最新整理满分雅思大作文赏析

满分雅思大作文赏析

对于雅思写作的复习，一些雅思大作文范文，例文还是很有必要自己观摩的，为此小编特收集整理了这篇雅思大作文九分例文点评，分享给大家。希望考生能从中总结出对自己有用的知识点。

满分雅思大作文赏析

范文第一段：

C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e

p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e

b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.T o w h a t e x t e n t d o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e? S o m e f e e l t h a t t h e

c h i l

d r

e n o

f l o w i n c o m e f a m i l i e s a r e b e t t e r e q u i p p e d t o d e a l w i t h d i f f i c u l t i e s p o s e d b y t h e r e a l w o r l d w h e n t h e y

g r o w u p a n d t

h e y a l s o b e l

i e v e t h e p r i v i l e g e d

c h i l

d r

e n o

f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s a r e l e s s f i t t o d e a l w i t h t h e s e d i f f i c u l t i e s .T h e i m p l i c a t i o n s a n d

v e r a c i t y o f t h i s a r g u m e n t s e e m s e l f-e v i d e n t,b u t i n f a c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n.(58w o r d s)

名师点评：

最后 1句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句：

b u t i n f a

c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n，感觉是在抛砖引玉。

范文第二段：

T h e p o p u l a r w i s d o m i s t h a t c h i l d r e n o f p o o r e r f a m i l i e s l e a r n e a r l y o n t h e v a l u e o f a b u c k,a n d a r e t h u s n a t u r a l l y b e t t e r s u i t e d t o s t r e t c h i n g

m o n e y w h e n t i m e s g e t t o u g h i n a d u l t h o o d. I n v e r s e l y, t h e c h i l d r e n o f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s,t h o s e b o r n w i t h a s i l v e r s p o o n i n t h e i r m o u t h s, a r e b e l i e v e d t o b e c o m p l e t e l y i g n o r a n t o f t h e v a l u e o f m o n e y, h a v i n g h a d e v e r y t h i n g p r o v i d e d f o r t h e m i n t h e i r y o u t h a n d o f t e n t i m e s e r r o n e o u s l y e x p e c t i n g t h e s a m e

s i t u a t i o n i n a d u l t h o o d.T h e y a r e b e l i e v e d t o b e p r o n e t o o v e r s p e n d i n g a n d f i n a n c i a l

i r r e s p o n s i b i l i t y.T h i s b e l i e f,t h o u g h l o g i c a l,

o v e r l o o k s o n e k e y p o i n t w h i c h i s,o f c o u r s e,

e d u c a t i o n.(100w o r d s)

第 1句是主题句。请注意，从此段的内容来看，这是个让步段(即分析自己并不赞成的观点)。虽然 4段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论，但是本人还是喜欢这样的写作，即主体段的观点还是有侧重的，把让步段放在前面，最后 1句话引出下一段，这样过度地很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确!

范文第三段：

T h e b a s i s o f t h i s a r g u m e n t i s,o f c o u r s e,

k n o w i n g t h e v a l u e o f m o n e y,a n d t h e i d e a t h a t

c h i l

d r

e n o

f t h e p o o r k n o w t h i s,a n d t h o s e o f t h e w e a l t h y d o n o t . W h o t h o u

g h, i s i n a b e t t e r p o s i t i o n t o t e a c

h t h e

i r c h i l d r e n t h e v a l u e o f m o n e y; s o m e o n e s k i l l e d i n e a r n i n g a n d k e e p i n g i t,t h e w e a l t h y

p a r e n t, o r s o m e o n e w h o c a n n o t s e e m t o a c q u i r e i t, t h e p o o r p a r e n t? B o t h w e a l t h y a n d p o o r c h i l d r e n a r e e q u a l l y l i k e l y t o a c q u i r e a n e d u c a t i o n i n m o n e y, w h e t h e r i t i s f o r m a l,o r i n t h e s c h o o l o f h a r d

k n o c k s. C o n v e r s e l y, b o t h c h i l d r e n a r e a s l i k e l y t o i g n o r e t h i s e d u c a t i o n.(101w o r d s)

这段的内容感觉写得不够直接，还是在分析对方观点的漏洞!请注意，前面让步段已经这么写过了，那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点，这样从内容上来说更 c o n v i n c i n g一点!此外，需要说明的是，大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度，但是这是要有一定的英语功底才行的!如果英语功底不行的话，建议内容不要写太深，因为那样容易造成考官看不懂你在说什么!

最后一段：

A p o o r c h i l d m a y b e l i e v e t h a t o n e c a n g e t a l o n g, i f n o t a s e a s i l y, w i t h o u t w e a l t h. A w e a l t h y c h i l d m a y b e w e l l t r a i n e d b y a p a r e n t s t e e p e d i n t h e

k n o w l e d g e o f m o n e y m a n a g e m e n t;t h e k e y t o

d e v e l o p i n g t h i s s k i l l i s e d u c a t i o n.

