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2017年雅思写作真题分析与高分范文

2017年雅思写作真题分析与高分范文
2017年雅思写作真题分析与高分范文

◎1月7日雅思写作真题与范文解析

作文范文与解析

本题属于雅思大作文中的同意与否题型,讨论的是教育类话题--艺术教育

首段可以是题目的同义改写,然后明确表达自己观点,即自己是支持艺术教育为必修课的~

Nowadays, many people contemplate whether art classes should be compulsory courses of high school. I am convinced that it is absolutely necessary to make this idea come true as soon as possible.

第二段可以让步一下,指出艺术教育的昂贵使之成为必修课有些难度

Admittedly, the relatively high cost of art education renders it difficult to be prevalently compulsory.

可以举例子说明艺术教育的教学资源花费不菲

Take painting for instance. Due to the fact that there are various kinds of painting classes, the expenses like pigment, paintbrushes and painting paper may pose some financial burden to family where money is tight. Besides, the particular requirements of the teaching environment may further add to the overall costs of aesthetic education, making it more unaffordable.

然后话锋一转,艺术教育花费高的情况也是有方法可以解决的

Yet, the situation can be alleviated by increasing national subsidies or the lowering the expectation of constructing a fancy studio.

第三段给出支持艺术教育的第一个原因,强调可以拓宽学生知识面

Meanwhile, the merits of aesthetic education outweigh its drawback since students can have access to a wide range of knowledge through appreciating these artworks in class.

然后可以采用举例论证(exemplification)进一步论证艺术教育的生动性和深刻性

For example, compared with the limited narration in history book, one of the masterpieces of Leonardo di ser Piero da Vinci, The Last Supper, displays a scene of religion in a more vivid and profound way.

还可以增加个小点,阐述艺术教育对理科学习的互补作用

Art classes provide students with another opportunity to think and these classes are significantly complementary to some core classes such as math and science.

第四段进一步给出支持的第二个原因,即艺术教育有助提高学生综合素质,促进学生长远发展

Additionally, the underlying merits of attending art classes will benefit the students in the long run, which are no less than those of studying some core subjects.

可以进一步说理论证,指出艺术教育中习得的各项能力对学生的学业进步和工作发展有利

The abilities like to be focused, to be detail-oriented and to be persistent will be conducive to students' comprehensive ability and career development as well.

尾段对主体段的主要观点(艺术教育有助深化知识,学科互补,提高综合能力)进行总结~

In conclusion, aesthetic education should be made compulsory, for it helps deepen students' acquisition, complement other subjects and contributes to their overall competence and career progress as well.

词汇积累

1. contemplate v. 深思熟虑

2. compulsory adj. 必修的

3. appreciate v. 欣赏;鉴别

4. complementary adj. 补充的

5. comprehensive adj. 综合的

6. cultivate v. 陶冶

7. persistent adj. 坚持的8. conducive adj. 有益的

9. outweigh v. 比。。。重要10 aesthetic adj. 美学的

◎1月14日雅思写作真题与范文解析

作文范文与解析

本题属于雅思大作文中的双方讨论题型,社会类话题—工作选择

首段对比立场不同双方的观点

When it comes to the issue about job hunting, some people argue that self-achievement brought by a job is more crucial than its stability, but others contend that having a stable job may be of more importance than acquiring joy from it.

第二段可以论证工作满意度不可或缺

On one hand, satisfaction from work cannot be neglected.

段落中可以强调工作满意段给人们带来成功动力

For people who have been working for decades, salary may be not so significant because they usually have had some wealth; comparatively, mental incentive may be a better motivation for them.

第三段强调工作稳定性的重要性

On the other hand, stability is also a crucial factor for many employees.

本段中可以突出工作稳定有效预防失业等突然变故

In the current era, it is common that some companies go bankrupt suddenly and their employees become unemployed, due to which those unemployed workers may not afford the expense of their lives.

