2019雅思作文范文

雅思作文【抄写范文，分析记忆很有效】

小作文20minutes 动态/静态（3种题型）7分=TA+CC+LC语法时态勿出错！四天解决：静态/动态/流程图/地图

开头：同意转换/不要用过去式

The chart provides information/data about …

It can be seen from the chart,…

According to the chart,..

The chart shows/illustrates/suggests the changes in …

The chart illustrates/shows how. Changed/varied /that …(宾语从句)

中间段落：四大评分要求！！！多图单位一致按对象分段/不一致按图分段

TA：2个以内数据得全部说明，两种对比都得对比到位【总结/归纳】

占据：account for ,represent, make up, constitute

花费:the cost/spending/expenditure +on

说数据：the. Figure / amount/number/proportion for the pipeline.

时间：

At the beginning of the 1999, by the middle/end of

From the 1900s onwards, 从。。。开始

During the period from 1999 to 2002从。。到。。。

In the following 5 years 在随后的五年内

Increased for 5 years in a row.持续增涨了五年

4and 引导的并列句

5while/although引导的状语从句

6there be

7compared with …/分词结构

8when/ where引导的定语从句.

eg the most sever land degradation was in Europe, where 23% of land was degraded.

必备句势

1倍数：A doubles B/triples

A is #times as adj as B

A is #times-1 adj as B

eg the percentage of A is 10 times more than that of B

2最高级：the. Highest percentage of N is n

# takes the first /second/third place, at 3%

# lies in the dominant position in…

3比较级：A…3%,compared with 4%in B

In contrast,……

Be significantly lower.

1 多达as much as 40% [ periods]

2仅仅n represents a mere/only 1%of N

3超过topped/exceeded 5%

4多于the consumption of fish was just over 50

5少于fish was consumed (just below 50).

6总数a total of 50 was pends on public transport

7剩余the remaining 80%

8从哪到哪ranging from 3 to 8

9相比there be ….(20 million in1999 versus 110 million in 2001)

10分别A and B V 2% and 5% respectively

9单一数据占比（动词占比/80% of N is n /the percentage of n is 30）

A, accounting for5%,is the most popular N in the place. ……………………………..,at 5%

10多个数据分别占比(respectively放句末/collectively放other之后)

Sth in A and B are 2% and 5% respectively.

Other reasons respect only 7% collectively=the remaining 7% was other problems

不变：remains stable/steady 流动：Fluctuated

最高点：Peak at /reach a peak of

最低点：Dip to the bottom at /reach a low of

句型N increased dramatically (from 20) to 50/by 30

It increased steadily from about 500km to 300km.

There be an increase in /was a fluctuation in theN between 1998 and 2000 CC：类似/对比/动词前加程度副词

介词的正确使用

TRi：注意词性转化！！！

结尾：必须写最值/对比/趋势

不要出现数据！个人观点或者in conclusion/ therefore

Overall /globally /further…

总结我的问题

1，+数据——可做同位语?不要用，+which定语从句

2副词放在动词后面修

静态图表：单一数据对比类——数据要依次从大到小说

动态图表：大小对比+趋势对比【结尾写高值的变化趋势】TA不要丢信息对比！流程图表：开头结尾适当总结+中间做比较(审题，看清词性，注意衔接，总结)

1词汇：at first-then-next-after that-the final stage

The process starts from…/during the initial phase,

The next phase in the process is

The final phase of the procedure is about…

固：lay accumulate press squeeze form adjust revolve

Fade recycle fold absorb collect meet convey combine

Separate dry in the sun compound混合物container

液：cool down冷却/flow/pour into倒入/melt into融化/circulate Filtration 过滤extract 提取

气：expand/burn/compress压缩/release/heat up/be fueled by/ignite点燃2句式一般现在+被动语态（不能有祈使句和第一人称）

in the next period,…great chance take place in..

In the next ….develop into a new stage

In the next …the development of …entered a new stage

The following…witnessed/saw a new development of…

A and

B are crushed into powder by a crusher

范例作文

The diagram shows that there are …/

In summary, the two diagrams show the manufacturing process of ..

地图类：

1选址题/变迁题（hut/village）

词汇：

A is A is located/ next to /close to/right across from

B /faces north Extended from to

A is sited in /on /at

A is transformed into

B remove/disappear /experiences/witnessed

The size /length/width/height/depth/weight of A is

分段（根据几个选址/不同时间顺序）-比较优缺点和不同时间段的变化

时态+结尾（would/过去将来）哪一个更好/如何发展变化的

This map mainly shows the development of ..

