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英语专四作文真题与点评
英语专四作文真题与点评

2008年专四作文真题

大作文:The benefits of volunteering

The Benefits of Volunteering

Volunteering has grown into a fashion these years, with volunteers ranging from college students to white collar workers. It is reported now China has 4.5 million registered volunteers having provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. Why would so many people like to do volunteer work? Are there any benefits of volunteering?

The answer is absolutely yes. First of all, through volunteering we can gain more experiences. Whatever volunteering work we do, either being a volunteer teacher for a village school or a volunteer worker in a retired house, we can taste different lifestyles and broaden our horizon.

Secondly, through volunteering we can acquire the sense of being needed. Many people feel frustrated with travails in life and empty with the cycling of working and resting. They gradually become numb, losing the sense of being needed. By joining the volunteer group and offering help voluntarily to people who need it, we may feel happy and fulfilled again.

Thirdly, through volunteering we can learn more good qualities. Volunteer work is team work, which needs good cooperation. We can know people with different personalities and different background joining in the volunteer group and devoting to the volunteer work together. From our co - volunteers we can absorb many good qualities that could help us be better persons.

In conclusion, volunteering is of great benefit in that we can gain more experiences, acquire the sense of being needed and learn more good qualities.

小作文:向Jane推荐一份英文报纸并说出两个理由。

April 20, 2008

Dear Jane,

I heard you want to subscribe to an English–language newspaper. Here I’d like to recommend one to you. Personally, I suggest 21st Century as my favorite, which is designed especially for college students to study English. The topics discussed are close to college life and could arouse our attention. Besides, the new words and expressions are marked, which makes it easier for us to memorize and take notes. I’ve benefited a lot from reading this newspaper and I believe it can also help you improve your English.

Sincerely yours, XXX

- 2008年作文真题写作指南 (No.3)

Section A Composition

The Benefits of Volunteering

写作指南

这是指定明确观点型的作文。要求考生以给定的观点作为中心思想(论点)进行论证。

历年类似考题:

2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

本文要求论述“志愿活动的好处”,主体部分可以着重论述志愿活动对社会的好处,也可以论述志愿活动对志愿者本人带来的好处,还可以兼顾两方面。构思立意时要从多个角度论述自己的观点,并对所有者材加以整合、归纳。

以讨论“对志愿者自己的好处”为例,可以讨论如下好处:

第一,在交际、沟通能力方面的好处(包括扩大交际面,与不同的人打交道,协调不同的关系,理解不同的立场等)。

第二,提高工作能力、增加技能的好处(主要谈对自己知识、技能的提高有什么作用,包括学校知识的运用,实际能力的提高等,注意与前面的“交际能力”有所区分)。

第三,为志愿者带来成就感,获得必理上的满足(获得尊敬与承认,实现自我价值)。

范文与解析

Sample

(1)Volunteeing means being willing to help people in need and make contributions to society for no financial rewards.

(2)Needless to say, volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. (3) Yet, despite the fact that volunteers are not paid for what they have done, serving as a volunteer, I believe, is also beneficial to the volunteeers themselves.

Frist, Volunteering helps volunteers improve their interpersonal skills. They can understand people better and have better skills to motivate others and to deal with difficult situations. (4)In collaboration with people of different personalities in their volunteering work.

Besides, volunteering serves as a good opportunity for volunteers to apply their knowledge to practical problems. This is especially useful for student volunteers. For instance, students volunteering to assist foreign guests on big occasion like Canton Fair (5) can not only practise their oral English, but also have first hand experience on the latest development of their field.

Finally, volunteering satisfies one's psychological need for respect and self-fulfillment, and it gives the volunteer a sense of achievemen.

(6) In a word, volunteering helps to improve one's interpersonal skills, apply one's knowledge to practice, and give the volunteer a sense of self-fulfillment. It is of great benefits to the society, but it benefits the volunteer even greater.