尾段总结一下,表达每个人可以依不同的个性选择合适自己工作的观点(两边平衡)

From my own perspective, whether people choose a job with stability or a job with satisfaction mostly depends on the personality they have. If people were ambitious, a job with uncertainties and challenges would be a preference for them because they could get joy from what they fight for and fulfill themselves. However, for people who want to live a quiet life, a stable job may suit them better.

词汇积累

1. contend v. 主张

2. incentive n. 激励

3. motivation n. 动机

4. breakthrough n. 突破性进展

5. unemployed adj. 失业的

6. afford v. 买得起

7. expense n. 开支8. fulfill v. 实现

◎1月21日雅思写作真题与范文解析

作文范文与解析

本题属于雅思大作文中的同意与否题型,讨论的是政府类话题—交通拥挤

首段进行简单的同义改写,然后明确表达自己不支持免费交通解决交通拥挤问题的观点~

When it comes to the issue about how to tackle traffic congestions, some people may argue that the best solution is to provide citizens with free public transport all the time. However, as far as I am concerned, such solution can hardly work.

第二段可以让步一下,指出这样做的好处–减缓交通拥堵

Admittedly, free transportation could function to reduce traffic congestions because people would decrease the use of private cars.

段末不忘话锋一转,强调弊大于利

Nevertheless, there exist more drawbacks than benefits acquired from free transportation.

第三段来讲第一个弊端:财政压力

To begin with, the government may face more economic burdens if public transportation is free.

段落中可以论证拨款不均影响其它重要民生领域的发展

Providing that the government allocates too much money to public traffic, other parts of services, such as pension for the elderly and the disabled, may not be well supported.

第四段是第二个弊端:没必要全天候免费

Furthermore, providing free public transport all the time could lead to a waste of resources.

本段论证可以突出非交通拥挤时段没必要实施免费政策

Apart from the commuting time, free public transport does not make sense because there is no congestion at all.

尾段小小总结,概括一下没有拥堵就没有必要提供免费交通,财政可能赤字的观点就好啦~

In sum, providing free public transport all the time may not be the best method to tackle traffic congestions, considering that there is no need to provide free transport when there is no congestion and the government may face financial deficit as well.

词汇积累

1. tackle v. 解决

2. congestion n. 拥挤

3. commute v. 通勤

4. optimize v. 使完善

5. allocate v. 分配

6. deficit n. 赤字

hi,各位雅思小伙伴们,经过2月的考试洗礼,是不是迫不及待想要掀开本月写作试题的庐山真面目呀~~~ 教研君在此为各位烤鸭们揭开“迷之答案”哟

首先呢,让我们来看下2月四场考试的总体情况吧~

小作文除了2.18的流程图,其它几场均是图表题,2.11为柱状图,2.16表格题,而2.25也考了柱状图,其中包含动态图。大作文除了2.18场考了科技类话题,其余3场都探讨了社会类的话题。

话不多说,上题目!

◎2月11日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1作文范文与解析

本题比较了澳大利亚不同年龄段的人们对运动的不同参与程度。虽然数据看着有些多,文字有些拗口,但只要图表题“套路”(总体趋势,极值等)在胸中,就比较容易迎刃而解啦~~

第一段可以改写下题目:

The bar chart demonstrates the data for females and males who did not take physical exercise in Australia in the year of 2005.

第二段分别概括下male和female·在体育锻炼参与度方面总体的变化趋势

常用句型或句式:

From the chart, we can see that …

with the figure increasing/dipping from xx% to xx%(具体数据)…

At the same time/ By contrast…

a similar proportion of xx(另一方)(xx%) did not take exercise.

接下来一段就要微观分析同一年龄段,male和female哪一方的体育锻炼参与度,即喜好度更高

常用句型或句式:

In terms of …

It is obvious that … while …

The same number of A and B dislike physical exercise

尾段可以总结一下这张柱状图传达的总体信息,即人越年轻,越爱锻炼,反之越老锻炼越少

Overall, it can be seen that young people aged from xx to xx took more physical exercise. On the contrary, the least of old people (xx) did sports.

