2017高考英语书面表达投诉信写作

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A letter of complaint

Passage structure:

提出问题---说明具体情况---提出解决问题的办法

投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾；实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切记不要夸大其词；指出问题引起的后果；提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施，或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。组织提纲时要遵循“三步走”的写作规律：

第一段：表明来信所要投诉的问题，尽可能做到客观礼貌，给读信人留下好印象。应该记住读信人不一定就是错误的责任人，他的合作对事情的最终圆满解决有着非常重要的作用。

第二段：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由，也可以说问题的具体体现方式。

第三段：提出解决方案，不需展开。这段应体现书信的礼貌原则，可以用类似“如果你能……，我将十分感激”这样的表达方式。还要注意做到公平、公正。

Useful sentence patterns

1.I am writing to complain about…\ I am writing to make a complaint about…\

I am w riting to express my dissatisfaction about…

2.There is something wrong with… I bought. For one thing, ..…; for another

thing …

3.I can hardly bear \tolerate …any more.

4.I hope you can consider my suggestions and improve the situation

5.I trust you will take this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the

recurrence of this kind.

6.I would like to have a refund(退款) or a replacement（更换）as soon as possible. 段尾常用语：

(1)It would be highly appreciated if you could…

(2)I believe you will take my complaints seriously and…

(3)I hope you will give due attention to this matter.

(4)I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.

(5)I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly…

(6)I would appreciate it very much if you could…

第一篇Samples

假设你是李华，你新买的某外国品牌MP3出了故障，现你写信到其公司反映问题：购买日期：上个月故障：一周前屏幕坏了，看不见屏幕内容已跟当地销售商家投诉，但

其不能解决要求：更换一台新的，如不行则要求退货，拿回货款。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about the cell phone produced by your company. Out of my satisfaction, the cell phone I bought last month broke down a week ago. I cannot see anything on the screen, which has a great effect on my daily life and my work. Much to my disappointment, I have talked about this with the shop which sold me this MP3, but they couldn’t do anything about it. I can hardly bear the poor service offered by your company’s agents. I have no choice b ut to turn to your help. It is required that you should make a replacement of my MP3 no later than the end of this month. Hope you can look into the matter, consider my suggestions and solve this problem as soon as possible. It would be highly appreciated if it is solved as expected. If not, I would like to have a full refund or take legal action.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Regards Li Hua

投诉信格式模板：

Dear ________，

I am ________ (自我介绍). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about ________ (抱怨的事情)．

The reason for my dissatisfaction is ________ (总体介绍). In the first place, ________ (抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ________ (抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)to ________ (抱怨的方面带来的后果)．

I appreciate it very much if you could ________ (提出建议和请求), preferably ________ (进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ________ (设定解决事情最后期限)．

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

第二篇投诉信：汤姆在一家商店购得劣质商品，遂与营业员交涉。但该营业员对他态度粗暴，不予受理，汤姆为此向经理写一封投诉信。

January 3,2003

Dear Manager,

Now I am writing to tell you that I bought a TV set from your shop several days ago. But when I brought it home and turned it on, I found it didn’t work properly. So I took it back to the shop and told the assistant what had happened. To my surprise, your assistant didn’t help me to solve the problem. On the contrary, he shouted at me rudely and refused to examine it. I know that your shop enjoys a high reputation of good service, so I bought the TV set in your shop. But today, I am sorry to find that such service should have happened in your shop and your assistant didn’t seriously think of the interests of customers.

I hope you will look into the matter and give me a reasonable explanation. I am waiting to know how you will deal with it. Thank you for your consideration and I am expecting an early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Tom

第三篇网上购物书籍投诉信书面表达范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student from Guangming Middle School. As a faithful supporter of your website, I have enjoyed your convenience and timely service. But this time, I’m writing for your help.

On Dec 26th, I ordered a best-seller Twilight through your website.

