雅思写作科技类满分范文解析,必看!

雅思大作文考试题材多样，考生要想取得高分就要对每一种题材都有所了解并掌握技巧。今天，就以科技文为例，一起来学习雅思写作科技类满分范文解析吧。相信通过学习，你会了解一篇满分作文怎样写才会投考官所好，拿到满分。

科技类最常见的话题类型有两种：

1，科技产品评价及未来发展

即“科技产品怎么样，以后会怎么样”的问题;具体包括对现有科技产品的评价(优劣势分析、是否合乎道德标准和对个人、企业、国家以及整个社会的影响)和自己预想以后会出现什么样的产品或现有产品会出现什么样的功能以及未来的影响。

2，科技产品作为媒介

即“怎么用”的问题;具体包括现代通讯技术使人类足不出户便能操作网络购物、电视购物、网上银行、视频会议等，人类使用手机的利弊，互联网传播信息的好处与弊端，网上翻译软件盛行因此还有没有学习外语的必要。

要评价一篇文章的优劣势，首先还是让我们熟悉一下Writing Task 2即大作文的评分标准。

(1) Task response (TR)

Whether all parts of the task are addressed

Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.

(2) Cohesion and coherence (CC)

Whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points

(文章是否条理清晰，行文有逻辑)

Correct and appropriate use of connectives

(是否正确使用衔接词)

(3) Lexical resources (LR)

Range and accuracy of vocabulary (词汇丰富度和准确度)

The correct form and spelling of the words (词汇形式和拼写正确)

(4) Grammatical range and accuracy (GRA)

The range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structure (时态和句式的丰富度和准确度)

接下来，我们还是以一篇满分范文为例，看看具体怎么好在哪里，为什么会拿到了满分，我们能学到哪些知识，技巧。

题目：

The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.

What are your opinions on this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

范文：

The internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the country, I personally believe that the benefits of the internet far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.

First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk of social isolation—a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world—most of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and internet chat programs like MSN Messenger. These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.

Equally importantly, though, the internet has placed the entire world (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the internet is reliable or helpful—there is a vast

amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs. Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influence on communication and the flow of information.

(272 words)

首先我们先从TR(Task response)方面分析一下：

Whether all parts of the task are addressed：

经过审题我们发现这是一个个人观点类的作文，即What are your opinions on this? 给出你自己的观点，其要求是Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience，根据自己的知识或经验给出相关的例子。其中如果用自己的知识论证那就是道理论证，如果根据自己的经验来论证那就涉及到了举例论证。

在这篇文章的首段，作者首先论述了一个互联网极大地改变了我们生活的一个大背景，最后一句话直接的给出自己的观点，表明互联网的优势远远大于劣势。个人观点很清晰明了。接下来两段的论点运用了道理论证和举例论证相结合，同时也运用了让步的手法，来证明自己的观点——互联网优大于劣。这篇文章基本上完成了题目要求的所有任务。

Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported：

其次我们在看看作者表达的观点是否清晰，有说服力。

文章的第一个论点First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. 首先,互联网已经彻底改变了我们沟通的方式，这是一个不争的事实。关于这个论点作者是怎么来论证的呢?作者首先运用了

让步的手法(尽管会有造成社会孤立的风险)。后面作者就用到了道理论证，但是我们还是受益于电子邮箱还有网络聊天工具和远处的亲朋好友聊天。这个论据就很有说服力地论证了互联网改变我们沟通方式这个论点。

互联网的第二个优势是Equally importantly, though, the internet has placed the entire world (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. 互联

网已经把整个世界和所有的信息放在了我们的指尖。那我们来看一下作者又是怎么来论证的呢? 首先作者运用了今夕对比，即过去时候，大家都是花费大量时间在图书馆的书架上来搜索资料的，而现在呢，只要按一下按钮，所有信息都在眼前了。之后，作者又

乐此不疲的采用了一个让步的写法(尽管很多信息是不可靠或者没帮助的)，但是作者还是很满意于大量信息流是一个积极地发展。

综上可以看出，作者的第二三段都把论点放在了首句很清晰明了，并且后面支持的论据也十分的有说服力。

那下面我们一起看一下文章在连贯和衔接方面有什么值得借鉴的吧。

Cohesion and coherence (CC)：

文章中句与句直接的衔接词有：Yet(然而)，while(虽然)，despite(尽管)，now(现在)，admittedly(诚然)，nonetheless(尽管如此)等等，这些单词在文章段落中表示着一定的逻辑关系，这些词的实用会使段落直接更加的顺畅自然。

