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高考作文注意事项和要点


一、用于驳性和比较性论文

1. In general, I don’t agree with

2. In my opinion, this point of view doesn’t hold water。

3. The chief reason why… is that…

4.There is no true that…

5. It is not true that…

6. It can be easily denied than…

7. We have no reason to believe that…

8. What is more serious is that…

9. But it is pity that…

10. Besides, we should not neglect that…

11. But the problem is not so simple. Therefore…

12. Others may find this to be true, but I believer that…

13. Perhaps I was question why…

14. There is a certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to…

15. Though we are in basic agreement with…,but

16. What seems to be the trouble is…

17. Yet differences will be found, that’s why I feel that…

18. It would be reasonable to take the view that …, but it would be foolish to claim that…

19. There is in fact on reason for us so believe that…

20. What these people fail to consider is that…

21. It is one thing to insist that… , it is quite another to show that …

22. Wonderful as A is , however, it has its own disadvantages too。

23. The advantages of B are much greater than A。

24. A’s advantage sounds ridiculous when B’s advantages are taken into consideration。

二、用于描写图表和数据

1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.

2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year。

3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.

4. It would be expected to increase 5 times。

5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year。

6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.

7. The total number was lowered by 10%。

8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year。

9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent。

10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.

11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…

三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文

1.Everybody knows that…

2.It can be easily proved that…

3. It is true that…

4. No one can deny that

5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…

6. The chief reason is that…

7. We must recognize that…

8. There is on doubt that…

9. I am of the opinion that…

10. This can be expressed as follows;

11. To take …for an example…

12. We have reason to believe that

13. Now that we know that…

14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…

15. The change in …largely results from the fact that

16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…

17. A number of factors could account for the development in…

18. Perhaps the primary reason is…

19. It is chiefly responsible of…

20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are fou

nd in the fact…

21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that…

22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…

23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…

24. Different people observes it in different ways。

四、用于文章的开头

1. As the proverb says…

2. It goes without saying tan…

3. Generally speaking…

4. It is quite clear than because…

5. It is often said that …

6. Many people often ask such question:“…?”

7. More and more people have come to realize…

8. There is no doubt that…

9. Some people believe that…

10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?

11. One great man said that…

12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention。

13. In the past several years there has been…

14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…

15. Currently there is a widespread concern that…

16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…

17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of …

18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently。
高考临近,部分考生开始为高考英语发愁,说实话,如果英语基础不好,英语作文必将让你“原形毕露”,如何能瞒过阅卷老师的眼球呢?英语万能模板算是一个不错的捷径,但切记,英语靠的还是积累,模板瞒得了一时瞒不了一世啊。

(I)说明原因型

模块(一)

Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .

注释:

(1)用具体数据说明XX现象

(2)原因一(3)原因二

(4)原因三

(5)指出主要原因

(6)解决建议一

(7)解决建议二

Generation gap between parents and children. Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentagesof parents often complain their children\'s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).

Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?

Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the
pace of modern life becoming faster and

faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don\'t spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) .

It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children shouldrespect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .

(I)说明原因型

模块(2)

In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ). The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially when ( 6 ) .
Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like ( 8 ).

The impact of Television In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.

The factors for (parents\' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millionsof children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on children\'s minds are more serious than the effect on children\'s bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) .Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilitiesfor supervising their children\'s TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply .

(I)说明原因型

模块(3)

Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstratethe theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ). Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .

No one can deny another fact that ( 4 ) .You donn\'t have tolook very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5 ) . It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6 ).With reference to my standpoint ,I think ( 7 ).

注释:

1 : XX的第一个优点

2: 支持XX的做法

3:不支持XX的做法

4:XX的第二个优点

5:举例证明优点二

6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:

The importance of self-confidenceCurrently, self-confidence has been the order of the day .This does demons

trate the theory --- nothing is more valuable
than self-confidence.

It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one\'s abilities ). If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative powerto play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary, if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。

It turns out that all your plan falls through .

No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .You donn\'t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and self-confidence, the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound
influence upon ( the achievement of one\'s ambitions ).With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).


各类文体常用句型表达

说明文

某事带来的益处

1. As we all know, ________.First of all, /To begin with ,it provides us ________.Besides, /Furthermore,___________________.Most important of all,______________. Meanwhile,_____________.

