BEC中级写作例文

例一（课堂带写，三段式）：

You are the Head of Research for an international car manufacturer. You have to make an urgent trip tomorrow to visit Pierre Blanco, a colleague who works for a subsidiary. Write a memo of 40-50 words to your secretary:

?Telling her who you are going to see and when

?Asking her to book flight tickets and accommodation

?Telling her what work you would like her to do in your absence.

Write on your answer sheet.

例二（课堂5分钟快速练习，一段式）：

You are a manager in a company which manufactures office furniture. Next month, you are going to London to discuss an important contract.

Write a note of 40-50 words to your assistant:

?Saying when you want to leave and return

?Asking him to book flights

?Telling him which hotel to book.

Write on your answer sheet.

例三（课堂10分钟常规练习，三段/一段式）：

Your company has just opened a new office in the United States. You have agreed to go and work there for six months.

Write a memo of 40-50 words to all your colleagues:

?Explaining why you will be absent

?Saying when you are leaving the office

?Expressing your wish to keep in touch

Write on your answer sheet

——请假、缺席

●典型的开头部分写作

●典型的正文部分写作

●典型的结尾部分写作

例一（课堂带写）：

You would like to go to a seminar on presentation skills.

Write an email of 40-50 words to your line manager:

?Requesting time off work to go to the seminar

?Saying when the seminar is

?Explaining why you want to go

Write on your answer sheet

例二（课堂10分钟常规练习）：

You are a regional sales manager for an international company. You have been asked to go to

a meeting at your company’s head office. You cannot go, so somebody else will go in your

place.

Write an email of 40-50 words to Erica Young, who is organizing the meeting: ?Apologizing for not being able to go to the meeting

?Explaining why you cannot go

?Saying who will go

Write on your answer sheet

2) 告知信息

●典型的文章结构

●典型的开头部分写作

●典型的结尾部分写作

●真题写作范例：

例一（课堂带写）：

You are a Project Team Leader. You have had to cancel your next project meeting because some of the members of your team will be abroad.

Write a memo of 40-50 words to your project team:

?Informing them of the cancellation and giving the reason

?Stating a new date and time for the meeting

?Requesting suggestions for the agenda

Write on your answer sheet.

例二（课堂5分钟快速拓展练习）：

You are the Research and Development Director of an engineering company, which is a subsidiary of a large corporation. The Chairman of the corporation is visiting your company next week.

Write a memo of 40-50 words to all your staff:

?Informing them of the visit

?Telling them why the visitor is coming

?Telling them when he will arrive and asking them to be at the welcome reception for him

Write on your answer sheet.

例三（课堂5分钟快速拓展练习）：

You are the managing director of a company whose profits have recently increased and you would like to reward staff for this.

Write a memo of 40-50 words to all staff:

?Thanking them for their contribution

?Explaining why profits increased

?Telling them what their reward will be.

Write on the answer sheet

例四（课堂10分钟常规练习）：

You need to inform your marketing team about a radio advertising campaign for one of your company’s new products.

Write an email of 40-50 words to your team:

?Reminding them which new product is

?Explaining why you’ve chosen to advertise on radio

?Saying what you expect, the advertising campaign to achieve

Write on your answer sheet

3) 组织会议培训活动

●典型结构

●典型的开头部分写作

例一（课堂带写）：

You are the training manager of a company which has won a large export order. You have

been asked to organize foreign language training for some of your staff.

Write a memo of 40-50 words to staff:

?Explaining why the course is necessary

?Saying which members of staff should attend

?Announcing when the course will start

Write on the answer sheet

例二（课堂10分钟常规练习）：

You have been asked to organize your company’s staff training program. Before the program starts you would like to identify training areas that staff are interested in.

Write a memo of 40-50 words to all staff:

?Saying when the training program will start

?Asking for suggestions for what to include in the program

?Giving a deadline for suggestions.

Write on your answer sheet

4) 询问类及其他

●典型结构

●典型的开头部分写作

例（课堂5分钟快速练习）：

You are the factory manager of a car company. You are waiting for urgently needed components from your purchasing department.

Write a note of 40-50 words to Mr. Grayson, the Assistant Purchasing Manager: ?Enquiring about the reason for the delay

?Stating when the components are needed

?Suggesting a meeting to discuss future deliveries.