让我们再来一起找一找段与段之间的连接词有哪些呢?很好发现，在每段的开头：First of all(首先)，Equally importantly(同样重要地)，By way of conclusion(通过总结)，通过这些词来连接上下两段，起到了承上启下的作用，这样就不会过度的太突兀。

Lexical resources (LR)：

这篇文章在词汇方面也有很多可圈可点之处：

valid arguments 有效的论点

far outweigh 远大于

its drawbacks 它的缺点

has revolutionized 改革

social isolation 社会孤立

computer terminal 电脑终端

faraway places 遥远的地方

entailed long hours 花费长时间

offensive or dangerous 有攻击性的或者危险的

ranging from… to 从…到…

reaffirm 重申

这些都是文章中运用的非常棒的单词，值得我们背下来并且运用到自己的写作中。

Grammatical range and accuracy (GRA)：

语法也是考官考查的一个方面，所以语法也要在不错的基础上，尽量多用到不同的句式句型，不同的句子成分。首先这篇文章第一个亮眼的句子是there remains some disagreement as to whether…，这句话用到了there remain句型，实质就是there be 句型，表示有，存在。表示在…存在了一个反对意见。

其次第二段的开头句it is an indisputable fact that the internet…这句话运用了形式主句，真正的主语是后面的that 从句。第三段的开头Equally importantly, though, the internet has placed 是插入语的用法，我们看到作者真的很聪明，他把好的句式句型都放到了段落的开头显眼的位置，让考官能第一眼能看到，这是一个值得我们借鉴的小技巧。

随后的一个句子In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. 在此句中conducting research 涉及到了非谓语做主语。There is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from，这里非谓语表示解释说明。总之这篇文章句式多样，运用正确，显示了作者强大的语法功底。

最后我们来概括一下，通过这篇文章我们怎么来写一篇满分作文呢?

1，读懂文章题目，看懂题目要求，题目要求的所有问题都有涵盖。

2，论点要清晰明了，论据要有理有据有说服力，支持的论点要在两个及以上。

3，论据最好要运用多种论证方法比如：道理论证，举例论证，对比论点。

4，词汇要书面要正规要高级，切忌出现口语化词汇或者俚语。

5，文章条理要清晰，多使用连接词，段与段直接多加承上启下的句子。

6，语法要多样，多应用高分句式，比如：非谓语，强调句，同位语从句，形式主语等。

以上就是雅思写作科技类满分范文解析的详细介绍，高分的取得并非一蹴而就的，考生在掌握技巧的同时还要多加练习，不断总结，一定会有所进步。

2015年雅思写作大作文真题解析

2015年6月6日雅思写作（一） 题目类别society 提问方式Discussion 考试题目 Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人认为给需要救助的人自己的帮助更加可取，有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。 Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help should be encouraged and respected. Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases. Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions children’s life. In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.(word count：274)

2015年6月6日 雅思大作文解析

2015-6-6 Task 2 An ask 2 Analysis Some people p ople prefer to provide help and support directly to loca local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有?人喜欢直接帮助社区中需要帮助的?人。也有些?人喜欢把钱投给国内或国际慈善组织。讨论这两个观点并且表达你?自?己的想法。 1Topic 话题 Charity 2Question type 题型Discuss 3 5W ANALYZE THE QUESTION审题 （WHO+what+when+where+why+how） WHO: people WHAT: do charity How: direct support vs money donation Where: local vs national & international 4identify key words and their synonyms 关键词理解 support directly=direct involvement give money to=donate charitable organizations=charities 5identify all the writing tasks 确定全部写作任务 1. some people prefer direct help 2. others donate to non-pro?t organizations 3. own opinion Brainstorming and organ d organizing ideas 写作思路 Direct support Donation to non-profit 6Necessary: 必要性 组织运作不当，造成损失: charity frauds Bene?ts: 重要性 积极参与：direct involvement 及时?高效: concretely helping ?立竿?见影: make a signi?cant difference Necessary: 必要性 有些问题单纯本地解决不了 not easy to tackle at the local level Bene?ts: 重要性 资本有效运作：Meet more basic needs with fewer dollars 减税福利：tax bene?ts for helping globally

Simon考官范文-雅思写作Task 2： problem／solution(问题与解决办法) essay

题目： In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. 范文： It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems. As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives. There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens. In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older. (265 words, band 9)