All in all / In brief, we benefit a lot from _______/_____is beneficial to us all.

2. When it comes to ____, the majority of people say /When asked about ___, quite a few piople agree it has many advantages / it is really useful / of great use. Not only ___but also _____.

More importanly, _______. At the same time / And _______.Without ____, our life would be completely different. It is ___ that makes our life quite different/ colorful.

3. It is widely believed that _________.

For one thing, ________. For another/ Also ________. What’s more, __________. Finnally, _______. So we should make use of _________.

4. It is a fact that _____________. First _____.In addition ,_____and even _______. Most important of all, _____. Thanks to _____, we can_______

说明某事物,某现象的坏处

1. As we all know, _______. Not only _____but also ______. To make things worse, _____.We had better avoid _____.

2. It is clear / evident that _______. For one thing __. For another _____.Worse still,_____.Sometimes, it even ______. Therefore, personally we should stay away from ____.

词汇

do harm to sb.
do good to

be harmful to sb./sth.
be benefit to

be bad for
be good for

harm
benefit

be addicted to
be given to

contribute to sth.


make a contribution to


help to do


result in


result from


cause sb. to do sth.


lead to



议论文 观点性文章

1. 提出论点/观点

When it comes to______/When asked about ___,some people/an increasing number of people consider/agree/believe/think/share(hold)the view that /figure/insist/suggest/propose/co

me up with the idea that….

The topic “____”is becoming more and more popular recently.(两种观点或多种观点时)There are two opinions as follows.Some people agree with it.

2. 支持观点

They argure that _____.Besides/ Furthermore/Moreover ____.And they also/even say ______.

The most important thing they think is that ____.First of all/To begin with ,they say _____.In addition ______.What’s more ______.Finnally_____.

They think /view not only _____but also ______. Most important of all______.For one thing _____.For another/Also _____.More importantly _______.At the same time_______.

3. 转折到另外一些人的观点

However,others hold the opposite opinion.

On the contrary, others disagree with the view above,

On the other hand, others think ___ is their best choice,

In contrast, others don’t share the view above.

( for the following reasons )

First,____Next, _____Then, _____ Finally____

4. 结尾 谈个人观点(有的文章没有)

From my point of view I support the
As for me idea that…
As to me ===== /the former
According to me is surely a wise
As far as I’m concerned choice.

虽然

While / As/ Though /Although /Despite/In spite of

因果

because of
because

as a result of
since

thanks to
as

owing to
now that

due to
in that

on the grounds of
after all


现象---措施---个人见解

1. In recent years more and more people

In recent years “____” is becoming more and more serious, which does good / harm to us.

In the first place ____.Also,____Worse still /What’s more_____.

2. Faced up with this problem, we should take effective measures right now… 措施

By doing this , I’m confident that /I hold the firm belief that we’ll have a bright future.

人物介绍以某人经历了的时间为线索

身高 at 1.70m

体重weigh with the weight of

职业以同位语出现

in 1992 as a young man at the age of 18 while still a student five years later

the next year When he graguated, after that

日记体

This morning I as well as (together with) /___and I were doing when …

Soon… Half an hour later,

It was avout half an hour before___ After that Unexpectedly

At this moment Fortunately To my delight / joy Surprisedly

To our surprise Unfortunately Unluckily

From this experience, I understand/realize/learn a lesson that

记叙文

was/were doing …when suddenly…

was/were about to do…when suddenly…

was/were on the point of doing …when …

was/were on the way to…when…

When…

It was about

3:00 p.m.when…

It was dark that day when…
一、~~~the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) ~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。

海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had。

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V

Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V

例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education。

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much。

(再怎么强调.。。的重要性也不为过。)

例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否认的....。。)

例句:There is no denying that the qualitqualities of our living have gone from bad to worse。

不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道....。。)

例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的....。。)

例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired。

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(....。。的优点是....。。)

例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won‘t create (produce) any pollution。

使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(....。。的原因是....。。)

例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us。

我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此....。。以致于....。。)

例句:So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste it。

时间是如此珍贵,它经不起我们浪费。

十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然....。。)