Analysis

Part One:

(1) 通过下定义的方式引出话题。

(2)用Needless to say 来肯定志愿活动对他人和社会的益处,使得行文连接流畅。

(3) 转折句很好地强调了文章要论述的观点;I believe 直接点明作者的观点。

Part Two:

(4)in collaboration with 是语言亮点,表示“与......合作”。

(5)Not only ... but also 句型说明学生志愿者参加广交会的比重收获。

Part Three:

(6)用 In a word 总结志愿活动的好处,三个不定式短语的排比运用使行文生动有力。

Dear Jane,

I heard you want to subscribe to an English-language newspaper and I would like to recommend 21st Century

to you. It is a weekly newspaper, covering many topics that we are interested in. First, you will surely be attracted

to the vocabulary section, from which we can learn a lot of useful words and phrases. Besides, the testing section introduces different English tests that college students may take. I love reading the newspaper and hope you will

like it too.

Sincerely yours,

Linda

2008年作文真题(No.3)

2010/10/02 22:14 [专四作文 ] Section A Composition

December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day,

tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in need. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers how have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

The Benefits of Volunteering

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions

may result in a loss of marks.

2007年作文真题 (4)

Section A Composition

Nowadays the Internet has become part of people’s life, and millions of young people have made friends online.

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?

You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions

may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the university’s swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you

like some other part. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explain why.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness

Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?

写作指南

这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点,然后进行论证。

历年类似考题:

2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

1994 TV: a Good Thing or a Bad Thing?

本文要求考生就网上交友是否明智发表自己的看法。根据题目要求,文章结构如下:

第一部分:明确表达自己的观点。

第二部分:合理论证自己的观点,要有说服力。

第三部分:就以上部分进行总结。

范文与解析

Sample

(1)Is it wise to make friends online? (2) People’s views about this issue vary from one to another. (3) Some people think that it is unwise to make friends online while others think that there is nothing wrong with online friends. (4) In my point of view, although online friends cannot be always trusted, the benefits far outweigh the risks. (5) The reasons are mainly as follows:

(6) First of all, it is easy and quick to get to know people and make new friends online. (7) We know friends are indispensable in our daily life but they cannot stay with us wherever we go. (8) For many people, especially college freshmen, leaving friends and the security of home for a new place where they don’t know anyone can be overwhelming.

(9) With some online chatting tools such as QQ and MSN, they can talk to people they like and find people with common interests easily. (10) In addition, online friends can help broaden our knowledge about different cultures and customs.

(11) Chatting with people from different places and social backgrounds is surely an effective way to understand other cultures and develop cross-cultural communication skills. (12) We can also practice our English in speaking and writing.

(13) To sum up, making friends online is amazing. In the online global community we can enjoy an active social life with rewarding experience, so it is wise to make online friends.

Analysis

Part One:

(1) 开门见山,提出问题。

(2)(3)说明不同的人有不同的观点。

(4)用In my point of view 引出自己的观点。

(5)起承上启下的作用,引出原因。

Part Two:

(6)用first of all 引出网上交友的优点之一,此句作为主题句。

(7)(8)(9)对主题句作进一步诠释。

(10)用In addition 引出网上交友的优点之二,此句亦为主题句。

(11)对主题句作进一步诠释。

(12)对主题句作进一步诠释。

Part Three:

(13)用 To sum up总结全文,重申观点。

April 21, 2007

(Dear) Jimmy,

Thank you so much for inviting me to join the University’s swimming club. I’m sorry that I couldn't become one of your members because I have chosen to join the football club. You know, I am crazy about playing football, so I wouldn’t have time to take part in your activities.

Thank you again for your invitation.

Yours,

William

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness

2006年作文真题 (5)

Section A Composition

Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi’an, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow’s money today is better. What do you think?