名师点评：

最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法，即

e d u c a t i o n.它没有像传统的结尾段那样简单的重申自己的观点。

总结点评：

全文的观点有待揣摩，作者很明显是不赞成题目的

说法，即 C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e

b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢，还是富人家的孩子呢?根据文章来看，作者是中立，他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。I n o t h e r w o r d s，整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中，这种写法经常使用，还是非常实用的，大家可以学习一下。此外，文章中有很多好词好句，特别是长句，值得模仿一下，此篇9分雅思作文。

提高雅思写作能力的5个秘诀

1.丰富词汇

词是语言最基本的成分。如果不掌握一定数量的词语，雅思写作就无法写出好文章。雅思写作要写好文章，就必须善于从众多的词语中选择和运用最恰当的词语。所以扩大和丰富自己的词汇量易锯商雅思写作能力的基础。

2.重视阅读

要有效地提高英语水乎，必须作大量的阅读。广泛的阅读可使学生开拓视野，丰富知识，增加语感，为写

作提供必要的语言材料。作文和阅读是相辅相成、互相促进的。有些词语和句型，学生只是似曾相识，通过作文能促使学生把这些东西运用得更熟练，表达得更准确。反过来，这也会有效地提高学生的闻读理解能力。

在广泛阅读的基础上，特别要注意精读一些内容接近现实生活，接近中学生生活实际的例文。这些文章应该篇幅短小，文字浅显，语言规范。由于目前中学课本内容安排的限制，很多学生想在生活中表达的东西在课本中却无法找到。

在雅思写作课堂上，教师讲解课文。船也都着重语法，而极少分析篇章结构，正是由于以上原因。阅读一些启发性强，能触类旁通，有助于写作的例文自然是很有必要的。至于一些离现实生活较远，句子复杂，含意深奥的文章，则不必在上面多花时间。

3.加强背诵

看了好文章，不单是理解就够了，还应该在理解的基础上多多背诵，才能达到融会贯通、据为已有的效果。英语宜多诵多背，把一些句型、短语，一些文章的片段或全篇，背得滚瓜烂熟，让这些材料在你的脑袋里扎根，当你要用的时根，它们使会自然而然地冒出来。背诵可

以培养正确使用语言的习倔，增强语感，这样就可以避免生搬硬套地写一些中国式的英文。加强背诵能变难为易，变费力为省力，能有效地帮助学生提高写作能力。现在背诵和熟记一些语言材料，对中学生来说将会受用无穷。

4.收录材料

在大量阅读中，要注意收集雅思写作中经常要用到的各种材料。发现有可以汲取的内容，有可以丰富自己表达手段的词语、句子和语段等，都应该随手记录，并整理分类。手头有了较多的材料后，可以经常翻翻读读，并随时作新的补充。

练习雅思写作时，可作必要的改动，灵活选用。经过反复的模仿、实践，肯定会提高写作能力。

5.多写多练

雅思写作写作能力必须通过反复实践才能获得。作文可先从仿写开始，模仿的例文应选择那些语言朴实，结构简单的短文。中学生练习写作时，应尽量使用学过的单词、短语和句型。这既能巩固课堂里学到的内容，又能提高写作能力。所用的语言要力求正确清楚，为此在写的时候要十分细心，勤查勤问。对想用的词或句稍

有怀疑，就应该停下来查一查。只要做到多读范文，多写多练，持之以恒，写作水平就一定会逐步提高。

雅思大作文范文三十篇

Topic 1: When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion? 媒体信息一致的缺点： ?国际媒体（global media)—般掌握在少数几个有实力的机构手中（in the hands of a few, large, powerful organizations)；有了媒体的宣传(propaganda)后,西方文化成了主流(domineering force),大规模的、有吸引力的广告(mass seductive advertising )唤起了落后地区人们对物质新的向往（create fresh desires),经济联系增强（strong economic ties),西方产品取代了本地产品，使人们更加向往西方的文化； ?文化开始融合在一起(mingle),人们被新的价值观所围绕(bombarded with new values)，对自己的文化失去信心和自豪感（confidence and pride),拒绝接受自己的文化传统（rejection of their cultural heritage)转而接受西方的文化习惯（adoption of Western cultural practices);西方媒体削弱了民族的特征(ethnic identity)和社会的凝聚力（social cohesion);因为担心失去观众(a loss of viewers),当地的电视台也开始播放西方的电视节目（television shows), ?国际媒体的普遍会降低世界文化的品质和多样性（degrade the quality and diversity of world culture);文化被商业化（commercialized), —些文化产品（cultural goods),如音乐、服装，都变成了商品（commodities in the marketplace)。因此，即便一些文化在世界其他地方传播，它原来的性质（authenticity)已经丧失。 媒体信息一致的优点： ?国家之间的频繁交往会促进文化之间的交流。因此，相互了解和相互认同的可能性(likelihood of mutual understanding and mutual acceptance )就会增加，这是顺应全球化的趋势； ?未必一定放弃传统观念（not necessarily lead to the abolition of traditional values),事实上媒体可以起到宣传和稳固传统文化的作用； ?主流媒体一般都会反应文化多元性（The dominant media reflect cultural diversity.); —些外国节目其实促进了文化多元性(Most foreign programming is promoting cultural diversity.),适应了当地的条件（adapt to local conditions)，注意到了当地文化的敏感性（aware of cultural sensitivity).自我调节来适应市场(exercise self-censorship to suit the market :)。 As international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programs (such as TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations, such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of programs broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds. In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin. American culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian people now imitate American people, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV programs that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.

