高中英语续写素材-动作心理环境

动作描写

Part1身体动作

1.点头，面部运动

nod one’s head up and down上下点头

shake one＇s head from side to side左右摇头

lift/ raise one＇s head抬起头

bow/ droop one＇s head低头

give sb. a determined nod坚定地点点头

smile at sb 朝某人微笑

give sb. a reassuring smile投给某人一个安慰的微笑

give/ manage/ force a weak smile强颜欢笑

be all smiles满是笑容

laugh from ear to ear笑得合不拢嘴

1）He came up，head bowed.他低着头走了上来。

2）His head didn＇t droop(低垂) and his eyes were brighter than usual

3）Pam sat in the corner with his head hung down (头低着)

4）His jaw dropped in amazement.他下巴惊讶得掉下来

5）The smile froze(僵住) on his face; his mouth fell wide open

6）we nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other

2.动“嘴”，嘴部运动

gasp for fresh air 拼命呼吸新鲜空气

gasp for breath气喘吁吁

puff and pant气喘呼吁

take a bite/sip咬/喝了一口

yawn sleepily困倦地打哈欠

cut in插话

talk in whispers低声说话

clear one＇ s throat清嗓子

Group I

1）She greeted James and inquired(问)，“ Are you ready?"James didn't respond

2）“Here，Mum! Here!＂! Tony exclaimed as he waved wildly in the crowd

3） My teammates were all screaming as[ dashed(冲向) toward the finishing line

4） The stadium got really noisy at that time, with everybody shouting at the top of his voice

5） The last words came out in an eager rush(蹦出来)

6） He looked at me， biting his lips(咬着嘴唇)，as if thinking.

Group 2

1）they let out a surprisingly loud voice.

2） He murmured(低声说) a thank you and ran home all the way.

3)He interrupted the silence with an announcement “The deadline to enter for he competition is tomorrow.”

4)I was getting ready to blow out all the candles and

she is getting ready to help me in case I ran out of air. “Time to go. "I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.

5）A young man came to the police station,surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that

he had spotted the murderer

6） I was laughing and panting(喘气)， trying to keep

up(追上) when I was tripped over(绊倒)by a stone

7) Scolded by the teacher, I bit my lip to stop myself

crying out(咬着嘴唇不让自己哭出来)/ I swallowed hard against threatening tears(我强忍住眼泪)

3.动“眼”，眼部运动

stare at sb.盯着看某人

look into one＇ s eyes看着……的眼睛

glare at怒视

take a quick glance快速看

glance through快速测览

look over one＇ s shoulder at..回头看

eye sb. up and down上上下下打量某人

widen one＇ s eyes睁大眼睛

narrow one＇ s eyes眯眼

Group I

1) Seeing no other people notice us, I rose and slipped away(溜走) silently

2) We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of(瞄眼) the famous player.

3) Her eyes fell on the book in his hand

4) We recognized the famous comedian upon his arrival

5)I was taking my time, strolling/wandering in the park and looking in shop windows now and then Group 2

1) Singing happily， she gazed at(盯着看)her

surroundings with innocent but curious eyes.

2)The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying

to make a conversation

3)Then I hurried/shot downstairs and examined the parcels addressed to me(寄给我)

4) When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out of the window.

5)She had spotted a man pacing down the hall.

Group 3

1)He couldn’t take his eyes off the iPad(把眼睛脱离

2)She glanced shyly at him and then lowered her eyes.

3） The policeman on a street corner eyed him up and down suspiciously(怀疑地上下打量他)

4）Anne narrowed her eyes, wondering the possible story behind the scenes

5）I didn’ t even blink(眨眼) in case I missed her

Group 4

1）James' eyes widened in surprise

2）She nodded seriously, eyes glistening/shining with held-back tears.

3）Swallowing hard, I stared into her red- rimmed eyes(哭红的睛) for a long moment.

4）As he walked back to the middle, the eyes of all classmates arrowed into him(如箭般射向他)

5）I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.

