2015年雅思写作

雅思写作

1.小作文

1.The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed person per year in different countries

The table illustrates the consumption of beers and fruit juice by per person per year in 10 different countries.

The first table provides with information of consumption of bears in these ten countries. It is obvious that Ireland consumes the most quantity of beer, reaching to 155 litres. Germany, consuming 119 litres per with 36liters less than that of Ireland, occupies the second places(ranks second). With 106 litres’ consumption, Autria comes the third. It is notable/remarkable/noticeable that people in Denmark drink the same quantity of beer as that in Belgium, which is 98 litres per year. It is then followed by Austria, Belgium, Denmark, United Kingdom, Australia, United States, Netherlands.Finland consumes fewest quantity of beers among these 10 countries, that is 79 litres.(没有突出Belgium 和Denmark 的消耗量是相同的）

What has been displayed in second table is the consumption of fruit juices. It is clear that the consumption of fruit juice is approximate three times less than that of beer, In second table Belgium, Denmark and Ireland are replaced by Canada, Sweden and New Zealand to be taken into consideration . Canada, with 52.6 litres per personal per year in consumption of fruit juice, wins the first place. Then followed by United States with 42.8 litres. Following decreasing order, then comes to Germany, Austria, Sweden, Australia, Finland, United Kingdom, Netherlands, while New Zealand has lowest consumption(is placed at the bottom of the second table)(24.8 litres).

Overall, these two tables list the condition of consumption of beers and fruit juice in 10 countries respectively, and there seems no relationship hidden with consumption of beer and fruit juice.

剑5 task 4 (2)

The given table compares the condition of underground railway systems in term of open date, the length of route and the passenger flow volumes among six cities.

Compared with other cities, the city first equipped with underground railway systems is London in 1863 while Paris is the second in 1900. Then follows Tokyo(1927), Washington DC(1976), Kyoto(1981) with Los Angeles being the latest city which owned underground railway system.

Being the earliest city constructed with underground railway systems, London also has the longest route(394 kilometers) with Paris positing in second with length of route in 199km as well. Following the decreasing order, then comes to Tokyo(155km), Washington DC(126km), Los Angeles，as the last city in construction, surpassing Kyoto(11 km) in possession of 28km in length of route.

In terms of passenger flow volume, Tokyo, with 1927 million passengers per year, (serves the largest number of passengers per year) although it doesn’t have the longest route nor the earliest systems. It is then followed by Paris(1191) while London drops to the third with 775 million. Kypto and Los Angeles have fewest passengers with 45 and 50 million respectively which is

significantly fewer than Washington DC（144 millions).

Overall ,the development of underground railway systems varies a lot within the given six cities.

2.line graph

The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years of 1960 and 2000

The line graph illustrates the comparison of the rate of smoking between men and women in Someland during years from 1960 and 2000.

In these 40 years, the rate of smoking in men experienced an gradual decrease while this rate was always higher than that of women. In 1960, approximate 610 men of every1000 were involved in smoking which ranked the first. Subsequently, continuous decrease was noticeable and in 1995 the men who still smoked, declined to almost half of that in 1960 with 300 men. Finally, it was ended at 250 men in every 1000 men in terms of smoking in 2000.

As for the rate of smoking in women, different from the condition of men, it saw an considerable rising trend at first and then dropped. In 1960, women who associated with smoking were much less than( around 6times) men, with 90 in every 1000which were very low. After following 15 years’remarkable increasing, peaking in 1975(中间变化的快慢也要说一下), the quantity of women who smoked in every 1000 people was 320. Afterwards, the population of women leveled off at 320 in subsequent 5 years and then steadily fell to 200 with less significance than that of men in 2000 which reached to its lowest point.

Overall, this graph demonstrates the condition of smoking in men and women explicitly. Although the transformations of smoking in men and women have their distinct trend, the gap between men and women were constantly eliminated.

(2)剑九test4

The provided line graph compares the consumption of different kinds of energy in the USA between 1980 and 2030.( The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012, and projected consumption to 2030.)