例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}

虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V

~~~(愈....。。愈....。。)

例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make。

你愈努力,你愈进步。

The more books we read, the more lear

ned we become。

我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。

十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着......,....。。能够....。。)

例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。

借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。

十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (....。。使....。。能够....。。)

例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed。

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能....。。)

例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge。

我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

一、词汇注意“三原则”

A. 复杂原则

如给出的要点中的有“搜索信息”、“浏览网页”等,考生在选词时一定要精益求精。 多数考生看到“搜索”,马上反应出了"look for information" 。当然这个短语没有错,但是苏州新东方高考(论坛)写作课堂上我们一再地向学生强调“不要一味地使用小学初中词汇,而要适当地复杂化”。我们可以设想当千军万马的考生异口同声咬定“搜索信息”的英文表达是"look for information",阅卷官的审美将会出现何等程度的重度疲劳时,考生应该反省:可不可以不用look for?于是关于“寻找”的适当复杂化表达马上出来了,如"search for ,hunt for" ,时髦一点的考生甚至可以用"goggle for"。这样,平淡无奇的“寻找”马上变得“百花齐放、百家争鸣”,而考生的分数也正是由于这样一些闪光词汇的加入而扶摇直上,身价倍增。

B. 转换原则

部分考生看到“编辑文本”、“点播音乐”这样“时尚达人”般表达方式就开始眼花缭乱了。殊不知,当他们在绞尽脑汁想出对应的英文翻译时,时间老人已在暗渡陈仓。这时,如果考生能够想到“同义转换”即“不会说的绕着说,没把握的换着说”,你会发现原来“柳暗花明又一村”的境地离自己是如此地近。如:“编辑文本”无非就是对我们之前的文章进行修改,如果考生不会edit,马上想到近一点的change,或者是correct 甚至是perfect 都可以。至少考生不会有语法错误,而且不会因为用词上的纠结而延误战机。

C. 温暖原则

在苏州新东方的高考写作课堂上我们一再强调:孤独的名词用形容词来修饰,孤独的形容词可以用副词来修饰。如此文中,被cute, handy, smart等形容词修饰过的mouse 要远远比一个孤零零的mouse来得可爱。同理,被most, extremely, extraordinarily等副词修饰过的形容词effective 要比形单影只的effective来得精彩。

二、高分句型使文章“熠熠生辉”

其实,考场写作中闪光点的涌现,绝不是考生灵感或者是人品爆发的结果。它需要考生在平时的练习中不断积累、运用和总结。如表格中出现了一个“

鼠标的必要性”,伶俐的考生马上会想到一个句型:so...that 。当别的考生都在排山倒海地使用:"A mouse is necessary"这一句型时,这类考生往往会不假思索地反应出他平时贮藏的闪光句型" A mouse becomes so important in our lives that people can not suffer on-line without it. " 灵活的考生会进一步联想到这样一个倒装句:So important does a mouse become to us that people can not surf on-line without it. 更加牛的考生会想到另外一个关于hardly 引导的否定倒装句:So important does a mouse become to us that hardly anyone can live without it. 更有心的考生还会想到我们上面的词汇三原则,把平淡无奇的important 换成 "significant, vital"等高分词汇。

三、逻辑关系词使文章“行云流水”

通过表格中列出来的中文提示,考生会马上反应过来,该文分为三个层面:1.鼠标的必要性;2.鼠标的便捷性;3.鼠标的潜在坏处。逻辑关系词的准确使用能将这三个层面很好地加以衔接。比如,第一点和第二点之间是并列关系。考生可以使用平时在苏州新东方高考写作课堂上一再强调的表示承接的逻辑关系词如:What's more , Moreover, In addition, Additionally 等。在第二点和第三点之间,我们可以用"However, Nevertheless, Nonetheless 等表示转折关系的连词。同理,在进行“鼠标的便捷性”这一微观层面的剖析时,用For example , for instance, such as 等表示举例的逻辑关系词对表格中罗列出来的“收发邮件,选购商品,点播音乐,下载电影”等考点进行罗列。

总的来说,考生要达到词汇三原则的灵活运用、闪光词汇及句式的脱口而出以及逻辑关系词的信手拈来这三个标准并非一时之功,考生必须通过平时的不断积累、总结和练习才能在实战中驾轻就熟。

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