雅思小作文大全及范文

101. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test Tip Check the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three. We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows… , We can see… If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that.

Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions. The graph shows (show) how many people visited (visit) three London museums in the summer of 2013. Most visitors went (go) to the British museum between June and September. The number fluctuated (fluctuate) between 500 and 750. By contrast, the Science Museum and the Natural History Museum received (receive) fewer visitors. The number of people who visited the Science Museum dropped(drop) gradually from 400 thousand to 300 from June to August then rose(rise) to 450 thousand in September. We can see (see) that the trend for the Natural History Museum was (be) similar. There was a sharp drop in visitors from June to July. The number remained stable (remain stable) in August and then increased (increase) steadily in September. 102. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

最新整理满分雅思大作文赏析

满分雅思大作文赏析 对于雅思写作的复习，一些雅思大作文范文，例文还是很有必要自己观摩的，为此小编特收集整理了这篇雅思大作文九分例文点评，分享给大家。希望考生能从中总结出对自己有用的知识点。 满分雅思大作文赏析 范文第一段： C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.T o w h a t e x t e n t d o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e? S o m e f e e l t h a t t h e c h i l d r e n o f l o w i n c o m e f a m i l i e s a r e b e t t e r e q u i p p e d t o d e a l w i t h d i f f i c u l t i e s p o s e d b y t h e r e a l w o r l d w h e n t h e y g r o w u p a n d t h e y a l s o b e l i e v e t h e p r i v i l e g e d c h i l d r e n o f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s a r e l e s s f i t t o d e a l w i t h t h e s e d i f f i c u l t i e s .T h e i m p l i c a t i o n s a n d v e r a c i t y o f t h i s a r g u m e n t s e e m s e l f-e v i d e n t,b u t i n f a c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n.(58w o r d s) 名师点评：

2015年雅思写作大作文真题解析

2015年6月6日雅思写作（一） 题目类别society 提问方式Discussion 考试题目 Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人认为给需要救助的人自己的帮助更加可取，有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。 Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help should be encouraged and respected. Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases. Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions children’s life. In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.(word count：274)

雅思大作文范文-全球化

雅思大作文范文-全球化

雅思大作文范文-全球化

Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered

雅思大作文范文小组学习和独自学习的对比

Some teachers say students should be organized into group study. Others argue that students should be made to study alone. Discuss the benefits of both and state the more effective m e t h o d i n y o u r o p i n i o n. The debate over whether studying in group is superior to studying alone has long been in question and educational experts are deeply divided over this issue. From an objective perspective, I’m strongly convinced that both methods have their own superiorities.(40 words) (此段第一句对原题的改写并引题，最后一句表达中立的观点。2句话40词，在实际考试中是最适用且能拿考分的第一段写法) One of the major superiorities of group study is that it provides an environment in which students can exchange ideas with each other. It is well known that knowledge knows no bounds, so it is almost impossible for even an eminent professor at university to have a good command of everything, let alone an ordinary student. In consequence, students should be divided into different groups or classes so that they can communicate with, learn from and help each other. (78words)(此段是分析studying in group的第一个优点，第一句是主题句，直接表明观点，随后的都是支持句，进一步分析为什么学生要在一起学习互相交流想法) Another obvious advantage of studying in group is that students have the opportunity to learn to socialize with others. Many sociologists point out that people in modern society are more isolated than those in ancient times mainly because they do not have enough opportunities to get alone with others. Under such circumstances, it is unreasonable to deprive the students of the chance to socialize by arranging them to study alone.(70words)(此段从一个方面提出了学生一起学习的好处，第一句同样是主题句，后面也同样的是支持句对主题句进一步展开讨论) However, we should not overlook the fact that studying alone also has its unique merit----effectiveness. In a big class, top students might feel bored because the teacher does not give them enough material to learn whereas poor students might feel just the opposite because the teacher gives them too many materials to digest. In other words, the teacher usually slows down the rate of progress or reduces the content of his lesson in the light of students with lower ability. (81words)(按题目要求，这一段是讲了独立学习的好处而不是它的坏处) Comparing the benefits of both sides, I deem group study more effective only if the class or group is not too big. (22words)

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