Task2作文范文与解析

本题是春节过后的第一道雅思写作题目,比较爆冷,这道题目是2012年4月份的原题,但是,这道题目所代表的问法已经有将近五年没有出现过了。。。

这边总共有2个问题,那么对这两个问题都要回应到。前一个问题是论述类,后一个问题是观点类的,建议在论述完雄心对成功的作用后,选择一边倒的立场(时间紧,任务多~~)

首段简单介绍背景后,切入主题

In this contemporary era which features high pressure and fierce competitions, ambition is a powerful driving force on modern people's way to success. As the proverb goes that most people would succeed in small things if they were not troubled with great ambitions.

主体段1回应How important is ambition for being successful in life?这个问题。此次明显正面论证ambition对成功的重要性更好下手,vivid examples可以使起来,牛顿等科学艺术政坛赫赫人物都可以作为有力佐证~

It is believed that ambition is putting a ladder against sky. If Newton had no ambition to figure out why apples fall down on the earth rather than flying to the sky, gravity can never be discovered; if the allied nations in World War Two had no ambition to defeat the Nazism led by Hitler, massive slaughter would be recorded in human history. It is ambition that enables individuals to be equipped with self-motivation and self-discipline that are regarded as indispensable factors for overcoming barriers as well as resisting temptation when devoted to work or studies. Unfortunately, it is difficult for people who lose ambitions to pursue their goals or make themselves come out on the top even if their inspiration spring up every second.

主体段2在Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?选择立场,这里注意和上一段有个对应,如果上一段论述过程倾向positive,本段选择negative的立场不是很合适哟~论证过程同样可以用explanation或example等方法~

Although a heavy ambition is often thought to be connected with the greed or an addiction to power, it is not the case. Ambitious people have courage and persistence to challenge tasks which cannot be completed by ordinary people; have aspiration to break down the routine as well as to fight for what they believe in. In a large scale, the civilization of mankind would not thrive supposing that humans refuse to admit or achieve their ambitions.

尾段对全文的主要观点简要概括下~

In a word, ambition is one of the most crucial characteristics for human beings. It gives us goals and pushes us to lead a life filled with satisfaction and glory. However, the realization of personal ambition can never be at the expense of violating others' interest.

看完2月第一场的范文启迪思路还不过瘾?回复可见其余场次写作真题范文哦

◎2月16日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The tables illustrates information about the number of oversea students in Canada and the USA and how the number changed in two academic years.

As for Canada, most students came from China and the number experienced a dramatic increase by 14%, rising from 3210 to 3741. The rest of the students mainly came from the USA and India, both of which witnessed a moderate growth by 6% and 7%.

Yet the situation in the USA was quite different, with most students coming from India (10052 in 2002 and 14041 in 2003). And only a small number of students was from China, though the data rose by 7% from 1741 to 2312. 6421 students came from Canada in 2002. However, this figure had fallen to 5742 by 2003.

To sum up, compared with Canada, there were many more oversea students from these three countries and the number of students in both countries witnessed a slight increase between 2002 and 2003.(162 words)

Task2作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

第一段做同义改写~

When it comes to the issue about city layout, some people may argue that filling a city with tall buildings is an optimal choice while others believe that there should not be so many skyscrapers in a city.

第二段讲支持多来点高层建筑的好处就是促进经济发展~

On the one hand, a city full of tall buildings may have more development opportunities. It is acknowledged that high-rise buildings mean a higher spatial efficiency because those buildings could accommodate more enterprises. Then, some industrial zones or central business districts may be constructed, contributing to more working opportunities.

第三段可以说一下没那么多高层建筑的城市更有人情味~

On the other hand, residents may have a stronger sense of community if there are not so many high-rises. When people reside in tall buildings, they do not communicate with neighbors frequently. However, if there were many low-rise buildings, residents would be more likely to meet neighbors in public areas like parks where they could communicate mutually or take exercise together, but not just take an elevator to their floors and live a lonely life.

