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便条写作及其范文

便条写作及其范文
便条写作及其范文

便条写作

关于格式

便条(又称短笺)作为专业英语四级考试对英语应用文(practical writing)的考查点之一,是每年的固定题目。2005年专业四级考试大纲将便条的分值由5分增至10分。分值的增加应当引起我们对这道题目的重视。考试大纲对英语专业写作便条部分的测试要求是:"根据提示写大约50~60词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格式正确,语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。"由此我们可以看出它所涉及的考点是格式和语言得体性。因此我们可以从格式、开篇结尾、表达是否清楚得当以及如何使用委婉语气和敬词这几方面着手进行复习和练习。

便条根据其用途可分成很多类,这里我们着重讲经常考的几类:邀请类便条、致歉类便条、通知类便条、致谢类便条和祝贺类便条。然后我们会以范文的形式解读其他类便条的写作步骤和内容重点。

便条写作是专四写作部分考试中得分很有灵活性的一道题目,既可能得满分,也可能得分很低。其得分高低的关键之一在于格式是否正确。考试大纲对英语专业写作测试要求中提到:"便条写作最主要的是注意格式正确"。因此我们首先要熟练掌握便条写作的格式。

称呼顶格、日期在右、首行缩进、署名签在后

英文书信由6个部分组成:信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、谦语和署名。而便条写作有别于普通的书信,属于非正式书信。它的格式非常清晰简单。它的篇幅短小,无需写信内地址,有时也无需写祝词和谦语。如此清晰的格式,我们可以将其简单地总结为:"称呼顶格、日期在右、首行缩进、署名签在后"。一篇便条作文格式

可用以下简图示意:

1.称呼要顶格,可根据亲疏关系冠以尊称或直呼姓名。可用Dear Sir or Madame,Dear Tom 等正式称呼,也可直呼其名。在称呼后面一般用逗号(英国式),有时也可以用冒号(美国式)。我们习惯上还是用逗号。写给亲人和关系密切的朋友时,用Dear或My Dear再加上表示关系的称呼或直呼其名。例如:My dear mother,Dear Alice等。商务信函用Dear Sir或Gentleman(Gentlemen)。请注意不能出现Dear Gentlemen这种称呼,Gentlemen前不能加Dear。我们也可用头衔或职位等再加姓名。例如:Dear Professor David Smith,Dear Dr.John Wells.

2.日期写在右上角。便条的日期既可写明具体年月日,也可只写星期几,若日期的准确性要求高也可以写明具体时刻。日期可写成Mayll-9005(美国)、llMay,2005(英国)、Mayllth,2005;llthMay,2005等形式。Mayll,2005此种用法最为普遍。

3.正文首行第一个字母缩进四个字母。便条正文位置在称呼语下面隔一行。正文注意不要按汉语习惯问候"Hell0"。首行向右缩进,通常以缩进四个字母为宜,第二行从左面顶格写起,这是缩进的格式。

4.署名签在最后,应在右下角。署名前可视情而定,写Y ours sincerely,Y ours ever,RespectfuIly yours等等以表恭敬之意,也可直接签名。注意一般不要按汉语写信习惯写"Y our be St friend","Y our classmate"等称谓。谦语位置低于结束语一至二行,从信纸中间偏右的地方开始写。另外关于谦语我们还要掌握一定的规则:(对地位高的人或长辈):Respectfully yours,Y ours respectfully(对不太熟悉或应表示客气的人):Y ours truly(亲密的朋友、亲属之间):Affectionately

yours,Y ours cordially(最亲密的人之间):Y ours

下面是一则邀请类便条的示例:

9 a. m., May 11

Dear Mike,

I've got two tickets to a concert given by the famous pop band Nightingale. Y esterday I waited in a long queue in order to buy them because I've been looking forward to listening to this concert. It is to begin at 7 p. m. tomorrow. I have no classes tomorrow. Are you also free tomorrow? Would you like to come with me? When your classes are over, please phone me.