雅思写作地图题深度解析(上)

雅思写作地图题深度解析（上） 朗阁海外考试研究中心姜芮 在雅思小作文中，流程图和地图题无疑对于广大考生来说都有不小的威胁，很多考生在遇到此类型的题目时，会变得手足无措，不知道应该从何写起。许多考生抱着侥幸的心里，往往不重视此类小众题目的备考，结果作文分数受到了很大的影响。在本系列文章中，朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的专家将着重对雅思写作地图题做一个深度解析。 我们用两个经典的地图题真题为例，在近两年出现的数次地图题中，多数都是属于这类“三格地图”。 WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the development of the village of Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 在审题过程中我们需要特别注意以下几点： 1. 时态：关注时态是小作文能否取得高分的关键，同样对于地图题，我们也应该很好地注意时态，本文的时间是明确的，都是过去的时间，因此全文应当使用一般过去时。 2. 顺序：该图属于动态的地图题，这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中，也就是按照图的顺序依次来写，不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题（即不涉及时间变化的题型），则按照空间顺序来写。在描述单幅地图时，我们可以采取上北下南的顺序描述，或者从左到右的顺序也可以，但值得注意的是，如果地图上有明显的方向标示，那就要根据这个标示来描述。 下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。 第一段：Introduction 引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram，可以替换成figure，原文中的shows，可以改为illustrate, demonstrate, reveal, indicate等词。宾语development，可以替换成transformations，也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊，可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 第二段：描述1780年的地图 1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据，因此只需要用存在句即可表达，不涉及任何变化的单词。但是，考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达，从而导致句式单一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外，还有非常简单的have句型，还有lie/ be located/ be situated这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型，比如“桌子上面有一本书”，可以翻译为on the desk is a book. 除此之外，要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素：住宅区homes，树林woods，农场farms，还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序（比如顺时针、逆时针，从左到右）都是可以的，但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因，因此建议先写住宅区homes。 还有就是土地单位的表达，land是不可数名词，因此不能说a land，只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确，可以用a plot of land（一小块），a stretch of（一长片），a large expanse of（一大片）。 另外朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们还要注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有：in the east/ west/ south/ north of ...; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落，可以用in the southwestern corner of ...; 在河流的上/下游：at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸：alongside the riverbank; 在河流的南端：at the southern end of the river.

雅思写作流程图解析

雅思写作流程图解析 朗阁海外考试研究中心刘雅敏 相比较其它小作文题型，雅思写作中的流程图对于很多考生来说都会感觉束手无策，尤其 是拿到题目时无从下手。这主要是由流程图的考察重点决定的。不同于图表题型在表达方 式上的固定，流程图更加能够考察考生“真正的”词汇量。虽然流程图出题频率不算高（去 年48场A类考试中，流程图出现6次），且普遍集中在工业生产过程和自然现象这两类，但题材差距很大，2014年的6场考试以及今年出现的2次流程图的具体题材如下： 由于题材不同，所以每次考试的词汇要求都不同，这无疑增加了考生的备考难度。 另外，一般情况下流程图都是以图片而非数字形式出现，所以有不少刚接触流程图的同学 认为它更接近大作文的语言风格。其实不然，流程图的文章风格偏客观描述，而且与其它 小作文题型一样，流程图还有一个特点——主要扩展顺序为时间顺序，这一点不同于大作 文主要以逻辑顺序为扩展顺序。无论大作文还是小作文，逻辑性是一切文章的灵魂，而要 想使流程图的写作逻辑严密，就要按照时间顺序展开，并加入恰当的时间顺序连接词。 除了小作文的共性外，流程图又有自身在表达方式上的特殊要求。具体而言，要注意两点：动词的使用和三大句型的运用。 一、动词的使用