各种“哭”的表达:

1) He burst out crying./He burst into tears /Tears welled up in her eyes. /He was in tears. /He had tears in his eyes /Tears rolled down his cheeks.

The old song always brought tears to my eyes/Her eyes were blurry with tears.(泪眼模糊了她的双|Tears blurred her eyes. /She sobbed heavily.

2)She swallowed hard against threatening tears /Bill fought back his tears and tried to comfort Sarah's mother

3)Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of(在……边沿) tears

4) Jenny's eyes were watering from the choking smoke(呛人的烟) that filled the room

5)Jim came round later, crying his eyes out, asking me to forgive him

6)I left quickly, not wanting to break down in front of the children.

7) There was a lump in my throat(因感动、悲伤而哽咽，喉咙哽住) and I didn＇t speak because I knew I would cry

(8) It's no good turning on the water works. You can't stay home from school. [turn on the water

works(口语)(撒娇)哭出来，(故意)哭起来]

9) looked up at Jody through red-rimmed eyes(眼眶红了的眼睛)

10) Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision(眼泪模糊她的双眼)

4.动“手”，手部运动

clap one＇ s hands拍手

put one＇ s hands on找到

hold sth. tight in one＇ s hand手里紧紧拽着

dive into one＇ s pocket手伸进口袋

slap sb. on the back拍某人的背

signal/ wave sb. to be quiet示意某人安静

be on one＇ s hands and knees四肢着地

hug sb. tightly紧紧抱住某人

fumble for(到处、手忙脚乱)摸索

follow his pointing finger顺着他指着的方向看过去

1)He patted my head, and inquired “ Is there anything particular you want?”

2)He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.紧紧地捏着我的手胞，疼得厉害。

3)She stroked(抚摸) her fingers through my hair，and said:“ Of course there is a Santa Clause.”

4)He reached into his pocket and withdrew/produced(拿出) a note.

5)She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly

6)Wanting to appear agreeable(和蔼可亲的)，I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could

各种“拥抱”

1)Stunned/Shocked, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug/hugged her in an awkward way

2)speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.说不出话来，她灿烂地笑着，把儿子抱在怀里。

3)She came over and threw her arms round her smiling father(双臂抱住微笑的父亲)

各种“鼓掌”

1)the whole class burst out clapping and cheering./The whole class was filled with thunderous applause.全

班爆发出热烈的掌声和欢呼声

2)The stadium exploded with yells of disbelief.体育

场里爆发出难以置信的欢呼声

3)the class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.

4) A thunderous applause burst out.

5) People broke into a storm of applause.

6) Mr. Smith made a main speech and received nearly30 rounds of warm applause.

7) The announcement of the election won a burst of long and warm applause.

8) There are winning waves of applause

9) Cheers and applause took over the whole room

10)The experts really deserve a big round of applause for their efforts to constantly

make progress in the AI field

11) Everyone started to clap their hands. Suzy Khan gave them a shy smile and the applause was deafening.

12) A polite ripple of applause accompanied the chairwoman as she approached the

stage. 当女主席走近舞台时，一阵礼貌的掌声伴随着她

5.动“脚”，脚部运动

stamp one＇ s feet跺脚

jump/ bounce/ leap up and down上蹿下跳

slip upstairs/ shoot downstairs

溜到楼上/飞奔下楼

sneak/slip/ steal into偷偷溜进

stagger// struggle/rise/ jump to one＇s feet站起来

kneel down跪下

A hot pain shot through my leg

一阵剧痛急速穿过我的腿。

各种站

1）they all just stood there staring at me, motionless(不动地)

2 She planted her feet firmly in front of me.她坚定地站在我面前。

3) For a moment I just stood there，paralyzed(果若木鸡)

4)I stood rooted to the ground, my mind going blank.

我站在那里一动不动，脑子一片空白

各种“走”:

1)(With a sinking heart, )He/he dragged his heavy legs back home, tired out

2)He stepped onto the stage nervously, not daring to look at the audience.

3)He stole into/slipped away the classroom from the back door with no one noticing him.

4) Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.

5)Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me

6) The player lost his balance, staggered back and toppled over.

这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了

7)she slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.

她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户

8 One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him

各种“跑”:

1)The boy ran about in the house restlessly.那男孩在屋里不安地跑来跑去。

2)The minion made a rush for the door and escaped from the scene.小黄人向门冲去，逃离了现场。

3)He ran/rushed down the street, trembling with great panic.

4)Racing home, Tom burst through the front door

5) The elderly man fled away with great panic.老人惊恐地逃走了。

6) He rushed to the front door, trembling withexcitement

6.动“身”，身体运动

1)she felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom

2)They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly

3)The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing(秋千)

4) Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark coat appeared before me.

5) Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared

6) In a flash my friend was in the car and gone disappearing in a cloud of dust

7)I suddenly found myself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.

8) Once I was on the bus， I crouched in《蜷缩) a seat and shut my eyes

9)I tossed and turned in bed. Finally, I drifted off to sleep.我在床上辗转反侧，最终迷迷糊糊地睡着了

10)The dog was curled up(蜷缩) on the floor ,trembling in his sleep.

Part2大脑动作

Group1

1) These events constantly remind me of my father's absence

2)I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a

shining smile.

3)At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death

for killing people

4) He was determined to tell people the truth, but his voice was carried away in

the wind

5)Realizing the police had arrested the wrong person he gathered the great

courage to expose the real criminal

意识到警察抓错了人，他鼓起勇气揭发了真正的罪犯

6) Somehow I got the idea that it would be fun to waken

my father by shouting to his ear

7)Then I tried to figure out what I should do next

8) There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself

在那里我什么也做不了。我说服我自己。

9)I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life

10) At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled

his mind with a great bright light.

11) His mind was a haze of fear and confusion.

由于害怕和困惑，他的脑子一片混沌。

12) The reason for my visit had obviously slipped his mind.他显然已经忘记了我的来意

group2

1) After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to race, trying to think

of a good solution. (飞速运转)

2) When left alone, he would always be haunted by that horrible memory

.[(不好的回忆)素绕心头挥之不去

3)When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly crossed his mind.(突然闪过他的脑海)

4)An idea flashed across(= crossed) his mind./An idea occurred to/hit/struck him.

/An idea formed in his mind

5) My parents＇ words echoed(回响) in my head.

6) The good memory was called up and it lingered in my mind.这段美好记忆被

回想起来，在我记忆中长存。

7) She tried desperately to remember where she had seen him before

8)She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her

9)The opportunity had gone and his mind scrabbled for alternatives

机会已经失去了，他苦苦思索别的方案。

心理描写

1.表害怕( frightened):

我感到很害怕。

(1)I was scared to death with eyes full of horror.被吓得要死，眼睛里充满了恐惧。/ I was struck with horror.我被吓呆了。/ I was choked by fear.我被吓得透不过气来。

(2)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak

.(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)

(3)I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch(吓呆了，不敢动弹)

(4)I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.

(我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)

(5) The horrible scene made my blood run cold and struck fear into my heart.

那可怕的场面使我毛骨悚然，使我胆战心惊。

(6) That made me feel sick and shivery(抖的)All sorts of nightmare pictures came into my mind

(7)I shook all over in a cold sweat.我冒冷汗，直哆嗦。

(8)A terrible fear took hold of/seized me. /Fear slowly( quickly) crept upon me

(爬上我的心头

(9) I didn＇t have the nerve(没有胆量) to move an inch and I was shaking like I had rubber bones(软骨头)

(10)My face turned pale and I stood there tongue tied(舌头打结).

(11)A flood of fear welled up in me. /Fear flooded over me一阵恐惧涌上我的心头。

(12)The horrible scene just made my hair stand on end(令我头发倒立)

(13)I was sick with fear, but the thought of the consequences urged me on.

