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雅思写作辅导书推荐

雅思写作辅导书推荐

练习的首选材料依然是真题。

剑桥系列后面附有考官的范文,很值得研究。其他反响较好的练习材料有:

1、《十天突破雅思写作》

这本书的江湖地位不用多说。基本一提到雅思写作,就必会有人推荐此书,简直就是《圣经》一般的地位。客观的讲,书籍能够风靡,自然有一定的道理。这本书算得上是很实用基础的辅导教材,里面的内容包括雅思写作技巧、常见的错误、亮点的词汇和句型。值得好好研究。但是不要生硬地照搬,否则画虎不成反类犬。

2、《雅思8分万能作文》

这书经常拿来和十天相提并论,是考官所写的书。里面收录了考官所写的范文。可以借鉴。

3、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》

这书比较厚,讲的也很细,从语法到句子再到范文,和十天一个套路的。可以看看,多借鉴一些写作思路总没有坏处。

4、朗文出版,《Writing Academic English》

这不是专门为雅思考试量身定做的,但也许是雅思写作最给力的书籍。因为雅思写作的大作文,考的就是学术写作。书籍适合雅思考试想考高分的人(6.5-7分),因为是全方位的讲解,里面对结构、逻辑、上下文衔接的问题解释的很清楚,适合基础不错力求高分的人。毕竟是英文原版书籍,看起来多少有些吃力。但如果能啃完,嘿嘿,会受益匪浅的。

同为英文原版书籍,Macmillan出了本《Improve Your IELTS Writing Skills 》,专门针对雅思考试的。书籍没有上面那本的口碑好,有时间的话,可以翻一翻,对照着做参考。

6、语法书。

语法书列在这里可能有些突兀,其实不然。雅思里面没有直接的语法考题,但是其实处处涉及语法。语法不好,阅读长难句一定会觉得吃力,而最直接的表现就会是在写作里。语法是语言的章法,不过关的话,写出的句子是对是错都无法判断,甚至无法让人读懂。此书适合语法不好、写作功底薄弱的人,不要过分的好高骛远,写作功底是一点一滴的积累起来的。

剑桥官方出了本《剑桥雅思语法》,针对雅思的语法练习,再合适不过了:

《百变语法》,也比较有名:

7、《剑桥图表》和《品读剑桥》PDF文件。

这是互联网上的牛人原创的作品。对剑桥系列后面的范文的点评和总结,适合作为真题写作的辅助材料。一个人的思维总是有局限的,阅读他人的作品,就是了解他人的思路,最终让自己受益。

常见的写作材料是以上几种。辅导书是辅助用的,关键还是要考自己多练习。Practice makes perfect。

按目标分数选雅思写作备考书

写作(目标分数:5.5分):

《十天突破雅思写作》

对于基础并不好的5.5分党这本书的词汇是短期能提分的,但对于出国读研的同学,这本书目前是真心不够的。对了,此书要配合雅思写作老师使用,如果自己不写作文的话,那这书其实也不用看,直接考兴许5.5

推荐4本雅思写作好的参考书

1、最新雅思考试胜策(写作) 吴建业

使用策略:此书堪称经典写作及口语复习材料著作;建议熟记第一部分各类句型,总结句型类别(甚至背诵经典句子);背诵十大原则内容及背熟相关词汇;TASK1熟记5种类型作文及TAKS2写作模型。

2、8分作文:黑体句型及词汇可以熟记。

3、胡敏雅思高分作文:作为作文整体框架模仿,切忌背诵。看看就罢!

4、《十天突破雅思写作》与《十天突破雅思口语》慎小嶷

雅思作文包括什么

雅思作文包括学术类和培训类,写作时长均为60分钟,考生需在规定时间内完成两篇作文的写作。学术类雅思写作是一篇150字的文章,需要考生进行分析、描述或说明一张表格,曲线图,柱状图或示意图;另一篇是250字的议论性文章。培训类雅思作文一篇是150字的书信;另一篇250字的议论文。

雅思写作:如何准备小作文?