Throughout the period, ,petrol and oil were of the most prevailing usage ( are the dominant fuel sources throughout this period) and experienced a upward trend, starting from 35 quadrillion units in 1980 and being expected to reach approximately 48 in 2030. Following the

same tendency as the petrol and oil, the utility of coal and natural gas was also increasing and this trend was also projected to continue to 2030. In 1980, the consumption of coal and natural gas were 17 and 20 quadrillion units respectively and would increase to 33 and 26 in 2030. With consumption in coal increasing more significantly , it l was projected to outweigh the consumption of natural gas in 2015. In last 15 years, the the growth of coal was expected to be more noticeable while the consumption of natural gas would remain stable.

The general usage of clear energy was comparatively low. With the similar consumption in 1980, the usage of the Nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower was about 3 quadrillion units. The growth in nuclear was most significant in comparison with the other two, with its consumption would nearly triple in 2030(8 quadrillion). The increasing rate for solar/wind was relatively marginal with 6 quadrillion units in 2030 while usage for hydropower remained at its original figures after experiencing a period of fluctuation.

Overall, it is noticeable that the usage of fossil fuels, such as petrol and oil, coal and natural gas, was constantly more popular than emerging energies.

The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012,and projected consumption to 2030(带有预测性质）

Petrol and oil are the dominant fuels sources throughout this period, with 35 quadrillion units in 1980, rising to 42q in 2012. Despite some initial fluctuation, from 1995 there was a steady increase. This is expected to continue, reaching 47q in 2030.

Consumption of energy derived from natural gas and coal is similar over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. Coal is predicted to increase steadily to 31q in 2013, whereas after 2014, gas will remain stable at 25q.

In 1980, energy from nuclear,hydro-and solar/wind power was equal at only 4q. Nuclear has risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. After slight increases, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980figure. It is expected to maintain this level until 2030, while the other s should rise slightly after 2025.

描述总趋势时，用一般现在时，然后若有预期到未来在现在时停顿一下，然后再描述趋势

(3)OG test2

The given line graph illustrates the average temperatures at monthly base among three different major cities while the table shows the time of sunshine in these cities.

(The temperature patterns for London and New York are similar) From the first graph, it is noticeable that New York and London have similar transformation tendency in terms of average temperatures whereas Sydney possesses the converse trend. In January, both New York and London reach their lowest temperatures with temperature in London sightly higher than New York( 8 and 4 respectively). As time passes, these two cities experience an upward trend, though the growth in New York is more significant, the temperature of which surpasses that of London after April. After peaking at July with 29 degree and 23 degree respectively, the temperatures of New York and London initiate to decrease and the falling trend of London is comparatively more obvious with the second equal temperatures of these two cities(11 degree) occurring in late

November. In December, the temperature of New York is over 9 degree, marginally higher that that of London(5 degree). In contrast, Sydney has highest temperature in January(26 degree) and witnesses a downward tendency then. In July, it reaches lowest temperature at 16 degree and starts to rise. Its comes back to 25 degree in December just slightly lower than its January figure.

From the second table ,we can see that New York owns the longest time of annual sunshine(2535 hours) which slightly more than that of Sydney(2473 hours) whereas London only has 1180 hours which is less than half of the aforementioned two cities.

Overall, from the graph and the table, we can notice that the total annual hours of sunshine among these three cities do have some relationships with their temperature since among these cities, the order of time in obtaining sunshine is in accordance with that of highest temperatures. Meanwhile, New York has the most significant difference in temperature compared with the other two.

3.bar chart

Given two bar charts provide with information in two aspects. First graph displays the rates of USA marriage and divorce between 1970 and 2000 while the second one illustrates the marital status of adult Americans n tow of the years.

In first graph, the rate of marriage in USA experienced a falling trend during 4 decades whereas the rate of divorce fluctuated much more marginally. In general the rate of marriages was nearly twice as much as its divorce counterpart. In 1970, the number of marriages reached to the peak with 2.5 millions, compared with 1 million of divorce. People who involved in marriages remained the highest value in the second decade, with number of divorces also becoming most significant(1.4 millions). In subsequent two decades, people who both got married and divorced saw a decreasing period with decreasing by 0.5 million and 0.4 million respectively. During 2000, the number of marriages dropped to 2 millions while that of divorce declined to 1 millions(ended at 1 million).