我吓得要死，但一想到后果，我就只有往前

2.表兴奋( thrilled)

她兴奋极了。

(1)She felt thrilled. /She was wild with excitement=delight). /She was pleased beyond description.|She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。/She was overflowing with happiness. -She was glowing with pride.她洋溢着幸福(自豪)。/ Joy welled up inside her.她心中酒起喜悦。/ She was floating on air.她漂浮在空中

(2) She couldn＇t contain(控制)her excitement and danced/jumped for joy

(3)She was in cheerful spirits and grinned from ear to ear.

她兴高采烈，笑得合不拢嘴。

(4)Her eyes twinkled with excitement/pleasure她激动得两眼放光。

(5) Her eyes were shining and her heart was thundering with excitement.

(心激动得砰砰跳)

(6)Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds at the good news.听到这个好消息，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。/ The smile on her face shone like a diamond at the good news.

(7) A big smile spread across her face.她脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。

(8)A wide excitement took hold of her她兴奋得不能自已。/ A ripple of excitement ran through her.一股激动的涟漪涌向她

3.表悲伤(sad)

她/他悲伤不已

(1)She felt extremely sad and was blurry with tears(被泪水模棚)/ was in tears/ had tears in her eyes，|burst into tears/burst out crying.

(2) I felt a lump in my throat(喉咙哽咽) as the sorrows went through my mind: my tears gathered and flowed down my face

(3) She felt she was floating in an ocean of sadness

(4)Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.(心痛;眼泪直流)

(5)She was numb with grief and had trouble speaking.

她悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话。

（6）She felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.

她被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。

(7) She suddenly choked with sobs(泣不成声)，her tears gushing from her eyes.

她突然泣不成声，眼泪夺眶而出。

(8)He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks

(9) He tried to contain his grief(克制悲伤)but everyone around him could sense it.

(10)She bit the lower lip to stop it from trembling and then tears filled her eyes and started running down her wrinkled face.

她咬了咬下唇，以防止它抖，然后眼泪充满了她的眼睛，开始从她布满皱纹的脸上流下来

(11)He buried his head in his hands and tried to block out the sadness erupting inside him

他把头埋在双手里，试图挡住自己内心爆发的悲伤。

(12)She felt a wild grief building inside her-taking her over-until she could only break down in an agony of weeping.

她感到内心有一种强烈的悲痛，逐渐控制她，直到她在哭泣的痛苦中崩溃

(13) Her hands were shaking and she was on the verge of tears(她快要哭了)

(14)Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned his sadness in wine

4.表开心( happy)

他开心极了。

(1)He was happy/delighted/full of joy/all smiles.It seemed as if the baby were on top of the world(非常开心)

(2)His face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room.(眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间)

(3) His eyes danced with joy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)

(4) His face lit up with pleasure.面露喜色。

(5)A sense of joy and happiness suddenly went through him

5，表羞愧(ashamed)

她感到非常差愧

(I)She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning，(脸上滚烫)

(2)So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.(血液涌上脸類)

(3)So ashamed did he feel that she was close to tears，(快哭了)

6.表生气( angry)

他感到非常生气

(1)He was seized by anger that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.(怒气冲冲地冲出房间;狠狠摔门/ He ran out of the room in a burst of anger

(2) Boiling/Fuming with rage. he shook his fist at me.(怒火中烧;挥舞拳头)

(3) Filled with fury/Flying into a rage, he was unable to utter a single word

(充满愤怒;说不出话)

(4) He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火

(5) His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉，

(6)All at once a feeling of anger swept through him.

(7) His green eyes were shining with irritation/anger, and his voice trembled with anger.

(8) He was sweating and burning with rage(满头大行，怒火中烧)，He glared at me with burning eyes.

(9) Her reply fueled(激起了) Sheldon＇s anger and he erupted like a volcano. /His anger boiled over.

她的回答激起了谢尔顿的怒，他像火山一样爆发了。/他勃然大怒

7.表绝望( desperate)

Tony感到很绝望

(1)Tony felt sick with despair and a flash of grief came upon him

(2)As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into

hopelessness(被投入黑暗之中;陷人绝望)

(3) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness

托尼觉得自己被冷落了，因为孤独而变得绝望。

(4) Tony didn't know how to look forward and felt deserted into darkness.