From the map we can clearly find that

大作文写法总结

第一种观点类：

1agree or disagree (two kinds)100%!高分写法！70%让步段3句

破题写法（开头写法）

It is widely acknowledged that （解释现象为什么发生？背景+原因）However,题干建议can hardly improve such/this situation，

Although题干建议have value，I do not agree with the Idea of dong Seth . 中心段1

Tv can interfere with children’s studies and other activities, which can benefit these children’s intellectual development./they may not be able to achieve good grades in exams because screen time displaces the time they could spend doing homework./it is also worrying to see that Tv can crowd out those activities, which can improve children’s intellectual skills, such as reading, playing chess and board games.

Another problem is that long screen time can limit children’s social development.those children who sit in front of TV for many hours ,instead of playing games with their peers and communicating with teachers, will become unsocial and unwilling to express their views.without …they will…

On the other hand, I understand that….

To summarize, I would urge that P and T …although TV shows are a source of knowledge.watching TV can have an adverse impact on exam grades and social kills. 总结中心段落

破题写法（开头结尾）

The advent of internet has changed the way people live their lives and complete work. (背景)A growing number of people are now considering distance education , which allows them to complete a degree at home.（题干观点陈述）although distance learning differs from traditional college education in some aspects, learners will possibly find that they can gain as much knowledge from an online course as they do at university.（自己观点）

In conclusion, interactive technology has enabled learners to communicate with lectures easily and gain qualifications(总结中心段落观点), so I believe that the distance education is now as good as traditional ways of completing a degree At university.

2 Positive/negative (individual/social)50%

破题写法（开头写法）

As the world is increasingly globalized ,the changes of commodities across the border is proceeding at an astounding rate. (背景)From my point of view, this development can help improve living Standards of customers.（观点）

The product from foreign countries are competitively priced and offer good value for money.the main reason is that countries that export these goods normally have technology and know-how to reduce the cost of production to ensure that these products are highly affordable. For example, china specialists in production of textile products so china-made clothes ,bed linen and footwear are cheaper than local counterparts in many parts of the world.

Another benefit is that imported goods have challenged domestic manufactures dominance and intensified competition, thereby pushing these producers to put cut prices. It is beneficial to domestic customers because they can spend less on some products essential to their such as food, and the cost of living will decline.

eg:Living alone

Positive :independent /how to manage bill/freedom (time/space)

rent/construction industry /a rise in the demand for housing Negative :lioness helpless /sense of isolation /unsafe (the old/single we/disa)

Depression-anxiety/lack of sene of safety /financial Borden

Push up the price

CC:however/ on the other hand / as /since/for

eg :on the other hand/compared with the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone experience some negative feelings ,such as loneliness worry, and sense of isolation.as a result/even is such trend continues/situation gets worse, they would suffer from some diseases.like anxiety or depression. Since those living by themselves, are Lack of on immediately emotion support and daily conversation from families and roommates.

As for the single women,Obviously,People with diseases no one can sent them to hospital…

Explain:causes-have no daily communication/immediately accompany Example-kinds of people[if…they..when…]/disturbance interference

Effect-exact bills

第二类论述类：economic

1discuss both view and give your opinion双边讨论

(1)viewA+ViewB+My opinion：已知观点+再来一个补充例/两个加合/新观点破题写法（全文构架）

children are expected to obey different rules either at home or at school.(背景)strict discipline is sometimes important, but I would argue that it would have an adverse impact on children’s problem-solving abilities.(转折)

some people are strong advocates of imposing rules, because rules can hold children accountable for their behavior and help them develop good behavior patterns from a young age./unlike Adults, children are normally not aware of bad behavior, and sitting rules can help them realize how to behave in a socially acceptable way./for example, they can learn how to greet others, make polite requests and show table manners, if they are required by adults to do so./in addition, rules can also forbid inappropriate behavior, such as bullying, using profanity, cheating in exams and interrupting teachers.

Opponents, however, argue that rules can limit the development of problem-solving skills, if those parents who establish strict rules give priority to children’s obedience, children will rely heavily on rules./for instance, some rules may dictate what children should do everyday, but when children wen to workforce, they will not know how to manage time without instruction of their parents and teachers. They are unlikely to achieve success .

