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初三作文之有关初中毕业的英语作文

有关初中毕业的英语作文

【篇一：中考英语写人作文】

写作练习：（人物篇）

写人作文是中考的热门题材之一，写这类作文时要注意以下几点：

1. 描写人物时，不能面面俱到，泛泛而写，要重点突出其鲜明特征，以表现与其他人物的不同之处。

2. 叙述与人物有挂的事情时，要分

清主次，前后照应，选取典型事例来刻画人物。 3. 描写人物时，一

般在结尾处要对人物进行评价，抒发自己对人物的情感。

基本框架

人物 part 1 外貌性格

时间 part 2过程事件结果

part 3 感受

写作评分标准及进步方向：内容要点

应用词汇: 高级词汇的合理使用（energetic, intelligence）、同义

词的变化使用(以like\beautiful为例)、短语的恰当使用(come up with)

语法结构的准确性：适当运用较复杂的语法，固定句式（感叹句、

强调句、倒装句等）、定语从句、状语从句、现在分词短语、动词

不定式等。 taps must be turned off after being used. 上下文的连贯性：连接词、非谓语动词等结构。first of all , in a word等

连接词汇总：

1. 表示目的：for this purpose，for this reason，so that，in order that，so as to，in order to…

2. 表示对照：but，however，yet，on the other hand，on the contrary…

3. 表示结果：so，thus，therefore，as a result

4. 表示因果：because，since，as, for，because of …, owing

to 5. 表示强调：indeed，in fact，as a matter of fact 6. 表示并列

观点：firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, first of all, also，and，in addition，besides，what’s more，moreover…, last but not least, what’s worse

7. 表示解释和说明：for example，for instance…

8. 表示比较：like，just like，just as，in the same way，similarly… 9. 表示总结：finally，at last，in short，in a word

10. 表示让步：although，though， even though，no matter wh—

建议记诵的话题词汇和短语：

11. 关系：father, parents ,

grandfather ,uncle ,aunt ,schoolmate, monitor等，cousin比较加分哦

12. 职业：teacher, doctor, nurse, dentist, cook, artist, scientist, soldier, manager, businessman, journalist等

13. 外貌性格：pretty , good-looking, short , tall, lovely, adorable, naughty, smart , wise, diligent, lazy, humorous,

attractive, funny, outgoing, serious, quiet. warm-hearted, patient，strong-minded, hard-working等(介绍外貌时候可用上定语从句，开篇就亮点)

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14. 年龄： a twenty-year-old man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 10, during his childhood, middle-aged , in his forties 等 15. 兴趣爱好： enjoy doing, like to do /doing, be fond of, be crazy about, be interested in , prefer to do/doing

16. 评价： be popular with , be respected by, be honored as,

be considered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a good

example等。

句子：

1. he shows great enthusiasm in pursuing knowledge.

2. she

is a ordinary-looking girl with short hair. 3. not only does she .. but also… 4. he sets us a good example.

5. i’ll never forget the day when…

6. i’m so proud that i have such a good friend.

7. he is considered as an honest, humorous teacher and he is respected and loved by the students and other teachers. 8. owing to his patient guide and my effort , i learned quite well at the end. 9. without his help, i would have…

10. it was because of their help and encouragement that i could get the best result. 11. she has a great sense of humorous.

12. she always comforts me when i get into trouble. 13. i’m very grateful to him for all that he has done for me.

14. during the process of my growth, there are lots of people i want to thank, but the person i want to thank most is… 15. i want to thank sb. from the bottom of my heart.

满分作文评析：

(1)

时光匆匆，不知不觉中，同学们的初中生活即将结束，你们有一个懵懂的孩童成长为有知识有理想的少年。在你们成长的历程中，渗

透了父母的心血，充满了师长的关爱，得到了朋友的帮助，请以

my_______________为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中最重要的人或最令你难忘的人。要求：1. 把题目补充完整。

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

3. 词数在60 - 80之间。

4. 内容要齐全，包括以下几点：

who is the person in your heart?

why is the person so important in your heart?what will you learn from the person in the future?

参考范文：

my father is a hero in my heart. although he has been away for many years, he still lives in my heart now.

as a father of the five children, he knew his duty. when i was a little girl, i thought my father never knew tired. he always worked and worked. he was a man of great strength both physically and in the mind.

my father not only worked hard to support the whole family, but also looked after my ailing(多病的) mother. day and night, he struggled for years with mothers disease. at last, my mother recovered because of my fathers love and help. however, my father, a man who was great and gentleness, fell down. i lost my hero. he was too tired. he slept for ever.

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a few years has passed, but i think my father never left me. he always smiles at me and lives in my heart. i know i have my fathers love. it gives me courage to do anything, to face any difficulties in my life.from him, i will learn to stand up straightly, to be proud of who i am!

