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高考英语书面表达(作文)十篇

高考英语书面表达(作文)十篇
高考英语书面表达(作文)十篇

请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values.

During winter, the sky is still dark at 6:30 a.m. when the first-year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165-acre campus and it can take up to an hour.

Mr. Sun, the university official, said labor is good for building character and promotes “the spirit of hard work.”Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus. They never litter because they've been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others.

Some students, however, are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction. Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。

2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1) 支持或反对这个学校的做法;(2) 用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作要求】

1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据。

2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句。

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

4. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

支持:

One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits. Some people support the program while others do not.(30)

Generally, I am in favor of the practice. To begin with, through their effort, students provide a clean and comfortable environment, which, as a result, is an assurance of their successful academic life. Moreover, cleaning and labor can not only serve to build students' character but also contribute positively to students developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits. Last but not least, by enjoying the fruits of others' labor, students will develop the awareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor.

In short, carrying out the cleaning program is crucial. The significance for students of participating in it means more than academic success. It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as the campus. (120)

反对:

It is required by one university in Zhengzhou that students should clean the campus every morning to achieve class credits. Opinions on the practice vary widely from person to person.(30)

I am strongly opposed to the practice for the following reasons. First of all, cleaning tends to take up too much time, which becomes a distraction for students and discourages them from focusing on their academic performances. Then, students can be encouraged to maintain clean living areas but it's unreasonable to relate the cleaning with the academic credits. As students, they should put more efforts into their studies to achieve class credits instead of sweeping the campus. Furthermore, though someone claims labor can contribute to developing the spirit of hard work, it should by no means be achieved through daily floor-sweeping.

In conclusion, there is no sense in students sweeping the campus, for it benefits neither their character nor study.(120)

你的朋友Linda在美国攻读环保专业硕士,在最近给你的e-mail中,她对于明年毕业后是回家乡发展还是

参考词汇:environmental protection环保专业preferential policy优惠政策

注意:

1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Dear Linda

In your e-mail you say you are not sure whether to return home or not after graduation.I think it is better for you to come back

I hope what I have written here can be of some help to you. All the best!

Yours

Mary

Dear Linda

In_your_e-mail_you_say_you_are_not_sure_whether_to_return_home_or_not_after_graduation._I_think_it_is_bett er_for_you_to_come_back.

To begin with, our hometown is badly in need of talents specialized in environmental protection with the development of economy. Waste water here needs treating in a better way, as is the rubbish. So to attract talents like you, many preferential policies are adopted here. If you start a business, it will be easier for you to get loans and you don't have to pay so much tax. In addition, old people prefer living in an environment they are familiar with. When working back home, you will be able to keep your parents company, helping them to enjoy their old age.

Of course, you have a lot to do now to begin well here. For example, you have to master advanced technology. It is also necessary for you to gain enough working experience. What's more, you will have to make an informed decision of what you will be devoted to.

I_hope_what_I_have_written_here_can_be_of_some_help_to_you._All_the_best!

Yours

Mary

请根据你对漫画的理解,以“What you see depends on the way you look at the world”为主题,用英语写一篇作文。

你的作文应包括以下内容:

1. 简要描述漫画的内容。

2. 概述你对图中不同做法的理解。

3. 结合实际生活举例说明该漫画对你的启示。

注意:1. 可参照图片适当发挥。2. 作文词数150左右,第一句已给出,不算入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas._

As_is_shown_in_the_caricature,_two_men_are_painting_on_the_canvas. They are looking out of the same window, but one of them has drawn nothing but the bars which block his view, while the other has painted the beautiful scenery in the distance.

The message conveyed here is clear: “What you see depends on the way you look at the world.” Pos itive thinking leads to positive action and reaction. In order to experience more happiness, we may need to change our way of thinking.

At the start of Senior Three, I woke up every morning feeling depressed, thinking of the much schoolwork to do. My friend Lee came to me and made me realize the best part about schooling —time spent together with classmates fighting for dreams. Ever since then I have learnt to look at my daily life from a different angle and cherish what I have. Change the way we view the world, and we'll change our life.

(150 words)

右图反映的是网络时代引发的一种现象:微博使用者越来越多,有些因此成了“微博控”。请根据你对该漫画的理解写一篇英语短文,描述漫画内容,分析微博流行的原因,并就可能带来的问题发表你的观点。

注意:

1. 词数:150左右,开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。

2.短文中不得提及本人姓名和所在学校。

3.参考词汇:micro-blogging addict微博控;refresh刷新

The picture describes a typical blogging addict, who

The_picture_describes_a_typical_micro-blogging_addict,_who is still refreshing his micro-blogging even in the bathroom. Ridiculous as the picture looks, it mirrors a real social phenomenon that micro-blogging addicts spend too much time and energy focusing on and updating their micro-blogging.