考生面临的比较普遍的问题就是：图里面的词汇可能认识的只有一半，碰到这种情况，考 生应尽量猜，运用常识和看图猜词意。图里面可能会给出一定数量的动词，也可能没有给出。具体而言，一般会出现三种情况： 1. 图详细＋注解详细 流程图中出现过的词汇可以使用一次，第二次出现的时候尽量换成其同义词甚至可以是近 义词。但即使猜出了大概含义，找出同义替换仍然比较困难。对此，有两种解决方案： 1). “名词动用”，如果原图给出了某个词的名词形式，在你的作文中可以将其转变成该词 的动词形式。同理，形容词可以换成副词（通常在该形容词后加-ly），副词变成形容词。 比如剑桥真题6 Test 3的范文中：原图第二个步骤中的“food”, 作者改成了动词“feed”。 2). 根据“下义词”，找出其“上义词”，比如说“furnace”（熔炉）在“玻璃瓶的回收”之类的 流程图中都会出现，我们称之为“下义词”（即含义较具体），而其“上义词”（即概括性较 强的表达）可以是“a container”。 2. 图详细＋注解简略 这种情况要求考生把图片中出现的、而注解中表述比较简略而省掉的信息运用考生会的表 达方式补充出来，尤其注意动词的使用。比如：“玻璃瓶的回收”这一流程中有个步骤是把 碎玻璃倒进熔炉里面将其融化，图片画得较详细：一个椭圆形的鼎样容器，上面画的温度 计显示融化玻璃的具体温度数值，燃料是用木炭还是煤炭还是天然气……但下面的注解可 能只有三个单词：the melting process。显然，我们不可能只用这三个单词描述这一步骤，原因很简单，即考生都熟悉的一个悲剧——图描述完了，字数没写够！遇到这种情况，建议考生用自己的话把图表信息补充完整。 3. 图简略＋注解更简略 同样还是以“玻璃瓶的回收”流程为例，其中一个步骤是玻璃瓶被重塑成新瓶子、并注入相 应液体产品后，被卡车送到超市，消费者购买并使用。该步骤在原图中只出现了两个名词——“supermarket”和“customers”。实战中有相当数量的考生只用一句话说完了这个步骤（比如：These bottles are transported by trucks to supermarkets, and then they would be bought by consumers.）。这种写法与上面的写法后果是一样的——

雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4)

雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4) 本文为大家收集整理了雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4)。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

Sample Answer: The given graphs provide information on the amount of Carbon dioxide emission per person from different vehicles in the European Union and also show the expenditures on different modes of transportations. As is observed from the given illustration, the highest amount of CO2 per person is emitted by the Air transports and European Union spends highest percentage of funds for the road transportation system. According to the bar graph, a single passenger of a personal cars emit around 130 gm of CO2 per kilometer while a passenger in a bus contribute to 65 gm of emission per kilometer. Coaches, maritime and rail passengers emit the lowest amount of CO2which is about 50 grams per passenger in a kilometer. Finally a single passenger of airplane contributes to 370 km of CO2 per kilo which is the highest amount of CO2 emission among the given transportations. Based on the pie chart, the European Union spent the highest amount (52%) on the road transportation system while spent only 1% or 2% on ports, waterway airport

雅思写作题目解析：年轻人不快乐的原因

雅思写作题目解析：年轻人不快乐的原因抽象类： In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 在一些国家，年轻人更加富有，安全，健康，但是，他们还是不快乐，原因何在，如何解决? 思路拓展：幸福的源泉 1. 做自己喜欢的事情 2. 学习的乐趣 3. 朋友带来的乐趣 4. 生活的简单轻松 5. 梦想的实现年轻人不快乐的根源： 客观上： 1. 有些青少年来自单亲家庭，或者是暴力家庭，缺乏温暖和关爱，很难快乐。 2. 应试教育和填鸭教学使很多成长中的年轻人不堪重负，更谈不上发展自己的兴趣爱好，放松休闲，所以，很多年轻人不快乐。 主观上：

1. 幸福感其实和自我的期待值相关，欲望好像是盐水，越喝越渴。有时候，年轻人想要提升自我，但是，又缺乏力量，想要后退，又不甘心，欲求不得的焦虑正是不快乐的根源之一。 2. 罗素在论及快乐的时候提及朋友和爱好能够是快乐的重要源泉，所以，个人爱好很少以及交际圈很小的人，很难获得更多快乐。 解决策略： 1. 父母承担对于子女的责任，为他们营造快乐健康的成长环境。 2. 教育者协助学生们调整心态，同时，缓解学业负担，丰富校园活动。 3. 年轻人积极交友，培养乐观人生态度，发展个人爱好，获得更多快乐源泉。 原创语料库： 1. numerous youngsters = a great many teenagers = a number of young people n 很多年轻人 2. youngsters = teenagers = adolescents = the young = young adults = those who are in the formative years n 年轻人 3. acquire = attai n 二 obtai n v 获得... 4. well-being = pleasure = happiness n 幸福 5. feel cheerful = feel delighted = feel happy v感到快

雅思写作考官范文 Simon17篇

17 01. 02. 03. 04. 05. 06. 07. 08. 09. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17.