Y ours,

Tom

邀请便条类

邀请类便条是非常实用的一类便条,无论是在正式的邀请函上还是朋友熟人间的邀请都有可能用到它。虽然近几年四级考试中只考过一次,我们对其还应该有相当的重视。

Write a note of about 50—60 words based on the following situation:

Y ou have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend,Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.

四级考试大纲的测试要求明确指出,"根据提示写大约50~60词的便条、通知、请帖等"。请帖即正式的邀请类便条。对于请帖的写作,我们应该特别注重语言得体。"语言得体"也是四级便条的考察点。四级便条的评分标准中就有"appropriacy"(适当、恰当)这一点。"适当、恰当"包括措辞和语气两方面。这要求我们根据情景和人物关系正确选择措辞和语气,做到措辞恰当、语气表达适当。考试中通常要求向熟悉的同事、同学、朋友写便条,用词比较通俗、口语化。

根据关系亲疏决定持辞和语气的正式程度

前面已经指出,便条分正式便条和非正式便条。我们应当首先分清楚写便条者和收便条者之间的关系和情景的正式程度,以决定是用对方的职称还是直接称呼姓名,确定所使用的措辞。通常情况下便条的形式和内容比较简洁。中心内容可以用几句话概括,语言尽量通俗,口语化,简单扼要,直截了当,无需使用客套语言。但向诸如教授等长辈留便条时要注意措辞,并且用的语气要尽可能得委婉。

试比较以下两则便条:

Dec. 29, 2004

Dear Ms. Smith,

We will hold a party in our classroom to celebrate the mid-autumn festival at 8 p. m. this Friday. Will it be possible that you come and join us in the celebration? We would be very delighted to have our dear teacher with us on this special occasion. If possible please let us know whether you can come at your convenience.

Respectfully yours,

Hua

May 4, 2005

Dear Liu,

We will have a party at 8 p. m. to celebrate the mid-autumn festival in our classroom. Do you care to come to our party? I assure you there will be a lot of entertainment and joyful events. Don't hesitate. Come and see for yourself!

请再看下面几组例子:

1. I should appreciate it very much if you condescend to meet us.

2. Come and meet us at the school gate!

3. We are looking forward to the opportunity to listen to your in-depth speech'.

4. I can't wait to listen to your speech!

四句话语气显然不同,第一和第三句客气,句式正规;二、四言简意赅,句子简短。我们应该在比较中理解语气的选择与使用。

便条语气不要生硬。比如以下句子:

Y ou have breakfast at eight, get your luggage downstairs at eight thirty and leave here for the airport at nine.

这句话尽管表达地非常清楚,信息量充足,但语气生硬,没有礼貌。试改成下面这句: Breakfast is at eight. Would you please get your luggage downstairs at eight thirty? We are gomg to leave

here for the airport at nine.

经过改动,变陈述句为疑问句,就显得礼貌、委婉。

我们可以多了解一些表达"请"的词,除了"please"我们还可以用be good enough; be kind

enough; have the kindness, have the peasure to do/of doing/in doing; to take (a) pleasure in doing (something); to take pleasure in doing (something); to be pleased to(with) (by) ; to be delighted at (in) (with); to be glad to (of) (about) ; to be rejoiced in (at); to be extremely pleased to等短语来表达。

若要将句子变得更有礼貌、更委婉,除了使用表达"请"的词,我们还可以利用以下几种方式:

1. 陈述句改为问句,而少用祈使句、感叹句等。比如,Would you please... Is there any possibility that

. . . Why not. . . 等。

2. 采用包含would,should,might等情态动词的语句。提出劝告、建议:It would be /could be fine to do…, I might be better to.. .. perhaps you might like to…; Y ou might as do…等;提出请求、询问意向:I would like to…; Could you…; Woul d you… if I may,Iwill.. Could you possibly… would you mind…等。

3. 陈述看法时,用过去时代替现在时是客气委婉的表示。I believed/thought. . . ; I was wondering if... I wondered if. . . :

I wonder (wondered) if you can (could) spare a few minutes.

I want (wanted) to ask if I can (could) borrow your bike.

I hope (hoped) you can (could) give us some help.

