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新托福写作讲义09

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开头类型1举例:图书馆还是体育设施 图书馆的资源是大学生获取知识、培养自学能力最主要的方式之一。而体育设施能够使大学生强身健体、舒缓压力、娱乐身心。我不否认体育锻炼对于学生成长的重要影响。但作为大学投资的决定,学校应该把更多的钱投资于图书馆而不是体育设施。 开头类型1举例:事实还是概念 事实是发生在我们周围事情,往往形象生动并且容易让人理解,而概念是事实的总结和抽象,能够概括一系列符合规律的事实。因此据我来看,在学习的过程中间,概念和事实的学习对于学生来说有着不同的作用。 开头类型2:特训236 同意不同意在社区周围建立一家折扣店 折扣店的出现成为我们社区关注的焦点。当一家企业决定在购物区开折扣店时,一些人游行表示反对,而另一些人觉得在这种商店购物很方便。我喜欢附近有一所大型折扣店,但我也能理解在同一条街开小商店的朋友为什么不喜欢这种竞争对手。换句话说,我支持新商店,因为它位置便利、价格低廉。 提炼类型2:关键词背景+论题重复+表明观点 开头类型2举例:经济发展和环境保护 经济发展和环境保护逐渐成为全球政府共同关注的两大议题。政府在制定国家发展策略的时候,一些人主张优先发展经济,而另一些人认为人们的首要任务是保护环境。

2021年新东方托福冲刺精讲班笔记吐血整理

Listening 1.开头——复习+主旨 例外:①课堂复习——不考标志过去时态 开始标志:now,today,OK,while ②教师道歉 ③归纳法开头,先给出例子,再给出结论--记例子主体&论点 2.结尾——推断+细节 3.注意重复细节与观点 4.举例——记例子主体,注意提示词 5.定义解释——其中关系 6.注意可以停顿 7.注意课堂引导词——remember now OK while imagine today 8.授课中问答 9.因果关系 10.听清层次——firstly secondly... 11.注意转折 12.Listen again 专业术语不变避免原词重复 Speaking notes Q1&Q2 To start with I believe most of people would choose... However i would like to choose... today i have two arguments to supports to support my idea. Today i mainly have one important argument to back up my idea Take me for example... For instance... For example Furthermore what's more

To summarize to conclude all in all Based on the two points i have already mentioned ...will always be my choice... Q3 1.The school wants/plans to do The school policy is... The school wants to carry out a policy which is... 2.sb suggests/advises that the university should (stop) do... 3.In the conversation,the man disagrees,and he has two points In the listening material,the man agree with the policy because of the following reasons... 4.First,the school think,however the man think... Second... Based on the two points the man disagree. Q4 In this set of material,the reading passage introduce a theory/principle/definition...which means(suggests) that... In the lecture,the professor uses/gives us/provides us/offers us one/two examples to explain/illustrate/demonstrate/clarify this theory. The first is about... The second is ... Q5 1.time conflict ①to find sb else to replace/take place of you to find sb to help him

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托福作文笔记整理1

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托福作文写作论据例子

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新东方专八冲刺笔记(作文部分)Wendy整理

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7.英语多前重心,汉语多后重心重心前置 8.英语多写实,汉语多联想 9.英语多引申,汉语多推理 “但是”的区别意义: 让步:对推论的否定 转折:直接否定 虚度年华:spend life in vain 翻译时,加插入语处理是一个很好用的方法。实践注意点: 1.理解清晰 字面→实质 例如:冷若冰霜→icy manners to their fans 词语的逻辑关系: 1)偏正 2)动宾 3)并列 2.表达困难 1)拼写 2)时态 3)虚拟域去 4)表达突破 例如:若有所失→a vague sense of loss

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2020托福口语备考能不能用模板

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因细节和例子等句子。一定要张口就来。再有就是内容上面,可以利用机经和官方真题Official的题目进行练习和准备。能够涉猎的范围越广,考场上大脑一片空白的题目就越少,还有很多题目是换汤不换药的。 2. 回答的时间有限,把倒计时当朋友。倒计时越看越紧张的话,是因为你对时间没有概念。到底45秒钟,1分钟,你能说多少?要对内容进行时间安排,比如我答第一道题,直接回答问题,用8秒左右,第9秒到30秒左右要说完第一个分观点,如果我的计时条现在只剩15秒了,我应该迅速结束第一个观点进入第二个观点。 3. 一定开口练习,可以写稿子,但是稿子的最后一步是张口说熟练的。有些发音组合长时间不用的话,肌肉会僵硬掉的说。所以一定逼迫自己开口。 4. 关于口音,如果你的追求是24以下,只要说了A不让别人误听成其他的什么的,口音就不是短期目标。OG上对口音的要求是doesnt cause listeners effort.所以如果是短期,需要的只是调整,不是从音标开始。 关于托福口语备考是否要使用模板就为大家介绍到这里,其实托福口语想要拿高分必须要摆脱模板的束缚,建议大家把握好答题时间,做好备考工作。

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