小作文写作要求

根据图表写一篇学术类的报告。

超过150个单词。考官会检查字数,字数不足会被扣分的。

时间在20分钟之内,因为大作文的分值是小作文的两倍,不要在此耽误太多时间。

小作文的得分标准

完成写作要求(25%)

连贯与衔接(25%)

词汇(25%)

语法范围和准确度(25%)

小作文的6种类型

maps, diagrams, bar charts, tables, line graphs, pie charts. 有时候考试会是两种形式的结合。

练习写开头段

通常开头段很快就可以写完,而且开头段一般都很格式化。

下面两个开头段,你认为哪个更好呢?

Here we can see that the graph represented information regarding the number of sales of two companies in two years.

The chart illustrates the number of sales of two companies(Marks Ltd and Bumper Store) in 2000 and 2010

词汇(Vocabulary)

每一种写作类型,都要掌握一些有用的词汇量。这对于line graphs,maps 和pie charts 尤其重要。其中line graphs写作,可替换(paraphrase)的词汇很多。小作文想要获得高分,使用不同的词汇是很重要的,而且必要的时候要同义替换。单词拼写要认真检查,不要有拼写错误,也不要冒险去用一些词汇。

语法(Grammar)

考生们想要在小作文中取得好的分数,需要写一些复杂的句子,对于6分及以上的学生来说,这是必要的。同事还有语法的准确性,语法的错误越多,相应地分数就会越低。所以,避免常见的低级错误也是考生需要关注的。

文章结构(structure)

因为考官会关注我们的信息组织及分段能力,考生要确保自己的文章结构正确。

连接词(lingking words)。

考生需要向考官展示自己使用了一些连接词来将信息组织在一起,以一种连贯的方式来比较信息。连接词很容易学,考生务必保持关注。

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全文翻译2:老龄化社会+观点类( advantage/disadvantage ) +段落的数量In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

全文翻译3:看电视学习+观点类( agree/disagree ) +写作要点

Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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雅思ENVIRONMENT类写作素材

Growth in air travel harms environment(飞行增多危害环境) Climate change experts from the Tyndall Climate Research Centre in Britain have said urgent action(紧急行动)is needed to curb the rapid growth in air travel(抑制飞行的快速增长)if the government is to meet its commitments(实现承诺)on tackling global warming(处理温室效应). This report from Stephen Evans: Falling ticket price and rising incomes are leading to rapid growth in global air travel.(导致国际航空业迅速发展的原因是机票价格的下降和收入水平的提升。)According to the British government, the number of British air passengers, for example, will more than double in the next quarter of a century(下一个25年). Increases of such an order would mean much more aviation fuel(燃油)being burned and aviation fuel may be more harmful to the environment than other fuels because the resulting smoke is emitted at high altitudes(高海拔). A group of scientists at the environmental research group, the Tyndall Centre, says that if Britain is to meet its overall target for cutting damaging emissions(减少有害气体排放), other uses of fuel like for heating homes or driving cars would have to be cut dramatically. The British government wants the use of aviation fuel covered by international agreement on the environment. The difficulty for any individual government(任何政府)is that taxing fuel used at its own airports might push airlines to move their operations to competing airports in other countries. https://www.sodocs.net/doc/cb173875.html,/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2005/09/050921_aviation.sh tml Calls to control low-cost flights(限制廉价航空) Cheap flights(廉价航空)on no frills airlines may not be a burden on our wallets but they will dearly cost the UK's environment(严重危害环境), campaigners believe. Scientists predict that if carbon dioxide emissions continue to increase, global warming will bring higher annual temperatures and heavier rainfall(温室效应会带来更高的气温以及更大的降水)- with all the associated problems(相关的问题). +将来时)it is . Agencies such as the Sustainable Development Commission (SDC) want our air tickets to reflect "the true cost of flying" to the environment. To green groups, this involves the aviation industry having to pay tax on the fuel(航空业应该为燃油使用赋税)it puts in planes.

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