8.表紧张( worried/ anxious)

Jenny十分紧张。

(1)Jenny was worried sick. Her throat was dry and her face was burning up.

(2)Jenny took long breaths and her tongue felt thick and heavy in her mouth

珍妮做了深呼吸，舌头感到又厚又沉

(3)Jenny was so worried that she had her heart in her mouth.

(4)She was so anxious that she was like a cat on hot bricks.(急得像热锅上的蚂蚁)

(5)The thought of standing up in front of everyone made her feel sick Inside.

9.表惊呆:

Sam惊呆了!

(1)Sam was frozen up-He couldn't move

(2)Sam’s mouth was wide open in amazement.

(3)His jaw dropped in amazement

10.表轻松:

他松了一口气

(1) He breathed a sigh of relief.他松了一口气。

He felt greatly relieved and his joy was immense.

他感到如释重负，快乐无限。

(2)He began to calm down and his heart started slow down

(3)He could feel the tension released and a warmth spread through his body

他能感觉到紧张感的释放，一种温暖的感觉传遍全身

(4) His breathing grew slower, as a new calm settled over him

他重新获得新的平静，呼吸减慢了。

(5) He regained his calmness and could think straight clearly.

他恢复了镇静，头脑清醒。

环境描写

1平静

It begins when a feeling of stillness creeps into my consciousness. Everything has suddenly gone quiet. Birds do not chirp. Leaves do not rustle. Insects do not sing.

起初，有一种平静的感觉悄悄袭上我的心头。刹那间，万物都突然寂静无声。鸟儿不在啁啾，树叶不再沙沙作响，昆虫也停止了欢唱。

2烦躁

The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, sits on my shoulders. With a vague feeling of uneasiness I move to the window.cloud has piled on cloud ,rearing against blue sky.

整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞，它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。我怀着隐隐约约的烦躁不安，信步走到窗前，云层重重叠叠，高耸在蓝天之上。

3惊恐

(1)The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.乌云密布;黑云压顶

(2)On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling.在那个黑暗的夜晚，海浪肆意拍打，狂风咆哮。

(3) The rain came pouring down, the streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house. 大雨倾盆而下，溪水上张，风吹着拍打着房子

（4）the clouds reveal their darker nature. They impose themselves before the late-afternoon sun, and the day darkens early. Then a gust of wind whips the dust along the road, chill warning of what is to come.

云层也露出了阴暗的本来面目。它强行遮住西斜的太阳，使天色早早就黑了下来。接着，劲风骤起，一路卷起尘土飞扬。冷嗖嗖的，预示着即将来临的一切。

（5）In spite of myself, I jump at the following crack of thunder. It rattles the windowpane and sends the dog scratching to get under the bed. The next bolt is even closer. It raises the hair on the back of my neck, and I take an involuntary step away from the window.

随即响起了一声霹雳，我不禁跳了起来，雷声震得窗户格格作响，吓得狗儿三抓两爬钻到床底下。第二道闪电离得更近。我惊得寒毛倒立，不由得从床边后退了一步。

（6）Pacing through the house from window to window, I am moved to open-mouthed wonder.

我在房里踱来踱去，从一个窗口走到另一个窗口

4心情愉悦

(1)The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing

公园里充满了春天的清新和美丽，阳光灿烂，鸟儿在歌唱

(2)mist-covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages

薄雾笼罩的大山点缀着小农场和村庄。

(3)The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds那优美的芦苇在摇曳的声音，伴随着我的脚步声。

(4)A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping

branches of the willow like a curtain

阵风吹过，吹起了柳枝的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘

（5）For this storm is already beginning to pass. The tension is released from the atmosphere, the curtains of rain let in more light.