Write on your answer sheet.

一、BEC中级（Vantage）Part Ⅱ

1．文体——Correspondence / Report / Proposal

2．写作者的口吻

3．语言的整合

4．按照文体讲解：

1）Business Correspondence

●考试频率

●7种内容类型（补充求职信和简历）

●基本格式:

1）Make Change

●写作的注意事项

●典型的开头部分写作

●典型的正文部分写作

●真题写作范例：

例一（课堂带写）：

Your Managing Director has asked you to reply to the letter below which is about a proposed educational visit to your company by a local school. He has written his comments on the letter.

SUNDSTORM TECHNICAL COLLEGE

Dear Mr. Takahashi,

Re: Educational Visit

Thank you for your recent letter accepting our request for an educational visit to your company.

a group of 35 students, aged between 17 and 18, and will be taking part in the visit as part of their careers development program.

I would like to suggest Friday 10th December. The group will leave here at 9:00am and should be

I understand the training officer

is willing

to give a talk to the students about the company ’s training program. This will be of considerable value, and I wondered if it would be most effective

Finally, would it be possible for the students to talk to some new employees in an informal ‘

I would be grateful if you could inform me as to whether these proposals are suitable and would like to thank you once again for your cooperation with the scheme for ‘School and Business Links ’.

Yours sincerely, Yamaguchi,

Headteacher

Write a letter of 120-140 words to the head teacher explaining the changes the Managing

Director would like to make to the visit.

Write on your answer sheet. 例二（课堂12分钟快速练习）：

The company where you work is organizing a sales conference. Your Sales Manager has

asked you to reply to the letter below, from a transport hire company called A1 Coaches, concerning arrangements for the conference. He has written his comments on the letter.

Write a letter of 120-140 words to Mr. Otley of A1 Coaches, to make sure that the

arrangements are changed. Do not include address. Write on your answer sheet.

Dear Conference Organizer,

Transport arrangements-Sales Conference 9/10 December

Following your telephone call yesterday, I am writing to confirm the coach and car hire details for your Sales Conference in December.

8:15 am

Transfer passengers to Whitestone Conference Centre by 9 am 48 passengers-1 coach

8:45 am Collect Chairman and guests from your Head Office (Silver Street) to arrive at

Conference Centre by 9 am.

10 passengers-2 car

6:00 pm Collect all delegates from Conference Centre. Take to Grand Hotel, for overnight stay. 48 passengers-1 coach 10 car passengers-2 cars

9:00 am Transfer delegates from Grand Hotel to Conference Centre.

10:30 am

1:00 pm

Please confirm that these arrangements are correct.

Yours sincerely,

PJ Otley

A1 Coaches Ltd.

例三（课堂20分钟常规练习）：

You are responsible for planning the magazine advertising of your company’s new product, which is a polish for cars. You have just received the letter below from the magazine that you are going to advertise with. You have also received a memo from your Marketing Manager about the advertising campaign.

Write a letter of 120-140 words to Mr. Ellwood at the magazine, telling him about the changes to the advertisement booking, and asking him or any other information that you require.

Do not include addresses

Write on your answer sheet

2) 推荐信

●推荐信的分类——自荐与推荐

●推荐信的原则——开门见山

●推荐信的典型开头部分写作——开门见山

●真题写作范例：

例一（课堂带写——自荐）：

You work for RCT, a company which sells business stationery. RCT is interested in becoming an agent for Novestat, a company which manufactures paper products.

Read Novestat’s advertisement below, on which you have made some notes.

Then, using all your notes, write a letter of 120-140 words to James Dowling at Novestat.

Do not include addresses.

Write on your answer sheet.

NOVESTAT

AGENTS REQUIRED

FOR A NEW PAPER PRODUCT

Novestat, a leading manufacturer of business stationery, is delighted to announce its exciting new range of designer paper products. This range allows customers to create their own business stationery to the highest professional standards, using their own computer printers.

We are looking for companies world-wide to distribute the NOVESTAT DESIGNER PAPER range.

Then, please write to James Dowling, Novestat, Unit 3, Basing EASTAT, Hampton, Middlesex,

例二（课堂20分钟快速拓展练习——推荐信）：

The international organization you work for makes an award every month to a person in each department based on the following criteria:

?Productivity

?Relations with customers

?Contribution to the team

Your line manager has asked you to recommend someone from your department for this month’s award.