4? 一般将来时和将来进行时虽然都表示将来,但后者听起来更委婉。比如你要等一个

人,说"I shall be

waiting for you "比说"I shall wait for you"要委婉客气得多。另外,在疑问句中用将来进行时也比用现在进行时更为客气。例如:

Are you staying in Beijing long? 你在北京住得久吗?

Will you be staying in Beijing long?你将在北京久居吗?

开篇结尾句型

The Smiths kindly request your presence at the banquet to be held. . .

May we have the honor to invite you to the concert. ..

Will you please tell me what time will be convenient for us to get together. . .

We should be so happy to have you come to dinner with us next Friday.

I shall be grateful if you can come to my place at your earliest convenience.

We'd like to invite you to. . .

Would you like to come with us to. . .

Do you want to join us in. . .

Are you interested in. . .

Do you care to join us in. . .

Would it be possible for you to join us at. . .

We should be so happy to have you come to dinner with us tonight.

结尾

Please reply as soon as possible.

Please let us know your decision ASSP.

Please let me know by calling me up at the office.

We would be very happy if you could join us.

We are awaiting/anxious to receive your early reply.

We should appreciate an early reply.

We thank you now for the courtesy of your early attention.

Kindly reply at your earliest convenience.

Please favor us with your reply as early as possible.

Please write to us by tonight's mail, without fail.

May we remind you that we are still awaiting your early reply?

Y our prompt attention to this matter would be greatly esteemed.

A prompt reply will greatly oblige us.

Y our prompt reply would be greatly appreciated.

A prompt reply would help us greatly.

May we request the favor of your early reply?

We look forward to receiving your early reply.

We thank you now for this anticipated courtesy.

As the matter is urgent, an early reply will oblige.

另附邀请函

Enclosed please find

Enclosed we hand you

We enclose herewith

Herewith we have the pleasure to hand you

We have pleasure in enclosing herewith

1

Sep. 21, 2005

Dear Sir,

On May 21 we will host a party of celebration in honor of the retirement of Mr. Jones, President of our

company. Y ou are cordially invited to attend the celebration at our guest hall. Mr. Jones has been the

President of our company since the year 2000. During this period, our company expanded its business greatly.

Now it's our opportunity to thank him for his years of exemplary leadership and wish him a happy retirement.

Please join us to say Good-bye to him.

Jianghua Co. LTD

2

Oct. 11, 2005

Dear Sir/Madam,

We would very much like to have someone from your company speak at our conference on the topic of

leadership.

As you may be aware, the mission of our association is to promote communication. Many of our members

are interested in the achievements your company has made.

Enclosed is our preliminary schedule for the conference that will be reviewed in weeks. I'll call you on

December 1st to see who from your company would be willing to speak to us. I can assure you that we'll make

everything convenient to the speaker.

Sincerely yours,

Liu

1. Write a note of about 50 words based on the following situation.

Y ou will hold a house-warming party at you new house tonight. Y ou couldn't get your best friend Laura

on the phone. Write a note to her, describing what the party will be like and inviting her to it. Don't forget to

mention that Laura's friends are also welcome.

2. Write a note of about 50 words based on the following situation.

Write a note to invite the Smiths to the buffet to be held in the guest room of your company. Time: 7

tonight.

Nov. 11, 2004

Dear Laura,

We will plan a house-warming party at 7 p. m. at our new apartment tonight. I guess you want to

what our new apartment looks like after delicate decoration. And there will be a lot of fun at the party. We can

dance till dawn if we like. Are you interested? Come and see for yourself. By the way, I couldn't get you on

the phone. When you come back, give me a call and tell me your decision, OK?

Y ours ever,

Tom

2. . June 6, 2000

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

There will be a buffet in the guest room of our company at 7 p. m. tonight. Y ou are kindly invited to it.

Y our presence will be whole-heartedly appreciated. If for certain reasons you can't come, please let us know in

advance.

Sincerely yours,

Lin

道歉类

1. Write a note of about 60 words based on the following situation.

Y ou were supposed to hand in your book report for the Extensive Reading Course on Monday, but you are

two days late. Now you are outside Professor Lin's office as you want to hand in your assignment, but he is

not in. Write a note to him, apologizing and explaining why you did not give him your work on time.