In my view, strict rules can stifle children’s creativity and they are not…

破题写法(全文构架)

The government sometimes faces opposition when spending its budget on public art, especially in economically tough times.(背景) I reckon that we should give priority to essential services and infrastructures and then fund the arts when there is a budget surplus.（作者观点）

The supporters of the public funds for the arts argue that cities can become more visually attractive because of art.it is true that…

Despite this , many people would argue that public facilities deserve more of public money.

In my view, improvements in public facilities can promote economy development, but the arts may be less important in economic terms.

To sum up, I believe that the government should focus on services and facilities vital to wellbeing of the general public, even though artistic

projects can make our cities spectacular

破题写法(结尾可有可无)f or the reasons mentioned above, I would suggest that…,despite the fact that strict discipline can reduce poor behavior.

第三类说明文

1 cause and solution (traffic congestion)

Cause /result from/stem from/root in/on account of/due to +短语individual:private cars /disobey rules

Government:unreasonable plan of traffic/narrow road/undeveloped public t

Solution individual improve-take public transportation/traffic facilities Take action /spare no effort to do /take measures involves suppose.

1 electronic device/boring/too much homework

2less homework/activity/rules

第一部分作文首段改写

总：background +introduction topic+viewpoint

it is suggested that..should do..

Some believe/consider that…while others…

There is an discussion about whether Or not

It is common/popular that ..[现象类]

There is no doubt that

It is widely acknowledged/admired that

There is a fact that

However,题干建议can hardly improve such/this situation.

同意转化！！！！！！！！the former/the latter

例题：

1背景when/because引导+转折看法but it would have a impact on ability of eg ：Because of science and technology and xx increasing X,现象

Although senior citizens can contribute extraordinarily to the society,I would ..

eg ：doing has been recognized as an effective method of learning, because..

Although have highly educational valued, I disagree that…

2前后对比+树立文章写作思路和目的

eg ：people are likely to…instead of …

It is important to know why and how to reverse this trend?

Even though….distant learning has some advantages in some aspects.

第二部分分论点叙述

分：topic sentence +supporting +further explanation

1中心句：topic make/enable/allow to do (一定要出现关键词+连接词)

1）topic can have important implications to a country’s economy

2）Levying tax can also regulate people’s behavior.

3）On the other hand, if taxpayers are subject to high taxes, they may not have the incentive to work hard and entrepreneurs are also not willing to set up a business.

2下定义

3讲原因because

4做对比：

1)In contract/by comparison/despite this,/Opponents, however, argue that

2)某件事情产生了什么情形，如果不发生则……otherwise, they may migrate to

3)虚拟语气（假如发生了一件不可能的事，则）if was/were done, it might be…

5举例子for example/for instance/in some Asian countries/if 虚拟语气

1)they are likely to….,if …..is higher.

6说影响this is

总in conclusion,+重申观点不要重复+总结所有分论点【不要展望+出新】It would be a better investment for sb …

Ps：注意观点类题目的限定词（individual/society/family）

折中段用词一定不能强硬，in some cases/might/ be likely to

多想原因/结果/举例

话题一人口老龄化

People’s life expectancy has increased in many countries possibly ,because of improvements in technology and the increases in personal wealth.Although senior citizens can contribute extraordinarily to society, I would agree that this demographic change can bring about some problems.

One Problem associated with an aging population is that health care costs will climb, imposing a burden on taxpayers.

On the other hand, many people would postpone retirement and extend their working life, it is true that their experiences and wisdom are valuable asset to the whole society.

2 advantages and disadvantages 双边讨论

Advantages: maximize the chance of employment educational resources Make friends from different nationalities to broaden our horizon elites

Be independent learn life skills decent job 远离父母宠爱和即刻的支持Disadvantage: individualism/collectivism

meet the language barrier, if they can’t speak the language well, they will have a hard time getting messages across.what is more, they are likely to creat culture shock and even conflicts. because they have different cultural ,what they talk about and what the eat are also different.we need to learn about their eating habits, work-style, teaching methods, way of thinking and so on。改变思维方式

There are numerous beneficial effects on studying abroad. To begin with, we can make friends from different nationalities to broaden our horizon .By communicating with them, we can learn a lot about the different cultures.for example, we can learn about their eating habits, work-style, way of thinking and so

on.also we can have a decent degree so that we can maximize the chance of employment. What is more, if we go far from our country we will be more independent to learn more life skills.and we have to manage our time to do what we should do without immediately support from our parents ,which would make us more mature.