Write a composition of about 200 words:

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details related to the excursion.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness

2006年作文真题写作指南 (No.5)

Section A Composition

Saving Money is a Good Habit

写作指南

这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点,然后进行论证。

历年类似考题:

2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

1999 A Major Advantage, Disadvantage of Advertising on T

1994 TV: a Good Thing or a Bad Thing?

本文要求考生就网上交友是否明智发表自己的看法。根据题目要求,文章结构如下:

第一部分:明确表达自己的观点(总论点)。

第二部分:用几个分论点合理论证自己的总观点,要有说服力。

第三部分:就以上部分进行总结。

范文与解析

Sample

(1)Recently the result of a survey conducted by a Beijing information company has shown that the majority of Chinese students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest prefer to use tomorrow’s money. (2) As is seen to me, the principle of “hard work and thrift” is still at work in China, and I absolutely believe that we will profit more from saving money than from spending tomorrow’s money.

(3) Through saving money, we’ll be better prepared for our life. (4) There is an old saying that “a penny saved is

a penny earned”. (5) In modern society, life is so changeable that we can’t predict what will happen in the future.

(6) So we’d better get prepared for unexpected emergencies. (7) What’s more, psychologically speaking, saving money means controlling money rather than being controlled by money, and it enables us to be freer and more independent.

(8) With the money we’ve saved, we don’t need to be too much concerned about the old age or the monthly installment that we owe to the bank.

Of course I don’t mean that we cannot loan money to buy a house or for some enjoyment. What I’m saying is that we must think twice before spending tomorrow’s money. (9) To put it in a nutshell, I’m a great believer that saving money is a good habit.

Analysis

Part One:

(1) 用一项调查“a survey”引入要讨论的问题。

(2)用“As is seen to me…”清楚地表明了自己的观点。引用习语“hard work and thrift”使文章更具说服力。

Part Two:

(3)具体分析和解释了选择“saving money”的原因。

(4)此处引用“A penny saved is a penny earned”恰到好处。

(5)(6)从社会变化难以预测说明节约用钱的必要性。

(7)“What’s more”表达递进关系,使阐述的理由更充分。

(8)阐述了节约用钱的好处。

Part Three:

(13)“To put it in a nutshell”为语言亮点,意为“概括地说”。

Section B Note-writing

April 23, 2006

I’m very interested in the weekend excursion you’re organizing and I’d like to join you. Can you call me and let me know when and where we’re going to meet and what I shall bring? I can be reached at 6886666.

Yours,

John

2005年作文真题 (6)

Section A Composition

The students’ Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

My Idea of a University Arts Festival

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

2005年作文真题 (6)

Section A Composition

The students’ Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

My Idea of a University Arts Festival

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

2005年作文真题写作指南 (No.6)

Section A Composition

My Idea of a University Arts Festival

写作指南

此作文题属于自由发挥型。在这类题型中,一般出题的规律是:先提出一个话题,然后可能会提供一些行的观点,要求考生通过给定的材料做出自己的分析,提出自己的论点,然后进行阐述和论证。这种题目对论点不做限制,作者可以自由发挥,只要能证明自己,围绕话题即可。

历年类似考题:

1993 My Idea of Becoming a Teacher in the Future

1992 My View on Reading Extensively

本文要求考生就大学里的文化艺术节发表自己的看法。根据题目要求,文章结构如下:

第一部分:明确表达自己的观点(总论点)。

第二部分:用几个有说服力的分论点来支撑自己的总论点。

第三部分:对以上部分进行总结,并适当升华主题。

范文与解析

Sample

University arts festival has always been a big occasion to display students’talent in art as well as to cultivate their artistic taste. Therefore, to make the incoming arts festival more fruitful, I personally think it should include two parts: one is to organize some art activities among students such as singing, painting, photography, recitation or short play contests, and the other is to invite all kinds of art troupes to campus to stage excellent performances of ballet, orchestra or drama for our students.

As regards why university arts festival should be organized in this way, there are mainly two reasons: to develop students’ artistic potential and to enhance their aesthetic ability. By participating in art contests, students not only have a golden opportunity to show their special gift for art but also undergo sort of training through preparation, rehearsal and competition. Thus those activities encourage students to get involved in art activities and help bring out the best of them in this aspect. Professional feast, which is not readily accessible to them in normal times. Such an intimate contact with real art enables students to understand art better and appreciate it properly, which will refine their artistic taste in the long run.