因为这场暴风雨即将过去，紧张的气氛缓和了，从雨幕中透出更多的亮光。

(5) And from below，the faint(微弱的) sound of water was tumbling(翻腾) through the valley 从下面，微弱的水声翻腾着穿过山谷。

(6) A little way off(不远处) was a little brook（小溪，rushing and sparkling(闪闪发光) along between green banks(河岸的不远处有一条闪闪发光的小溪，在绿色的河岸之间奔流而下

(7) The sun was beginning to set，glittering(闪烁)red through the rows of buildings

太阳开始落山了，在一排排的建筑物中闪烁出红光

8)The water was deep blue, and the sunlight glittered on its crystal clear

(水晶般清晰的) surface

水是深蓝色的，阳光在水晶般清晰的水面上闪闪发光。

9)A cold breeze blew through her soft hair

一阵冷风吹过她柔软的头发。

(10) On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving lowly skywards from the chimney of his house.

在附近的一座山上，他可以看到烟从他房子的烟肉里慢慢地向天空

(11)The lakes shone like glass in the setting sun an looked wonderful

在夕阳的照下，这些湖像玻璃一样闪闪发光

（12）I am drawn outside while the rain still falls. All around, there is a cool and welcome feeling. I breathe deeply and watch the sun's rays streaks through breaking clouds. One ray catches the drops that form on the edge of the roof, and I am treated to a row of tiny, quivering colors - my private rainbows.

雨仍在淅淅沥沥地下着，我却忍不住走到室外，环境是那么清新宜。我深深地呼吸着新鲜空气，仰望着那船运而出的道道阳光，有一束阳光恰巧映射在屋檐边的水珠上，我便看到一条细细的、微微颤动着的七色彩带——一条供我个人欣赏的彩虹。

（13）Every leaf, brick, single, and blade of grass is fresh-washed and shining.

每片树叶和草叶，每块砖头和卵石都冲得纤尘不染，熠熠发光。

Like the land, I am renewed, my spirits cleansed. I feel an infinite peace. Fro a time I have forgotten the worries and irritations I am nurturing before. They have been washed away by the glories of the storm.

像大地一样，我也焕然一新，心灵得到了净化。我感到无比的平静，一时间全然忘掉了以往郁积在心头的烦恼与忧愁。他们都已被这辉煌壮丽的暴风雨涤荡得干干净净

（14）When the light has become a little stronger, you have one of the fairest and softest pictures imaginable 天色渐亮，在你面前呈现出所能想象到的最美最宜人的景象

（15）The sun ,red and very large, halted motionless upon the horizon. 一动不动停在地平线上

（16）In the light of a calm and golden sunset it becomes lovely beyond expression.在安详而金灿灿的夕阳的余晖中，天地间非常壮美，难以言表.

（17）The day was dawning from a patch of watery light in the east. 在东方一片淡淡的天色中黎明到来了

（18）Across the east a rainbow arched,so lovely and so various that Jody thought he would burst with looking at it. 在东边拱起一道彩虹，那么可爱那么斑斓乔迪看得激情澎湃。

7艰难

I pick my way through the west grass, my feet sinking into the saturated soil. 我小心翼翼地穿过湿漉漉的草地，双脚不时陷入雨水浸透的土壤中

The day is cold ,and dark,and dreary. It rains, and the wind is never weary. My thoughts still cling to the mouldering past思绪仍萦绕在破碎的从前

描与环境给人的感受

(1) Golden sunlight danced in the treetops, and children's laughter filled the park. The smell of popcorn played on the breeze, and life seemed good. It was one of the happiest Saturday mornings I had spent with my little daughter.

金色的阳光在树梢上跳舞，公园里充满了孩子们的笑声，爆米花的香味在微风中荡漾，生活似乎很美好。这是我和小女儿吉吉度过的最快乐的星期六早晨之一

(2)When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.

我沐浴在阳光下，琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的每寸肌肤

(3) That night we set up our tent in a park. The moon was held up above the sky, shining her smooth and charming moonlight. Twinkling stars were blinking, and fragrant breeze gently stroked my head, as if comforting all the tiredness along the trip.