(1994TEM-4)

2. Write a note of about 50—60 words based on the following situation:

Y ou are Peter/Mary. Y ou had a party at your home recently, but you unintentionally neglected to invite a

close friend of yours—V ictoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came

about. (1997TEM-4)

3. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Y esterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher. Professor Wang. Write him a note

of apology and make a request for another meeting. Y ou should also suggest the time for the requested

meeting. (200 ITEM-4)

4. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Y our friend Clare has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her.

(2003TEM-4)

致歉本身就应该态度诚恳。怀着诚恳的态度,致歉便条可以按照三个步骤来写:致歉;说明原因;请求理解、原谅。有时出于礼貌,还可在结尾表达补救方法。

2003

May 12, 2003

Dear Clare,

Congratulations on your moving into a new house and thank you for inviting me. But I'm sorry that I

won't be able to come. (致歉) I will have to attend a very important meeting this Friday evening. (说明原因)

I hope you will understand. (请求原谅) I will send a house-warming gift. I hope you will enjoy the party. (表达补救办法)

Send my best remembrance to Tom.

Y ours,

Alice

2001

May 12, 2001

Dear Professor Wang,

I feel terribly sorry that I failed to make out yesterday's appointment with you. () My roommate was suddenly taken ill and there was nobody else around. So I took her to the hospital. When I finally got to your office, you were gone already. () I sincerely hope you will forgive me this time. () I know you are pretty occupied these days but is it possible to arrange another appointment with you? Can 8 p. m. this evening be all right with you? () I am looking forward to your reply.

V ery truly yours,

Hua

Cf: I was d was rather disturbed by and concerned about your illness.

I’m sorry to hear about your illness and wish you a speedy recovery.

开篇结尾句型

开篇

I'm sorry to tell you that. . .

I hate to tell you but. . .

I'm awfully/terribly sorry that I cannot go to school tomorrow due to illness.

It's with regret that. . .

I regret to say that. ..

Please excuse my absence from class today.

Owing to a bad cold, I am very sorry that I am unable to go to school today.

I sincerely express my apology for not being able to. . .

We are grieved to hear of (about). . .

It is with great regret that. . .

Much to our regret that we were unable to keep our promise. . .

We regret to receive your information.

We regret that we have been informed that (of). . .

To our deep regret we were informed that (of). . .

Kindly excuse me for troubling you in this matter.

结尾

I enclose the doctor's certificate and ask you for sick leave of a week.

I apologize for the inconvenience it caused.

I hope you will excuse my non-attendance.

I hope it will not trouble you too much.

I hope that my request will be given due consideration.

I shall be very much obliged if you will grant me my application.

We frankly admit we were at fault and we are anxious to repair the consequences.

We hope you will pardon us for troubling you.

We regret the trouble we are causing you.

I regret the trouble it caused you.

We trust you will excuse us for this inconvenience.

We solicit your forbearance for such an annoyance.

We trust you will overlook this bother, which we exceedingly regret.

We wish to express our regret for the annoyance this mistake has caused you.

表示冒昧:

To take the liberty of doing something; To take the liberty to do something; To take the liberty in doing

something.

表遗憾

To regret; To be sorry; To be chagrined; To be mortified; To be vexed; To regret to say; To be sorry to

say; To one's regret; To feel a great regret for; To express regret; To be regretted; To be a matter for

regret; To be regrettable; To be deplorable.

范文

1. _ Oct. 11, 2005

Dear Mr. Xu,

I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of your mother's illness, and I am anxious to know how she is now.

Here is a box of assorted biscuits with my best regard. Hope that she will regain her health soon. Best wishes for her quick and complete recovery.

Liu

2.

Oct. 10

Dear Prof. Huang,

I am terribly sorry that I can't come to class today, for I have caught a bad cold. Enclosed is a certificate

from Doctor Li who advised that I'd better have a rest for two days.

I guess my absence will not cause you any serious inconveniences.

Sincerely yours,

Ping

1. Write a note of about 60 words to a friend of yours based on the following situation.

Y ou borrowed a book from your friend Lily and had promised to return it yesterday. But for certain

reasons you failed to return it on time. State your reason and apology.