There are many reasons for the widespread of micro-blogging. Firstly, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings almost anywhere and anytime. Secondly, it provides a chance for people to release their inner emotions and stress, through which their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort and suggestions.

However, micro-blogging addiction can be potentially dangerous. It might lead to people's poor health, and even have a negative influence on their normal life and work. Besides, micro-blogging addicts lack face-to-face communication with people around them in real life. Taking all these factors into consideration, people should be aware of the disadvantages when enjoying micro-blogging.

书面表达(五)

请阅读下面一篇Chinadaily英文报forum论坛中的一篇短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章,向该报投稿,阐述你自己的看法。

With the widespread use of technologies like GPS and Internet-connected cameras,parents can now keep an eye on their children wherever they are.

The combination of high-tech tools and highly-protective parents has set off the creation of a GPS-equipped wristwatch that allows parents to listen in real time to what their children are doing. The device has caused complaints from teachers since some parents began equipping their children with the watch so they can listen in on what happens at school.

A teacher surnamed You at a well-known primary school in Pudong New Area discovered someone was eavesdropping(偷听)on her lessons after a parent of one of her students posted something she said online while class was still on. You soon found out the parent had given her child a watch that could send out the sounds in the classroom to her mobile phone. Soon,other parents decided to equip their own children with the devices.

You was annoyed to find out her students' parents were spying on her. It made her feel as if they distrusted her. After You told her fellow teachers what had happened,they discovered that some of their students were also wearing the watches.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词完成上文的概要,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点,你应当:

(1)阐述你对家长如此运用高科技产品的看法。

(2)用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作要求】

1. 写作时不能直接引用原文语句。

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

To keep an eye on their children,nowadays________________________________________________________________

To_keep_an_eye_on_their_children,_nowadays many parents are using a high-tech wristwatch when they are at school. Despite its convenience to the parents, teachers hold an negative attitude as they feel their lessons are spied on.

Generally, I stand on the teacher's side. To begin with, those parents are caring too much for their children. Children are sent to school just to learn to be independent. With parents' 24 hour care, how can they? Secondly, wearing the wristwatch which often sends out sounds, it's unavoidable students will be distracted in class, resulting in their underachievement in study. Last but most importantly, just as the teachers have argued, this equipment is a symbol of distrust in schools and an invasion of privacy to teachers and other students. No one can base their own convenience on others' inconvenience.

Due to the above-mentioned reasons, I don't support those parents' practice.

书面表达6

请阅读下面短文,并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

If you logged on to weibo, chances are that there is lots of news about the Ice Bucket Challenge videos. Many celebrities, including US President Barack Obama and Chinese actress Zhang Ziyi, have already taken the challenge.

The Ice Bucket Challenge—dump ice water on your head, post and tag yourself on social media and challenge others to do the same. It's initial objective was fundraising and bringing awareness to the Amyotrophic Lateral Sclerosis (ALS) Association in the US.

But has it achieved anything?

The figures say it did. During the month of August, 2014, in America alone, ALS received over $98 million—a big jump compared to the $2.7 million donated during the same period last year.

But the Ice Bucket Challenge has its critics. It's been very celebrity-orientated and it plays into our culture of putting everything about ourselves out there on social media. Some people have obviously done it to raise their profile(关注度). Charity has become big business. Pity they can't let the cause speak for itself.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。

2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1) 支持或反对“冰桶挑战”。

(2) 用2至3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作要求】

1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据。

2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句。

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

4. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

The Ice Bucket Challenge, intended to help ALS patients, is simple: One pours a bucket of icy water over his or her head and then challenge others to do so. It leaves room for debate.

There is no denying that the challenge has raised people's awareness to contribute to the ASL Association. But I'm not for this kind of practice in that it has turned from a charitable activity into a show. Some celebrities just do it to gain popularity; some others participate in it just to follow the trend. On top of that, they ignore how bad the ALS patients will feel when they watch those videos. Besides, it is a great waste of water since the world is facing another challenge—the water crisis.

In summary, it is not a wise choice to show our caring for the ALS patients that way. Instead, we should take action in some other practical ways.

How many times have you heard the expression that most people spend more time planning their vacation than they do planning their lives. I would expand that expression by adding that most people spend more time “thinking” about their vacation than they do thinking about what's important in their life.

