雅思4-5小作文分析

剑4

Test 1

Modal answer

题型：表格题描述不同家庭类型贫困比例，描述主要信息并进行适当对比

首段: 首段对题目中已给的信息段进行了改写

shows-gives proportion-breakdown(分解) categories-types

families living in poverty-families who were living in poverty (定语-定语从句)

中间段：数据分类：single or couple, with children or without children, aged or not

1. 一句话介绍总体数据11%，1837000（alomost 2million）主要数据

介绍，联系数据21% 和19%，二倍关系，而且都是single类型的

2. couple类型的数据介绍,with or without children的对比。

3. aged or not类型数据的对比

结尾段：对总体数据的趋势进行总结。

写作思路：1. 观察数据，对数据进行分类及转化，最重要的一点把sole parent 转化成single with children

2. 数据分成三类后，进行横纵描述，并对关键数据进行对比。

3. 数据整体从大到小进行介绍。

词汇: comprise respectively

However overall

句型：be in the position

be better off

It is noticeable that

the trend favored

be likely to be

Test 2

Sample answer 6分

题型：组合图（曲线图和饼状图的组合），描述主要信息并进行适当对比

首段：进行了适当改写，但过于啰嗦，可以将首句去掉，直接用一句描述。比如；

The grapgh descirbes the typical daily demand for electricity in winter and summer in England, and the below pie chart gives information about what the electricity is used for in an average England household.

中间段：曲线图描述了波峰和波谷，及整体数据趋势, 但数据描述的过于仔细。

但缺乏对整体winter 和summer 的对比。Overall, the electricity demand

in winter times is higher than summer times.

饼状图述了每个部分所占的比例，但描述同样过于仔细而缺乏分析。应

该对数据进行适当联系,比如有两个15%。

结尾：文章应该联系下曲线图与饼状图的数据Based on the analysis of gragh and pie chart, we can see that the large electricity demand for heating in

winter times in an average England home constitutes the main reason for the

higher electricity demand in winter times than summer times.

文章存在的问题：段落划分不够合理清晰。

缺乏数据对比与联系。

用词不够准确。

解题思路：看懂坐标，抓住关键数据，对比数据，联系两个图表。

Modal answer

题型：复杂柱状图，描述主要信息并进行适当对比。

首段: 首段对题目中已给的信息段进行了改写

已给信息是一个并列句，可以将信息整合成一个复杂句，进行理解。

Shows-gives information to reach 这个词用的比较好。

也可以换个方式改写

The chart describes the proportion of men and women who got different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia in 1999.

The chart describes the different levels of post-school qualifications according to gender in Australia in 1999.

中间段：数据分类：male or female, different levels of post-qualification

1. 按照男女对比的方式对不同level 的学历进行描述。

2. 先描述整体数据趋势，就是男女有很大的不同，substantial

differences。

3. 然后按照差别程度，先描述差别最大的再描述其他。

结尾段：按照学历高低分类后总结男女的不同，进行对比。

写作思路：这个柱状图数据相对简单明了，重点就是抓住男女的不同，进行分析但最怕出现句型的重复，需要注意词汇与句型的多样性。

词汇: in terms of

substantial difference

marginally

outnumber 动词，数目超过

counterparts

by contrast compared with

reach the level of

句型：The biggest gender differences is at the lowest post-school level, where …..were men.

The gender difference is smallest at the level of ……..

Sample answer 5分

题型：组合图（曲线图和柱状图的组合），描述主要信息并进行适当对比

首段：进行了适当改写，但信息点不够清楚，如时间区间，应加以说明。而且开篇就出现语法错误，information 是不可数名词，前面的an 应该去掉。

The graphs reveal inforamtion about visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the five most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

中间段：曲线图描述时对million这个单词的理解出现问题，million 是指人数而非钱数。曲线的走势描述的很清楚，但increase 这个词的使用出现很

大问题，这个词不可用作被动语态。

饼状图的数据描述过于单一，没有进行一定对比。

USA ranks three,accounting for one third of France.

结尾：文章缺乏一定的总结和联系。

From two graphs, we can see the increasing passion of UK residents to go

abroad, especially to countries that are near to it.

文章存在的问题: 缺乏数据对比与联系

I语法使用存在一些问题

句型过于单一

解题思路：看懂坐标，抓住关键数据，对比数据，联系两个图表。

Modal Answer

Test 1

题型：复杂曲线图，描述主要信息并进行适当对比。

首段: 首段对题目中已给的信息段进行了改写并简单描述了走势。

并对2040年的数据进行了描述，此信息可放在首段也可以放在中间段或者尾端。

中间段：1. 描述数据七点，1940年时三个国家的老龄化程度。

2. 因为数据较多，选取了中间时间，1990年的数据进行描述，并进行

一定的归类，将Sweden 和US总结成western countries.

结尾段：描述了到2040年前后的趋势，特别是日本，数据出现了急速增长。

并再次强调了到2040年三国的老龄化程度相近。

写作思路：这个复杂曲线图，时间点有点多，不可能一一描绘，抓住关键的起止点，并简单的对中间的走势进行描述。

词汇: ageing population

Stand at

dip to

grow to

fluctuation

figures

连词；in spite of , however

句型：be predicted be expected to

Sample Answer 8分

题型：复杂柱状图，描述主要信息并进行适当对比。

首段: 文章缺乏一个简单的信息介绍，直接描述表格。

The charts describe two main reasons for study among five age groups of

students and the corresponding support from employers.

中间段：1. 描述第一个柱状图，包括数据变化趋势，和一部分的信息对比。

2. 描述第二个柱状图，简单介绍了数据变化趋势。

结尾段：对两个柱状图进行联系分析

写作思路：这两个柱状图相对信息比较清晰，按照表格顺序对关键信息进行描述，并在最后进行图表联系。

词汇: decrease/ increase with …….

study for study stemming from study out of career-focused study

conversely

adulthood

drop rapidly

career-focused study

文章有一个很大的长处就是词汇与句型的多样性。

Modal Answer

Test 3

题型：比较难的地图题。

首段: 对地图信息进行了简短的介绍

中间段：1. 先介绍第一个地点, 包括位置和可能的交通工具.

2. 接着介绍第二个地点, 以及可能的交通和周围环境.

结尾段：总结地址一与地址二的位置，提出最适合的地址。

写作思路：地图题的行文思路较为清晰，难度在于如何看懂地图并准确的根据地址来描述周围信息。

词汇: potential

Off the main road

Theoretically

Surrounding towns

Test 4

Sample answer

题型：表格题

首段：对题目进行了简单的改写

Gives-shows details

About-regarding

中间段：1. 根据表格，有三类信息，包括date opened, kilometers of route, passengers per year

2. 关键信息，包括时间最早，最晚，路线最长最短，乘客最多最少

来抓住关键信息，并进行简要的数据对比与分析。

结尾段：总结数据总体提点，概括出the underground railway systems vary a lot. 写作思路：虽然数据较多，但关键数据很容易找出，可以在关键数据的基础上进行进一步的描述。

词汇：serves

In terms of

As predicted

Followed by

问题在于有些句型有点重复

2015年6月6日 雅思大作文解析

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