1. Many people prefer to watch foreign ?lms rather than locally produced ?lms. Why could this be? Should governments give more ?nancial support to local ?lm industries? It is true that foreign ?lms are more popular in many countries than domestically produced ?lms. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local ?lm-making by subsidising the industry. There are various reasons why many people ?nd foreign ?lms more enjoyable than the ?lms produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established ?lm industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond ?lms are examples of such productions and the global appeal that they have. Another reason why these big-budget ?lms are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget ?lmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison. In my view, governments should support local ?lm industries ?nancially. In every country, there may be talented amateur ?lm-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for ?lm crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality ?lms. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the ?lm industry, income from ?lm sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' ?lms, which were partly funded by government subsidies. In conclusion, I believe that increased ?nancial support could help to raise the quality of locally made ?lms and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market. (295 words, band 9)

雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4)

雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4) The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. Sample Answer: The given graphs provide information on the amount of Carbon dioxide emission per person from different vehicles in the European Union and also show the expenditures on different modes of transportations. As is observed from the given illustration, the highest amount of CO2 per person is emitted by the Air transports and European Union spends highest percentage of funds for the road transportation system.

至雅思写作大作文真题解析

年月至月雅思写作大作文真题解析

————————————————————————————————作者：————————————————————————————————日期：

题目类别教育与科技提问方式利弊判断 考试题目 Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 分析：教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点，而且这些话题跟广大考生们息息相关。平时对生活多一些思考，备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练，这些都是理想分数的 保障。 文章结构：4段 首段：导入话题，表达立场。 主题段1：玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。 主题段2：玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。 结尾段：总结上文，重申立场。 In recent years, the prevalence of computer games has exerted a significant effect on children’s life. As to whether they affect children negatively, there is an endless debate. Despite the fact that playing computer games is an effective way to relieve pressure, the problems associated with study and health cannot be neglected. Clearly, playing computer games is regarded as a main factor leading to poor academic performance. With the entertaining nature, computer games will easily distract children from their studious pursuits. With the passage of time, children will probably fall behind their peers in academic development. In addition, when children spend too much time playing computer games, they are less likely to participate in physical activities, which is one reason why many children suffer from obesity. As a result, these overweight children’s confidence may be undermined and their health may be negatively influence as well. Despite these disadvantages, the advantages can still not be ignored. First of all, the latest research shows that game-playing helps children to home their communication and interpersonal skills. In many cases, players work together in teams to achieve goals, competing against other players. Therefore, their social skills and teamwork spirit are put to the test. Also, computer games can have positive and therapeutic effects on players. Games provide an opportunity for children to decompress and tune out of strains and stresses of everyday life. Giving their time to rest is critical for emotional and mental well-being. In conclusion, it is not advisable for children to play computer games, for the reasons that it not only has a negative impact on their study, but also makes them lose confidence, although computer games provide a form of relaxation.

雅思大作文考官范文

climate change essay 题目： Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文： Climate change represents a major threat to life on Earth, but some people argue that we need to accept it rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this opinion, because I believe that we still have time to tackle this issue and reduce the human impact on the Earth's climate. There are various measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent, or at least mitigate, climate change. Governments could introduce laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions that lead to global warming. They could impose “green taxes” on drivers, airline companies and other polluters, and they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind or water power. As individuals, we should also try to limit our contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy efficient, by flying less, and by using bicycles and public transport. Furthermore, the public can affect the actions of governments by voting for politicians who propose to tackle climate change, rather than for those who would prefer to ignore it. If instead of taking the above measures we simply try to live with climate change, I believe that the consequences will be disastrous. To give just one example, I am not optimistic that we would be able to cope with even a small rise in sea levels. Millions of people would be displaced by flooding, particularly in countries that do not have the means to safeguard low-lying areas. These people would lose their homes and their jobs, and they would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or perhaps to other countries. The potential for human suffering would be huge, and it is likely that we would see outbreaks of disease and famine, as well as increased homelessness and poverty. In conclusion, it is clear to me that we must address the problem of climate change, and I disagree with those who argue that we can find ways to live with it. 'economic progress' essay 题目： Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 范文： People have different vi ews about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important. There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a