Write your recommendation, stating who the person is and the reason for your choice.

Describe how this person meets each of the three criteria for receiving the award.

Write 200-250 words on your answer sheet.

专题：求职信与简历（Covering Letter / Letter of Application and Resume）：

例一：求职信

You have seen a job with a multi-national company advertised in a newspaper.

Write a letter to the company applying for the job. Refer to relevant factors such as the nature of the job and why you are interested in it, your qualification and experience, what you are doing now and what you could contribute to the position.

Write 200-250 words on your answer sheet.

Letter of Application

Room 320, Building 3, Lane 5

130 Nanjing Road

Huangpu District

Shanghai, 200000

P. R. China

22 June, 2008

Mr. Julian Proctor

Director of Sales & Marketing

Fortune Travel Agency

4490 Emmett Avenue

London, WC1 AC1

UK

Dear Mr. Proctor,

I wish to apply for the position of Regional Sales Manager, as advertised in today’s Toronto Star. As the attached resume suggests, my experience in the travel industry has prepared me for this

challenging position and I would welcome the opportunity to work for a prestigious and well respected employer such as Fortune Travel.

My academic background includes a degree in Business Administration from Queen’s University, where I completed all of my marketing courses with honors. I also have two years of experience in advertising and public relations, when I designed and implemented a marketing plan for Interprovincial Business Systems. My communication skills have always been a major asset to me and I take pride in my ability to work well with others in a managerial and supervisory capacity. These skills will allow me to contribute to your sales and marketing effort from the start.

I would really appreciate an opportunity of interview to further discuss my qualification and fitment to the position. I’m available anytime in the following 3 months and I’m looking forward to your favorable reply!

Yours sincerely,

John Steven

John Steven

Encl: Resume

3）解释信/报告

●中高级考试对于“解释信/报告”要求的异同点

●典型的开头部分写作

●典型的结尾部分写作

例一（课堂带写）：

You are the manager of a TV and radio repair workshop. One of your employees has received the letter below about a faulty cassette player which he inspected. He has his comments on the customer’s letter and asked you to write a reply.

Write a letter of 120-140 words to the customer, using the employee’s comments and explaining why your company cannot repair the cassette player.

Do not include address

Write on your answer sheet

35 Dorset Road

London W6

12 September 2007

Mr. D. Mason

Radio World

6 Adelaide Park

London W6

Dear Mr. Mason,

Re: Repair of Tashita Cassette Player

You returned our cassette player to us on 5th 1. 2.

Yours sincerely, Paul Johnson

例二（课堂带写——报告）：

Your company or organization is becoming more successful. In order for this success to

continue, you want to expand and increase the budget of your department. The Directors have asked you to write a report saying why your department needs extra money.

Write a report of 200-250 words, explaining why your department needs more money, and

include the following points:

? Whether extra staff are needed (and if so, why?)

? Whether changes to the office space and equipment should be made ? What plans you have for future development

? How the investment would generate extra business. Write on your answer sheet. 4) 多选一 题型特点及中高级区别

Your company exports to a number of countries around the world and is looking for a new

agent for international freight. The Export Sales Manager has asked you to write a proposal saying which agent you recommend.

Read the two advertisements below, on which you have already made some notes.

Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your proposal of 120-140 words for the Export

Sales Manager.

Write on your answer sheet.

5）询问类

●常用句型

例题：

●The company you work for is expanding rapidly and is looking for new premises. Your

Managing Director is interested in Waterside Industrial Park, and has asked you to write a letter to find out more information.

●Read Waterside Industrial Park’s advertisement below, on which your Managing Director has

already made some notes.

●Then, using all your Managing Director’s handwritten notes, write your letter to Rosemary

Brown at Waterside Industrial Park.

●Do not include postal addresses.

●Write 120-140 words on a separate sheet.

6）投诉信

●典型结构

●典型开头部分写作

●典型结尾部分写作

●You recently attended a one-day training course on health and safety. You were disappointed

with the course and you have decided to write a letter of complaint to the training company.

●Read the advertisement below, which gives details of the course. You have already made

some notes on the advertisement.

●Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your letter to Moira Geddings at GBG

Certification Services.

●Do not include postal addresses.