最后,两边平衡,表明不同的人适合不同的城市~

From my own perspective, vertical cities and horizontal cities have different characteristics and the key question is what kind of life one pursues. Providing that a person is ambitious to fulfill his/her life target, a vertical city may be a suitable choice because of more working opportunities there. In addition, citizens who want a higher life quality should choose to live in vertical cities since more services and high-tech products could be provided by enterprises. However, if a person prefers a quiet life, dwelling in a horizontal city should be his/her first choice since the pace of life is slow and leisurely.

◎2月18日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The proposed modification for a conference center is clearly illustrated in the given maps.

Before reconstruction, a big hall is located right in the middle of the center, with two meeting rooms located to its west and a car park to its southeast with a long path connecting the road. Next to the car park, a mini-garden lies in the northeastern corner of the center while a toilet, a reception and a cafe,with one adjacent to another,are situated in the southwest.

In the future,the center will experience huge changes. The big hall will be downsized to make room for a newly-built kitchen and the relocation of the cafe. The car park, similarly, will be redesigned to leave room for the expanded garden and make parking more convenient with two newly-constructed paths near the road. The meeting rooms will shrink in size but increase in number and a fitting room will occupy the place of cafe.

Overall, the conference center is projected to become more user-friendly.(178 words)

Task2作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

Over the past century, science and technology has been developing unprecedentedly and changing every aspect of people's lives. In my point of view, technology brings about higher efficiency and greater convenience, even though it causes confusion and disorder under some circumstances.

The benefits of modern technologies are multiple. Automation is widely used on the assembly line, setting free millions of people from the arduous and repetitive work. Thanks to the widespread use of the Internet, people have easier access to information than ever before. Instead of going to the library to consult reference books, they can acquire any information they want via the Internet. Moreover, emails and mobile phones enable people to stay in touch more conveniently and efficiently, compared with the old days when they had to go to the post office or visit others in person.

Despite the above-mentioned benefits, we cannot deny the fact that technology may lead to complexity and inconvenience in some cases. For instance, some old people find it difficult to use public facilities equipped with electronic-devices. However, this issue can be addressed with clear instructions provided. Another example is cyber fraud, which is difficult to prevent as the false information can spread very fast on the web. Those who get deceived may complain that the virtual space generates more crimes.

Overall, there is no denying that some problems and troubles may occur when various new technologies are applied to people's lives. However, returning to a simple life without technology is not a solution and I believe a better future of mankind lies with the further progress of science and technology.(268 words)

◎2月25日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The given bar charts compare the difference of population density in six countries in the year of 2003 and illustrate the population changes in these countries during the period of 2003 to 2005. It can be seen clearly that Japan ranked the first in density of population and Sweden was the only country that experienced negative population growth.

As is revealed in the first chart, Japanese lived much closer to each other with a total of 338 people living in one square kilometer, followed by British and Italy. By contrast, the population density in Australia and Canada were quite low (both were 3).

The second chart indicates that the period from 2003 to 2005 witnessed an overall upward trend in population across the board with Sweden the only country bucking the trend. To be more specific,

Australia and Canada experienced the most dramatic increase by 1.42% and 1.06% respectively, while there was a less significant raise in other three countries.

Overall, even though Australia and Canada had relatively low population density, their populace were soaring with an astonishing rate.(191 words)

Task2作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

Traditionally,it is widely believed that public funds should be put into essential sectors that bring immediate and tangible benefits but in recent years,the technology boom has introduced us a seemingly promising field: study on aliens.

The investment on extraterrestrial beings, undeniably, can better prepare mankind for the future both technologically and emotionally. Tracing, analyzing and studying the extraterrestrial intelligence allows us to embrace alien technology since human beings,living on this relatively young planet,have incredible inventions and creatures on much older planets are highly likely to possess superior device. Additionally, we temporarily have no clue about the nature of these hypothetical aliens and it is unwise to assume they are friendly. Spending money in studying them enables us to learn their intrinsic quality and to know whether we should open our arms or put up shields when they pay us a visit.