The second graph displays substantial differences in proportion of two eras at distinct marital status. Most adults were at the married status where 70% adults had been married in 1970, compared with 60% in 2000(it is obvious that married people accounted for the greatest proportion of adult American population in both 1970 and 2000). Percentage of adults who had been widowed also slightly larger in 1970 than in 2000 with around 9% and 6% respectively. On contrast, the ratio of adults who stuck to never married status in 2000 came to higher than that in

1970(20% and 15%), and proportion of adults in 2000 also overtook their counterparts in 1970 at the divorced status within 9% and 4% respectively.Overall, the marriage rates were significantly higher than the divorce rates over the three decades, and married population made up to largest proportion of the America population in both 1970 and 2000.

(2)剑九test2

The given bar chart compares the gross number of minutes consumed for telephone calls among three distinct categories from 1995 and 2002.( The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002.)

People in UK spent the most time on local telephone calls compared with the other two. (Local fixed line calls were the highest throughout the period)I n 1995, the time used to taking local telephone call was approximately 72 billion minutes then experienced the upward trend until 1999 when peaking at 90 billion minutes. In subsequent 3 years, the total number of minutes used in local telephone calls dropped continuously to around 72 billion minutes which was similar to that in 1995. (rising from 72 billion minutes in 1995 to just under 90 billion in 1998. After peaking at 90 billion the following year, these calls had fallen back to the 1995 figure by 2002.

As for time used in National and international calls, with time passing by, it was constantly increasing, ranging from 37 billion minutes in 1995 to 62 billion minutes in 2002. In the first 4 years, the total time used for local telephone calls was about twice as that used for National and international phone calls and after 1998, the gap between these two categories was steadily narrowed. Following the same tendency as National and international calls, the time used for mobiles witnessed an increasing trend as well, the tendency was more significant, though. In 1995, only 3 billion minutes were used for mobile in comparison with that used for local and National and international calls(37 billion and 72 billion respectively), with comparatively slight rise in first 6 years, time used for mobiles reached to 23 billion minutes in 2000. In the following 2 years, the total minutes nearly doubled and finally ended with 45 billion minutes in 2002.(though the growth slowed over the last two years) The rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones tripled.

Overall, the time used for mobiles calls and national and international calls had been soared from 1995 to 2002 whereas the time used for local call, although went up for a certain period, finally decreased to its original level which lead the drastically narrowed gap among three categories in 2002 compared with that in 1995.(the most popular......the gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably over the second half of the period in question.

(3)OG test1

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

The provided bar chart compare the proportion of people in different age level who donated money to charity between years 1990 and 2010.

The percentage of people whose ages were ranging from 18 to 20 years fell significantly from 1990(17%) to 2010( 7%), while both of which shared the lowest proportion compared with other age levels.More proportion people who were in their 26-35 years old would like to donate money than their younger counterpart both in 1990 and 2010 with comparatively lows difference between

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In some countries，the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future? 在一些国家，父母在教育孩子中扮演的角色，和很多方面，是不同的，为何存在这种差异，在未来父母的角色会有哪些变化? 【名师点评】 新题出现，恒热教育，谈及父母对于孩子成长中影响差异的原因，展望父母在孩子未来成长中作用的不同，不属分析问题解决问题话题，考察头脑风暴，写作有一定难度。 预测题目中的寒门贵子还是将门虎子，是否所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程，和本场考试都有交集。 【思路拓展】 男性比较理性和阳刚，女性比较感性和温柔，因此，他们对于孩子成长的影响自然不同，一般而言，孩子会从爸爸身上学到坚毅和勇敢，会从妈妈身上学会善良和孝道。骨血相连，血浓于水，无论父母，对于孩子的教育和引导都是积极的善意的。爸爸努力赚钱，是为孩子赢一个成长环境，妈妈努力育儿，是让孩子明辨是非、行为规范。 教育这个词的本源是说将一个人从一种蒙昧的无知的状态中引导出来，教育应该涉及道德教育、性格培养、学术教育等。

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