Studying abroad may exert positive effects on students for three reasons.

不能使用第一人称；a lot是口语化表达；

Also，第二点要进行解释。Far from your home for study

Competitive:make progress/aggressive

realize their shortcomings learn from others

Ps:下定义—comparison recognition/ attention /praise from parents/teachers Be exposed to/be interpreted as/diligent, give up/in, come up with

说效果—work hard to distinguish from others/培养了独立解决问题的能力举例子—study/life/sport meetings 挑战身体极限/锻炼身体sense of honor

Competition makes children contribute themselves to a growth of bright future. As we all know, competition can be interpreted as an environment where children are eager for gaining attention and praises. Therefore they would work hard to distinguish from others and develop the ability of solving problems. For example, when they take part in sports meetings ,they would not only exercise their body but also try their best to get a sense of honor.Also, they would never give in and come up with solutions to life problems whenever they meet difficulties.

Cooperation:communication/coordinative/teamwork(make friends)

increase efficiency /get easy access to /senses of achievement

Exchange/share ideas /work together /mild atmosphere/confident

Self-centered/isolated/indifferent 过度依赖/偷懒

eg Justified: devote their youth to /hardworking/Unfair: surgeon endangered responsibly

话题一：孩子遵守规则Both view and you opinion

中心句the main function of discipline is to help children develop good. behavior patterns from a young age.

Sometimes, rules may not have great influence on children, if those parents who establish the strict rules give priority to children’s obedience

对比unlike adults, children are normally not aware of

If there is no rules to forbid them doing

政府类话题

1 投入：fees infrastructure policy educational resources healthcare-welfare 利（whole nation）（vulnerable group-the poor/old/women/children）Raise the quality of the whole nation/maintain social stability

Reduce crime level/ increase people’s happiness ind ex

弊(government)hardly value this opportunity/free be valued waste

Can’t meet expectation/lead to little contribution to other fields immediate

2内阁

Lack of. Experiences/fresh from university 可以对政府工作下定义

Make crucial decisions/policies such as …

Cope with emergency hardly considerate 协调能力，冲动，不耐心

Energy passion devote new thinking entrepreneur inject vigor and vitality in to the government

常用万能副词：

Educational教育意义的constructive 有建设性的inspiring 鼓励人的

diverse 多样的close to贴近relates to 产生共鸣

——oriented health-oriented study-oriented

常用万能动词：

W hen. Sb have problems in dong, they can …

W hile Seth has clear advantages, it may not offer….

常用万能连词：

常用万能句子：

人物类话题：

1男女平等（agree or disagree？）

女性歧视：教育方面，某些国家机会很少，专业很受限制

工作方面，难找工作，比例低（军事/政治，管理），收入低，难升职

家庭方面，做家务，带孩子，遭受暴力，生产产假，感情化

社会措施：随着科技发展，体力活减少，教育/工作机会增多

社会强调平等性，男女共同承担家庭责任

2老龄化问题（what why how 说明文）

影响：科技，接受速度慢，影响社会革新，但是，更多时间机会灌输知识给青年

经济，医疗依赖性强国家费钱存钱不消费但是，增加社会劳动力且成本低社会，青年老年矛盾激化

解决方法：参加义工，为社会做贡献

继续工作，保持生活水平

顾问工作，不干扰年轻人发展，提供丰富经验，让决定更睿智

照顾子女，享受家庭生活。

3名人

影响：聊天话题促进感情增加生活情趣

激励年轻人，公益，坚持等好的品质

代言产品，促进经济

奢华方式做误导，虚假消费，不好行为（如吸毒，赌博）

过高的收入，误导价值观

没有隐私，曝光花边新闻，而不关注社会其他正能量的东西

地点类话题：

1环境类

能源：sustainable materials/clean energy/alternative energy sources/traditional fossil fuels

Y es, it is partly right ,but I’d like to say technology has also been a solution to many environmental problems.

For. Example, many new buildings today use environmental friendly and sustainable materials and architects also try to make the most of natural light, use solar panels to generate electricity for homeowners.

