast to A :和A对比来说, On the contrary = conversely: 相反 数字连接词修饰词 at \with\ reaching the figure of some\approximately\more or less\ just over\just under\ number or so The number of visitors to France and Germany reached 3million and 5million respectively 相等be equal to 主谓宾结构中常用动词 Spend Consume Consider mention cite prefer\favor\appeal to enjoy\have \own Suffer hoose 最the most 最不the least

2015年6月6日 雅思大作文解析

2015-6-6 Task 2 An ask 2 Analysis Some people p ople prefer to provide help and support directly to loca local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有?人喜欢直接帮助社区中需要帮助的?人。也有些?人喜欢把钱投给国内或国际慈善组织。讨论这两个观点并且表达你?自?己的想法。 1Topic 话题 Charity 2Question type 题型Discuss 3 5W ANALYZE THE QUESTION审题 （WHO+what+when+where+why+how） WHO: people WHAT: do charity How: direct support vs money donation Where: local vs national & international 4identify key words and their synonyms 关键词理解 support directly=direct involvement give money to=donate charitable organizations=charities 5identify all the writing tasks 确定全部写作任务 1. some people prefer direct help 2. others donate to non-pro?t organizations 3. own opinion Brainstorming and organ d organizing ideas 写作思路 Direct support Donation to non-profit 6Necessary: 必要性 组织运作不当，造成损失: charity frauds Bene?ts: 重要性 积极参与：direct involvement 及时?高效: concretely helping ?立竿?见影: make a signi?cant difference Necessary: 必要性 有些问题单纯本地解决不了 not easy to tackle at the local level Bene?ts: 重要性 资本有效运作：Meet more basic needs with fewer dollars 减税福利：tax bene?ts for helping globally

雅思写作素材Crime

Crime 类范文 犯罪类 There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. What are the causes of this phenomenon? 只分析一个方面（产生原因），写成5段式 开头段（不少于4句） In this day and age, the incidence of juvenile offenses has been growing at an alarming rate. Today, the sheer number of juvenile offenders has reached staggering proportions. A recent survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences revealed that one out of four crimes today was carried out by minors. Hence, it is imperative that we pinpoint the causes of this disturbing phenomenon. 主体段1（不少于4句） In the first place, many instance of juvenile delinquency have been attributed to the violent or pornographic content of some TV shows and video games. Now we are facing a proliferation of blood and guts and nudity on TV, the computer and the Internet. Many youngsters, especially boys, get addicted to such scenes. Lacking the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong, they develop criminal tendencies. 主体段2（不少于4句） In the second place, parental neglect and domestic violence play a pivotal role in the increase of youth crimes. Today there are an ever-growing number of dysfunctional families. The children raised in such families tend to be afflicted with constant fear. In the end, they develop a hatred for society and other individuals. 主体段3（不少于4句） In the third place, there is a definite correlation between the increase of juvenile crime rate and the rise of adult crime rate in society. The more adult crimes, the higher the probability of youngsters falling prey to adult offenders. Many youths are tempted by evil adults into committing crimes. And some others are victims of adult offenses and become criminals themselves to get their revenge on society. 结尾段（不少于2句） In sum, many factors contribute to the surge of juvenile delinquency. It is crucial that we take vigorous measures to tackle these problems and ensure that the future or our nation—that is, the youngsters, have a more promising future ahead of them. Crime 类8分范文 Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一边倒写法=写完全同意或者完全不同意：五段式 开头段（不少于4句） With the crime rate hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage. Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate. Many assert that the news media should stop giving details of crimes. Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views. 表示同意可以替换成approve of /wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for 不同意可以替换成disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to / object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with 主体段1（不少于4句） In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage. The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings; much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated. It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime. 主体段2（不少于4句） In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials. Reporting crimes in graphic detail helps those who are in the process of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans. Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime. And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate. 主体段3（不少于4句） In the third place, detailed reports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes. The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public. Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds. Without

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