2. a real friend

提示：朋友，是思想上值得依赖，情感上可以依托，学习上能得到

帮助，生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两件事情来讲述你和朋友之

间真挚的友情。

要求：1、请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；

2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；

3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4、短文必

须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。

参考范文： a real friend

everyone needs friends. friendship plays an important role in our lives. friends can encourage us to be better and share our hopes and dreams. amy is a real friend like this.

when i became a middle school student, i dont do well in english or math. i fell behind others. i was worried and upset.

at that time, amy often lent me her notebooks and came to my house to help me after school. when i wanted to give up, she always encouraged me to hold on, thanks to amy, a month

later i caught up with others. now both of us are in grade 9, we have the same dreams - to be a student in a good university. i think we can achieve our dreams.a friend in need is a friend indeed. amy is such a good friend.

记诵词组

1. suffer from 遭受, 忍受

2. thanks to 多亏了

3. get/be used to sth./doing sth. 习惯于

4. be absorbed in 专心于，全神贯注于

5. concentrate on sth. 专

注于

6. share your happiness and sadness with sb. 和某人

分享你的快乐和痛苦 7. pursue knowledge 追求知识

8. be in trouble 处于困境中，遇到麻烦 9. depend on sb. to do sth. 依靠某人做某事 10. to be honest 老实说

11. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 12. be popular with sb. 受到某人的欢迎

13. strengthen our friendship 增进我们的友谊 promote our friendship

14. benefit a lot from sth. 从……中受益良多 15. speak highly of sb. 对某人评价高 16. get along well with sb. 和某人相处得好 17. put one’s heart into sth. 用心对待某事

18. make progress 取得进步

19. have trouble in doing sth. 做某事有困难 20. come true 实现21. realize/achieve one’s dream 实现某人的梦想 22. enjoy doing sth.

like to do sth. / like doing sth. be fond of sth. / doing sth.

be crazy about sth. / doing sth.

prefer doing sth. to doing sth.

23. is of great help for sb. 对某人有很大的帮助= very helpful

24. lose one’s temper 发脾

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【篇二：中考英语作文专题复习】

中考英语专题复习：书面表达的考点讲解和训练2014-6-2

【考点扫描】

书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：

1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；

2、看图作文；

3、根据汉语提示作文。

无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理

通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写

错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。

【名师解难】

一. 训练方法

1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有

句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。

同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句

型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相

当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大

量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。

2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而

边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练

习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，

最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、

通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习

惯，考试时就能得心应手。

二. 应试策略

1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中

题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要

急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一

个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，

根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审

格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止

写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中

给出的各个要点逐条列出。

3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要

句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。

5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交

替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多

使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用

或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。

1）语态、时态要准确无误。

2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。

3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4）注意冠词用法，例如： he is an honest student.中的an不能

写成a。

5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-

looking 等。

2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学

们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先

后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加

工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被

扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如

遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作

文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错

误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为

重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：

1）格式是否有错。

2）拼写有无错误。

3）语言是否用错。

4）时态、语态错误。

5）标点错误。

6）人称是否用错。

三. 注意事项

书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。

【中考范例】

vii. 书面表达

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。

2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。

dear friend,

hello！

i’m your new friend. my name is bob. i’m fifteen. i’m american. i live in new york.

i am a middle school student. i’m good at maths. it is very interesting. my favourite sport is basketball. and i am not only a

basketball fan but also a good player. i like pop music. my friends and i often sing pop songs together.

after school, i am interested in getting on-line. i have known a lot about china from the internet. now i’m learning chinese. i hope i will visit your country one day.

pleas e write to me and tell me something about your life. i’m looking forward to hearing from you.

yours, bob

dear bob,

______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ __

yours,

zhang qiang

【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。

1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的

情况。

2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方

的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、

自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。

3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang qiang, fifteen, live in shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like english, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’l l meet in china

4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。

4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。

5、写全文：

dear bob,

i got your letter yesterday. i’m very glad to be your pen friend. my name is zhang qiang. i’m fifteen years old, too. i live in shaanxi.

i’m a middle school student, too. i like english and physics

very much. i also like sports, but i’m good at drawing. i know a little about america. could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

i hope we’ll meet in china some day. i’m sure we’ll have a

good time together.

please write (to) me soon.

yours,

zhang qiang

6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。

书面表达【解题指导】

中考书面表达主要考查学生初步的书面表达能力，要求学生能根据

所给提示，用英语写一篇语言正确、内容完整、语句连贯的短文。

情景一般贴近学生的学习和生活；提供情景的形式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等。对于英语写作，同学们要注意：

1. 认真阅读提示，彻底理顺思路。

2. 紧扣要点，合理遣词造句。

根据试题内容，列出要表达的要点，找出能体现要点的词、短语和

句型。如果是应用文体，还应特别注意各种应用文的格式。造句时

应做到尽量使用考纲中要求的词汇，句子宜短不宜长，句型宜简不

宜繁，同时也要适当用一些宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句等复合句，以增强短文的逻辑性。21世纪教育网 21*cnjy*com