(1)Nuclear Power: Positives

There are several benefits to build more nuclear power stations/Fossil fuel like oil and gas are running out

Nuclear power is a sustainable energy source/It can be used to produce electricity without wasting natural resources

It could be replace the use of natural resources like coal, oil or gas

Nuclear power stations are cleaner than fossil fuel power stations

They could help to reduce carbon emissions that cause global warming

(1)Power: negatives

Opponents of nuclear power worry about the safety of power stations

The building of new nuclear power stations is unpopular/ Nobody wants to live near one

Nuclear waste disposal is a significant problem/There is currently no way to decontaminate radioactive material People worry that terrorists could steal radioactive materials

It is safer to produce energy from solar, wind or water power.

(2)Global warming

Gases such as carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun/This causes global temperatures to rise

This process is known as the greenhouse effect/Human activity is a major factor in the rise of the greenhouse gases Factories and vehicles produce emissions and exhaust fumesMany developing countries are becoming

industrialized

The number of cars on our streets is growing/Cheap air travel is allowing more people to fly

(2)Effects of Global Warming

Global warming will have a significant impact on our planet

Rising temperature will cause melting of the polar ice caps /Sea levels will rise

We can expect more extreme weather conditions/Flooding and droughts may become more common

Impacts of humans on the environment/The increasing world population is putting pressure on natural resources We are destroying wildlife habitats/We have cut down enormous areas of rainforest

This has led to the extinction of many species of animals and plants

(3)Solutions to environment problems

Governments could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and invest in renewable energy from solar water power

They could impose “green taxes” on drivers and airlines companies/Government campaigns should promote recycling

Natural areas and wild animals should be protected /Individuals should also try to be greener

We should take fewer flights abroad for holidays/We should take public transport rather than driving

We should choose products with less packaging/We should recycle as much as possible

水:fresh water/tap water/underground water/chemical fertilizer.

(1)Importance of clean water

Water is as necessary natural resource/Humans need access to clean, safe drinking water in order to live

Poor water quality is a major cause of disease and death./Water usually needs to be treated before we can drink it Developing countries often lack the means to treat and supply water to citizens and tend to have much better sanitation Citizens have access to clean tap water /Drinking water is not contaminated by sewage or waste water

The supply of clean water would improve public health in many developing countries

(2)Water supply

Urban life would be impossible without water supply systems/These systems are massive engineering projects

Many professionals are involved in their planning, construction and maintenance

The supply and distribution of water are major concerns/Water is becoming scarce in some countries

Areas that suffer droughts often need to import water

As populations grow, there is more pressure on water supplies

This could lead to a water crisis

Water and politics

The supply of water is also an important political issue

Huge amount of water are needed for agriculture and industry

The irrigation of crops accounts for a large proportions of water use

A water crisis could lead to political conflicts or even wars

Argument: water should be free

Some people believe that water should be free for everyone

Governments should supply water to all homes at no cost

Private companies should not be allowed to profit from this natural resource Money from taxes can be used to pay for water supply systems Argument: water should not be free

If water is free, people take it for granted

They do not think about how much water they waste

They leave taps running while washing or brushing their teeth

If we have to pay for water, we will use it more responsibly

Water supply systems are extremely expensive

Investment is needed to maintain and improve them

Private companies may provide a better service than governments

If they provide an efficient service, they will make more money

They will repair leaks to avoid losing money

Bottled Water: Opinions

Some people carry bottles of water wherever they go

For example, they take bottles of water to work or to the gym

They believe that bottled water is healthier than tap water

They also argue that it tastes better

However, other people believe that we should consume less bottled water Plastic water bottles add to litter and waste problems

Companies should not be able to make a profit from water

It is unethical to make money by selling packaged water

There is no difference in quality between bottled and tap water

Waste/rubbish

The amount of waster we produce has increased

This problem is a result of our consumer culture

Products are not made to last

If something breaks, we throw it way and buy a new one

Advertisers encourage is to buy the newest fashions

Packaging is an important part of selling

Most foods are sold in non-biodegradable plastics packaging

The amount of household waste is growing

This waste ends up in landfill sites

垃圾

Litter

People do not think about the consequences of dropping rubbish

They assume that somebody is pad to clean the streest

Plastic packaging does not break down easily

Most of the litter seen on streets is fast food packaging

Recycling and other solutions

Companies should make goods that last longer

They should not use so much packaging

Governments should be stricter, about waster produced by companies They should put legal limits on packaging

Consumers should avoid buying over-packaged products

We should recycle and reuse useful materials.

There are collection banks for glass, paper and plastic bottles Households can use several rubbish bins to separate waste

Recycling saves energy and raw materials.