●Write 120-140 words on a separate sheet.

7）道歉信

●典型结构

●典型开头部分写作

●典型结尾部分写作

例题

●You are the secretary in a company which makes plastic tableware. Your boss has left the

letter below for you to answer.

●Write a letter of 120 - 140 words to Ms. Jereme, explaining the reason for the damaged

goods. Use the information in her letter and the notes from your boss.

●Do not include addresses.

●Write on your Answer Sheet.

五、BEC高级（Higher）PartⅠ----图表作文

●图表作文的文章结构

1）引言部分

2）主体段落

3）结论部分

The bar chart below shows the number of complaints made by consumers about different products and services in the years 1994 and 1997.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. You should write at least 140 words.

The bar chart displays the changes in the number of complaints made by consumers about five kinds of products and services between 1994 and 1997. According to the diagram, there was an increase in the complaints about most of the products and services.

The number of complaints about package holidays abroad and financial services increased over the period. The complaints made about the package holidays abroad rose by 12.7% from 15,000 in 1994 to about 18,000 in 1997. And there were about 52,000 complaints about the financial services in 1997, 5.2% up on 1994.

There were also more complaints about electric goods and second-hand cars in 1997 than in 1994. The complaints about the two products rose by 9.2% and 6.7% respectively. The former increased from 66,000 in 1994 to about 70,000 in 1997 and the latter went up from 80,000 to 86,000. And clothing is the only sector where the number of complaints dropped over the period. In 1994, there were around 45,000 complaints while the figure decreased by 4% to around 43,000 in 1997.

In conclusion we can see there were more complaints about the products and services in 1997 than in 1994 with the only exception of clothing.

●图表作文常用的语言手段

1）作文的开头——表示“出处”的句子结构。

2）描述“数据变化”的常用表达方式

3）表示变化的副词和形容词

4）描述“数据”的表达方式

5）“大约”的表达方式

例：

The graph below shows the sales of a product in three major international markets in the period between June 1994 and January 1997. A new marketing strategy was introduced in June 1995.

Write a letter for a university lecturer describing the information given in the graph.

You should write at least 150 words on your answer sheet.

The graph shows the sales of a product in Japan, France and Indonesia during the period between June 1994 and Jan 1997.

In Japan, sales stood at $20,000 in June 1994, the lowest in comparison with the other two areas. The sales figure went down within the next year. In June 1995, there were virtually no sales at all. After a new strategy was introduced, the sales began to pick up and rose steadily over the following one and a half years to reach a peak of $90,000 in January 1997.

In France, the sales were $50,000 in June 1994. Unfortunately, the sales fell significantly between June 1994 and January 1996 despite the new marketing strategy. In January 1996 sales were only $10,000. After that the sales figure leveled off for one and a half years.

In Indonesia, the sales were the same as in France in June 1994. it kept going up and arriving at a peak of $70,000 in June 1995. After the new strategy was introduced the figure fell slightly to around $60,000 over the next year before it bottomed out in May 1996. (187 words)

BEC higher3 Test4

PART ONE

Question 1

●The bar chart below shows the profits made by each of a company’s three factories for each

quarter of the year 2003. The pie chart shows the number of workers in each of the factories during that year.

●Using the information from the charts, write a short report describing the trends in profits

and the number of employees in each factory.

●Write 120-140 words.

Sample A

REPORT

This pie chart shows the number of employees in each factory in the year 2003. The factory in Bristol has the most employees with a number of 600. The factory in Leeds has 350employees and finally, London employs 150 employees.

Bristol made each quarter most of the profits also if it is slowly going down during the year. The profits in Leeds remain stable except for the 3rd quarter where the profits decreased but not dramatically. The factory in London has the worse profits, but they reached a high in the 2nd

quarter. Afterwards the profits remain stable. As a result we can see that more the number of employees in the factory is high, more it will have a positiv impact on the profit.

Band 3

This is a simplistic answer, but the range of structure and vocabulary is nevertheless adequate for the task and there are minimal errors. The target reader would be informed about the trend in profits.

Sample B

This report outlines the development of profits in three plants, in London, Leeds and Bristol, in 2003 and describes the staffing situation in each plant.

Bristol, the company’s largest factory, employed 600 people and reached profits of ￡12 million in the first quarter of 2003. The profits declined steadily, dropping to ￡9 million in the last quarter.