Unfortunately, quite a few pages were found missing when I read it afterwards, greatly affecting my understanding of the book.

I was wondering whether you could solve this problem in a proper way, for instance, sending me a new book, for I really love the book. Your earliest reply will be appreciated. Thank you!

实战演练作文翻译

尊敬的布朗先生，

我很高兴地告诉您，我们上周日订购的冰箱fridge在9月21日收到了。但是我们很遗憾地发现这台冰箱无法正常运行。

使用这台冰箱几天之后，我们发现在里面的食物很快变质了。当我们测量里面的温度temperature时，困惑地发现温度在17℃，明显超出了0℃—9℃的标准温度范围beyond the standard temperature between 0℃ and 9℃。

不用说，这个问题已经影响了我们的正常生活。您能尽快派人过来维修一下吗？

请即刻关注并尽快回复，不胜感激。

您忠实的顾客

李华

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2017高考英语书面表达投诉信写作

【模仿翻译】

尊敬的布朗先生，

我很高兴地告诉您，我们上周日订购的冰箱在9月21日收到了。但是我们很遗憾地发现这台冰箱无法正常运行。

使用这台冰箱几天之后，我们发现在里面的食物很快变质了。当我们测量里面的温度时，困惑地发现温度在17℃，明显超出了0℃—9℃的标准温度范围。

不用说，这个问题已经影响了我们的正常生活。您能尽快派人过来维修一下吗？

请即刻关注并尽快回复，不胜感激。

您忠实的顾客

李华

【模仿翻译】

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am glad to inform you that the fridge we ordered last Sunday was

received on September 21. But we are regretful to find that it cannot

work normally.

After using the fridge for a few days, we found that the food kept

in it got bad quickly. When we took the temperature in it, we were

confused to find it was about 17℃, obviously beyond the standard

temperature between 0℃ and 9℃.

Needless to say, this problem has interrupted our normal life. Could

you please send a man to repair it in a short time?

Your prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【模拟真题1：投诉服务态度】

假如你是李华，昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇，回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时该营业员对你的态度恶劣，对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信。

【模拟真题：投诉服务态度】

Dear Mananger,

I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make

a complaint.

Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didn’t work. So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it. Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop. I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.

I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【模拟真题2：投诉衣服质量】

假设你是李华，在一家网店购买了一件羊毛衫，昨天收到后发现羊毛衫后背有个洞，你给卖家打了几次服务电话，对方电话却一直占线。请你给卖家Miss Macleod写一封投诉信：

1. 要求对方换一件新的羊毛衫或退款：

2. 询问对方如何返还已经收到的羊毛衫；

3. 期待对方尽快回复。

【模拟真题：投诉衣服质量】

Dear Miss Macleod,

I’m pleased to tell you that the woolen sweater I bought from your store through the Internet arrived on time yesterday. But when checking it, I found an obvious hole on the back. I wonder why you didn’t notice it when you delivered the sweater to me. I have dialed your service number a few times, only to be repeatedly told that it was busy.

This problem really makes me annoyed. Could you change a new one for me or return my money as soon as possible? By the way, how shall I send this sweater back to you?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物（BookwormSeries）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：

1. 介绍购物情况

2. 反映存在问题

3. 提出解决方案

注意：

1. 词数100词左右

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词

可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n.

官方范文：

To whom it may concern,

Iam one of your customers(顾客). I ordered（订购）a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so

poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

Iam sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.

Lookingforward to your reply.

Li Hua

投诉信（餐厅就餐投诉）

Dear Sir,

Last Friday, I booked a table near the window for dinner in your hotel as I was going to treat my two American friends to a typical Chinese meal. But I’m quite disappointed with your service. We went there at the time as arranged, but the waiter told us there were no seats available. After about one and a half hours, we were asked to share a table with an old couple. The food was not delicious and some dishes were too salty. I’ll appreciate it if you can look into this case.

Yours,

Li lin

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