那天晚上我们在公园里搭起了帐篷。月亮高高地挂在天空上，发出柔和迷人的月光。耀眼的星星在闪烁，清香的微风轻抚着我的头，仿佛在安慰旅途中所有的疲劳

(4)I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound

我清楚地记得，曾经有一段时间，湛蓝的天空、鸟儿的歌唱、月光和鲜花从来没有让我如此着迷过。

5) The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power; it was the first time in a year and a half that I'd seen the night face to face

我清楚地记得，曾经有一段时间，湛蓝的天空、鸟儿的歌唱、月光和鲜花从来没有让我如此着迷过。

(6)Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.

沐浴在阳光下，享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地进发。

(7) Indeed, the family trip-a trip of pure magic blessed me with not only fantastic landscapes but enlightenment(启迪) of trust and love between people, even strangers.

事实上，这个家庭旅行一一一次纯粹的魔幻之旅，不仅给我带来了奇妙的风景，也给我带来了人与人之间，甚至陌生人之间的信任和爱的启迪。

(8) The views there were surpassingly beautiful--the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clear water. We sat on the grass, hooked by the splendid nature..那里的景色超美一一温暖的阳光，新鲜的空气，干净的水。我们坐在草地上，被壮丽的自然景色

迷住了

描写场景

(1)In the valleys colourful butterflies flew around us and we saw many yaks and sheep eating green grass.在山谷里，五颜六色的蝴蝶在我们周围飞来飞去，我

们看到许多牦牛和绵羊在吃青草。

(2)In the early evening we always stopped to make camp. We put up our tent and then we ate. After supper Wang Wei put her head down on her pillow and went to sleep.傍晚时分，我们总是停下来扎营。我们搭起帐篷，然后吃东西。晚饭后，王伟把头枕在枕头上睡着了，

3)At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was so quiet. There was almost no wind-only the flames of our fire for company. As I lay beneath the stars I thought about how far we had already travelled.

午夜时分，天空变得更加干净，星星也变得更加明亮。很安静，几平没有风，只有我们火焰的陪伴。我自尚在星空下，想着我们已经走了多远。

(4)At dusk, against the deep blue sky, we together with other campers gathered around, exchanging yummy snacks with each other in the company of fire. Our hearty laughter was dissolved into absolutely good night.

黄昏时分，在湛蓝的天空下，我们和其他露营者聚一起，在火的陪伴下互相交換美味的小吃，我们开怀的笑声融进了这个美好的夜晚

(5)I looked out of the car window, winding rivers lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination/ power

我望向车窗外，蜿艇的河流，高耸的山脉，阳光明媚的海滩和深深的山谷，让我完全沉浸在它们的魅力之中

(6)She held our hands in her hands, leading us around the big city, the small town and the nice nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, she would hug us and kiss us on our faces.

她牵着我们的手，带着我们在大城市、小镇和美丽大自然中穿行。当我们结束了疲意而精彩的旅行回到酒店时，她会拥抱我们，亲吻我们的脸，

(7)I’m sitting in the warm night air with a cold drink in my hand and reflecting on the day--- a day of pure magic! I went snorkeling on the reef offshore this morning and it was the most fantastic thing I have ever done. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up. It was like discovering a whole new dimension of life

我坐在温暖的夜晚中，手里拿着一杯冷饮，回想着这天那纯粹是魔幻的一天!今天早上我去近海的暗礁潜水，这是我做过的最奇妙的事。看到如此非凡的美丽，我想我体内的每一个细胞都醒来了。这就像发现了一个全新的生命维度。

(8)A gentle breeze blew through Jennifer’s hair The golden red sun was setting. She was on the beach，looking up at the fiery(火红的) ball. She was amazed by its color, deep red in the middle softly fading(褪色) into yellow. She could hear nothing but the waves and the seagulls flying up above in the sky.

一阵微风吹过詹妮弗的头发。金红色的太阳正在落山。她在海滩上，抬头看着火红的球。她被它的颜色惊呆了，中间是深红色，慢慢褪色变黄。她什么也听不见，除了波涛和海鸥在天空中飞翔。

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