While rest and relaxation are a must in living a balanced life, it's not what we were created to do. After all, the Master Creator took his R&R (Rest and Recreation) on the seventh day, only after six days of “definitely directed thought.”

Wallace D. Wattles, wrote “There is no labor from which most people shrink as they do from that of sustained and contin uous thought; it is the hardest work in the world.” And yet it is the first and primary labor of achievement.

What is your life's purpose or your personal mission statement? Is it written down? Do you review it and think about it often? Is your life organized around your purpose and a set of goals that support that purpose?

Without purpose and goals —definitely directed thought —you are like the proverbial “ship without a rudder(舵).” There is power in your purpose and in your goals. It is the power that takes you over obstacles, the fuel that pushes you toward the life you expect.

[写作内容]1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。2. 用约120词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1) 读完这篇文章后,你对目标的认识是什么?(2) 你的近期(short-term)和远期(long-term)目标分别是什么?(3) 为了实现你的目标,你现在打算怎么做?

[写作要求]1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构故事。2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不得直接引用原文语句。

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

4. 不必写标题。

Despite the fact that constructing your future with goals is tough, it does make a difference during the process of your life, as it guarantees your right direction of constant achievements.

Personally, it can never be too true that life can not shine without goals. No matter what you do, so long as you are determined to achieve, goals are necessary.

Everybody has his own goals with no exception of me. Being a man useful to society is my long-term goal. However, at present, to an ideal university is undoubtedly my desire. Few people can survive well unless equipped with abundant knowledge.

In an effort to realize my dream, hard work seems the best and only choice. Not only will I make my study plans in detail, but the most important is to put my plans into real action. Only with great efforts can I attain further education and eventually step into future with great confidence.

High school students in Victoria, Australia have been offered Education Department advice ahead of their written exams. The advice has been developed by the state Education Department together with a mental health organization. “Exams can be a stressful time and the government is ensuring that students have the support they need to get through the period,”Education Minister Martin Dixon said.

Students are advised to breathe deeply through their noses as a relaxation technique, to have a healthy diet, and to improve their mood by exercising. The importance of sleep, staying connected with family and friends, and planned study times are emphasized. Students will also learn “positive self-talk”. “The positive way that you talk to yourself can be used for greater confidence and reducing stress, and can be a very effective way to prepare yourself for a big test or exam,”students are told.

The tips encourage young people to speak up if they are having difficulty, and remember that life will go on beyond exams. At the same time, students with serious problems are urged to seek professional help.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。

2. 用约120个单词对文中所述话题进行讨论,内容包括:

(1) 你学习或生活中面对怎样的压力。

(2) 你正在或打算如何应对这些压力。

【写作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

____________________________________________________________

Local authorities in Victoria, Australia have provided their students with practical advice in a bid to help them to better handle the stress from the approaching exams.

We can run into stress in our life on various occasions. As for me, maths used to cause a lot of trouble, and has long been a headache. Despite the large amount of effort and time I devoted, I just kept messing up in almost all the exams. It was so painful and depressed that I even started to believe maths was never my thing.

Thanks to my parents and my maths teacher, whose support and advice have increased my confidence over the past several months, I have worked out a detailed plan to help manage my time and have tried to adopt useful learning strategies. Hopefully, with consistent efforts in class and regular revision at home, I will catch up and make steady progress.

(152 words)

Don't worry if you have problems! If you're breathing, you have difficulties. It's the way of life. And believe it or not, most of your problems may actually be good for you!

The lagoon(环礁湖) side of the Great Barrier Reef looks pale and lifeless, while the ocean side is lively and colorful. The reason is that the coral(珊瑚) around the lagoon side is in still water, with no challenge for its survival. It dies early. The coral on the ocean side is constantly being tested by wind, waves and storms. It has to fight for survival every day of its life. As it is challenged and tested it changes and adapts. It grows healthy. It grows strong. And it reproduces.

That's how it is with people. Challenged and tested, we come alive! Like coral struck by the waves, we grow. Physical demands can cause us to grow stronger. Mental and emotional stress can produce strength and patience. Spiritual testing can produce strength of character and faithfulness.

So, you have problems—no problem! Just tell yourself, “There I grow again!”

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。

2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1) 你在生活中遇到的2~3个问题;(2) 就如何对待或解决你的问题,谈谈你的理解和想法。

【写作要求】

1. 发表观点时必须提供理由或论据。

2. 阐述观点或叙述经历时,不能直接引用原文语句。

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

4. 不必写标题。

Corals on the ocean side are stronger than those on the lagoon side because they go through various challenges, which reflects our life and inspires us to face problems bravely.