2. Write two notes, each of 40—50 words, addressing them respectively to Professor and your friend

Mary based on the following situation.

Y ou've been sick for three days. Y ou want to ask your professor for leave of a week. And you also want

your friend Mary to help you learn the new lesson during your illness. When you are writing, pay attention to

the diction.

1-

Oct. 16, 2004

Dear Lily,

I'm sorry for not returning the book you lent to me last week. I'm still reading it now. I found it very

helpful for writing my dissertation which is due tomorrow. I will go to your dormitory and return it to you

tonight. Please accept my apology for not returning your book on time.

Y ours,

Hua

2.

Aug. 13, 2004

Dear professor,

I've been sick for three days. The doctor suggests that I stay at home and rest. Is there any possibility

that I can rest for a week and return on May 18? I won' t leave school until you agree and notify me.

Thank you!

Respectfully,

Tom

September 15

Dear Mary,

I've been sick for three days. The doctor suggests that I stay at home and rest. Can you come to my dorm

to help me learn the new lessons and do the homework? Thank you. I apologize for all the inconvenience that I

may cause you.

Tom

考研英语写作应用文之便条写法

考研英语写作资料-应用文写作之便条写法 便条是一种简单的书信。虽然内容简单,但却有其独特的风格。主要目的是为了尽快的吧最新的信息、通知、要求或者活动的时间、地点转告给对方。常见的便条有收条、欠条、留言和请假条等。 便条可以有题目,也可以省略题目。 便条开篇须有称呼语,但称呼可以比较随便。 日期部分可写在便条的右上角。 日期的签署通常只需写星期几或星期几的上午、下午,也可只写上午或下午和具体时间。只写日期也可以。 便条结尾须署上留条人的姓名,位置在正文的右下角。 便条的形式和内容简洁,故可以用几句话概括。 文内语言尽量通俗口语化,简单扼要,直截了当,无需使用客套语言。 便条虽简单,但中心务必突出,更要注明活动的时间及地点。 便条不需邮寄,不用信封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。 基本写作格式 便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素; 1)Date:便条日期 2)Salutation:称呼 3)Body:正文 4)Signature:署名 样例 收条:即收到钱物之后,给交钱或送物人写张字据,说明已经收到某物,可留作证据。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。 Jan.23rd,2003 Received from Student, Wang Zihao one hundred yuan only for this month''s tuition fee. Li Man For the Finance Office of Foreign Language Institute 欠条;留下字据,表示欠某人某物。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。 Sept. 16th, 2002 Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows: A copy of History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu Weiren A copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang Yaoxin A copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen Wu Zhuo For the Office of Social Science Department 留言;用书面留下要说的话。留言涉及的方面很多,包括约会,通知,请求等任何可用便条留下的口信。 Tuesday Dear Li, As the Spring Festival is drawing near, I''m very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours. I''m sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly. Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m. today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel?

专四便条写作及范文~

英语应用文写作之便条写法 基本写作格式 便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素;1)Date:便条日期2)Salutation:称呼3)Body:正文4)Signature:署名样例 欠条;留下字据,表示欠某人某物。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。 April 19, 2012 Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows: A copy of EnglishHistory and Anthology of English Literature by Wu Weiren A copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang Yaoxin A copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen. Wu Zhuo For the Office of Social Science Department 留言;用书面留下要说的话。留言涉及的方面很多,包括约会,通知,请求等任何可用便条留下的口信。 Tuesday Dear Li, As the Spring Festival is drawing near, I’m very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours. I’m sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly. Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m. today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel? Yours always, Jiayang 请假条:往往指由于生病或特殊情况不能亲自当面请假,用假条的形式告假。所以,请假条大多是病假条。可以自写,也可请他人代写。写假条最重要的是说明原因和请假的期限。 Jan. 10th Dear Ms. Jiang, I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class due to a bad cold and high fever. Enclosed is a certificate from the doctor who said I must stay in bed for a few days. I will go back to school as soon as I recover. Yours respectfully, Tian Ye

英语便条写作的格式句型以及范文

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