On the other hand, it is argued that this investment is money-wasting when living beings on the earth are struggling for environment degradation and food crisis. The former, like smog and soil contamination, has posed a threat to people's health condition and even survival. As for the latter,many people stricken by poverty are suffering from starvation and diseases brought by malnutrition. As it is government's unshakable responsibility to ensure citizens' physical and emotional well-being, allocating public money in environment protection and food supply is thought to be a must.

In conclusion, both sectors have their reasons for requiring money and I believe it is better to invest in solving urgent problems like environmental issues and food shortage since it may lead to chaos and social instability if policymakers fail to settle these problems.(298 words)

◎3月4日雅思写作真题与范文解析

流程图难度不大,只要看懂步骤,按照一般套路写作即可。

题目总共有八个步骤,关键在于对步骤进行分类。在范文里将1,2,3,4归为一个段落,因为都是描述制作熏鱼之前的准备,5为一段,是从鱼变成熏鱼的过程,6,7和8为第三段,描述了熏鱼制作完成后的分类运输。当然,有其它的分类方法也可。不过以不超过四段为宜。

**小作文要客观,有什么就写什么,切记主观推断。

Task1作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The flow diagram demonstrates eight steps of making smoked fish. The first step is to killing fish and then empty the fish. The second step is to preserve fish in salt and water, which will cost thirty minutes. Then, fish will be fired for five minutes before being put into a fish bucket.

The first four steps provide a good preparation for the fifth step and also the most important process which is called smoking. The fish bucket is made of wood. The burning coal is at the bottom of the whole bucket, and covered by a layer of sawdust. The space between sawdust and the top of bucket is packed with fish.

After the smoking step, all fishes will be divided into two types. One type is smoking fish which will be packed in boxes and the other type will be further processed by yellow coloring and then packed into buckets. Finally, all the boxes and buckets will be loaded into trucks. (162 words)

Task2作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

第一段做同义改写,表明态度~

In the current era, there is a phenomenon that the current generation does not hold a positive view of study when they leave school. This essay will examine the possible reasons and potential solutions for this phenomenon.

第二段,提一下理论和实际的差距,让一些人觉得学习没用

To begin with, students do not know how to use what they learn, which makes them dislike study. Currently, some students are satisfied with what they have learned from the class, but actually there exists a huge gap between what one learns and what one can do. For example, if a mechanic just learns everything from a manual theoretically, it does not necessarily mean that she or he could successfully fix a car immediately. Thus, in lack of internship and working experience, students may find that lessons given by teachers cannot be directly used in work and it is natural for them to neglect study on purpose.

第三段强调学习好不是成功的唯一原因,可以以高分低能的学霸为例,讲一下只擅长学习的他们的窘境~

Additionally, study is not the only factor for success. Some students regard academic performances as a guarantee for job seeking, but they may neglect other crucial factors. For example, communicative skills are emphasized in almost every enterprise currently. If a person does not know how to cooperate and coordinate with peers, even if he or she has a good academic performance, they may not be accepted by enterprises. Thus, it is the ignorance of social skills that makes some candidates fail to secure employment, but they may attribute their failure to learning.

第四强调下实习的重要性~

In order to spark young people’s interest in studying and alter t heir negative attitude towards study, universities and colleges should provide them with more internship opportunities before graduation, through which they could link what they learn in class with practice. Then, after graduation, they could secure employment in a shorter time with their working experience. Meanwhile, when they do internships, it is an excellent opportunity for them to learn how to communicate with their workmates, improving their ability to cooperate and coordinate.

最后一段小总结就好啦~

In sum, lacking working experience and social skills may account for the reason why young people do not want to learn when they leave school and universities and colleges should take this responsibility and provide more internship positions to them.