The factory in Leeds had a workforce of 350 people. This made it the company’s second largest plant. Profits remained almost unchanged at ￡8 million. In the third quarter however, they reached a low at ￡7.5 million.

The London factory’s workforce comprised 150 people. Profits did not vary much and remained just over ￡3 million. Nevertheless, they peaked in the second quarter with earnings exceeding the ￡4 million level.

Band 5

This is a virtually flawless answer, which fits all the descriptors for a band 5.

BEC Samples 一、BEC中级Part Ⅰ

1．

To: Mary, Secretary

From: John, Head of Research

Date: 13 March, 2008

Subject: Urgent Trip

I’m leaving tomorrow to meet Pierre Blanco in the French branch of our company.

In that case, please subscribe for me a return air ticket and a single room at a hotel around the branch.

Also be sure to maintain the order of all the documents and make notes of all the contacts when I’m away.

2．

To: Chris, Assistant

From: John, Manager

Date: 19 March, 2008

Subject: Business Trip

A quick note to inform you about my following business trip to London on April 20th and back on 23rd. Please reserve for me a return air ticket and a suite at the Hilton near Waterloo Bridge in that period.

3．

To: All Staff

From: Kelly, Commercial Manager

Date: 26 March, 2008

Subject: Transfer Notice

I’m writing to inform all of you about my job transference to the US office, since the company has just started up business there.

I’m planned to leave on 15 April, and would probably stay in the US for half a year to monitor business development there.

During my absence, Assistant Commercial Manager Mr. Chris Clinton would take my charge. It is my great pleasure to have worked with you in the past few years and I sincerely hope that you could contact me through company email.

4．

To: Chris, Line Manager

Cc:

Subject: Time off Work

I would request 2 days off work to attend a seminar on presentation skills on 22 March as my current job involves frequent presentations to customers, which can be learnt from the seminar.

Please carefully consider my request and I’m looking forward to your favorable reply.

Best,

John

5．

To: Erica Young

Cc:

Subject: Meeting

I sincerely apologize for not being able to attend the meeting at the head office for the reason that there is some emergency in the process of an important export order. As a regional sales manager, I couldn’t leave at this moment but have to stay with it for the company’s benefits. In that case, I hope you could accept my proposal that Mr. Smith would go instead of me.

Thanks,

John

6．

To: Project Team

From: John, Project Team Leader

Date: 19 March, 2008

Subject: Project Meeting

I’m writing to inform you about the cancellation of our next project meeting on 21 April, as some of our members would be abroad at that moment.

In that case, I would suggest another appointment (Or: I would reschedule/rearrange it) at 9:00AM, 28 April if there is no problem with you.

Any question about the agenda please feel free to contact me (Or: do not hesitate to contact me), and I would take full account/consideration of it.

7．(从此篇开始省略title的格式，只有正文内容)

I’m writing to inform you about the visit of the corporation’s Chairman to our company on 24 March, next Monday.

The purpose of his visit is to reward the distinctive/outstanding staff of the past year / inspect the completion of the first quarter’s assignment/task / settle/handle/tackle/deal with/solve the emergency arose yesterday / meet a VIP/Premier Customer of our company.

BEC中级写作范文及讲解

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BEC商务英语中级写作

BEC商务英语中级写作 为了让大家更好的准备商务英语BEC考试，给大家整理写作指导,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 拒绝信 Dear Mr. Johnson, We are terribly sorry that the repair of your cassette player is really beyond our reach. There are several reasons why we left your equipment unrepaired. Firstly, our technician in charge of the cassette player had been several days off for serious flu, the delayed the handling of the equipment Secondly, there is no parts found in the present market to replace the volume control which really needs repairing.

We have the ability to replace the on/off switch, however, the cost is too high to worth it, because you can use the amount of money to buy a new one. Accoring to our survey, this type of equipment is manufactured in 1985 and the manufacturer has gone out of business, so it is impossible for you to talk with them. We are really sorry for our helplessness Sincerely, Mason Manager BEC商务英语中级写作范文2 可行性报告 Report on installation of a new word processing On several occations, we have discussed the desiability of installing a new word processing system to replace the six-year-old stand-alone word processing system we currently use.

BEC商务英语中级写作范文2020

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