There is no denying that life is full of challenges. I have a sense of anxiety about study. At times I have trouble communicating with my parents, and at other times there is misunderstanding between my friends and me. Once in a while, I feel it difficult to live my dreams.

In face of difficulties, I think, it is our attitudes that matter. We should keep in mind that challenge means not only hardship but also opportunity. Fighting against difficulty will finally make us strong, confident and successful. So, I won't escape from my problems but try to solve them by improving my learning methods and exchanging ideas with my parents and friends. I'm sure I'll achieve my goal someday.

(完整版)高三英语作文练习及范文

作为一个高三学生,你学业繁重,而你的父母工作都很忙,一家人少有时间进行沟通,你觉得这样的家庭是不快乐的,所以决定写一封信给你的父母,内容包括: 1、现状; 2、你对现状的感受; 3、你的建议 Dear Mum and Dad, It seems that it has been a long time since we sat down to communicate with each other last time. There is no doubt that I am under the pressure of studying while you are busy with your own jobs. As a result, there is little possibility of us chatting to exchange ideas. What makes me upset is not only plenty of homework but also our poor relationship. I think it’s time that some measures were taken to solve the problem. Now, it’s obvious that homework always makes me tired out, so it is of great importance to keep myself in high spirits to get along well with you. In addition, whether our relationship can be improved depends to some extent on your efforts. Mum and Dad, in spite of your busy jobs and my tough study load, we should spare some time to communicate with each other more. And what’s more important, let’s make use of our chatting time to solve the problems we meet in life and study. I am firmly convinced that with our efforts, our family is sure to become a better place for us to enjoy each other. Yours Sincerely, … 1.The more communication we have, the smaller the generation gap will be. 2.It is a long time since we talked with each other last time. 3.It is no doubt not good for our relationship and some measures should be taken to change the circumstance. 4.So lonely and sad did I feel when I found such serious problems between us. 5.There is no denying that I am under the pressure of study while you devote most of your time to your work. 6.It is with your help that I can get over a lot of problems. 7.It is high time that we set aside some time to communicate with each other. 8.I have some good ideas to share with you. 9.Taking all these factors into account, I think our family should spend some time talking with each other. 10.Going on a picnic or seeing a film at weekends might be a good idea. 11.Under no circumstances should we ignore each other.

2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧

2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧 2018-08-10英语:高考书面表达解析及写作技巧一、解读书面表达书面表达是一个综合性题目,要求考生根据所给图画、图表、提纲(或者开放性)等,运用所学知识将提示信息组成句子,句子连成段,段连成篇。 它不断要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识,而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。 它也是一种融形式、文体、交际三位于一体的试题,所考查内容都体现在表达和传递信息的交流能力,因此,书面表达有交流性、实用性、合理性等特点。 近几年来高考书面表达正在一步步地向考试要考语言运用能力这一方向改进,并采用了新的评分标准,因此要求考生语言的准确性和得体性,注重上、下文连贯,注重表达方式多样化。 新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式,运用过渡性词汇增强文章连贯性。 如果考生在表达中只是运用了简单句,虽然表达了要求的信息,那么得分也不会高。 因此,近几年高考要求考生掌握词汇要丰富,句式表达要复杂,适当地使用情感性语言。 二、各种题型的应试对策1图画作文要求考生首先仔细观察,读懂图意,抓住要点,按图片顺序编拟提纲,同时要注意图片所给的时

间、背景等相关信息,确定写作的人称、时态和语态。 在写作时还要适当地使用一些关联词、过渡句来加工润色,使文章层次清楚、通顺畅达。 这种作文的难点在于要求考生能自己编拟出合适的要点,并且表达上要连贯。 2图表作文要求考生能分析把握该图表要表达的内容,确定主题,然后从图表中归纳出相应要点来写作。 这种作文能有效考查考生的篇章结构组织能力,要求写作具有逻辑性。 3提纲作文要求考生首先将所给出的要点进行组织,按照一定的逻辑顺序用明白、恰当、得体的语言来表达;要尽量消除汉语式的英文表达。 这种作文切忌逐字逐句汉译英,使得文章支离破碎,不忍卒读。 相对来说,这种作文难度相对较小。 4(半)开放性作文要求考生能根据相当简短的提示来写作;或者要求续写一段文字,或者写出你的感想等等。 这种形式为考生张扬个性提供了空间,答案不唯一,淋漓尽致地考查了考生发散思维和创新思维能力。 它还可能包括改写、缩写等其他形式。 近年来不少自主命题省(市)的高考试题有向(半)开放性过渡的趋势。

高考英语作文写作技巧

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