看完3月第一场的范文启迪思路后,是不是对其余3场充满好奇呀~建议先自己尝试写下作文再看答案哦

◎3月18日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The given two charts illustrate how the value of trade between China and Australia has changed from 1998 to 2004 as well as how the trade volume of four types of goods imported from China to Australia varied between 2003 and 2004.

It can be seen clearly from the first chart that the given period witnessed an increasing trend in both imports and exports. To be more specific, the former tripled from $6 to $18 billion while the latter experienced a less significant increase, rising from $4 to slightly more than $10 billion.

As for the second picture, it indicates that all types of imported goods gained popularity except clothing, which was the most popular in 2003 but replaced by toys and sports goods one year later. Despite a slight increase ($500 to $ 800 billion), furniture stilled ranked last. The trade volume of telecommunication goods, on the other hand,rose much more dramatically from $1500 to $ 2500 billion.

Overall, the net exports in Australia were negative and the deficit was gradually increasing from 1998 to 2004 and the toys and sports goods were the most welcomed in 2004. (200 words)

Task2作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

Traditionally, classroom-based education was the main source of knowledge but in recent years, it is not uncommon that children are taking advantage of the television to study. Consequently, it is suggested that they watch TV programs both in and out of school. In my opinion, it is beneficial for their all-round development despite some drawbacks.

Initially, the educational programs on TV can help to consolidate knowledge learnt in class. For example, documentary and public service advertisement about the environment,usually shown at dinner, can disseminate information about our great mother nature and the environment problems facing today's world. This can be more impressive than lessons in their textbooks.

The entertaining programs during lunch break at school can also facilitate their learning. To be more specific,most of the entertainments aiming at children are inventive and fantastic. The

vibrant colors and brilliant ideas can always attract them easily and contribute to developing their creativity and innovation before they realize it.

Some may worry that the unhealthy information on TV, like violence and pornography, would mislead students, who are often considered as having no strong sense of right and may imitate the wrongdoings blindly. However, this can be avoided if strict censorship is enforced to grade the programs and ensure that students are enjoying appropriate shows when it is their TV time and that is exactly why they should watch TV in a regular manner.

In conclusion, television programs benefit students both academically and spiritually and they should be allowed to watch TV as long as they are protected from the malicious information.

(280 words)

◎3月25日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The chart provides information about the proportion of people who need to be taken care of in 5 nations in 2000 and 2050.

In four countries, the percentages of dependents are projected to increase, albeit to widely varying degrees. In Indonesia and China, there were approximately 32% of the elder and the minor. By 2050, these figures are expected to increase to around 34%. However, in both Korea and Japan, a slightly larger increment is expected: from 25% to 48% (Korea) and from 31% to 49% (Japan), which is also the largest projection for 2050. The situation in India is quite different, whose percentage of the dependents is predicted to decrease by 7% (38% in 2000 vs 31% in 2050). In terms of the situation of the whole world, 32% people need to be looked after, but the predicted percentage in 2050 is higher at around 41%.

To sum up, for Indonesia, China, Korea, Japan and the whole world, there is estimated to be more and more people requiring care.

(170 words)

Task2作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

Some people hold the opinion that the main purpose of teachers’ existence is to offer information. However, students in current society can have access to a lot of information, so teachers are not as significant as before. I totally disagree with this statement.

Initially, the Internet provides students with abundant information and makes the process of obtaining information more efficient, convenient and interesting and in this sense, teachers seems dispensable. For example, if a student wants to know the history of French, he can easily find sufficient information, which ranges from vivid pictures to profound paper. Nevertheless, only with teachers, can students gain a better understanding of the knowledge. That is to say, teachers can select the most suitable information, no matter where the information comes from and employ different strategies suited to the particular group of pupils.

Apart from the most obvious function of teachers discussed above, teachers play a key role in moral education and social skills learning. The competition in modern society is so fierce that only being equipped with academic knowledge is not adequate. Under the guidance of teachers,

2017年雅思写作真题

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