3. 精心谋篇润色，仔细核对检查。

文章写好之后，还应注意句与句之间以及段与段之间的过渡。在需

要的地方加上表示转折、因果、并列、时间等的过渡词或短语，如

表示转折的词有：but, yet, however；表示因果的词有：so, since, because；表示并列的词或短语有：and, either...or..., neither...nor..., as well as, not only...but (also)...; 表示时间的词有：next, then, later, at last。适当使用这些词或短语能使文章更加

自然、流畅。检查也是不可缺少的重要环节，可以起到及时纠正错

误的作用，避免不必要的失分。具体做法是：通读全文，看行文是

否通顺，要点是否齐全，词数是否符合要求，体裁是否恰当，单词

拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确等。

★☆图表作文☆★

〖写作任务1〗

〖写作任务2〗

如今网上购物已经成为一种非常流行的消费方式，但是人们在网上

通常会买些什么东西呢？请同学们参考下面的图片，以shopping online为题写一篇100词左右的英语作文。

shopping online

〖写作任务3〗

simon分别测量了一天中六个不同时间点的温度，制成统计表。假如你是simon, 请你根据所给图表写一篇80词左右的短文，简要说

参考答案：〖写作任务1〗

one possible version:

for the coming summer vacation, different students have different plans, and ours are all interesting and

https://www.sodocs.net/doc/8c19037638.html,

han lin is going to do something meaningful for the neighbourhood because he is really fond of helping others. wang fang will do housework at home to make her parents less tired. i am going to help protect the environment by planting trees

around our city. moreover, i will tell more people to care for the https://www.sodocs.net/doc/8c19037638.html,

in short, although we have different kinds of plans, we all want to try our best to do something meaningful.

〖写作任务2〗

one possible version:

shopping online

nowadays shopping online is becoming more and more popular. people can buy whatever they want on the internet.

we can know from the picture that 30% of the people spend their money on clothes and shoes. the number is the biggest

of all. 8% of them like buying movie tickets online. the number of people who buy food and books is almost the same. 15%

buy books and 16% buy food. and it’s also a good way for people to buy electrical products online, because they can receive their products at home. 18% of people choose this way. the re’re also 13% of the people buying other things online.

〖写作任务3〗

one possible version:

泰安市2014年中考英语书面表达预测一

一、时事新闻、国家政策、家乡变化：

（一）马航mh370

飞往北京的马航mh370飞机于2014年3月8日凌晨与地面失去联系，世界各国参与搜寻，但仍下落不明，飞机上的大部分乘客

（passengers）是中国人，全国人民都很担心，全世界的人们都很关注。

对于马航的下落，世人对此有着各种不同的猜测，请将下面的几种推测整理成文，并阐述自己的观点，请以where has the flight gone ?为题写一篇词数为80——100的文章，开头已给出。以下所有信息都要包含在文章里面。

(1) 很多人说mh370一定坠入了大海，机上无人生还；

(2) 但也有人说mh370可能坠毁在沙漠（desert）无人区,可能还有人活着；

(3) 甚至有人说mh370被外星人袭击（attack）,飞机上的人被带到了另一个星球，所有的人都还活着。

（一）one possible version:

the flight from malaysia to beijing lost information and disappeared at about 2 o’clock march 8th2014.people all over china are worried about it. people around the world care about it. where has the flight gone? different people have different ideas about the question. many people said mh370 must fall into the sea and all of the passengers had died. however, some people said mh370 might land in a dessert where there isn’t a person but some passengers might be alive. some people even said mh370 might be attacked by the aliens and all of the passengers had been taken to another planet and they are all alive now.i think something strange has happened to mh370. i hope that all of the passengers are still alive. and i hope that all of them will come back home some day. where has the flight gone? do you know?

(二) 禁烟

据世界卫生组织(who)统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1 日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点，以“saying no to smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。

1. 吸烟有害;

2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病;

3. 吸烟影响青少年成长;

4. 二手烟同样有害;

5. 你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办?

注意：

1. 词数：80词左右;标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数;

2. 应覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

3. 参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟。

【篇三：写“我的同学”的中考英语作文范文】

标题：描写“我的同学”的中考英语作文范文

关键词：中考英语作文

导读：初中生虽然在学习英语三年之后，对英语已经有一定的熟悉

感了，但是面对中考英语作文的时候还是会觉得有点头痛。这是看

一点相关的范文，看看别人是怎么写还是有用的。

请以my classmate为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。思路点拨

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述，所叙述的内容要交代清楚，条理清晰，重点突出,主次分明，详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文，主人公应该用第三人称，时态以一般过去时

为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织

材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理，有真实感,

叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行，同时加以点评。

参考范文

my classmate

liu kai is my classmate. he is a good student and always ready to help others.one day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. a car was coming towards her quickly and

the girl was too frightened to move. the car nearly hit her. just then liukai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. the

little girl was saved. she told him where she lived, and he took her home. when liukai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. he told the teacher why he was late. he was then praised for what he had done.

初三作文之有关初中毕业的英语作文

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