动物保护

Arguments for Animal testing

Animals are used in important scientific research

It is necessary to do medical tests on new drugs

Animal testing helps to advance medical and scientific knowledge

Many important medical discoveries involved experimentation on animals Researchers aim to minimize the suffering that animals experience Testing for the cosmetics industry is now banned in many countrie Arguments against Animal Testing

The benefits of research using animals do not justify the suffering caused There are alternative methods of research

The lives of animals should be respected

Humans have no moral right to do experiments on animals

Arguments for Vegetarianism

Vegetarians do not eat foods that are produced by killing animals

Many people choose a vegetarian diet for moral or health reasons

A healthy diet is possible without eating meat

It is unnecessary to kill animal for food

A vegetarian diet may reduce the risk of disease like cancer

Many people question the treatment of animals in factory farms Arguments against Vegetarianism

Vegetarians do not eat a balanced diet

In many cultures, meat is the main ingredient in traditional meals

Meat-eaters argue that animals are below humans in the food chain

It is completely natural for us to kill them for food

Our aim should be improve farming methods

Farms should produce organic food

Positives of Zoos

Zoos paly an important role in wildlife conservation

They can help to protect endangered species

Zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behavior

Zoos are educational, interesting and fun

Children, in particular, enjoy learning about animals

Zoos provide job opportunities.

Negatives of Zoos

Zoo animals are kept in artificial environments

They are kept in cages or have limited space

Zoo animals rely on humans

They lose the freedom to hunt for food

They best way to save endangered species is by protecting natural habitats.

Some people believe that zoos are unethical

Zoos exhibits animals with the aim of making money

We have no right to use animals for entertainment and profit.

2城市化

缺点：交通，reduce traffic congestion /rush-hour traffic/cope with traffic jams/broaden roads/curb private car use 绿化，cut down tress/

供应，housing shortage/urban planning/redevelop run-down urban areas make room for/increasingly crowded 优点：交通，within walking distance/encourages citizens to cycle to work or walk/

绿化，plant tress/tree-lined avenues/provide the shade+absorb dust/lined with trees/a view of nature

供应employment Opportunities/high-rise building/accommodate people/residential buildings/housing developers *Reasons for Urbanization

People move to cities in search of job opportunities/Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living People migrate to cities from the countryside///Traditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays

*Negatives of City Life

Life in cities has its drawbacks / The cost of living is higher than in rural areas

Some people d not manage to find work and /Housing is usually much more expensive

Homelessness and poverty are common on cities / There is a gap between rich and poor

Life in cities can be extremely stressful / There are problems like traffic congestion and crime

Cities lack a sense of community/People do not even know their neighbor/Ci ties are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”. pedestrian Areas

Pedestrian zones in city centre can improve the local environment/Banning cars encourages people to walk or cycle

Many European cities have built bicycle lanes /Dependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesity

People who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthier

Pedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists

1Relocate to big city, keep Pace with, reduce quality of life ,afford home ownership

A growing population ,put pressure on .the public transport services will be over used .

Transport costs will also increase.Low income people will be among the most affected.

This is particularly effective when offices or shops are within walking distance

Another method is to impose a tax on car ownership or make driving test tougher.

This will cause an increase in expense and make it difficult for people to obtain drive-ring licenses .

This can help curb private car use.

2I strongly believe that more money should be put into the green spaces in the cities, which can benefit all people who live in cities.

First of all ,people tend to be happy if they can have a view of nature in cities.

For instance, they are more likely to feel relaxed when walking in tree-lined avenues.

Trees can also provide shade so it can bring people together especially in summers.

They gather around trees and enjoy the shanked provide by trees.

For example, they can have a chat together and do some outdoor activities such as flying a kite.

The third benefit is that trees can also help keep our cities clean.

As you know, air pollution in many cities has become a highly serious problem .and trees can absorb dirt and smoke.

So they can improve air quality.

3government should first pay closer attention to urban 2 .

In densely populated cities, g can also redevelop run-down urban areas to make room for the construction of residential buildings.

The G can also encourage inhabitants to move to suburbs or rural areas.

And this policy can alternate the pressure on the housing market in cities.

This can be achieved by moving industry and jobs to the countryside or provincial towns.

These policies are effective in land-scarce cities, which can not meet the growing demand for housing.

3政府类

物品类话题：

1媒体

2科技

3生活

事件类话题：

1教育

2工作

3社会

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