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Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

雅思大作文题目分析：

1、题型：利弊分析类议论文

2、同义替换：distant and isolated/ remote areas/ unpopulated areas

3、题目分析：对于本期真题，目前网络有若干篇高分范文，仅在个人看来，皆有偏题的嫌疑，全文篇幅仅仅在于讨论旅游的利弊。

而本题的难处在于必须分开科学家与观光客，二者并不能相提并论。如果不提及科学家也就等于冒跑题的风险，不提观光客的则寸步难行。

4.本文结构分析：

Intro:背景引出话题，并直接开篇点明个人立场。

核心段1：支持观点先提出，分别从科学家探索自然规律利于人类发展及游客的个人旅游体验角度轮式。

核心段2：少量篇幅表明过度开发及不注意环保，会造成地区环境破坏，生态失衡。

Conclusion:重申个人观点。

雅思大作文名师Sample Answer：

Word count：281

Plenty of scientists and travelers make trips to isolated natural places,where is always brimming with breath-taking landscape and mysteries, such as the Mount Qomolangma and the South Pole. I firmly deem that the positive effects carry more weight than its adverse impacts.

Contemplated from the positive aspects, many benefits could be gained via exploring the distant regions. For one thing, as for tourists, traveling exposes them to new places and unique cultures, which is rewarding for them to read about cultural diversity. What travelers learn by meeting local people and absorbing the culture of these places is something that is hardly available in books. For another，it is understandable that much of scientific research on remote regions is devoted to

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