高中英语短文
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
1.that→where。考查宾语从句。此处表达的是"靠近我所居住的地方"，故需将that改为where。where在此引导宾语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。
2.去掉but。考查连词。从属连词Though（虽然）不可与并列连词but（但是）一起使用，故需去掉but。
3.had→have。考查时态。整篇文章都是以现在时态写的，所以需将一般过去时改为一般现在时。
4.honest→honesty。考查名词。根据语境"我叔叔告诉我他成功的关键在于诚实"可知,此处该用名词形式作表语。
5.or→and。考查并列连词。根据语境可知，此处不是表示选择关系，而是表示"新鲜的蔬菜和优质的油"，故把or改为and。
https://www.sodocs.net/doc/2616661234.html,ing→used。考查被动语态。fresh vegetables和high quality oil与use之间存在被动关系，故用被动语态。
7.becoming前加of。考查介词。dream of doing sth.是固定搭配，意为"梦想做某事"。
8.the→a。考查冠词。此处表示泛指，故该用不定冠词a，in a short period of time意为"短期内"。
9.our→his。考查代词。由语境及主语he可知，此处指的是叔叔的生意，故将our改为his才合乎语境。
10.steady→steadily。考查副词。修饰动词grow该用副词，所以应用steady的副词形式steadily。Correction 2
1.how→what。考查宾语从句。分析句子可知，are talking about 后为宾语从句，且从句中do 缺少宾语，故将how改为what。
2.chose→choose。考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后接动词原形。
3.take→taking。考查非谓语动词。因为and连接两个并列的成分，且介词后接动名词形式，所以将take改为taking。
4.but→and。考查连词。前后句之间为并列关系，故将but改为and。
5.在world前加the。考查冠词。根据语境可知，此处表示特指，故应用定冠词the。
6.your→our。考查代词。因为句子的主语为"we"，故此处用our。
7.knowledges→knowledge。考查名词的数。knowledge为不可数名词，只能用单数形式。
8.去掉can或将can→should。考查虚拟语气。suggest 意为"建议"时，其后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，谓语动词用"should+动词原形"，should可以省略。
9.thought→think。考查动词的时态。全文的时态均以一般现在时为主，故此处应用一般现在时。
10.many→much。考查代词。表示"钱"的多少时，要用much而不是many。
暑假快到了。我的同学和我正在谈论假期期间的活动。我们可以选择呆在家里和旅行之间。如果我们待在家里，那很舒服，但是没有必要花钱。但是在那种情况下，我们将对世界一无所知。如果我们出国旅行，我们可以扩大您的视野，并获得我们从书中无法获得的知识。一些同学建议我们可以去附近的景点。我认为这是个好主意。它并不需要很多，但是我们仍然可以学到很多。
从13到19岁的少年时代对我来说是最困难的时期。他们也是我一生中最美好的时光。起初，我以为我什么都知道，可以自己做决定。但是，我的父母似乎并不这么认为。他们总是告诉我该怎么做。一次，我什至觉得我的父母不了解我，所以我希望我能与他们自由。我通过穿奇怪的衣服告诉他们我独立。现在我要离开家去上大学。最后，我将独自一人，但我仍然希望有父母在需要帮助时可以寻求帮助。
Correction 3
1.year→years。考查名词复数。13至19岁不止一年的年龄差，此处为复数概念，故用years。
2.worse→worst。考查形容词最高级。句中有表示范围的in my life，同时应与前面的best保持一致。
3.去掉the。考查固定搭配。at first表示"起初"。
4.yourself→myself。考查反身代词的一致性。由前面的代词I可知，此处应用myself。
5.such→so。考查固定搭配。由"I don't think so."的固定表达可知，应将such改为so。
6.tell→told。考查语篇中时态的一致性。全文中心时态为一般过去时，故应将tell改为told。
7.freely→free。考查形容词的句法功能。系动词be后应为形容词作表语。
8.wear→wearing。考查动名词作宾语。介词后面应用动名词形式作宾语。
9.to→for。考查固定搭配。leave...for...表示"离开某地去某地"。
10.whenever后加I。考查句子结构。此处whenever为连词，引导状语从句，从句中缺了主语，根据句意可知，应加主语I。