最新BEC剑桥商务英语中级作文模板、例题超全解析
题型：1．商务书信类；2．商务便条便函类；3．商务信函类；4. 商务报告类
这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120—140词左右。
题目结构：
Input: 1 situation description 2 task 3 target reader
Reading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter)
Write: business letter (120-140 words)
【例题】
●You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October 2005. The following is the letter of
confirmation you received from the Conference Centre.
●Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference.
●Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield Conference Centre, explaining the changes to the
arrangements.
●Do not include postal addresses.
●Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.
Today your Production Manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conference arrangements
审题：
Mr Smith, your boss, told you to ask Ms Liu to attend a sales presentation on a new product.
Write a note to Ms Liu:
*saying who wants her to attend the sales presentation;
*informing her when and where the sales presentation will be held
（一）商务便函
一般公司企业往往都印有按照自己公司风格的商业便函，请看下列例子：
商务便函一般由以下几个部分组成：
1、Memo：Memo是Memorandum缩写，因此也可以用Memorandum备忘录
2、To：这一标题后面应写收信人的姓名与职衔，姓名前可以用尊称或不用，如：
To：Mr. John Smith，Sales Manager
3、From：这一标题后应写发信人的姓名与职衔：职衔可根据需要决定写或不写，但姓名前不要用尊称。
4、Date：日期的写法同书信里日期写法的要求完全一样，不要用数字来表示月份。
5、Subject：这一标题后是写事由的，即用一个或几个词汇简单概括便函的内容，以便查阅。事由必须简洁明了，不要用完整的句子，如：
Changes in Travel Advance Form
Promotion of Staff
Vacation Schedule
Participation in Training Programmes
（二）商务便条
商务便条一般有四个组成部分：日期、称呼、正文、签名。一些公司有印好的便条笺。如:
例：让秘书通知推迟约会
例题：
●You are a manager at an auditors called Golding & Co. Your company has just merged with a competitor to become MasonGolding. You
have been asked to inform staff of the change of name.
●Write a memo of 40 - 50 words:
* informing staff of the new name
* telling them when to start using the new name
* asking staff to use only the new name after that time.
收购与兼并merger and aquisition
范文：
As a result of our merger with Mason&Co., the name of our company will be changed MasonGolding. Please start to use the new name on 1 March 2006. You are reminded that only the new name can be used from then on.
例题
You are the training manager of a company which has won a large export order. You have been asked to organise foreign language training for some of your staff.
Write a memo to staff:
explaining why the courses are necessary
saying which members of staff should attend
announcing when the courses will start
Write 40-50 words on a separate sheet.
[范文]
To: All staff
From: the Training Manager
Date: 1 March 2005
Subject: A Foreign Language Training Course
I was asked to organise a foreign language training course because of the large export order we received recently. It will start on 15 March and
will last 2 weeks. Those who will deal with orders should attend this course.
●You are Head of Research for an international car manufacturer. You have to make an urgent trip tomorrow to visit Pierre Blanco, a
colleague who works for a subsidiary.
●Write a memo of 40-50 words to your secretary:
●telling her who you are going to see and when
●asking her to book flight tickets and accommodation
●telling her what work you would like her to do in your absence.
●Write on your Answer Sheet.
subsidiary, parent company, holding company, affiliate, branch, headquarters, representative office
范文：
I need to have an urgent meeting with Pierre Blanco of our Paris office tomorrow. Please book a return ticket to Paris and a hotel room for me as
soon as possible. During my absence, please keep me informed of the progress of the project. If there is anything urgent, give me a phone call.
[例文]
You are the manager of a small export company. Peter Watson, an important client, is visiting your company for three days from 22 October.
Write a note of 40-50 words to your secretary:
Asking her to book a hotel room
Saying where the hotel should be
Giving her the dates
[范文]
比较下面三篇作文，注意内容点和语气的区别。
作文1：Dear Ms Jones,
I am writing to inform you that Mr Peter Watson will be visiting our company. Would you please be so kindly as to reserve a suitable room for
him?
Yours sincerely
作文2：Hi Mary,
Look. I’m really sorry to have to trouble you but Peter Watson – a really important client – is visiting the company for three days in October, starting on 22nd, to discuss a contract with us. Please will you book for Mr Watson a really nice hotel room as soon as possible? Thanks very much.