Since my idea of arts festival integrates training students’artistic ability with improving their aesthetic taste, I believe it will go a long way in art education, which is also the ultimate aim of university arts festival.

Section B Note-writing

April 15, 2005

Dear Hilda,

Please let me know whether you can come or not. I can be reached at 55678343.

Yours,

Jane

2004年作文真题 (7)

Section A Composition

Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Your friend, Jane, has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

2004年作文真题写作指南 (No.7)

Section A Composition

Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

写作指南

此作文题属于立场选择型模式。这类题目也可称为“For-Against”模式。在提出话题后,通常从相对的角度提出两种观点和立场,要求考生从中选出一个作为自己的立场,即二选一,然后论证其正确性。

历年类似考题:

1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage on Television

1997 More Pressure from Academic Studies Does (Does no) Good to Us

本文要求考生就大学里的文化艺术节发表自己的看法。根据题目要求,文章结构如下:

第一部分:明确表达自己的观点(总论点)。

第二部分:用几个有说服力的分论点来支撑自己的总论点。

第三部分:对以上部分进行总结,并适当升华主题。

范文与解析

Telephone is said to be one of the greatest inventions of the world, which has revolutionized people’s way of life. Although more and more people nowadays tend to phone more than write letters, I still don’t believe phones will kill letter writing in people’s daily communication.

People communicate for different purposes and in different ways. Letters, though traditional in a way, help people express their ideas in a more exact way. Without the careless tongue slips of telephone conversations. More importantly, it is long held that “To see is to believe.” and communication in written form is considered to be more formal than that done orally. Therefore, letters are always the preferred way of communication when it comes to formal occasions like job application, nailing down a contract or traveling information confirmation. It is not entirely groundless to say that letters are still indispensable nowadays.

In a word, letters have their unique features to satisfy certain communication purposes and will therefore never be replaced by phones in people’s daily life. It’s perhaps more appropriate to say that they supplement each other instead of replacing each other.

Section B Note-writing

May 10th, 2004

Dear Jane,

You’ve been in low spirit for the whole day for your failure in the maths exam. And I’m very concerned about you. You know we often have “those days” in our life and ups and downs are unavoidable. It is useless “crying over the spilt milk”and the best thing right now for you is to cheer up and get yourself prepared for the make-up exam. Smile and life will smile at you.

Yours,

Joy

2003年作文真题 (8)

Section A Composition

People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Your friend, Clare has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

2003年作文真题写作指南 (No.8)

Section A Composition

The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood

写作指南

这是一篇属于给定明确观点型的作文。一般情况下,考题先提出一个话题,并给定了关于这个话题的一种明确的观点,要求考生以这个给定的观点作为文章的中心思想(论点)进行论证。写这类作文的关键在于是否能很好地论证这一明确的观点。

历年类似考题:

2001 Travel Broadens the Mind

2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

范文

The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood

With the development of modern science, technology and economics, our living standard has reached an ever higher level. But more and more people are living under greater pressure than ever before. As a consequence, people are increasingly suffering from various distortions both physically and mentally. To help out, it is important that everyone keep a good mood today.

There are several reasons for my argument. First, a good mood can create high efficiency. When you work with a good mood, you will feel happy and be willing to do some work which used to be boring. On the contrary, a bad mood can make you passive and do things with reluctance. Second, a good mood is beneficial to your health. If you fail to keep a good mood, ou will be feeling depressed and fed up, which is apt to cause some psychological diseases. Third, when you have a good mood, other people around you will be influenced. Thus more and more people will feel happy to communicate with you.

To sum up, keeping a good mood is very important both for yourself and for the people around you. If you want to have a happy and successful life, please keep a good mood every day.

Section B Note-writing

April 18, 2003

Dear Clare,

I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t attend your house-warming party this weekend. I have to be away then in that I must take of my mother who is now in hospital. Next week I’ll probably be free. I sincerely hope that you will enjoy every minute of the party to your heart’s content.

