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【英语】英语中考英语书面表达100及答案经典

【英语】英语中考英语书面表达100及答案经典
【英语】英语中考英语书面表达100及答案经典

【英语】英语中考英语书面表达100及答案经典

一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)

1.书面表达

我的英语学习

初中即将毕业,你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法,请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法,根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,

要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;

2.必须包含表格中所有内容,并作适当发挥

3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;

4.词数80-100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________

【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.

In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,communicate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition,in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!,倒装句only when we

develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2.你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括:1.你没完成学习任务的经历(事情,原因及后果);2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求:1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my

study.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________

【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.

I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.

How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如make good use of,last weekend,how to do,play a game,a kind of,spent more time on,forget to do,in the end,be angry with,be going to do,on the paper,put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We

should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3.书面表达

社会需要爱,时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动,存在于每个人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感动,而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞,让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧!是什么行为让你点赞?讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么?让我们一起分享吧!请根据以下提示要点,写一篇文章。

注意:1.词数:80左右;2.不要出现真实的人名及校名。

Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button

Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button

What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,讲述一件我点赞的事情,我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I should……,He is……,He always helps……,I want to……,so they can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我要点赞的人,接下来介绍他的情况,最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4.书面表达

随着电子时代的到来,西方文化如潮水般涌来,中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件,给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文,词数80左右,谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Yours,

Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.

All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!

Yours,

Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题,接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因,最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of,in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5.书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(lucky money)。随着生活水平的提高,

大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?请结合自己的实际写一篇文章,词数 80 词以上,文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下:

1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途;

2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少 3 点);

3. 呼吁大家节约用钱,把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。

【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.

In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.

All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】

【详解】

每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(luckymoney)。随着生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?这是一篇给材料作文,本题所给材料比较详细,写作中注意将所给内容表达出来,不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【点睛】

文章使用了很好的短语和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

6.书面表达

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻译。

要求:1. 短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,并适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Changes my hometown

My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, _______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________

【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题,介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式,给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在,我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来,并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知,作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了,需要注意的是在描写过去的时候,需要适当发挥一到两点;还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象,合理发挥,注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来,内容也要统一,符合题目要求,合情合理。表达时,需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译表格中的语句,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变,长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用,提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者按照题目要求,介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章是按照时间的顺序,先介绍了家乡过去的面貌,这一部分使用了过去时态,谓语动词都变成了过去式,形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子,这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整,叙述清晰、条理,结构合理。文章中语言得体,语句通顺,句式表达符合英语的习惯,语法规范、准确。短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。

7.书面表达

为了配合“足球进校园”活动,你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份,根据下列表格中的要点提示,用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意:1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;

1.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;

2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇:梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Thank you for your attention.

【答案】Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.

I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.

Thank you for your attention.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析:本题要求按提纲的提示,介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确本文主要从三个方面来写:介绍足球运动及其好处;说说自己的偶像;谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点:本文语言精炼,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,简洁,但是句意表达清楚;同时,本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式,使表达生动;用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。

8.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望,希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点,活动安排以及你的建议。

提示词语: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare

提示问题:● When and where wi ll the Chinese Summer Camp be held?

● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?

● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our

school this summer holiday .

.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.

The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:

First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.

Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.

What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.

If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,只给了一些要点提示,但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外,还要进行适当拓展,使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评:该题要求写作体裁为书信格式,所以例文用第一人称I进行写作,在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明,三个要点提示都已表达清楚,并进行了适当拓展,所给单词也都全部用上。

3.高分亮点:

短语:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。

句型:被动句型,现在分词作状语,主语从句。

9.根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100词.

丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩.请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程,按内容及要求,用英文完成写作.

内容包括:

1.Which course(s)do you like?

2.Why do you like it/them?

3.What can you learn from it/them?

写作要求:

1.依据你的兴趣选择课程(数量不限);

2.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

3.文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名.

Of all the courses,I like __________

________________.

【答案】例文

Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.

I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.

I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.

I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读。本题属于材料作文,主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的学科中学到了什么。注意时态的运用,灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。切记不要遗漏要点。

2.例文点评:这是一篇优秀的文章,很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科(体育、剪纸和厨艺),并解释愿意以及收获,最后一段讲述这些学科对他的生活的意义。

3.高分亮点:

单词短语:like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时,形容词放后面。高分句型:That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导的表语从句。

【点睛】

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1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。

2介绍活动的情况:

(l)上周五,俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。

(2)本周五的下午3点,大家将共同交流读书的体会。

(3)同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。

3说一说网上购书有什么好处。

写作要求:

1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。

3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4至少80词。

Dear Angel,

How are you doing?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Cathy

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Cathy 【解析】

【详解】

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【点睛】

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