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【优质文档】雅思大作文常用套句:解决问题-优秀word范文

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雅思大作文常用套句:解决问题

Sample Question :

What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resource ?

Feature :

Brainstorming :

Causes

The limited supply of water resources can never match the dramatically increasing demand from the booming industry and unrestrictedly flourishing population .

The lack of the sense of using water economically and reasonably , results in uncontrollable waste of the precious water , especially in the regions of relatively abundant water resources .

Solutions

Optimizing the recycling system and operations of water can maximize the usage of limited water resources .

Popularizing the national sense of saving water and using water economically can gradually better the worsening situation in water resources .

Outline :

Intro :

1. Nowadays more and more people begin to realize / be aware of / notice the importance / significance / seriousness of the problem of education / pollution / unemployment .

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