Yours,

Joan

Section A Composition

Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health. And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

The Best Way to Stay Healthy

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

2002年作文真题写作指南 (No.9)

Section A Composition

The Best Way to Stay Healthy

写作指南

这种考题也可转化为“How to”结构题,即”how to stay healthy”。这种考题要求考生首先提出自己认为最好的保持健康的方式,然后用两到三个理由支持自己的观点。这类考题可作如下结构安排:

第一部分:解释命题,提出解决方案(最好为概括性的方案,以便论述)

第二部分:论据1+解释/例证

论据2+解释/例证

论据3+解释/例证

第三部分:结论:重申自己观点,提出希望和展望未来

历年类似考题:

1998 One Way to Solve the Problem

范文

The Best Way to Stay Healthy

Nowadays, the desire for good health is universal. Wherever you are and whatever you do, staying healthy is always important. Different people come up with different views. As far as I am concerned, the best way to keep healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology.

they can’t step out of the shadow of depression and sadness. They need to release their spirit to the nature. Besides, if you have developed a good quality of psychology, you’ll become more sociable and thus more willing to play your part in the society. Enrolling for some keep-fit clubs or joining some travel agency, which by themselves are various versions of physical exercise, will benefit you a lot. As a poem says, youth is not a period of time; it’s a state of mind. Everybody wants to keep young at heart because youth is a symbol for endless energy and passion for living.

Keeping a good quality of mind and keeping a sense of humor are really good. Even if you are 80, you’ll never be old.

Section B Note-writing

April 15, 2002

Dear Jack,

I heard someone say that you wanted to sell your walkman. I want to buy a walkman because, since my English listening is so poor, I really want to improve it. What about the condition of your walkman? Can it still go forward and backward? Can it record? Does it have a radio? I can give you two hundred Yuan if you sell it to me.

Yours,

Laura

2001年作文真题 (10)

Section A Composition

Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience.

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Travel Broadens the Mind

You are to write in three parts:

In the first part, state clearly what your view is.

In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

Section B Note-writing

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Want. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 2001年作文真题写作指南 (No.10) Section A Composition

Travel Broadens the Mind

这是给定观点型的考题,要求考生以这个给定的观点作为文章的中心思想(论点)进行论证。

这类考题可作如下结构安排:

第一部分:点明主题:Travel broadens the mind.

第二部分:以自己或他人实例为依据对主题进行论证。

第三部分:结论:重申自己观点,提出希望和展望未来

历年类似考题:

2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood

2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

范文

Travel Broadens the Mind

Nowadays more and more people choose to travel during their holidays, since travel not only brings leisure and joy but also broadens the mind. As for me, not only can it bring me more historical knowledge, but it can also add to my social experience.

Take my trip to Mount Tai for example. As is known to all, it’s a magnificent mountain famous for both the beautiful scenery and the splendid cultural heritage. At the very sight of her, my soul was attached to her. I remembered the poem “Wang Yue” written by Du Fu, I remembered many historic events which happened on this land and I also recalled the responsibility to conserve this heritage. As I climbed up the mountain, our guide told me many things I had never got to know before, which of course broadened my scope of knowledge. It was also on this trip that I made many new friends with whom I exchanged my opinions, and that I got acquainted with some information about first aid and package tour. All this indeed added to my social experience.

In short, travel offers a good chance for me to open my eyes and enrich my experience while I can enjoy myself. It broadens the mind in a relaxing way.

Section B Note-writing

April 20, 2001

Dear Professor,

I fell terribly sorry that I failed to keep our appointment yesterday. My mother was suddenly taken ill. Since there was nobody at home except me, I had to take her to hospital. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to call you. I’m sorry to have kept you waiting. My mother is supposed to be discharged from hospital next Thursday. So may we meet next Friday, 15 August, at 9:00 a.m.? I promise I won’t break the appointment again.

Respectfully Yours,

Li Ming

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