See you soon!
作文3 Mary,
Mr Peter Watson is visiting us in October. Could you please hire a hotel room for him? He is arriving on 22nd October and will stay for three nights. If possible, the hotel should be one near the office. Thank you.
[例5]
You are the factory manager of a car company. You are waiting for urgently needed components from your purchasing department.
Write a note to Mr Grayson, the Assistant Purchasing Manager:
enquiring about the reason for the delay;
stating when the components are needed;
suggesting a meeting to discuss future deliveries.
Write 40 - 50 words on your Answer Sheet.
[范文]
I am writing to enquire about the reason of the late delivery of the ordered components. We need the components by next Monday. In order to smooth our cooperation, I suggest that we have a meeting to discuss future deliveries.
[例文]
You are a Project Team Leader. You have had to postpone your next project meeting because some of the members of your team will be abroad. Write a memo of 40-50 words to your project team:
informing them of the postponing and giving the reason
stating a new date and time for the meeting
requesting suggestions for the agenda.
Write on your Answer Sheet.
词汇：postpone; delay agenda, schedule, timetable
[范文]
I am writing to inform you that the next project meeting will be postponed. Because several team members will be abroad for another project, we will hold our next meeting on 1 August, starting from 9am. Please let me know if you have any suggestions as to the agenda of the meeting.
最后一句话可以替换为：
Do you have any suggestions regarding the schedule?
I welcome your suggestions concerning the timetable.
[例题]
You have lost your calculator, and you want to order a new one. You need to make a written request to your supervisor, Ann Ray.
Write a memo to her
saying that you need a replacement
explaining what happened to the old one
asking her to approve the request
Write about 40-50 words.
[范文]
I am writing to apply for a replacement calculator. I found the old one missing after the client meeting yesterday. As a calculator is essential to my daily work, could you kindly approve this request?
[例题]
You would like to go to a seminar on presentation skills.
Write an email to your line manager:
requesting time off work to go to the seminar
saying when the seminar is
explaining why you want to go
Write 40-50 words on a separate sheet.
词汇：line and staff management, line manager, staff manager
句型：May I have your permission to do sth?
[范文]
To: Nick Johnson
Subject: Presentation Skills Seminar
I would like to attend a seminar on 3 April.
It is about presentation skills. Since I have to make many presentations to customers, this seminar will be very useful.
Could you tell me if it’s possible to take time off work to attend this seminar?
Thanks
Angela
[例题]
Your company’s Sales Department has asked you to give a talk next Friday on your most recent project.
Write an email to Mrs Jay in the Sales Department:
agreeing to give the talk and suggesting a time
saying what equipment you will need
requesting information about the participants.
Write 40-50 words on a separate sheet.
[范文]
To: Anna Jay
Subject: Talk Next Friday
I would like to give the talk suggested by you and I think 9.30am, after the break, would be the perfect time.
Required equipment: - Overhead Project
-Flipchart with Pens
Please give me some information about the people participating.
字数要求40-50 / 120-140
重视开头和结尾段落
开头部分：
（1）开头部分要恰到好处。
（2）不要使用否定性的或不礼貌的词语。
（3）要从对方的角度出发体谅对方(You-Viewpoint)，而不能以自我为中心(1-Viewpoint)。
（4）开始句一定要切合正题，不要东拉西扯，重复对方明知的信息。
（5）起首段落不宜太长。
（6）起首段落要前后一致，保证连贯性。开始句最好提一下上一次联系的情况，显得自然。结尾段落：
（1）明确指出希望对方采取的行动。
（2）如果对方不是行动的执行者，一定要指明动作的执行者是谁。
（3）说明该行动的具体实施细则。
（4）指明最后的期限。
（5）赞赏对方，但除非对方曾为你做过什么，否则不要随便道谢。
（6）避免使用消极性词汇。
（7）如若需要，表明愿意提供帮助的态度。
（8）结尾段落不宜过长。
总结常用句型:
Referring to previous contact:
Thank you for your letter of/dated ….
With reference to
Further to
In reply to
Stating the reason for writing:
I am writing to enquire about …
to confirm that …
to apologise for/about…
in reply to your …
with reference to …
Ending a letter
If you have any further questions, please contact me on …
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
in due course.
in the near future.
注意考试当中的格式问题